作文写作总结

第一篇：作文写作总结

俗话说：“困难像弹簧，你弱它就强”。语文教学中作文教学是一大难题，教师教学难、学生作文难”的问题一直困扰着作文教学，但是它越难我们就越不应该害怕。在此我谈谈自己在作文教学中的一些心得体会。

很多学生怕写作文，究其原因，主要是由于学生的阅读量少，还有就是平时不留心生活、不善于观察、不会构思等。针对这种情况，教师在教学中应注重培养学生的阅读能力，提高学生的观察能力，教会学生写作的构思方法。

1、教师应引导学生多阅读一些有益的课外书籍，培养学生良好的课外阅读习惯。

培养学生阅读能力是语文教学的重要目标之一，当前，小学教学存在这样一种现象，一些教师为了提高考试成绩，只注重学生的课堂教学，阅读也是死守课本，对占据阅读半壁江山的课外阅读毫不重视，如此一来，学生们手中除了与学习有关的教辅书外，极少有其他的课外读物，致使学生词汇积累捉襟见肘，谴词造句能力薄弱，作文中出现了情感空洞、无病呻吟、词汇贫乏，语句平淡的现象。多阅读课外书籍可以开阔视野、增长知识、丰富情感、积累词句，对提高学生的写作水平有很大的帮助。教师应鼓励孩子们多读有益的课外读物，从小培养起一种阅读习惯，对他们会终身受益。

2、教师要善于引导学生观察生活，提高学生的观察能力。

观察是作文的基础，观察能力的强弱往往是学生作文水平高低的体现。常常有学生写作时觉得没有事情可写，无话可说。作为教师，要引导学生关注身边的一草一木，捕捉生活的瞬间和平凡的小事，积累写作素材。生活中处处都有写作材料，对于我们学生来说，只是缺乏一双会看的眼睛，一对善听的耳朵，一颗勤于思考的心!教师若能善于引导学生观察生活，学生的作文才能“言之有物”，内容才能充实。我认为作文教学时教师可以引导学生由“问题”导向目标的训练方法，即根据作文训练的过程，确定观察的范围、对象，教师再按照一定的顺序和重点，精心设计一系列问题，让学生带着问题，有意识地边观察边思考，有了这些问题作引导，学生就能明确写作的内容和要点，这样，写起文章来就会下笔如有神啦，作文也就言之有物啦。

3、教师在作文教学中应让学生学会构思，掌握构思的一般规律。

构思是作文的母亲，这是我引用袁教授的一句话。现在很多学生写作文时提笔就写，不懂得构思，结果写完后一读，结构混乱，全文没有中心。所以说，构思非常重要，它是培养学生的思维和发展能力的过程，是学习谋篇布局的重要一步。写作光有观察得来的资料，还不等于能写出好文章，还必须通过巧妙的构思，精心的裁剪，才能写出好文章。但是，对学生来说要完成一篇文章的构思和布局实在不容易，因为这不仅是个“言之有序”的问题，而且还是个“言之有理”的问题，但根据小学生模仿性强的心理特征，教师可以借用写人、写事和写物的典型文章，将抽象难懂的作文知识化难为易，把学生引上构思之路。例如，在训练写景时，可用《三峡之秋》作为范文，这篇文章结构总分总，先总写三峡充满秋

天的气息，再分别叙述三峡早晨、中午、下午、夜晚的不同景色，文章结构分明，便于学生掌握。有了典型文章引路，待学生入门后，再适当进行构思训练。具体方法是写作文提纲，经过反复的训练，使学生逐步掌握构思的一般规律，从而完成作文的构思。有了构思这位母亲，再加上平时多读课外书，多观察生活，定能生出一篇有条有理的作文了。

4、教师在作文教学中还应该让学生多写。

不懂笔墨不读书，在作文教学中一定要让学生戒掉“懒”习惯，要多花点时间在作文的讲解及练习上，让学生接触各种类型的作文，多想多写才会达到信手拈来的效果。

以上只是我的一些不成熟的见解，在我们的教学中，指导学生作文，永远是一个古老而又崭新的课题。我们只有与学生一同学习，共同进步，才能适应时代的变化。

第二篇：写作总结

写作总结

一、写作概述

小作文15min,共10分，80~100字；大作文35min,共20分160~200字（最好多写200~240）答题卡上，段与段之间可以空一行。

二、小作文

1、书信

▲必备词汇：

1）抱怨信：lodge a complaint about, express my concern/dissatisfaction/disappointment about

2）咨询信：make requiries regarding, ask informationg about

3）道歉：express my regret

4）感谢：express/extend my sincere gratitude/appreciation for

5）建议：I am writing this letter with my suggestions/proposals about

6）求职：apply the position/vacancy about

Recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of

7）寻找失物：report the loss of my……when I ……, request your assistance in finding my…..8）邀请：request your presence at….▲最简模板

1）称呼：写给机构dear sir of madam写给个人dear LiMing

2）正文：三段

第一段：自我介绍，写作目的I am wrtiting this letter for the purpose of

第二段：主题句，分论点一，分论点二

第三段：表示关注I really hope that you can take my proposal/suggestions seriously表示感谢thank you very much for your time and consideration.My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.期待回信I look forward to a favorable reply at your eariest convenience.3）落款 yours sincerely

▲必背范文2008

Dear Bob,I am writing to apologize for having forgotton to return” the Beatles”CD when I left Canada.I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully.Had I paid more attention then, I would not made such a stupid mistake.Now something must be done to solve this problem because you cherish this CD enormously.I can either send it to you by express email or compensate you at a reasonable price.If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earilest convenience.I really hope you can receive my sincere apology.Yours sincerely,LiMing

练习：改写2006年范文。

▲格式Notice

Month day, year

正文，最后要留联系方式

落款

▲ 框架：通知目的（1~2句）------通知细节（5~6句）-------联系方式（1~2句）主体段可应用格式：the details are as follows.Firstly…additonally…ultimately.▲ 2010年范文

Notice

January 9,2010

To improve students’ ability and enrich extracurricular activities, the Postgraduates’Association is recruiting volunteers for an International confrence on globalization to be held on April 7,2010 in Beijng.To begain with, applicants should have Chinese nationality, a stong professional spirit,cheerful personality and be aged under 35.In addition, candidates must have outstanding skills at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak English and Chinese fluently.Finally, students with relevant professional experience are preferred.Please feel free to contact us at1234567 or email us at.Enquiries are encouraged but visits declined.The postgraduate association ▲ 如何扩充细节

1）万能开头To improve students’ ability and enrich extracurricular activities。。。

2）条件与要求：国籍Chinese nationality；友好friendly/proper manners/ cheerful personality;责任感强strong sense of responsibility;年龄be aged under…..;职业精神：a strong

professional spirit;学术表现好 have excellent academic performance;对话题熟悉be familiar with;有相关经验者优先priority and preference will be given to those experienced/students wih…experience are preferred.▲格式：Abstract为题目，主体写成一段

▲步骤：找主旨，各段首句，加上过渡词组合起来

▲常用句型：this article/essay focuse on/centers on the topic of…….It is concluded in this article that………

4、备忘录、报告

▲格式Memo

Date:

To:

From:

Subject:

正文

二、大作文

三段式结构；万能原因：科技，经济的发展；压力过大（对于成功要素的文章）

1)提纲类（参考1992年）

近年来…（现状）…….。尽管。。。但是。。。，更加糟糕的是。。。于是。成为大家关心的问题

1992年范文：for a better understanding between parent and child

In recent years, the problem of lack of communication between parent and child is becoming more serious.Although some children are willing to chat with their patents, the majority are not.To make matters worse, some parents can hardly say a word to their child in a day.Thus, how to creat a better understanding between parent and child is becoming our concern.2)图画类：总述------细节-------文字说明

①两图：总述----第一图-----第二图------可加一句废话--------文字说明

2000年捕鱼2003年温室里的花朵2006年小贝

2000年范文：As is graphically portrayed in the cartoons above, we can see clearly that with the increase of commercial fishing, the number of fishes sharply decreased.In the first picture,there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing boat in1900.On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing boats.Obviously, we can find that the number of fishes has dropped considerably from 1900 to 1995.We are informed that this is a brief histoty of world commercial fishing.联系：2003,2006仿写

②一图：总述-----挖掘细节------挖掘细节------文字说明

如果细节信息过少或者单词量不够描绘不出来，可以用模糊写法。

2002 an American girl in traditional Chinese costume 2004终点又是新起点

2002范文：what can we see from the photograph indcates that an American girl is wearing a traditonal Chinese costome.From the sweetest smile on her face, we can easily arrive at a conclusion that she takes great interest in Chinese clothes and she is crazy about the mysterious Chinese culture.2004范文：what can we see from the cartoon indicates that a little boy is running on a racetrack of the playground.From the smile on his face,we can come to a conclusion that he will be the first one to reach the finish line.Howeve, the caption(字幕，说明，标题)in the picture reads,”the finishing line is also the starting line”.详细写法2011旅游之余

2011范文：

As is graphically portrayed in the cartoon above, we can see clearly that there are two tourists on a boat in the lake.On the one hand, we know that they enjoy some snacks.On the other hand, they throw the rubbish into the lake casually.Finally, the lake is like a rubbish heap, filled with virous kinds of rubbish such as empty bottles,plastic bags, fish bones and so on.(细节描述！)We are informed that a large amout of garbage is thrown away along the trip。

▲ 注：图中有文字说明的，第一段最后一句一般都是这句话的翻译we are informed that….▲ 第一段词汇积累：

形象的：graphically,vividly,subtly,symbolicall

显示：portray,illustrate,depict,reveal

图片：cartoon,caricture,drawing,photograph(真实照片)

增长：increase,advancement,prosperity,development,growth,rampancy(疯狂增长，贬义)急剧的：sharply,dramically,considerably,significantly,substancially

下降：decrease,decline,drop,shrink-shrank-shrunk,reduce

各种各样：various kinds of, diverse sorts of

明显的：obviously,apparently,evidently,undoubtedly

我们被告知：we are informed that…../the caption in the picture indicates that…

图画目的：the purpose of this picture is to show that…..寓意指代：A is associated with…./B is a symbol of….也可以用一句话模糊概括：the fact that…indicates that…..背景原因：owing to

举例说明：studies show that……

转折反论：if we let this situation go as it is…….(如果是坏的东西，要写反论；如果是好的东西，可写总结，写废话)

总结陈述：generally speaking…

格式：首先，这幅图的目的是----------。事实上，----代表了------，----是-----的缩影，-----很自然的和-----联系在了一起。由于--------，---------。同时，许多试验表明/我们发现--------。如果我们听之任之，以后将--------。到那个时候，-------将会遭到严重破坏。

2000年范文：（目的）The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean resourse.(指代)Actually,the fish in the picture is a symbol of resourses, while the fishing boats are natually associated with the world commercial fishing.But more importantly, the reduction of the fishing resourses stands for the destructiong of the ocean resourses.（原因）Owing to over-fishing,the number of fishes has obviously decreased.（举例）Numerouse studied show that many of the spicies have vanished in those years.（反论）If we let this situation go as it is, we won’t know where fish will be in the future.（结论）By that time, our environment will have suffered a great situatio.▲ 第二段的词汇积攒

目的：the purpose of this picture is to show us that…../the real implication(含义，暗示)of the cartoon is to show…../the cartoon conveys the meaning that…..引起注意：due attention must to be paid to…/put/place great emphasis on…./attach importance to….代表：stand for/be naturally associated with/be a symbol of//represent/reflect/mirror/epitomize(成为。。的缩影)

因为：owing to/due to/ on account of/ as a consequence of…

大量的：numerouse/countless/innumberable

因此：therefore/thus/hence/accordingly

坏方面（2000）要解决办法；好方面（2008）要发扬光大；利弊型（2009）要扬长避短 格式：总结according to the discussion above, we may easily come to a conclusion that…..建议：政府for one thing, we need to appeal to the authorities to make laws to…个人for another, we need to cultivate our awareness of people that…

展望未来：only in this way can we finally……also I believe our human beings can….

第三篇：总结写作

总 结

根据中央、省委的统一部署和省高校工委的安排以及我院下发的关于《xx理工大学xx信息学院深入学习实践科学发展观活动工作方案》通知的指示精神，2009年03月至2009年04月期间，在院党委的认真精心组织，各党支部和广大党员的高度重视下，圆满完成了学习实践科学发展观活动第一阶段的各项工作，现总结如下::

一、深入学习实践科学发展观准备工作

在认真学习领会科学发展观精神基础上，围绕提高思想认识、解决突出问题、创新体制机制、促进科学发展的目标要求,03月25日中午十二点半，电子工程分院全体党员在分院会议室参加了深入学习科学发展观活动的动员大会，会议宣布了我分院学习实践科学发展观活动的指导思想、基本目标、重要阶段和具体安排。通过本次动员大会揭开了我院深入学习实践科学发展观活动的序幕。

二、组织学习

学院党支部结合实际，精心组织，周密部署，制定了具体的学习培训计划。采取个人自学、集中培训、专题辅导、集体研讨等形式，组织广大党员干部认真学习。在2009年03月30、31两天召开了分院党员会议，对学院下发的《科学发展观重要论述摘编》、《毛泽东邓小平江泽民论科学发展》两书进行了深入学习，与会人员认真学习并做好笔记，且会后书写个人学习心得，最后统一整理装入档案。同时以课堂、广播、网络、板报等舆论载体，大力宣传科学发展观，让科学发展观进教材、进课堂、进头脑，着力增强学习实践活动的感染力、吸引力，为深入开展学习实践科学发展观活动营造良好的氛围。通过学习，群体党员统一了思想，提高了认识，深刻领会了科学发展观的科学内涵、精神实质和根本要求，增强贯彻落实科学发展观的自觉性和坚定性。

三、主题实践调研活动

在2009年04月06日到2009年04月21日期间我院如期开展了以“科学发展，促进和谐，服务社会”为主题的社会实践调研活动。调研题目为“提高出勤率，降低迟到率，构建和谐课堂”。针对我分院得情况，调研活动按计划分四个阶段顺利进行。第一阶段为调查阶段，通过实际考察以及对各班班委会了解了各班学生的上课出勤情况；第二阶段日为研究阶段，通过班会、问卷调查以及对问题严重的学生进行谈话等形式进行了调查研究；第三阶段各学生党员针对自己的调研情况撰写了调研结果并形成书面报告统一上交；第四阶段为后续考察阶段。通过调研针对我分院的情况发现问题、提出可行性方案、解决问题、问题总结。各位党员进一步让认识到了科学发展观的时代和现实意义，为以后的深入学习实践打下了坚实的基础。抓出勤率是一项长远的工作，要靠长时间来养成，这项工作还要一如既往的继续下去。

第四篇：写作总结

二.修辞手法（Finger of speech）1.Simile(明喻)……像……

It is a comparison between two distinctly different things and the comparison is indicated by the word as or like

E: my love ‘s like a red, red rose 2.Metaphor(暗喻)……是……

It is the use of a word which originally denotes one thing to refer to another with a similar quality.No expressed with the word as or like

E: He is the soul of the team.//Irrigation is the lifeblood of agriculture.3.Personification(拟人)It is to treat a thing or an idea as if it were human or had human qualities.E: Youth is hot and bold , Age is weak and cold, Youth is wild, and Age is time.///// The storm was raging and an angry sea was continuously tossing their boat.4.Metonymy(转喻、借代)与自身相关的东西替代

It is substituting the name of one thing for that of another with which it is closely associated.E: crown can stand for a king.White house for the American government.Bottle for wine or alcohol.Bar for the legal profession.5.synecdoche(提喻)整体与部分，抽象与具体替代。

when a part is substituted for the whole or the whole is substituted for a part.E: hands stands for men/ bread for food or living expenses/// the name of two countries for the two team/// creature for a woman.6.Euphemism(委婉语)It is the substitution of a mild or vague expression for a harsh or unpleasant one.E: to die---to pass away/// old people---senior citizens /// dustman—sanitation worker/// mad---emotionally disturbed 7.irony(反语)It is the use of words which are clearly opposite to what is meant, in order to achieve a special effect.E: raining heavily---what a fine weather /// a barbarous act –civilized 8.overstatement(hyperbole)and understatement（夸大或缩小)E: she is dying to know what job has been assigned her It took a few dollars to build this indoor swimming pool.9.transferred epithet(移就)An epithet is an adjective or descriptive phrase that serves to characterize somebody or something.E: busy day----people is busy in this day /// sleepless nights—people … 10.oxymoron(矛盾修饰法)In oxymoron apparently contradictory terms are combined to produce a special effect

(1).Adj.+n.一个形容词修饰另一个意义相反的或者相对的名词（2）adj.+adj.两个意义相驳的形容词

（3）n.+adj.形容词后置

faith /unfaithful

(4)n.+n.意义相对或者相反的词通过连字符连接构成合成词/love-hate(5)adv.+adj.副词修饰形容词//dully bright(6)v.+adv./// love harmful

E: a living death /// victorious defeat /// cleaver fool // cruel kindness 11.alliteration(头韵)It refers to the appearance of the same initial consonant sound in two or more words.E: proud as a peacock // blind as a bat 三．段落的展开方式

1.development by time(又称为chronological sequencing).按时间先后展开

2.development by space 按空间先后顺序展开，从大地方到小地方，或者从远到近3.development by process 按过程展开，按照事情发展过程一步一步展开。

4.development by example or generalization 按举例和归纳展开。通过举出一些例子让使文章变得清晰明了。

5.development by comparison and contrast 类比对比法

通过两件事物的对比展开文章描述

包括：block comparison or block contrast(整体对比法)and alternating comparison or alternating contrast(交替类比法)6.development by cause and effect(按原因结果展开法)分析原因和结果的方法展开文章 7.development by classification(按分类法展开)按照事物的特征把事物分类描写

8.development by definition(按定义法展开)定义事物的概念或者特征展开文章的描写 9.development by a combination of methods(按综合法展开)

第五篇：写作总结

开头： To arouse sb’s interest and enrich our school life, we held an English handwriting competition.连接词：

First of all;to begin with;

Besides;what’s more;in addition;

Finally;last but not least;

On one hand,…..;on the other hand,…… The most important is that …..转折连接词： However；To the contrary;By contrast;Therefore;

我的看法： In my opinion;in my view;as far as I am concerned;I think that;I believe that…..常用句型：

We carry out a survey（调查）about the importance of music to human beings.And many people took an active part in it.The reasons are as follows.There is no need to do…… They believe that……;they hold the view/idea/ opinion that….;

Practicing handwriting is so difficult that they cannot make great progress in a short time.Students’ beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves.This suggests that ……

There is no doubt that……

It is harmful to children’s eyesight……

It does harm to …..I am sure that things will become better if these ways are carried out.We at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports and science.Our economic development is important, but we should try our best to avoid（避免）destroying the cultural relics.Taking all factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.I think that playing table tennis can build up our bodies, keep us healthy and train our brains.This is what we are worried about.Therefore, more attention should be paid to this aspect in future.常用短语：

take active part in;think highly of;as is know to all;with the development of science and technology（随着科学技术的发展）；with the development of society（随着社会的发展）；communicate with sb;exchange our feelings and thoughts;

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Dear Editor:

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.These books have many advantages.……

I am looking forwards to your reply.Thanks for your attention.Best regards或Yours sincerely,LiHua