第一篇:初三中考英语作文辅导不能忽视邮件写作
标题:初三中考英语作文辅导不能忽视邮件写作
关键词:初三中考英语作文辅导
导读:现在随着网络的发达,大家也都喜欢用e-mail来交流。我们在进行初三中考英语作文辅导的时候就不能忽视这个重要的情况,因为很多作文题目都是以会邮件的类型来进行的哟!
假如你是韩梅,下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail, 请根据e-mail的内容,给他写一封回信。与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语:listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
Dear Han Mei , I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I’m annoyed(烦恼).What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?Alice
Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get on/ along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.I'm sure your mum loves you very much.Maybe it shows your mother’s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about.If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Han Mei更多学习资料请见美联英语学习网。
第二篇:初三中考英语作文辅导如何写回信
文章来源:原版英语
标题:初三中考英语作文辅导如何写回信
关键词:初三中考英语作文辅导
导读:对于即将要参加中考的学生来说,初三中考英语作文辅导是非常重要的,因为很多同学在英语作文的写作上,还存在着不少问题。我们下面就为大家提供一篇回信类范文做参考。
假如你叫李飞,是学校“校园英语报”的编辑。你收到你同学张丽的姐姐的来信。请根据这位姐姐的要求,给张丽写一封回信。
Dear Editor, I am really worried about my sister, Zhang Li.She always watches TV or reads books in her free time.She doesn’t like going out to exercise.I’m afraid that she will be not strong enough.Could you write to her to tell her the importance of doing exercise and give her some advice?
A worried sister
Dear Zhang Li,Your sister is worried about you very much.Because you don’t take any exercise in spare time.I think health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body.Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic.If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily.So you should go out instead of staying at home.There are many kinds of sports you can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.Just remember “Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.”
Good luck!
Yours,Li Fei
第三篇:2010英语中考作文辅导
2010英语中考作文辅导
1、手机利与弊
Recently,short messages become more and more popular with both the young and the old.People accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them.As to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messages,in my opinion,there're three points.First, it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.By comparison with letters or email,short messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with them.Second,short messages cost less than making a phone call.Third,people who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easily,through which more and more people can know of others and become friends.joozone.com
However,nothing that is perfect exists in the world.Short messages also have some disadvantages with them.Some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messages.Also,taking advantage of people's ignorance,some websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messages.Above all,short message is product of the hitech nowadays.It will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it.2、关于电动车
A lot of “family of electric vehicles students” have no knowledge of the relevant transport training, do not look at traffic signs on the road marking, like the electric car when the motorcycle opened, often in disregard of the risk into the fast lane, or speeding along in the slow.As a result, the road can often be seenchaos, reverse, cut-away line of electric vehicles, the bad behavior of the traffic awareness and timely, if not corrected, would have an adverse impact on children.At the same time, each value of electric vehicles as a result of two or three thousand dollars, the driver is a student, easily become the target of criminals and crime, easy to bring the personal safety of the students potential.Not long ago, a student in a City electric car ride through mountain tunnels tung oil, were taken away from electric cars3、关于低碳
We have only one earth,it’s our duty to protect our enviroment.Now there is a new lifestyle called low carbow ,have you ever heard of it ? what does it mean? It means Low energy and no waste.as a student,what can we do for it? It’s easy,you can walk or ride to school instead of driving to school.in order to save paper , you can write on both sides of paper, Before we left the classroom, we should turn off lights and the computer ….Do you have any other good ideas? Please tell me, We should also call on the people around us to do something for low – carbon living.Only in this way will the earth he a good place to live on.If we don’t do anything,Do remember ,the last drop of water on the earth may be a tear-drop of us.4、玉树地震
1)On April 12th, a big earthquake happened in Yushu, Qinhai.Many people lost their family and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sad.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I’m deeply moved by these people.SoI’ll use my pocket money to buy some
food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2)学生会地震后的倡议书
Dear students,After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school.Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed.They can just live in the open air.They don’t have enough school things or clothes.As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble.As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can.We can raise some money and things for them.And we can also write to them to encourage them.I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.Students’
Union5、申请成为世博会志愿者
I read your ad.in the newspaper yesterday.I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to work as a volunteer for the World Expo..My name is Li Hua.I’m sixteen.I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English.I am proud that I won the first prize in our city’s English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact I’m healthy and strong.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well.Please reply to me soon.My telephone number is 0594—1356666.Yours sincerely6、回顾初中三年成长过程,你一定有很多感受,从学习,生活,爱好等方面作出自我评价(毕业 回顾评价)
I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math and physics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School.7、梦想和未来
1).我的梦想是当一名医生(my dream is doctor)
I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.May let the human change the health.At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully.Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.2.)以后十年内我的生活(MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS)
In ten years,I think I 'll be a reporter.I wiil live in an apartement with my sister.Because I don't like living alone.And I can play with her inth aparement.So in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and I willgo to another places on business.In ten years,i will have many different pets.Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time.And I will go to london on my vacation.So,my life in ten years will be better and better
王彤
第四篇:中考英语作文辅导
中考英语作文常用写作句式句型汇总
I.常用词组和句型
1.look forward to n/doing 盼望做…
2.hold on to n/doing 坚持做…
3.dream of doing 梦想做…
4.can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…
5.stop / keep sb(from)doing 阻止某人做…
6.be busy(in)doing / be busy with + n 忙于做…
7.spend time / money(in)doing
spend time / money on + n 花费钱/时间做…
8.have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself(in)doing 玩得开心
have trouble / have a problem / have difficulties(in)doing
have trouble / have a problem / have difficulties with + n 做…有困难
9.It’s + adj + for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
10.so + adj/adv + that … 如此… 以至于…Time is so precious that we can't waste it.too … to do 太… 而不能…Time is too precious to waste.11.not … until … 直到…才…
I didn’t go home until I finished picking up all the litter.12.be good / bad for…
Reading is good for our mind.读书对心灵有益。Overwork is bad for health.13.see/hear/watch/find/notice sb do/doing sth.I saw a little boy dropping litter.14.One … the other … / Some… others …
15.By +Ving, … can …
By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.16.It is time + for sb to do sth
It is time for the government to solve the traffic problems
17.The + 比较级 + S + V, the +比较级+ S + V
The harder you work, the more progress you make.The more books we read, the more learned we become.18.An advantage of … is that + 句子
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't produce any pollution.19.… is the + 最高级 + 名词 +(that)+ 主语 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read).Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.Mr Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.20.Nothing is + 比较级 + than + n./to do
Nothing is more important than honesty/ to be honest.21.There is no doubt that + 句子毫无疑问…
There is no doubt that our environment is very important.22.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子… 的原因是…
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they provide us with fresh air.23.That is why + 句子那是…的原因
24.That is because + 句子那是因为…
25.The reason why + 句子is that + 句子
26.That is the reason why …/ 4
Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it.27.It is said that + 句子 据说…
It is reported that + 句子 据报道…
28.There is no need/time to do 没必要做…
29.Those who… should …
Those who break the traffic rules should be punished.30.get into the habit of + Ving
We should get into the habit of helping others.31.Thanks to +n/Ving
Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.32.What(a/an)+ adj + n.+ S + V!= How + adj + S(the + n.)+ V!
What an exciting match!/ How exciting the match is!
33.have a great influence on sb/sth
Smoking has a great influence on our health.My mother has a great influence on me.II.提建议
1.had better(not)do 最好(不)做
2.how about / what about doing …怎么样?
3.I think you should/are supposed to do 我认为你应该…
4.I suggest that he(should)+do我建议你做…
5.If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的话,我会做…
6.It’s best to do最好做…
7.Why not do/ why don’t you do…? 为什么不…
III.表示喜欢和感兴趣
1.like / love doing
2.enjoy doing
3.prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
4.be interested in/take a great interest in + n./ doing
IV.表示努力做…
1.try to do努力做…
2.try one’s best to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做…
3.do what sb can(to do)尽力做…
do everything sb can(to do)尽某人全力做…
V.打算做… / 计划做…
1.plan to do 打算做…
2.be going to do 打算做…
3.decide to do 决定做…
4.make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做…
VI.表示想/希望
1.want to do = would like to do 想做…
2.hope to do 希望做…
3.expect to do 期待着做…
4.wish to do 希望做…
5.think about/ consider doing 考虑做…
VII.表达看法或观点
一.开头用语:
1.Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages.2.As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.3.Different people have different points of view.二.并列用语:as well as,not only…but also,1.Not only do computers play an important part in science, but also play an important role in ourdaily life.2.E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.三.对比用语:on the one hand, on the other hand
On the one hand, I helped people who need help, on the other hand, I spent time doing what Ilike to do.四.递进用语:even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…
The community is too small for a family of four, and besides/what’s more, it is in a bad location.五.例证用语:in one’s opinion, that is(to say), for example, in fact
There is one more topic to discuss, that is(to say), the question of education.六.时序用语:first/firstly, ever since, while, at the same time
七.强调用语:especially, at least, not at all ,Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.八.因果用语:because, as a result, because of, with(out)the help of...,As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the Senior High School Entrance Examinations.九.总结用语:in general, in a word, as you know,In general, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.十.结尾句
1.But I don't think it is a very good way to solve …For example,… Worst of all,…但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……, 最糟糕的是……。
2.There are several ways for us to solve the problems.First, we can…有几个解决问题的方法。
3.Why…?The first reason is that … The second reason is …The third is …
4.I fully agree with the idea that … because… 完全同意……,因为……。
5.In my opinion, I think it necessary to… The reasons are as followings.First …second …Last but not least,对我来说,我认为有必要……。原因如下:第一,……;第二,……;
最后……但同样重要的是……
中考作文常用谚语
1.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
3.Every coin has two sides.任何事物都有两面性。
4.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。
5.Haste makes waste.欲速则不达。
6.All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.只工作不休息,聪明孩子也变傻。
7.Pleasant hours fly past.快乐时光去如飞。
8.No one can call back yesterday./ Yesterday will not be called again.昨日不复来。
9.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。
10.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
11.Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。
12.Tomorrow comes never.切莫依赖明天。
13.A bad thing never dies.坏事传千年。
14.A bad beginning makes a bad ending.恶其始者必恶其终。
15.A good beginning is half done.16.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
17.Little by little and bit by bit.坚持就是胜利。
18.If winter comes, can spring be far behind? 冬天来了,春天还会远吗?
19.A mother’s love never changes.母爱永恒不变。
20.Brothers are like hands and feet.兄弟如手足.21.Reading makes a full man.阅读使人充实。
22.To live is to learn.生活就是学习。
23.To be good is to be happy.从善是乐.24.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要人肯试。
25.Great hopes make great man.远大的希望造就伟大的人物。
第五篇:英语写作辅导
英语写作辅导
英语短文的结构及段落的组织
一、短文的结构
文章、段落、句子、词组、单词
从文到段,从段到句,是篇章结构的主要内容。
了解篇章结构,是进行写作的必备常识。
一篇文章通常可分为以下三种段落:
(一)引言段(Introductory Paragraph):向读者介绍此片文章的主题及背景材料。在文中起到开宗明义,即“启”的作用,是全文的主题所在。
(二)主题段(Body Paragraph(s)):也叫正文,是文章的主体部分,也是情节发展、事实说明或者层层递进的部分,把要论述的,具体而明晰。文章内容要具有 一致性、连贯性,在文章中起到“承”和“转”的作用。
(三)结尾段(Conclusion Paragraph):也叫结束语,是由通篇文章所得出的简短结论,或者事情发展到了最后一个情节,即故事的结束、结局、其作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或者肯定文章的中心思想,用以加深印象,在文章中起到“合”的作用。
二、文章的段落
段落是英语作文的基本结构单位,是文章中相对独立的一个部分。
段落与文章的三个组成部分相对应,通常由三个部分组成:主题句、发展句和结尾句。短文写作的技巧与套路
一、写作步骤
1.多读多练 充分准备 2.细读指令 认真审题 3.理清思路 构思布局 4.精选素材 列出提纲 5.动笔写作 组织成文 6.用词简洁 篇幅适中 7.认真检查 仔细修改
二、写作套路 1.写作类型 1)现象阐释型
通常要求考生对某一现象进行解释说明,分析其原因并加以评论。其基本结构是:首先描述现象并说明其现状;然后分析这种现象的原因或相关因素;最后提出建议或总结观点。典型题目如:
Why College Students Have Difficulty Finding Jobs?
Why College Students Take a Part-time Job?
Chatting on Line
2)问题解决型
通常要求考生从试题的提示行文字入手,描述其反映出的问题,提出解决方案或应对措施。其基本结构是:首先引出要解决的问题及其严重性或必要性,并简要分析其产生的原因或带来的危害和影响;然后提出解决问题的办法或措施;最后表明自己的态度,提出建议并展望前景。典型题目如下: How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic How to Succeed in a Job Interview How I Finance My College Life Staying Healthy hatting on Line 3)对比选择型
这类作文的标志十分明显,其要求比较明确,即直接要求考生比较两种观点或两种做法,进而表明自己对问题或事物的态度或观点,也就是做出选择。其基本结构:首先对要评论的事物或现象进行整体介绍;然后陈述两种不同的观点或做法及其理由;之后表明自己的观点或态度。典型题目如: It Pays to Be Honest Should Education Be Commercialized? Choose a Famous University or a Favorite Major? Reading Selective or Extensively? 4)利弊评述型
此类作文要求考生客观地分析和评论某一事物的正反两方面,或在某一问题上反映出的两种不同看法,并不需要明确表明态度,说明事物的对与错,尤其是会有较大争议的问题,可采用平衡利弊的态度,提出某种希望和设想。典型题目如: The Positive and Negative Aspects of Skyscrapers The Development of a Private Car Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good LUCK? College Life in Internet Era My View on Examination 5)观点论证型
此类作文一般要求考生根据题目所给的论点,按照题目要求通过摆事实、讲道理的方式对该论点进行论证或反驳。其基本结构是:首先提出要论证或反驳的论点;然后提出论据对其进行论证或反驳;最后表明自己的立场和看法。典型题目如:
Harmful of Fake Commodities Why I Attended College The Job I Like Best The Benefits of Making Friends of Different Kinds 2.段落类型
(1)描述段:一般首先对命题中提供的信息(如某现象、问题、背景或事件)进行提炼和概括,然后进行扩展描述。
(2)说明段:主要对原因、危害、影响、作用、方法、过程等进行分析说明,段落的组织必须要注意以下两点:一是要条理清楚,尽量使用一些比较清晰的表达方式。如说明原因时,可以使用the main reason, what is more, as a result等短语,以突出文章的条理性;二是要根据标题和提纲内容确定合适的说明角度和说明方法,如说明原因或举例说明等。(3)议论段:通常是考生根据文章的主题提出、论证或总结某项观点。写议论段时应做到观点明确、论证充分,并有令人信服的数据和例子来支持论点,使文章具有说服力。议论段主要有四种:提出观点段(有时是提出一种观点,有时是提出两种对立观点)、论证观点段、对比论证段(对两种观点进行对比论证,有时可分成两段来分述两种观点)和总结观点段。3.写作模板 1)现象阐释型
①Nowadays, there exists a social/economic/environmental phenomenon, which has aroused great concern among people around us./ 总体现象has increasingly become a common concern of the public./ 总体现象is commonly accepted by the people from all walks of life.②According to a survey, …。
③There are a couple of reasons booming this phenomenon./This problem/phenomenon has a great effect on … ④Firstly,/above all/First of all/原因一/影响一⑤Secondly/what’s more/ furthermore(原因二/影响二)⑥Besides/Finally(原因三/影响三)
⑦As a result/ Therefore/ consequently,(结果)⑧As far as I am concerned/ As to me /In my opinion, “我”的观点/态度/做法⑨furthermore,进一步说明 ⑩Therefore/ based on the above discussions, I can conclude/ it can be concluded that…(总结全文)(1)描述段:描述现象 ①开门见山,总述现象
②阐释现象的具体表现或变化(2)说明段:阐述原因
③承上启下,引出原因/因素/影响 ④具体阐述原因一/因素一/影响一
⑤列举原因二/因素二/影响二(可以用例证支持)⑥列举原因三/因素三/影响三(可以用例证支持)⑦总结以上原因或因素导致的结果/该现象的最终影响(3)议论段:表明观点
⑧我对此现象的思考或看法(可能是个人选择或者是对现象、趋势或影响的评述)⑨进一步说明自己的看法或陈述理由 ⑩总结全文
例:
Cards 1.现代城市中持卡的人越来越多; 2.原因在于。。; 3.“我”的看法。
①Nowadays, holding cards has become a common phenomenon.②According to a survey, over 80%of people in big cities hold various kinds of cards issued by banks, restaurants, supermarkets ,etc.(描述段)③There are a number of reasons for it.④ First of all, it is convenient to consume by cards.⑤What’s more, it is safer to carry cards than cash.For example, if one’s cards are lost, the owner needn’t worry too much because no one else can get the money out without the password.⑥In addition, cards can give card holders certain privilege or discount in service.⑦Therefore, holding cards, especially among the youth, becomes fashionable recently.(说明段)⑧ As for me, cards have a bright future.⑨With the development of science and technology, cards will become much safer and easier to use.⑩Therefore, it can be concluded that more people will use cards.(议论段,表明观点)
模仿练习1 • Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags outline:
1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题
3.限制使用的意义 模仿练习2 • On Power Failure •
1.很多城市缺电现象严重 •
2.分析原因 •
3.提出建议 模仿练习3 • Online Education • Outline:
1.目前网络教育形成热潮
2.我认为这股热潮的的原因是……
3.我对网络教育的评价 模仿练习4 Skipping Classes on College Campus Outline:
1.大学里逃课现象时有发生; 2.分析学生逃课的原因; 3.如何减少逃课现象 2)问题解决型
①In recent years, increasing numbers of people关注/牵涉/参与不良现象或某一问题 ②It is obvious that 危害一/作用一 ③Additionally, 危害二/作用二④therefore, special/considerable attention should be paid to 该问题
⑤on the one hand/ firstly, 方法一 ⑥On the other hand/ secondly, 方法二⑦ In addition/ thirdly, 方法三
⑧Of course, following these suggestions/methods may not surely solve the problem, but it is worth of trying ⑨As for me/ in my opinion, “我”的思考或看法 ⑩Only in this way… 倒装句总结全文/undoubtedly, it is necessary/ essential… 根本途径(1)描述段:描述问题
①开门见山,综述不良现象或某一问题 ②问题的危害一/解决问题的作用一 ③问题的危害二/解决问题的作用二
④承上启下,表达解决问题的必要性和紧迫性,引出解决问题的方法或相关因素(2)说明段:说明方法因素 ⑤解决方法一/决定因素一 ⑥解决方法二/决定因素二 ⑦解决方法三/决定因素三(3)议论段:
⑧指出这些方法不一定能成功解决问题,但付出总是值得的 ⑨“我”倾向的方法和途径
⑩提出根本途径或建议,应该采取的态度,总结全文 例: How to Treat the Parent-Child Relationship 1.父母与孩子之间的代沟越来越大; 2.代沟带来那些影响;
3.如何消除代沟,并改善父母与孩子之间的关系。
①More and more people are paying attention to the generation gap between parents and their children.②Obviously, the generation gap is a source of family disharmony.③Additionally, it may lead to a number of social problem.④Therefore, measures should be taken to deal with the issue.⑤On the one hand, parents should be more tolerant to their children , remembering that a child is a child and there is always such a stage in one’s growth.⑥On the other hand, children should also understand that without parents’ guidance, they won’t be able to grow up healthily.⑦ Finally, parents should spent more time with their children.⑧Of course , following these suggestions may not surely solve the problem, but it is worth the effort.⑨As for me, mutual understanding is the key solution.⑩Undoubtedly, it is essential for both parents and children to understand each other for a good parent—child relationship.模仿练习1 • How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic
• 1.Importance of solving the problem of
heavy traffic • 2.Ways to solve the problem of heavy traffic • 3.My suggestion 模仿练习2 • How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities.• 1.解决住房问题的重要性
• 2.三种可能解决住房问题的方案:
1)多造高层建筑;
2)向地下发展;
3)疏散城市人口。• 3)对比选择型 • 3.我的建议
①When asked about/ when it comes to事物/问题 , different people will offer different opinions.②Some people take it for granted that观点一③ in their opinion, 选择观点一的理由一④Besides,选择观点一的理由二
⑤ however, others hold that观点二⑥ They maintain that观点二/选择观点二的理由一⑦And观点二/选择观点二的理由二
⑧Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the former/ later viewpoint/ choice.⑨”我”的理由⑩Therefore , as stated above, 重申观点/选择(1)议论段:提出观点
①开门见山,指出人们对某事物/问题存在不同的观点/选择 ②提出观点一/选择一
③提出观点一/选择一的理由一 ④提出观点一/选择一的理由二(2)议论段:对比论证 ⑤提出观点二/选择二 ⑥提出观点二/选择二的理由一 ⑦提出观点二/选择二的理由二(3)议论段:总结观点 ⑧标明“我”的倾向 ⑨阐述“我”的理由
⑩总结全文,重申“我”的观点/选择
例:To Be a Small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond 1.在大企业工作的特点; 2.在小企业工作的特点; 3.我的选择。
①To the question whether to work in a large enterprise or in a small firm, different people may have different answers.②Some may choose to be a small fish in a big pond.③They hold that they can derive a sense of pride from being a member of a famous organization such as General Motors.④Besides, they can work with people from different parts of the world.⑤Still others may prefer to be a big fish in a small pond.⑥According to them, in a small company, they may be given greater responsibilities without much restriction.⑦Consequently, they can show their talents fully and freely.⑧Weighing up these two choices, I am for the latter.⑨I prefer to work in a small enterprise, where I can get more chances of promotion.⑩I’d rather become an important figure within my own small pond.练习1 Money Outline: 1.有人认为金钱是万能的。
2.有人说金钱是万恶之源(the source of all crimes)3.我对金钱的看法。模仿练习2 Choose a Famous University or a Favorite Major Outline: 1.有人认为应该选择重点大学; 2.有人认为应该选择重点专业; 3.我的观点。模仿练习3 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 针对阅读,人们有不同的看法: 1.有人认为应该精读; 2.有人认为应该泛读; 3.“我”的看法 模仿练习4 The Best Means of Transportation Outline:
1.私家车越来越多,污染问题、交通问题随之产生; 2.人们出行时其实有多中交通方式可以选择; 3.从健康和环保节能出发,我认为最好的交通方式是 4)模板一(驳论)
①Up to now, many people hold it true that某观点 ②They believe进一步说明此观点③However, recent survey/ research shows that 与上述观点相反的论点 ④The arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.⑤Above all, 论据一⑥For example,(支持论据一的事例)⑦Furthermore,论据二及支持论据二的事例 ⑧Most importantly, 论据三
⑨All that has been discussed above points to the fact that重申本文论点 ⑩Therefore,与该观点相符合的做法和态度
(1)议论段:提出观点
①指出普遍存在的某种观点活态度或做法 ②进一步说明此观点
③转折提出与之相反的本论文观点 ④承上启下,引出对观点的论证(2)议论段:论证观点 ⑤列举论据一
⑥举例说明论据一
⑦列举论据二并加以说明 ⑧列举论据三
(3)总结段:总结观点 ⑨承接上文,重申观点
⑩总结全文,可表达我们应该坚持该观点或采取该观点相符合的做法 模板二(立论)
①People are familiar with/it is widely accepted that某观点②As we know,观点正确性的表现③Therefore,小结观点④There are numerous examples supporting this argument.⑤ A case in point is 例一 ⑥For another example, 引出说明例二⑦Moreover, 阐述第三个例子
⑧From what has been discussed above, we should understand that重申观点 ⑨But(one thing we have to notice is that)提出个人建议 ⑩Therefore,总结全文(1)议论段:提出观点
①开门见山,直接提出观点 ②阐述观点正确性的表现 ③小结观点
④承上启下,引出对观点的论证(2)议论段:论证观点
⑤列举支持论点的具体事例一 ⑥列举支持论点的具体事例二 ⑦列举支持论点的具体事例三(3)总结段:总结观点
⑧承接上文,重申观点 ⑨指出坚持该论点应该注意什么 ⑩总结全文,指出正确的态度或做法 例1
Wealth and Happiness 1.每个人都想获得财富,财富似乎就是幸福,其实不然; 2.世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的。
①Up to now, many people still hold that wealth can bring happiness.②They believe that with a great amount of money, they must live a happier life.③However, recent survey shows that wealth is not necessarily associated with happiness.④The arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.⑤Above all ,good health plays an important role above wealth in a happy life.⑥For example, people can buy medicine with money, but cannot buy health.⑦Furthermore, wealth may encourage those harmful habits which may ruin the wealth owner, such as addition to drugs and gambling.⑧Most importantly, there is one thing essential to happiness which cannot be bought with wealth---love.⑨All that has been discussed above shows that wealth is not equal to happiness.⑩Therefore, we should not be crazy about money and earn it with honest work.例2
Blood Donation ①In modern society, it is widely accepted that blood donation is good for health.②As we know, donating blood benefit both society and people.③Therefore, people should be encouraged to donate blood regularly.④Many remarkable facts can support this argument.⑤First of all, according to medical research findings, donating blood can effectively reduce the happening of certain disease.⑥What’s more, donating blood regularly could reduce the pace of aging.⑦Besides, donating blood regularly could help people keep good mood.⑧All mentioned above tell us that blood donation does more than harm to health.⑨We should hold a positive attitude towards it.⑩Therefore, it can be concluded that bllod donation should be encouraged under the scientific instruction.5)利①For the past years,某事物has been widely accepted by people/has come into people’s daily life.②No one can deny that 某事物的好处.③For one thing, 好处一④For another, 好处二
⑤However, just as all coins have two sides, there are also disadvantages about某事物的弊端.⑥For example 弊端一⑦Moreover, 弊端二.⑧Finally,弊端三
⑨In my opinion, “我”的建议⑩only in this way, can we 总结全文.弊评述型(1)议论段:
①开门见山,总述现象 ②分析某事物的有利面 ③举例说明好处一 ④举例说明好处二 ⑤举例说明好处三
(2)说明段:
⑥承上启下,引出对弊端的讨论 ⑦举例说明弊端一 ⑧举例说明弊端二
(3)总结段:
⑨“我”的建议(如何趋利避害)⑩总结全文 例
The Positive and Negative Aspects of Home Computers 1.家用电脑的普及; 2.家用电脑的好处;
3.家用电脑带来的问题。
①Nowadays, computers have come into people’s home as one of common household appliances.②There is no doubt that like TV, home computers benefit people greatly.③With the computer, the home becomes a library, a school, an office and an entertainment center.④All kinds of information can be close at one’s finger tips.⑤In addition, home computers bring people far away closer to us.⑥Despite the convenience that home computers bring about, they have disadvantages.⑦For example, people, especially the youth, may easily get addicted to computer games.⑧Besides, since nearly everything can be done in front of the computer, we may become more isolated from people around us.⑨In my opinion, we all should consider how to control home computers, so that they won’t control us.⑩Only in this way, can we make full use of them, while avoiding of the side effects.模仿练习1 The Development of Private Cars Outline:
1.私家车普及的好处; 2.私家车带来的问题; 3.“我”的看法 模仿练习3 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 针对阅读,人们有不同的看法: 1.有人认为应该精读; 2.有人认为应该泛读; 3.“我”的看法