第一篇:初三英语写作训练
初三英语写作训练
二十二中学 李珍
各位老师下午好!今天能和大家坐在一起,共同探讨关于英语写作训练这一话题感到非常荣幸。下面谈谈自己在对学生进行写作训练时的一点粗浅的认识与做法。
考试说明中对写的技能是这样规定的。着重考查学生以书面形式
1学生应能够运用语言知识,表达真实意义或信息传递的能力。○较为
恰当地对所熟悉的周围的人或事物进行简单地描述,就所熟悉的话题
2能根据文字、图画、图表等信息提示,按要求发表自己的观点等。○
写出意思连贯、语言符合逻辑的书面表达。在写的过程中,能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
书面表达的形式多种多样,中考英语试题共分为三类:应用文、看图作文和提示作文。应用文要求能够掌握常见的写作技巧;看图作文要求能够根据图画和词语提示,明确考查意图,弄清图画内容,把握情节线索,完整表达思想;提示作文要求能够根据所给的提示写出意思连贯,符合逻辑的短文。要注意语言准确,行文连贯,表达清楚,字迹工整。
1具有教育意义②贴近学生生活中考书面表达试题有三个特点:○
③热点问题。
按内容分为以下几类:小作文包括招聘启事、寻物启事、赠言、慰问卡、通知、家规、校规、兴趣、爱好、感谢信、描述物品、假期计划、介绍朋友、老师等。大作文包括:介绍初中生活、询问学生的英语学习情况、描述献爱心活动(到养老院、儿童福利院献爱心;为灾区、贫困地区儿童献爱心)、描述业余生活、做一名文明市民、健康问题、环境问题、帮同学排忧解难、如何缓解压力等。这些作文都给出提示,如背景材料、汉语提示、英文词组、句子、开头、结尾、图片这种保证了作文的规范性,学生也有话可写。实际上就是按照时
间、答问或逻辑顺序把汉译英的句子组合到一起,最后加上自己的感受。
目前学生在写作上存在的问题有以下五个方面:
1)人称时态混乱。人称混乱问题主要是没有理解题意,如这周我们训练的一个作文题:假如你是某国际会议的接待人员,请根据所给明片提供的信息,进行介绍。开头已给出This is Chang,此篇作文应用第三人称,结果有一部分学生写成了第一人称,变成了自我介绍。时态混乱,表现为一会过去时,一会现在时,说明学生最基本的时态的知识没有掌握。
2)没有用英语思维。有些孩子基础不太好,没有养成用英语思维的习惯,如要求学生写一个通知,其中有这样一句话:“请学生们按时到”,有些学生答成了Please students will get there on time.有些学生答成了Please get on time.九年四班写成了Grade 9, class 4.今天下午2点在大厅举办了一个报告,写成了There is going to a talk this afternoon at two o’clock in the hall.完全按照汉语的思维习惯。
3)单词拼写错误。单词拼写错误,单词拼写不太规范,如有学生把g写成了q,字母i没写.,v写成了r,e写成了o, f写成了t,就是因为平时没有养成好习惯,考试答题速度一上来,字母书写就不规范了。结果无形中扣了许多不该扣的分,词组也不规范书写every day 写成everyday。
4)字迹潦草。字迹潦草、勾抹,出现这些问题,基本上都出在男孩身上,写文章前,他们没有进行充分的审题与思考,拿起笔来就答,检查时发现不合要求,乱勾一气,卷面非常不整齐,另外学生的答题纸版面有限,勾抹之后没地方可写,给学生的作文带来没必要的失分。
5)遗漏要点。最大的问题就是遗漏要点,即要求写四点,由于没有认真审题,结果写出了三点。如2009年本溪市英语试题中的作
文题:我市正在开展“创建文明城市”活动。创建文明城市应该从我做起,从小事做起,文明礼貌待人,遵守交通规则,保护身边环境——请你围绕这方面内容写一篇短文,谈谈文明应该怎样做。结果有的同学把从小事做起这一点漏掉了,还有不少同学把这几点都谈出来,但是没有写出自己的感想。如I think we should try our best to make hometown more beautiful.It’s our duty to m make our hometown more beautiful.这样这篇文章就不完整了。2009年锦州市作文题:拥有了健康,就拥有了一切?为了预防疾病,保持身体健康,请结合实际,从学习、运动、饮食和卫生习惯等方面,谈谈你有哪些好的做法与建议?但是有些学生只谈了学习、运动、卫生这三点。结果不但漏点了,字数也不够了,作文的分数大打折扣。
针对学生的现状,在较短的时间内怎样训练学生呢?首先应训练学生答题的方法与技巧。
1、认真审题。审题是写作的前提,是决定写作成功的关键一环。考试时必须仔细阅读写作要求和所给的提示(包括汉语、英语短语、句子提示及图画)这些提示为学生写作提供了思路,让学生有话可说,有话想说,有话能说,也可适当发挥想象,使内容连贯丰富。
2、确定时态。根据题意选择正确的时态,这是写作文的关键,否则影响全篇。应该给学生归纳:描述事物,主要用现在时;描述经历,主要用过去时;描述计划,主要用将来时;健康问题、环境问题用should / be supposed to.3、组织句子。在弄清题目所要表达的主要意思后,便可根据内容组织句子,考生应选择自己最熟悉,最有把握的词语、句型姜要点表达出来,特别是要学会避难就易。尽量使用简单词句,如果有可能,要注意运用多种表达方式。因为不是我们自己批卷,恐怕在作文方面要求严一些,但切不可生搬硬套,按汉语意思,逐字逐句翻译,出现汉语式英语,导致所写的东西表达不清楚,意思不连贯。要注意时态,人称及书写规范,尽量避免单词拼写错误,还要注意一些关联词的使用如but, and, so, so„that, because等,使文章连贯、自如、流畅(多媒体呈现作文题,边呈现边讲解)。
4、反复检查。①要点有无遗漏,尤其是给了3点提示,但每一点中不只涉及一项内容,学生容易忽视,造成丢分。②语法、与子结构有无问题(时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、介词、单复数、比较级、大小写、代词等用法是否有不当现象)。③拼写、标点是否正确。④格式是否标准(如书信、日记、通知等),现在基本上格式已给出,但也要让学生了解这些。⑤字数是否符合要求。
5、卷面整洁工整,卷面整洁与否也是能否得分的主要因素之一,所以学生在时间允许的情况下,应该打草稿,检查无误后,认真书写,力求规范工整,给阅卷老师留下良好的印象,争取在此题上少丢分。
在此基础上,通过熟读范文,让学生记写作中一些常用的句型,记一些过渡用语,集中写作。当堂写作,面批面改。当堂写作,共同批改,启发学生进行写作等几个环节对学生进行作文的训练
1、区检测的试题代表了中考试题的方向,作文非常具有典型性。我把每次区大型检测的作文整理到一起,上下学期一共检测了五次,或到中考必备中查找一些比较适合我们考试说明的作文题。把题与标准答案打印出来,发给学生共同分析后,让学生反复阅读,直到熟练掌握为止。这样学生对规范的作文有个感性的认识,为进一步进行写作训练打下了基础。
2、记一些关键的句型:
a体育锻炼方面:It’s adj for sb to do sth, such as„,„so on, I think, „so that„.b关于学生学习方面:not only„but also„, I don’t know how to do„, with one’s help„, we should try out best to do sth„, There’s nothing difficult if you put your heart into it, I have
trouble doing sth„
c关于排忧解难方面: I’m sorry to hear that„, You should learn to forget„, You’d better„, You should learn to relax.You should see a doctor.d关于献爱心方面:Now they are in trouble.Some of them are even homeless.They don’t have enough school things.We should help them as possible as we can.I hope they will return to school as soon as they can.e关于环境方面:There is only one earth.We must do sth to protect the environment.Everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.f关于健康方面:We should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.We should eat more fruit and vegetables.We should take more exercise to keep healthy.3、教给学生一些过渡的语言。
a表示时间顺序:first, then, after that„
b表示空间顺序:near, next to for from , on the left, in front of.c表示转折关系:but, however, yet.d表示因果关系:so, because.e表示目的:in order to, so that.f表示列举:for example, such as.g表示总结性: in a word, in all.4、在大量的规范的语言输入后,集中进行写作的训练。比较容易的题目,当堂布置,当堂完成,当堂评价,提高了训练效率,学生印象深刻。批改分两种形式①面批面改,把学生逐个叫到前面,当面
指出其错误,必要时让他造一些类似的句子。如有必要再让他重新写一篇作文。②找一些基础知识掌握不太扎实的学生,让其在黑板上写作,然后大家共批共改,这样效果也非常好。
5、对于学生不太会写的文章,采取两种办法①通过在课堂上设置问题为学生提供获取信息的渠道,帮助他们拓展思路,让学生有话可说,如2009年某市的作文题:假如你是李华刚刚收到一封邀请信,请以“I’ll tell the good news to „“为题,写一篇文章,与你的师长,亲人或朋友分享这一喜讯。有些学生不知道写什么,这时我设置了几个问题。1)What’s your feeling when you hear the news?
2)Why do you want to tell the good news to him? 3)What will you do for the coming trip? 4)What’s your plan after you return?
5)What do you think of your trip? 以聊天的方式和学生一边说一边写,和学生进行了大量的语言交流后,信息量不断增加,同时板书关键词,学生连词成句,连句成段,最后成篇,由词到句,由句到段,由段到篇,循序渐进,最后水到渠成,这样激活了学生的思维,激发了其写作兴奋点,降低了难度,学生也体验到成功的快乐。②直接给出重点句型,引导学生运用这些词组、句型写出要点。然后对照范文,和学生逐句分析句子结构、时态、习惯表达方式,开头及结尾。然后再让学生进行仿写练习,学生们互批互改,这样会收到事半功倍的效果。
以上只是谈了我在作文训练方面一些不成熟的做法,望大家批评、指正。谢谢!
2010年5月21日
第二篇:2009-2010第二学期初三英语写作训练一
2009-2010第二学期初三英语写作训练一
六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。为此,某中学生英文报拟组织一次征文活动。请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为《如何保护眼睛》的征文稿,内容要点包括:
1、眼睛的重要性;
2、保护眼睛的措施:
(1)不要长时间看书报;
(2)不要在太强或者太弱的光线下看书;
(3)坚持做眼保健操;
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注 意:词数:80~100;不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥。
How to Protect Our Eyes
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How to Protect Our Eyes
Eye is the window of our mind.We use our eyes to see everything around us.Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time.You’d better not read in a strong or poor light.Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus.Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye-exercises every day.What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.Follow my advice and form a good habit.It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
第三篇:初三英语应用文写作
中考写作题,题材一般是写人、写事、写景,日记,书信,通知,广告,便条等文体。题型基本是:命题作文,应用文写作,看图写话。
提高写作能力,要做到以下几点:
■平时注意日常生活观察,关注社会热点,关心周围的人和事。
■如果平时能有心及时写下所见所闻,或有写日记的习惯,写作水平会提高更快。动笔过程
■细心审题,细读题目中每一项提示,或观察每一幅画,弄清题意,明确中心,确定体裁。特别是对于我们看来非常熟悉的内容,更要仔细推敲,有自己独特的立意。
■根据所给的提示,按照一定的规律,如事件的先后顺序,地点的更换等内在的联系排序,分出层次。如果是看图说话,注意文在图中,意在图外,抓住每一要点,使表达的内容有条理性。
■理清篇章结构,构成短文的整体框架。
文章要素起——它是文章的主旨,或提出主题句,列出事情的要点
对主题开展叙述,讨论收——是对全文的总结和概括
■有了框架,就可以收集积累的材料,用最恰当的短语、句型把你要表达的意思逐句表达出来,多用简单句和有把握的复合句。
■为了使短文有浑然一体的感觉,优秀作文少不了的是恰当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等连词。
■及时检查,时态的前后呼应,人称与动词的变化,单词拼写,标点符号,规定字数等,所有这些都可以通过仔细检查,避免低级错误出现。
英语短文的提高,需要组词、造句语言基本能力的提高,多读文章,多加思考,就能取得理想的成绩。
一、写信
1.信头:信头是指写信人的地址及日期,位于信笺的右上方。顺序是先写地址,后写日期。地址由小写到大,即门牌号→街名→城市→省份→国名,由小到大的顺序书写。如“江西省万载县康乐镇田下路159号”,英文写法是:159 Tianxia Road, Kangle Town, Wanzai County, Jiangxi Province;日期可按“日—月—年”的顺序或“月—日—年”的顺序写。
2.信内地址:它是指收信人的姓名和地址,写在信笺的左上方,稍低于信头一至二行,在称呼语上方。顺序是先写收信人姓名,后写职务,再写地址(由小到大)。商业往来信件及公函必须写信头和信内地址。但亲友、熟人之间的信可不写信内地址,信头处只写发信日期。
3.称呼:收信人的称呼,写在信纸的左边,低于信内地址。
4.正文:是写信者所要说的话,正文信的内容,从左向右横写,低于称呼语,常在缩进四、五个字母处起笔。写信与写文章一样,要分段写,每段有一个中心思想,内容要表达清楚,语言要简单明了,态度要诚恳礼貌。给亲友的信还应亲切热情。考试时必须把规定的内容写清楚。正文结束时,还可写一两句表达心愿的话,如:Best wishes to you /Remember me to your family /Hoping to hear from you soon等。
5.结束语:发信人表示自己对收信人的一种客套称呼,写在书信正文结尾下面。结束语的第一个字母必须大写,后面须加上逗号。常用:Yours,/Yours ever,/Ever yours,/Always(Sincerely)yours, 等等。
6.签名:发信人自己的姓名,写在结束语的下面一行。可与结束语齐头或略向右靠一点儿。在这里介绍一些关于书信的开头和结尾的写法:
A.开头语
1.Thank you for your letter.2.You letter come to me this morning.3.I was delighted to receive your letter.4.I am writing to you tell that ……
5.How are you recently?
B.结束语
1.Good luck!
2.Best wishes!
3.Take care of yourself.4.Send my love to your…
5.I am looking forward to your next letter soon.Eg:假定你叫周海,你刚收到好友张辉8月15日的来信。他说对英语学习失去了信心,准备放弃,你很吃惊。现请你给他复信,劝他继续学习,并告诉他英语是一门重要学科,要有克服困难的意志,要有好的学习方法。写信时间为8月 20日,词近100。
August 20, 2005
Dear Zhang Hui,I have received your letter of August 15.I’m surprised to learn that you have lost heart in your English and that you want to give it up.In my opinion, English is an important subject for us middle school students.It’s wrong for you to give it up.I hope you’ll go on studying English.You should have more confidence and when you are learning a language you will make mistakes, this is part of learning.Where there is a will, there is a way.Besides, you must develop a good way of learning.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask your teacher for help.I’m sure you’ll make great progress in your English very soon.Best wishes!
Sincerely yours,ZhouHai
二、日记
1.格式:英文日记和中文日记的写法大致相同。一般是第一行写上日期、星期、天气状况。日期通常顶格写,后面是星期,天气状况写在右上角。表示天气情况的词一般用形容词,如:fine, cold, rainy, windy, cloudy, sunny, snowy, foggy等。正文部分另起一行。
2.人称:日记要用第一人称写。
3.时态:写日记的时间一般是在下午或晚上,有时也有在第二天补记的。所记叙的事情通常发生在过去,所以常用一般过去时态。但如果要记叙天气、描写景色、展望未来、议论某事或对话引语等,可以使用一般现在时或一般将来时,以生动再现当时的情景。
4.日记的写作顺序:日记一般按照时间顺序或事情的经过来写。语言要清楚、自然,内容要连贯、完整。
5.类型:日记可分为记事型、议论型、描写型以及抒情型等类型。记事型日记,就是学生用所学英语词汇记述当天自己生活中所发生的事情。议论型,就是对生活中的某一事情或情况、现象发表自己的看法。描写型就是对某人、某物的特征进行细致的描述,或对某事物抒发自己的感情。
Eg:假设今天是六月十日(星期一),天气晴朗。请根据以下提示,用英语写一则日记。
1.全世界人民热爱足球,我也最喜欢足球;
2.今天下午一位有名的足球运动员张林,来我校给我们作了“足球与中国”的报告;
3.报告结束后,他和我们一起在学校操场踢了半小时足球;
4.今天过得很愉快。我一定要更加努力学习,将来当一名像张林一样的优秀足球运动员。
May 10th, 2005MondayFineThe people all over the world love football.Football is my favourite sport.This afternoon a famous football player came to our school and gave us a talk about “Football and China”.His name is Zhang Lin.He is tall and
strong.After the lecture, he played football on the school playground with us for half an hour.I enjoyed myself very much today.I think I must work hard at all my lessons and try to become a good football player like Zhang Lin.三、通知
通知属于应用文,通常是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、召开会议、传达事情所用的一种应用文。通知包括口头通知和书面通知。
1.口头通知
口头通知是面对面地把事情传达给对方。在发布口头通知时,应该注意以下几个问题:
开头应有称呼语:Boys and girls 或 Ladies and gentlemen等。
应有引起听众注意的开场白:Attention, please!或Be quiet, please!
结尾应给听众结束通知的信号:That’s all.Thank you.或 So much for this.Thank you.口头通知的内容要讲清楚时间、地点、活动内容及注意事项。
2.书面通知
书面通知是以布告、张贴的形式出现,为醒目起见,标题的每个字母都常大写。
格式包括:
标题:在正文的上面写“NOTICE”。
正文:包括具体的时间、地点、活动内容及注意事项。
单位:一般写在右下角,有时放在标题的上面。
时间:发出通知的时间一般写在左下角。若右下角无发通知单位的名称,也可以写在右下角。
人称:发通知的单位和被通知的对象均用第三人称,但如果正文前已有称呼语,就用第二人称表示被通知的对象。
Eg:请按以下要求拟定一份通知:
1.为了提高口语水平,学校准备举办英语口语竞赛。
2.时间:2005年6月13日。
3.地点:二楼会议大厅。
4.参加对象:初三年级学生。
5.前三名发奖。
6.本周到王老师那儿报名(sign up)。
7.通知人:校长办公室。
8.欢迎初三学生参加。
Notice
To improve our English , an English-speaking Contest will be held in the hall on the second flood on June 13 , 2005.All the students from Grade Three are welcome to join and the first five winners will be given prizes.If you want to take part in the contest , please come to Mr.Wang to sign up this week.Try your best and get ready for it.Wish you cucceed!
四、电话留言
英语电话留言条包括五部分:发话者;收话者;日期;时间;留言内容。有时,最后可以出现记录人签名。电话留言条最根本的特点就是内容必须言简意赅,切忌冗长。即写电话留言条时,行文要简明扼要,通俗易懂,将发话者的意思清楚明白地表达出来。
英语电话留言条格式如下:
TELEPHONEMESSAGE
From:To:
Date:Time:
Message:
Eg:史密斯先生给你父亲打电话,因你父亲不在,你接了电话。史密斯先生说,他将于明天上午10点半飞抵沈阳,请你父亲去接他。假设你的名字是赵威,接电话的时间是今天(5月11日)下午4点20分,请你写个电话记录。
From: Mr SmithTo: Dad
Date: May 11Time: 4:20 p.m.Message: His plane will arrive in Shenyang at 10:30 tomorrow morning.He asked you to go and meet him.Zhao Wei
五、请假条
请假条写作需注意三点:
1)英文中请假条的写法和汉语请假条相同,它一般由四部分组成,即时间、称呼、正文和签名。
2)一般而言,可认定请假条是一种简单的书信文体。请假条一般写在纸上,不用信封。其书写格式与书信有很多相似之处,是书信的大大简化。
3)请假条的特点是要求开门见山、内容简短、用词通俗易懂。
Eg:假如你是王立。昨天你和同学们去农场帮助农民们摘苹果,不幸(unluckily)从梯子上摔下来伤了腿,但伤得不重。医生让你在家里好好休息。因此,你向高老师请假两天(ask for leave for two days)。
September 28 Dear Miss Gao,I’m sorry I can’t go to school today.I helped the farmers pick apples with my classmates on the farm yesterday.Unluckily, I fell off the ladder and hurt my leg, but I wasn’t badly hurt.The doctor asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.So I ask for leave for two days.Wang Li
六、贺卡(考试一般不会出现)
贺卡的格式一般有三部分组成:称呼、贺词、祝贺人签名
1.称呼:指祝贺人对受贺人的称呼,如To dear teacher, To my dearest father and mother ,To my dear friend 等。也有前面不加to的,如Mr and Mrs Green.称呼一般写在贺卡的左上方。
2.贺词:通常写一些固定的贺节用语,如Merry Christmas.Many happiness returns of the day.(恭贺圣诞,岁岁似今朝。);With best wishes for a happy New Year!(祝新年快乐,并致以良好的祝福。),这一部分也可根据实际情况写一些简短的表示感谢和良好祝愿 的话。
3.祝贺人签名:写在贺卡的右下方。姓名的前面通常要加from,如From your student Lily, From Mr and Mrs Green,但前面也有不加from的。
Eg:9月10日(September 10th)是我国的教师节。在教师节这一天,请你用英语给辛勤培育你们的老师们写张贺卡,祝他们节日快乐。
范文1
Dear Sir,You are like a third parent.We all love you.From all your students
范文2
To My Dearest Mr Wang,With Best Wishes for Teachers’ Day!
Your student, Kate
第四篇:高二英语写作训练
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp)假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(1)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
高二英语写作训练(2)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动(summer camp),要求报名者提交个人英文简介。假设你是李萌,请根据下列有关信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:李萌性别:女年龄:18学校:浙江省义乌中学
其他:爱好音乐、摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
第五篇:初三英语书面表达训练
中考作文】2013中考英语作文预测
2012中考英语作文预测:8个要准备的话题 1.关于学习英语的话题: 复习要点 Learn English 请你以“How to learn English well?”写份演讲稿80字左右.范文: Dear classmates: We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!
2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
保持健康的重要性
保持健康的方法
保持健康的结论
(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯
(你的看法?)How to stay our health /fit? 范文1: Dear boys and grils : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you bye!范文2:Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李华,你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。
提示: 70%的学生
30%的学生
应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长
锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳
锻炼能增强体质,保持健康
锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习
锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好
锻炼中可能会受伤
要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear classmates: I’m Li Hua.After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕环境问题影响着人们的工作学习生活等而我们的工作生活生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。
范文: How to protect/save our environment/world? The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.关于“人口问题 POPULATION ”
6.关于中学生使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法(见2008年初中毕业写作专题复习)。范文:略
7.介绍自己的兴趣余爱好(单元四)。
8.春节习俗与计划,如何过2009年的春节,假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。
The spring Festival Dear John, The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(团聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”
I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friends.I ’m going to Disneyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessons do exercise every day help the old and children.Welcome to China.Waiting for your e –mail.Yours
Lingling
Happy new year to everyone!
英语书面表达
一、人物
1、以“The Most Interesting Teacher”为题,根据下面的提示,写一篇90词左右的英语短文,可以作适当的发挥。
注意:如果是女教师,则称她为“Sue”;如果是男教师,则称他为“Oliver”.1.Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? And what does the teacher teach? 2.What is the teacher like? 3.Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? The most interesting teacher
The Most Interesting Teacher I think my history teacher is the most interesting teacher in our school.His name is Oliver.He is a tall man with glasses.He is kind to everyone.In my mind, Oliver is the most knowledgeable person.He often tells us some interesting historical stories in class, such as Cao Cao and Liu Bei.I became interested in history when I was very young.I fell in love with Oliver and his classes.I regard Oliver as the most interesting teacher.2、Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.(以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不计入总词数。)(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)Use the following points as are reference(以下内容仅供参考)What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?
I'm proud of myself I used to be a shy girl and I used to be afraid of speaking in public.But now I am outgoing.All is because of the last speech competition.I am good at English, so the teacher asked me to enter the speech competition.My classmates supported me and they were sure I could win the competition.I didn't want to let them down.So I encouraged myself to be brave.I took a deep breath and kept smiling.I practiced so }lard that I won the competition successfully.My teacher and classmates are proud of me, and I am proud of myself, too.二、假期计划
3、同学们很快就毕业了, 马上要迎来快乐的暑假和2012年的伦敦奥运会,你的心中是否充满期待?请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文, 和大家分享你心中的暑期计划.写作要求: 1.主要选择通过电视或现场看哪几种比赛项目? 最喜欢哪几位体育明星?为什么? 2.主要安排哪几项体育锻炼活动?(包括时间,地点和目的意义等)注意: 短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的相关的真实姓名,地名,校名等信息.The summer vacation and the 2012 London Olympic Games are coming.It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.During these days, I'll choose to watch the Olympic Games by TV, especially I will spend my time on the table tennis, badminton and weight lifting because I like these sports.Of all the players I like Zhang Yining, Lin Dan and l.iu Xiang best.1 think they are very excellent players.As for myself, I'll also plan for several PE exercise activities.Firstly, I'll do morning exercises every morning to build up my body.Secondly, I'll play table tennis with my friends to be a second Zhang Yining.Through these activities, I believe I'll be stronger and more energetic to get prepared for the study of senior middle school.Hello, everyone!Summer vacation is coming.I'd like to talk about my plan for the summer vacation.I have two plans.The first plan is to teach stay-at-home kids in the village.I'm always looking forward to being an English teacher.I will prepare for the class and teach the children carefully.If I do it, I can get much experience about being a teacher.That will be useful for me.As for the second plan, it's to raise money for the children in Yushu.I think we should try our best to help them rebuild their new home.I am sure I can have a special and exciting vacation.Let's be helpful and useful in the summer vacation.That's all.Thank you.4、暑假是每个中学生期盼的一段时光,请你围绕如何过一个轻松、愉快、有意义的暑假,写一篇90词左右的英语短文。
注意:
1、文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名;
2、下列词汇可供参考:summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …
A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a good summer holiday.I think traveling is the best choice on holiday.We could have a good rest and go to visit lots of places of interest.We could do some sports, like basketball, football and so on.What's more, we can have fun doing some reading.()f course, we can't forget to help our parents with housework.If we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer holiday.三、一次经历
5、在你成长的历程中,有些日子会让你开心快乐,经久难忘。请以“My Pleasant Day”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,记述你那天的活动和感受(如exciting, fun…)Ways to relax? TV, Computer, Sports, Music, Shopping… Work? Homework, Housework, Cooking, Cleaning… Other things? Enough sleep, Delicious food… 写作要求:1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
My Pleasant Day
Yesterday I was busy, but I was really happy.After breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement park.We took some photos over there.My mother bought me a toy car.I even played the roller coaster and that made me felt excited.After leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my grandparents.I spent the whole afternoon chatting with my grandfather.My parents prepared delicious food for us.We had a wonderful dinner together.What a pleasant day it was!
6、反思可以使每个人成长进步,为未来做好计划可以铸就成功。初中的即将结束,新的高中学习将要学习将要到来。请你用英语记录下一两件最让你感动或遗憾的事,同时为你将来的生活做一点设计,下列句型可以帮助你完成作文:One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…
写作要求:内容真实,要点齐全,行文边贯,词数90词左右。
My life in junior school will come to an end soon.I am happy that I am going to have another chance of beginning my study again.It is a pity that I didn't study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing computer games.Once I even fell asleep in front of a computer.However, in last year's Paralympics, Nataliya, a ping-pong player, changed my attitude towards life.She was known as “Venus in Poland” for having only one arm and set: a good example for me.So I will take part in more activities and make more friends to make my life more meaningrul.四、英语学习
7、回想你三年的英语学习历程,丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做,才能使英语学习更有效。
写作提示:1.Listen to the teacher;2.Take part in activities;3.Be confident in ourselves.写作要求:1.文稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;3.词数:80词左右
What should we do in English class?
In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.This is the most important for us.When we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at once.It's necessary for us to take notes in class, too, because reading notes is helpful to review what we have learned in class.When the teacher asks us to practice English in groups, we should take an active part in the activity.We should be confident in ourselves and not be afraid of making mistakes.If we keep on working hard at English, we'll be able to be good at it one day.五、健康
8、某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查,发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有:饮食结构不合理;体育锻炼不足;理压力过大,不能与人很好地沟通等。为此,他们发起了题为“How to keep Fit”的征文活动,倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇80词左右的短文,说明如何保持身体健康。(文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息)写作参考:
1、保持健康的重要性
2、保持健康的方法
3、谈谈你的看法
How to Keep Fit
Everyone wants to keep healthy.But how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you'd better go to bed early and get up early.As we all know “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.” Thirdly, you should do more exercise.For example, you can run in the park and the street in the morning.No sports, no life.At last, you should always try to make yourself happy.If you can do these, I think you can keep healthy.Keeping Health
Health is very important for us.Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything.While poor health means nothing.So, we mus keep healthy.How to keep healthy then?
First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat.Second, we'd better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong.Besides, we should be happy every day.Finally, we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and smoking.In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves.六、毕业留言
9、初中生活即将结束,新的生活即将开启,请为你最好的同学写一段毕业留言:他(她)给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光及对他(她)最美好的祝愿。
写作要求:1.可参考下图所给提示词,也可适当发挥,开头已给出(不计入总词数)2.80词左右.How time flies!We have been studying together for 3 years.You are always so happy that your smiles seem to be more shining than the sunlight.!shall never forget that monthly-examination, in which I got a really low mark.I just felt the sky was going to fall down.Just then, you came out.You comforted me a lot, which encouraged me to keep studying hard.You touched me deeply.You are so diligent a person that you certainly will have a bright future.Good luck to you.七、爱好
10、现在网络越来越发达,中学生上网的利弊已成为人们讨论的焦点。请参考下面的信息并结合自己的观点写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
网络的优点:课后放松,辅助学习,传递信息,开阔视野,网络交友等…
网络的缺点:上网时间长有害健康,沉迷网络游戏,不思学业,不良网站,误导学业,虚拟网络,真假难辨…
Internet plays an important role in my daily life.But it has both positive and negative points.On the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular
among teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and relaxed.On the other hand, surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the games that they can't get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their health.I think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it sometimes.Habits Habits whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again, he'll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps win the respect and trust of others.If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by them.We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and others.八、关系处理
11、父母与孩子之间常有摩擦.父母想让孩子听他们的,按他们说的做,但孩子更愿意自己选择朋友,自己设计(design)未来,更加独立(independent)地生活,所以不和往往在所难免。解决(solve)这一问题的最好办法只有相互理解。孩子们应学会尊重父母,聆听他们的意见,因为他们有更丰富的人生阅历(experiences).父母也应尽量和孩子交换(exchange)意见,不能过分地责备(scold)和打骂,那样会使孩子远离父母。把孩子当作朋友,这样他们会信任父母,会使家庭生活更幸福。
请根据中文提示,用英语写一篇短文,把以上观点正确表达出来,不少于90词
Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each other.Parents want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to do.But children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent way.So the disagreement between them can't be avoided.The best way to solve the problem is to understand each other.Children should learn to respect their parents' opinions, for parents have richer experiences of life.Parents should also try to exchange opinions with their children.Don't scold or beat them too much.These will make them away from parents.Treat them as friends.Then children will believe in their parents.It will make family life much happier.How to Get along Well with Others
In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along with other people.To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words.To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean.Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run.After all, honesty is the best policy.Second, we have to be humble enough.If we are proud in public, we can hardly win other's respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be selfish.We should learn how to show concern for others.As long as we abide by get along well with others.what mentioned above, we will find it easy
九、梦想
12、请你以未来计划为话题,根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文.1.你的梦想职业及居住地等 2.你做出这些选择的理由;
3.你为实现未来计划应做的努力;4.有一天你实现了你的理想,你怎样回报父母,回报社会.My Dream in the Future I have a great dream.I want to be adoctor when I grow up.I will work in the hospital in my hometown.On the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and useful.Because a doctor can help people who are ill.And a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their life.On the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family healthy.When they are ill, I can give them some advice on health.I love my hometown and I love the people there.So I want to be a doctor.At present.I must study hard so that I can learn more knowledge.Then I may go to a medical university.If I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other people.I hope my dream will come true.十、最喜爱的学科
13、My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese teacher.I like it because I have a lovely Chinese teacher.She is very kind to us.She teachers us very carefully.And her classes are very interesting and funny.In Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take notes.I am not afraid of making mistakes in learning.I often read Chinese novels and watch the TV program-Quiz Show after school.That not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese skills.Thanks to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.十一、环保
14、从2008年6月1日起,国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料供袋,从而掀起了全国性的“拒塑”环保运动。假如你是李华,准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。
写作提示:1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋.2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本.3.离开教室应关灯.4.走路或骑自行车上学龄前5.简述理由: 保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等 写作要求: 1.词数90词左右
2.可根据要点适当增加细节,使文章连贯,3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名,否则以零分处理.What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!