中考英语写作训练 2（5篇）

第一篇：中考英语写作训练 2

2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（一）假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：

1.节水节电；

2.垃圾分类；

3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；

4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。

参考词汇：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue

注意：词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数)；可适当增加细节了，以使行文连贯；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it._______________________________________

Best wishes,Li Bing

参考范文：

Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life.First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water also matters much.Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal.In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（二）随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如*****网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。_______________________________________________________

参考范文：

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days.Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet.The shops on Internet，for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy

something we want at any time if we like.What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them.We can't see the things while we are shopping.So we are not sure whether they are good or not..Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（三）许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；

●我的压力是什么；

●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

词数80~100；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure._________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you!

参考范文:

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!

2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（四）近年来，我国火灾频频发生。2010年11月15日，上海胶东路一座高楼起火，损失严重。这个事件提醒注意防火安全很重要。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文来分析引起火灾的原因并谈谈你对火灾中自救的建议。

要求：

1.词数不少于90，短文开头过渡已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。

提示：

防火安全fire safety 电 electricity 燃放烟花爆竹 set off fireworks

爬行crawl on one’s knees 消防栓 the fire hydrant

Usually fire accidents are caused because of carelessness.For example, ______________________

What can we do to protect ourselves when there is a fire?____________________________

2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（五）】：

2011年初，我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨(freezing rain)，特别是贵州、湖南和四川，灾情失分严重。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州40万人饮水难，四川两电厂停运。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?

_____________________________________________________________

参考范文

As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011.Everything was covered with freezing rain.Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most.It caused the buses, trains and planes stop service.The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas.As a result, huge economic loss was caused.Many people could not work and live normally.There was no food, water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（六）据报道，从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外，同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明，在韩国，电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论，请你写一篇80词左右的短文，表达你对这件事情的看法。

________________________________________________________

参考范文：

E-Books Are Good

It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011.What good news this is!E-books have many advantages.Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees.Besides, they are very convenient.To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop.But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文

（七）】：

人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由反对的理由

1.广交朋友 1.浪费时间

2.可自由表达思想 2.影响学习

3.有利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗

你的看法是?

注：字数100—120之间。(书写不整齐者，酌情扣分。)

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【参考范文】

Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.Internet helps people make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

第二篇：中考英语写作

中考英语作文万能模板：阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

１．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．２．分析并举例使其更充实．中考英语作文万能模板：解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(步说明现状说明Ａ的现状))．Second,---------------(举例进一Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another

-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).中考英语作文万能模板：说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）１．说明事物现状

２．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）３．你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）Ａ的优点之一.).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the

positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------（对前景的预测)．)中考英语作文万能模板：议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, __________.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因一

原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in theiropinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand二_____.Therefore, there，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____ is no doubt that ___观点原因二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only

because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___advantages and disadvantages in __作文题目______.In fact, there are both 题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___secondly ___优点二_____.优点一______.AndJust As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.缺点To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that 讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the

case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.中考英语作文万能模板：图表作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the

figure/percentage in___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decreasethe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons

accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the factresponsible that ________.for _______.Inaddition, ________ isMaybe there are

some other reasons to show ________.But it is generallyreasonsarebelieved commonly convincing.that the above mentionedAs far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.Iboth sound and well-grounded.am sure my opinion is中考英语作文万能模板：现象说明文（新中国成立以来发生了翻天覆地的变化，）

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons

explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is

more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all

there,________________________.For one

thing_____________________,for another____________.In Conclusion____________________.中考英语作文万能模板：一种事物或现象（负面意义倾向）

关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。

给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…

A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。

认真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了（这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡）。（举例）。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。

事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。

而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。

中考英语作文万能模板：说明原因型模块（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate

the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you2), as a result ,(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(look4very far to find out the truth , in respect that).You donn't have to

we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(附加

7).一、英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分：How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m China for a visit.pleased to hear that you’re coming to I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分：With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板呼语及开场白部分：Ladies

attention, please? I have an announcement and gentlemen, May I have your to make.正文部分：All the teachers and students are required to

attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please discussion in groups.listen carefully and we’ll have a Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文模板1.导入：正反观点式议论文模板第whether we should...1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about Our opinions are divided on this topic.（导入话题）

（观点有分歧）

正文：第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are

the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第against it.3段：However, the others are strongly Their place...reasons（反方观点）2~3What’s are more...as

follows.In addition...(In the first 列

个反对的理由)出结论：

第overweigh 4段：Personally speaking, the advantages us more harm than good, so I support it.the disadvantages, for it will（个do 人观点）2.“A オ

或者B”

类议论文模板：导入：第superior to B in many ways.Others, however, 1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is argue would prefer A because I think A has more that B is much better.Personally, I advantages.正文：

第A.The main reason is that...Another reason 2段：There are many reasons why I prefer is that...(赞同A的原因)

第some extent...(3段: Of course,列出B 1~2also 个has B的优势advantages)to 结论：

第A is much better than B.From what has been 4段: But if all these factors are considered, discussed conclusion that...(above, we may finally draw the 3.观点论述类议论文模板：得出结论)オ导入：

第As a student, I am strongly 1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

decision.The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）in favour of the

（过渡句，承上启下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出

2~3个赞成或反对的理由)结论：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that...（照应第4.“How to”1段，构成“总—分—总”结构）

类议论文模板：导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题正文：

第serious 2段：Many ways can help to solve most effective.First of all...Another way to problem, but the following may this be solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)结论：

第two/ 3段：should be noted that we should take action three These measures are not the we best can but take.the only But it to...（强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

四、图表作文写作模板The chart gives us

图表主题.The first thing we notice is that an overall picture of the 图表

最大特点

.This means that as(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 表细节一thefigures 动词.-ed+After 幅度动词+时-ing 图间(细节一中的第一个变化，紧 column, we can see that accounts for(also tell us that图表细节二跟着的变.化)In.The 进一步the 描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(far as I am concerned is that(结论).The reason for this, as high time that we(发出倡议).给出原因)./ It is

一、英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分：

How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分：

With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板呼语及开场白部分：

Ladies please? I have an announcement to make.and gentlemen, May I have your attention,正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：

Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板导入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...Our opinions are divided on this topic.（导入话题）

（观点有分歧）

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）

Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(2~3个赞成的理由)

列出第3段：However, the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）

Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论：

第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点）オ

2.“A或者B”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much because I think A has more advantages.better.Personally, I would prefer A

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出结论)オ

3.观点论述类议论文模板：导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）

The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（过渡句，承上启下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

结论：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that...（照应第1段，构成“总—分—总”结构）

4.“How to”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文：

第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论：第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...（强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

四、图表作文写作模板

The chart gives us an overall picture of the The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点图表主题.This.means that as(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一.After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化，the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化).The figures also tell us that图表细节二.Inthe column, we can see that accounts for(进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(结论).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that(we(发出倡议).给出原因)./ It is high time that

第三篇：初三英语写作训练

初三英语写作训练

二十二中学李珍

各位老师下午好！今天能和大家坐在一起，共同探讨关于英语写作训练这一话题感到非常荣幸。下面谈谈自己在对学生进行写作训练时的一点粗浅的认识与做法。

考试说明中对写的技能是这样规定的。着重考查学生以书面形式

1学生应能够运用语言知识，表达真实意义或信息传递的能力。○较为

恰当地对所熟悉的周围的人或事物进行简单地描述，就所熟悉的话题

2能根据文字、图画、图表等信息提示，按要求发表自己的观点等。○

写出意思连贯、语言符合逻辑的书面表达。在写的过程中，能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。

书面表达的形式多种多样，中考英语试题共分为三类：应用文、看图作文和提示作文。应用文要求能够掌握常见的写作技巧；看图作文要求能够根据图画和词语提示，明确考查意图，弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，完整表达思想；提示作文要求能够根据所给的提示写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的短文。要注意语言准确，行文连贯，表达清楚，字迹工整。

1具有教育意义②贴近学生生活中考书面表达试题有三个特点：○

③热点问题。

按内容分为以下几类：小作文包括招聘启事、寻物启事、赠言、慰问卡、通知、家规、校规、兴趣、爱好、感谢信、描述物品、假期计划、介绍朋友、老师等。大作文包括：介绍初中生活、询问学生的英语学习情况、描述献爱心活动（到养老院、儿童福利院献爱心；为灾区、贫困地区儿童献爱心）、描述业余生活、做一名文明市民、健康问题、环境问题、帮同学排忧解难、如何缓解压力等。这些作文都给出提示，如背景材料、汉语提示、英文词组、句子、开头、结尾、图片这种保证了作文的规范性，学生也有话可写。实际上就是按照时

间、答问或逻辑顺序把汉译英的句子组合到一起，最后加上自己的感受。

目前学生在写作上存在的问题有以下五个方面：

1）人称时态混乱。人称混乱问题主要是没有理解题意，如这周我们训练的一个作文题：假如你是某国际会议的接待人员，请根据所给明片提供的信息，进行介绍。开头已给出This is Chang，此篇作文应用第三人称，结果有一部分学生写成了第一人称，变成了自我介绍。时态混乱，表现为一会过去时，一会现在时，说明学生最基本的时态的知识没有掌握。

2）没有用英语思维。有些孩子基础不太好，没有养成用英语思维的习惯，如要求学生写一个通知，其中有这样一句话：“请学生们按时到”，有些学生答成了Please students will get there on time.有些学生答成了Please get on time.九年四班写成了Grade 9, class 4.今天下午2点在大厅举办了一个报告，写成了There is going to a talk this afternoon at two o’clock in the hall.完全按照汉语的思维习惯。

3）单词拼写错误。单词拼写错误，单词拼写不太规范，如有学生把g写成了q，字母i没写.，v写成了r，e写成了o, f写成了t，就是因为平时没有养成好习惯，考试答题速度一上来，字母书写就不规范了。结果无形中扣了许多不该扣的分，词组也不规范书写every day 写成everyday。

4）字迹潦草。字迹潦草、勾抹，出现这些问题，基本上都出在男孩身上，写文章前，他们没有进行充分的审题与思考，拿起笔来就答，检查时发现不合要求，乱勾一气，卷面非常不整齐，另外学生的答题纸版面有限，勾抹之后没地方可写，给学生的作文带来没必要的失分。

5）遗漏要点。最大的问题就是遗漏要点，即要求写四点，由于没有认真审题，结果写出了三点。如2009年本溪市英语试题中的作

文题：我市正在开展“创建文明城市”活动。创建文明城市应该从我做起，从小事做起，文明礼貌待人，遵守交通规则，保护身边环境——请你围绕这方面内容写一篇短文，谈谈文明应该怎样做。结果有的同学把从小事做起这一点漏掉了，还有不少同学把这几点都谈出来，但是没有写出自己的感想。如I think we should try our best to make hometown more beautiful.It’s our duty to m make our hometown more beautiful.这样这篇文章就不完整了。2009年锦州市作文题：拥有了健康，就拥有了一切？为了预防疾病，保持身体健康，请结合实际，从学习、运动、饮食和卫生习惯等方面，谈谈你有哪些好的做法与建议？但是有些学生只谈了学习、运动、卫生这三点。结果不但漏点了，字数也不够了，作文的分数大打折扣。

针对学生的现状，在较短的时间内怎样训练学生呢？首先应训练学生答题的方法与技巧。

1、认真审题。审题是写作的前提，是决定写作成功的关键一环。考试时必须仔细阅读写作要求和所给的提示（包括汉语、英语短语、句子提示及图画）这些提示为学生写作提供了思路，让学生有话可说，有话想说，有话能说，也可适当发挥想象，使内容连贯丰富。

2、确定时态。根据题意选择正确的时态，这是写作文的关键，否则影响全篇。应该给学生归纳：描述事物，主要用现在时；描述经历，主要用过去时；描述计划，主要用将来时；健康问题、环境问题用should / be supposed to.3、组织句子。在弄清题目所要表达的主要意思后，便可根据内容组织句子，考生应选择自己最熟悉，最有把握的词语、句型姜要点表达出来，特别是要学会避难就易。尽量使用简单词句，如果有可能，要注意运用多种表达方式。因为不是我们自己批卷，恐怕在作文方面要求严一些，但切不可生搬硬套，按汉语意思，逐字逐句翻译，出现汉语式英语，导致所写的东西表达不清楚，意思不连贯。要注意时态，人称及书写规范，尽量避免单词拼写错误，还要注意一些关联词的使用如but, and, so, so„that, because等，使文章连贯、自如、流畅（多媒体呈现作文题，边呈现边讲解）。

4、反复检查。①要点有无遗漏，尤其是给了3点提示，但每一点中不只涉及一项内容，学生容易忽视，造成丢分。②语法、与子结构有无问题（时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、介词、单复数、比较级、大小写、代词等用法是否有不当现象）。③拼写、标点是否正确。④格式是否标准（如书信、日记、通知等），现在基本上格式已给出，但也要让学生了解这些。⑤字数是否符合要求。

5、卷面整洁工整，卷面整洁与否也是能否得分的主要因素之一，所以学生在时间允许的情况下，应该打草稿，检查无误后，认真书写，力求规范工整，给阅卷老师留下良好的印象，争取在此题上少丢分。

在此基础上，通过熟读范文，让学生记写作中一些常用的句型，记一些过渡用语，集中写作。当堂写作，面批面改。当堂写作，共同批改，启发学生进行写作等几个环节对学生进行作文的训练

1、区检测的试题代表了中考试题的方向，作文非常具有典型性。我把每次区大型检测的作文整理到一起，上下学期一共检测了五次，或到中考必备中查找一些比较适合我们考试说明的作文题。把题与标准答案打印出来，发给学生共同分析后，让学生反复阅读，直到熟练掌握为止。这样学生对规范的作文有个感性的认识，为进一步进行写作训练打下了基础。

2、记一些关键的句型：

a体育锻炼方面：It’s adj for sb to do sth, such as„,„so on, I think, „so that„.b关于学生学习方面：not only„but also„, I don’t know how to do„, with one’s help„, we should try out best to do sth„, There’s nothing difficult if you put your heart into it, I have

trouble doing sth„

c关于排忧解难方面: I’m sorry to hear that„, You should learn to forget„, You’d better„, You should learn to relax.You should see a doctor.d关于献爱心方面：Now they are in trouble.Some of them are even homeless.They don’t have enough school things.We should help them as possible as we can.I hope they will return to school as soon as they can.e关于环境方面：There is only one earth.We must do sth to protect the environment.Everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.f关于健康方面：We should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.We should eat more fruit and vegetables.We should take more exercise to keep healthy.3、教给学生一些过渡的语言。

a表示时间顺序：first, then, after that„

b表示空间顺序：near, next to for from , on the left, in front of.c表示转折关系：but, however, yet.d表示因果关系：so, because.e表示目的：in order to, so that.f表示列举：for example, such as.g表示总结性： in a word, in all.4、在大量的规范的语言输入后，集中进行写作的训练。比较容易的题目，当堂布置，当堂完成，当堂评价，提高了训练效率，学生印象深刻。批改分两种形式①面批面改，把学生逐个叫到前面，当面

指出其错误，必要时让他造一些类似的句子。如有必要再让他重新写一篇作文。②找一些基础知识掌握不太扎实的学生，让其在黑板上写作，然后大家共批共改，这样效果也非常好。

5、对于学生不太会写的文章，采取两种办法①通过在课堂上设置问题为学生提供获取信息的渠道，帮助他们拓展思路，让学生有话可说，如2009年某市的作文题：假如你是李华刚刚收到一封邀请信，请以“I’ll tell the good news to „“为题，写一篇文章，与你的师长，亲人或朋友分享这一喜讯。有些学生不知道写什么，这时我设置了几个问题。1）What’s your feeling when you hear the news?

2)Why do you want to tell the good news to him? 3)What will you do for the coming trip? 4)What’s your plan after you return?

5)What do you think of your trip? 以聊天的方式和学生一边说一边写，和学生进行了大量的语言交流后，信息量不断增加，同时板书关键词，学生连词成句，连句成段，最后成篇，由词到句，由句到段，由段到篇，循序渐进，最后水到渠成，这样激活了学生的思维，激发了其写作兴奋点，降低了难度，学生也体验到成功的快乐。②直接给出重点句型，引导学生运用这些词组、句型写出要点。然后对照范文，和学生逐句分析句子结构、时态、习惯表达方式，开头及结尾。然后再让学生进行仿写练习，学生们互批互改，这样会收到事半功倍的效果。

以上只是谈了我在作文训练方面一些不成熟的做法，望大家批评、指正。谢谢！

2010年5月21日