第一篇：大学英语写作复习word版
一、大学英语四级测试作文评分标准（15分）
2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。
8分：基本切题，表达思想较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。
字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）
段落不够扣分。
二、评分样卷
评分样卷(1)Women in the Modern World
Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In today, many women have a work.They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories.There are many women in govener also.They lead other people comtral, and make out plans.There are many women scientist also.They event new things to improve our life.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.In ancient, women’s position in family is pity.They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do.But now it is changed.They are equal to her husband.They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what she wants to do.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.We also should realize, women’s likerty are limited.For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men.Everyone should do their best to change this condition.I’m sure, the liberation of women would be increased.评分样卷（2）
Women are playing an increasing important part in society today.More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children.Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field.As we know, many women sports teams have won the world’s champion such as Chinese Women’s Volleyball Team.With the changes in their social role, woman’s position in the family has been improved as well.Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places.Husbands and wife are equal now.They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness
In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.Also in some places, women are considered being ―things‖ belong to men.They have little chance to find jobs.They don’t get equal pay for equal job.This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.评分样卷（3）
Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before.For example, some women are not secretary in the office, instead , they become manager of a company.With the changes in their social role, woman’s position in the family has been improved as well.In the world today, more and more women have their own jobs.They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband.With the economic situation improved, their
family position is improving.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do some works or do some shopping.They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company.评分样卷（4）
Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders.We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.Husband and wife are now equal in the family.They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other.Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature.Few women are allowed to attend important international meeting dominated by men.That’s really the problems we should solve immediately.三、检查语法
1.动词 — 时态，语态是否正确
2.名词 — 单数、复数、可数、不可数，专有名词大小写
3.主谓一致 — 分清主句和从句，使各自的主谓一致
4.形容词、副词 — 用法是否正确，比较级与最高级是否得当
5.介词、连词 — 搭配是否正确
6.其他关联词 — 用法是否正确
7.单词拼写8.标点符号
四、注意基本句型五、九句话模板
六、套用九句话模板
Stop smoking
（1）吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注
（2）吸烟的害处
（3）你的想法
Model
(1)There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking.(2)Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question.(3)They have realized that smoking does great harm to health.(4)The harm of smoking can be seen from the following.(5)First, it can cause cancer.(6)Second, it pollutes the environment.(7)Third, it causes great waste of money.(8)In short, smoking does great harm to health.(9)Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking.Model(developed one)
(1)There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking.(2)Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking.(3)They have realized that smoking does great harm tothe health of smokers and non – smokers as well.(4)The harm of smoking can be seen from the following.(5)First, it can cause cancer.A recent survey by the WHO shows, of the diseases which cause death every year, nearly one third has to do with smoking.(6)Second, it pollutes the environment.Cigarettes ends may dirty our air and water.(7)Third, it causes great waste of money.Is it wise to spend nearly thirty yuan each day for something which will kill you eventually?
(8)In short, smoking does great harm to health.(9)It is high time thateffective measures be taken to stop smoking.
第二篇：英语写作复习
1．假如你叫李华，你的澳大利亚朋友来信想了解有关北京为迎接2008年奥运会而进行的城市美化工作的情况。请你根据下表内容用英语写一封短信，并欢迎他届时能来北京。
口号：“绿色奥运”
计划投资：122亿美元
美化内容：环境：大面积植树，种草，栽花
环保：使用清洁能源；处理和再利用污水
目标：花园城市；天再蓝些，水再清些
Dear David,How nice to hear from you again.Now let me tell you something about the beautifyingwork on Beijing for the 2008 Olympic Games.Our slogan is ―Green Olympic‖.12.2 billiondollars will be spent on this project.A lot more trees, flowers and grass will be plantedin many places to make Beijing more beautiful.We will use clean energy and try out best to
make waste water clean and reuse it.In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden,with cleaner water and a clearer sky.I look forward to meeting you in Beijing in 2008.Li Hua
2.你叫李红，一周前去香港度假时在一家商店买了一件女上衣，现有质量问题。请结合下面提示向该店
外籍经理写一封英文信。
所购衣物：绿色女上衣，价格268元
问题：洗涤时退色，并说明理由。
要求：退款或换衣，并说明理由。
就此事发表看法或提出建议。
Dear Sir,While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green blouse for 268dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it.When it is washed, thecolor runs.Now I can‘t possibly wear it.It‘s not my fault, so I‘d like you to solve theproblem for me.I insist you change it for another one for me or give me my money back.I
think it‘s better for you to make sure that everything in your shop is good.Then you willhave more customers.I‘m looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely,Li Hong
3.假定你是李明，你收到了下面这封美国的笔有写来的信。请根据来信的内容写一封回信。May 28,2003
Dear Li Ming,I hop you are very well.I‘m glad to tell you that my parents have agreed to let me goto your country this summer.The first city I plan to visit is Beijing, where I will stayfor a week, and then I will go to your city by train to see you and your parents.As wehaven‘t met before, I‘m afraid there will be some difficulty in meeting each other, and I ‘m also afraid that it will not be easy for me to find your house.So please tell me how toget in touch with you while I stay in Beijing and how to meet or find you when I arrive inyour city.Please give my regards to your parents.Best wishes
Jack
June 6th, 2003
Dear Jack,I‘m so happy to learn that you will come to my country and to my home.Let me expressmy warmest welcome to you.My parents insist that I should write back to you as soon aspossible to invite you to our home.You don‘t have to worry about our meeting each other in my city.Now let me tell youwhat to do.When you have got the train ticket for my city in Beijing, please telephone me.My phone number is 0731-8847543.I will go to the station to meet you.When you get out of
the station, you will see me holding up a little board, on which is written ―Welcome, Jack!‖ We will surely meet there.I look forward to seeing you soon.With kind regards to your parents,Li Ming
4.在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示英文为某英文报纸写一篇题为On
the Internet 的征文稿。
因特网的主要用途：
信息：看国内外新闻、获取其他信息
通讯：发e-mail、打电话
学习：上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语
娱乐：欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、晚期排游戏
生活：购物、聊天
On the Internet
The internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the net, wecan learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well.We can
also send messages by E-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds ofbooks and learn foreign languages by ourselves.Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports or
matches and play chess or cards.On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat withothers and make friends with them.In a word, the Internet has made our life more colorful.5.假设你叫王红，于5月7日星期五在学校门口看到两则海报后，决定邀你的好友Harry一起参加其中的一
项活动。你赶到Harry住处时，发现他不在。请根据海报内容给Harry 写一张留言条，要他选择其中的一
项活动并尽快通知你。
Movie –Gone with the Wind
In the School Hall
Sat.Mayp.m.Lecture—Women ‗s Liberation
Speaker: Prof.Power---writer of
The Other Half of the Sky
Date: Sat., 8 May 27, 2005
Time: 7 p.m.Place: Room 10
1Dear Harry,It‘s a pity that you are not in, so have to leave you a note.There are two posters atthe school gate.One is about the movie ― Gone with the Wind‖, which is to be shown at 7Saturday evening in the school hall.The other is about a lecture on women‘s liberation,which is to be given by Prof.Betty Power, writer of the book ― The Other Half of the Sky‖ , at 7 on Saturday evening in Room 101.I‘d like to invite you to either the movie or thelecture, but I wonder which you would prefer.Please let me know your decision as soon aspossible.Wang Hong
6.假如你是李华，你澳大利亚的朋友Johnson来信告知将来北京工作，他打算买一套合适的住房。碰巧你
在报纸上看到了一则售房广告。该房位于市中心，交通十分便利。给Johnson写一封信，介绍住房的情况，以征求意见。
Dear Johnson,Thanks for your letter.I‘m very glad to learn that you‘re coming to Beijing.You sayyou want to by an apartment in Beijing, and here is one for you.The apartment building lies
in the center of the city.It is very convenient for you to travel anywhere from here.Theapartment is made up of six rooms—a living room, a dining room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and
a bathroom.A newly built parking lot lies in front of the apartment building.A lawn andmany trees are around it, which makes the air here very fresh.I‘d like to know your
opinion about the apartment.If you‘re satisfied with it, just telephone me.My telephonenumber is 010-64308389.I‘m looking forward to your reply.Best wishes to you,Yours truly,Li hua
7．假设你是李平，将赴美学习，并已拿到去纽约的机票。请你根据下面你将乘坐的班机起落时间表，写
信告所将到纽约机场接你的美国朋友John.SCHEDULE
FromToFlightDateTimeArrival
BeijingShanghaiCA981June2510:20 AM12:20 PM
ShanghaiLos AngelesCA981June 2513:40 PM10:50 AM
Los AngelesNew YorkCA981June 2514:45 PM19:45 PM
Dear John,I‘ve got my plane ticket to New York, I will take Flight CA981 to New York on June
25th.My plane takes off at 10:20 AM from Beijing Airport.It arrives at Shanghai at 12:20PM and stops for one hour and twenty minutes.Then it continue its flight and lands at LosAngles at 10:50 AM on June 25th.I will have to stay about four hours at Los Angles Airport.Then my plane leaves Los Angles at 14:45 PM.The flight takes five hours and I will finallyget to New York at 7:45 in the evening.I‘m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours
Li Ping
8.下面是一家电子公司刊登在2002年2月6日的China Daily 上的一则招聘广告。假如你是李平，符合该
公司的招聘条件，并对其待遇感到满意，请写一封自荐信。
Part-timeLab Assistant Wanted
Required by busy electronics company to help with the development of computer.Should
have an electronics degree andpractical experience of working in an electronics lab.Should be good at physics and English.Should be in good health.Hours 3:30 pm—5:00pm.Mon.–Fri.Salary: 3520.Letter of application to: Mrs.Chan NOVA
LECTRONICS, 45 GORDON Rd, Hung Hom, Kowloon.NOVA EECTRONICS
Gordon Rd
HungHom, Kowloon
February 8th, 2003
Dear Mrs.Chan,Having seen your advertisement for a part-time lab assistant to help with development of
computer in China Daily, I beg to offer myself for the position.I graduated from the Physics Department of Beijing University with an electronics degree
and I have been working in the electronics lab in Honda Electronics Company in
Guangdong for
five years.I‘m good at physics and both my spoken English and written English are verygood.Besides, I‘m in good health because I like sports very much.I work in my companyfrom 8:00 am to 12:00 am.From Monday to Friday, so I‘m quite able to work in your company
from 3:30 pm to 5:00pm.And I‘m quite pleased with the salary your company offers.Yours sincerely
Li Ping
9.张华在有一个外宾参观团居住的宾馆丢失了一个方形的棕色手提箱，箱内有收音机、照相机个一台、三卷胶卷、两件衬衣、一张从深圳去纽约的飞机票和一本电影杂志。请你为他用英语协议则寻物启示，并
写明：如有拾到者，请马上与他联系，他的电话号码时0755-3319582，他将不胜感激。
Lost
I wonder if I can get some help from you.I left my case in this hotel today.My case issquare and brown in color.Inside the case, there is a radio, a camera, three rolls of filmand two shirts.I also have a movie magazine and a plane ticket from Shenzhen to New York in
it.Will the finder please get in touch with me at once? My telephone number is 0755-3319582.I will be very thankful.Zhang Hua
10.你是黎明。请以为题，向英文报纸写一封信，批评子女虐待老人，老人死后却又花钱大*大办丧事的不良社会风气。信的开头部分已经写好，要求根据下面的要点提示将信补全
1．二自虐待老人的事例：在住、吃、治病方面各举一例；
2．老人死后儿子花钱大办丧事的事例：2-3例。
Big Funeral Is Too Late
Dear editor:
Grandma Li was my neighbor, who died last month.The old lady had three sons.All ofthem had grown up and got married, but none of them wanted to take care of her.They let her
live in a small dark room.They gave her little food.When she got ill, they refused to takeher to hospital.But to my surprise, the old lady‘s sons spent a lot of money on her funeral.The
funeral lasted several days, and scores of cars and trucks were used on the day when the old
lady was buried.What is the use of such a big funeral for the old lady? It is too late for her.We
should take care of old parent s while they are alive instead of spending so much money onthem when they are dead.
第三篇：大学英语写作
常用写作句型
1现象解释型
模板一
⑴According to the chart/graph/ table/ picture, it is clear that 图表/画内容总概括.⑵The chart/graph/ table/picture shows.⑶Many reasons contribute to 现象概括.⑷To begin with, 原因一.⑸进一步阐述原因一.⑹Moreover, 原因二.⑺In addition, 原因三.⑻As a result, 段落总结句.⑼As to me, I think 我的观点/态度/建议.⑽ First of all, 理由一.⑾ Besides, 理由二.⑿To conclude, 模板二
Topic
⑴From the chart/graph/ table/picture, we learn that nowadays, 总述社会现象/事实现象, which has aroused the great /common concern.⑵what impresses me most is.⑶That are many reasons accounting for.⑷First of all,原因一.⑸进一步阐述原因一.⑹ What is more, 原因二.⑺ For example, 举例说明原因二.⑻ In addition, 原因三.⑼As far as I am concerned, 我的观点.⑽For one thing/On one hand 理由一.⑾ For another/ On the other hand,.⑿Thus/In brief/Taking above mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that….常用句型
⑴As is described in the chart/graph/table/picture, in the past few decades, there have arisen sharp increase in…如图中所示，在过去的几十年中，……急剧增长。
⑵The chart/graph/table/picture describes that the figure declines/falls smoothly/markedly, it indicates that…
图表显示数字下降平缓/明显，这表明……
⑶In the chart/graph/table/picture, we can seen that there was a slight/ marked fluctuation.It reveals that…
在图表中，我们可以看到有细微/很明显的波动，这表明…
⑷Recently, the problems of …has become the focus of the public concern.近来，…问题引起公众极大的关注。
⑸There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/ are responsible for/ explain… …可能是好几个因素造成的结果。
⑹There may be several possible reasons for which will be demonstrated below.可能有几个原因导致了我们下面所要阐述的问题。
⑺It’s no easy /simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factors.要解释该现象产生的原因并不容易，因为其中涉及到很多复杂的因素。
⑻ Among all the important/convincing reasons for…,one should be emphasized… 在所有重要/有力的原因中，我们应当重点关注…
2问题解决型
模板一
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⑴It is well-known that 相关背景, but nowadays 总述不良现象或问题.⑵现象具体表现一.⑶现象的具体表现二.⑷It should be paid attention to that 该现象 is causing great harm/该现象 is caused for many reasons.⑸On one hand, ⑹On the other hand,.⑺Therefore, it is high time that ⑻First of all, 解决方法一.⑼进一步阐述方法一.⑽Secondly/In addition, 解决方法二.⑾Thirdly/Besides/Morever.解决方法三.⑿Only in this way can we解决问题.模板二
Topic
⑴There has been a discussion recently about 事实现象.⑵ It is obvious that 危害一/作用一.⑶ Additionally, 危害二/作用二.⑷So how to 解决问题is worth paying attention to.⑸On one hand/ Firstly, 解决方法一.⑹进一步阐述方法二⑺On the other hand/Secondly,解决方法二.⑻For example,支持该方法的例子.⑼In addition/ Thirdly, 解决方法三.⑽In fact, more than three ways can be adopted.⑾As for me, 我的思考或看法.⑿All in all, 总结全文.常用句型
⑴It is important that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.⑵There is little doubt that serious attention must be called to…
⑶There is no immediate solution to the problem of…,but …might be helpful/ but the general awareness of the necessity of…might be the first step.⑷In order to make our world a better place in which we live, we should make great efforts to… ⑸To conclude, we can see the best way is…
⑹Following these methods may not guarantee the success in solution to…, but the payoff will be worth the effort.3对比选择型
模板一
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⑴Different people have different views on看法/问题.⑵Somme prefer 一种看法观点.⑶Others tend to.⑷As for me, I agree to the first/ second opinion.⑸Of course, 我不赞同的观点的合理性.⑹For example, 支持其合理性的例子.⑺But 我不赞同的观点的不足.⑻The following reason can account for your preference.⑼The main reason is that 支持观点的理由一.⑽ A good example to illustrate is that 支持理由一的例子.⑾In addition/ What’s more,支持观点的理由二.⑿For the foregoing, 重申观点.模板二
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⑴When it comes to事物/问题, different people will offer different opinions.⑵Some people take it for granted that 观点一.⑶In their opinion, 观点一的理由一.⑷Besides, 观点一的理由二.⑸However, others hold that观点二.⑹They maintain that 观点二的理由一.⑺And 观点二的理由二.⑻Weighing up these two arguments, I am for 观点一/观点二.⑼ On one hand, 理由一.⑽ On the other hand, ⑾ For instance, 举例说明理由二.⑿ Therefore, as stated above, 常用句式
⑴ There is a general discussion nowadays on the problem of …Some argue that …,but others set forth a totally different argument about the issue.⑵ In response to the problem, some people believe…,in their minds,…Other maintain that…, in their eyes,…
⑶ Personally, I side with the former/ latter opinion.⑷ In conclusion, it is clear that
4观点论证型
模板一
⑴ It is true that 普遍的观点.⑵ However, 不同的观点/现象.⑶ I think,我的观点.⑷ 理由或其他论据 can be listed as follows.⑸ Firstly，论据一.⑹ Secondly, 论据二.⑺ For example, 支持论据二的事例.⑻ Thirdly, 论据
三.⑼ A case in point is 支持论据三的事例.⑽ There is no doubt that 重申观点.⑾ Therefore, 与该观点相符的做法.⑿ In a word, 总结全文.模板二
Topic
⑴ Many people believe that 社会现象/事实.⑵The truth is deep and profound.⑶ As we all know,具体表现一.⑷ In addition, 具体表现二.⑸ There are numerous examples supporting this argument.⑹ A case in point is 阐述第一个例子⑺ For another example, 引出并说明第二个例子.⑻ Moreover, 阐述第三个例子.⑼All mentioned above that tells us that重申观点.⑽ But(One thing we have to notice is that)提出个人建议.⑾ In short,总结全文.常用句式
⑴ It is well known that …plays an important part in…
⑵ It is believed that …
⑶ There are many reasons explaining …
⑷ From what has been mentioned above, we may safely come to the conclusion that …
5应用文
⑴建议信模板
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Dear ___________,⑴ I am delighted to learn that _________.⑵ It____________.⑶ In my opinion, ________.⑷ On one hand,_________.⑸ On the other hand,_________.⑹ As to ________, I suggest ___________.⑺ If__________.⑻ It is unnecessary for you to _____________.⑼ In addition, ________________.⑽ I am sure _______________.⑾ Please inform me _________________.⑿ I amlooking forward to __________.Sincerely yours,Signature
常用句式
⑴ I would like to suggest that …/ I am writing with my suggestion that…
⑵ You have asked me for my advice with regard to …and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.⑶ If I were you, I would…
⑷ As you may agree that...⑸ I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/ practical/ useful.⑹ I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.⑺ I would be happy to see improvements in this regard.⑻ I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.⑵倡议书模板
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Dear________,⑴ I am writing this letter to call on ____________to ____________.⑵ As some of you may know,___________.⑶ In fact,___________.⑷It is necessary for us to___________.⑸ On one hand,__________.⑹ On the other hand, ______________.⑺ However,___________________.⑻So it is high
time_____________________.⑼ Firstly, ________________.⑽Secondly, _______________.⑾ If you are willing to ____________, please ______________.⑿ Join us in the action and extend ________into a spirit that dares any possible difficulties.Thank you.⑶求职信模板
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Dear_______,⑴ I am applying for the position of _________advertised in _________.⑵ I major in
_____.⑶ My training in ________definitely meet your qualifications.⑷ My complete resume is attached.⑸ I will graduate on____________ from_________.⑹ In addition to the required courses of this program, I have_________.⑺ I also have some experience in ___________.⑻ I believe my training and experience _________________.⑼ You will find me to be ________________⑽ I hope that you will consider me for your position.⑾ May I have a personal interview at your convenience? ⑿ I can be reached by telephone __________.Sincerely yours,Signature
常用句式
⑴ I am writing to apply for the post of …advertised in …
⑵ In reply to your advertisement in…, I beg to apply for the post …in your company.⑶ I feel I have the qualifications and experiences needed for the position of …
⑷ I shall bring with me the full details of my testimonials as you request.⑸ I hope I may be granted an interview when I can explain my qualification more fully.⑹ It seems that my experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of…in your firm.
第四篇：大学英语写作模版
（1）模版一There is no consensus among the people as to the view of(主题).Some people hold the idea that(观点A).A case in point is that(支持观点A的例子).On the other hand, others may have a quite different view.According to them,(观点B).The most typical example is that(支持观点B的例子).Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some
extent, but the latter is more convincing.2）模版二(主题)is a common occurrence in our lives.The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.Some people tend to ______when they are asked(观点A)because(支持观点A的原因).The most typical example is that(支持观点A的例子).However, others argue that(观点B).They point out that(重申观点B)for the reason that(支持观点B的原因).As far as I am concerned, I will choose to(你的观点)because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.2）My View 型（1）模版一 When asked about(主题), some people hold the idea that 观点A).As far as they are concerned,(展开观点A).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion,(观点B).The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.In the first place,(支持观点B的理由1).In the second place,(支持观点B的理由2).In the third place,(支持观点B的理由3).For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe(重申观点B).（2）模版二 Some people believe that(观点A).For instance, they hold the idea that(支持观点A的例子).And it may bring them（A带给他们的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,(我不同意的理由1).For another,(我不同意的理由2).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, I agree to the thought that(重申自己的观点).3）利弊型（1）模版一Nowadays many people prefer(主题)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand,(主题的优点1).On the other hand,(主题的优点2).But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that(主题的缺点1).To make matters
worse,（主题的缺点2).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain,(主题)itself is
neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.（2）模版二With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of(主题现象)is an example of the former / latter one.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with,(原因1).Furthermore,(原因2).Eventually,(原因3).Good as(主题现象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that(缺点例子1).In addition,(缺点例子2).On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate(主题现象)and make our life more comfortable.图表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一个原因).More
importantly, …(第二个原因).Most important of all, …(第三个原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for
quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).提纲式作文 1.对立观点式 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing（X）.They point out the fact that 支持（X）的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持（X）的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do（X）.They firmly point out that 反对（X）的第一个理由。An eample can give the details of this argument:
There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of（X）overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about,（X）also may（X）的有一个坏处。
2.批驳观点式Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个
例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观
点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3.社会问题(现象)式 Nowadays, there exists an increasinglyserious social/economic/ environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common
concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..辩论式议论文模版
模版1Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或:From above, we can predict that 预测.模版2People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the
former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not the least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.模版3There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 论据1。Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.(I)说明原因型模块
Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX
It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon
(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注释: 1:XX的第一个优点 2:支持XX的做法 3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二个优点 5:举例证明优点二 6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your
enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that
(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).(I)说明原因型模块(2)
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind
people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has
caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from,children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what
programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合].It is estimated that [相关数据].Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解决办法一].On the other hand, [解决办法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].为便于读者理解，我特意用这个模板，写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文，请您观摩一下。
Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China's examinations / 中国的考场].It is estimated that [5％ examinees are ghost writers / 5％的应试者是枪手].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 雇主无知].Besides,[hirers' indolence / 雇主懒惰].The third one is [hirers' obtusity / 雇主迟钝].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to [hirers' low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].（I）说明原因型
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（一）Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the
number of XX.Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and
children which is so-called generation gap.It is estimated that(75 percentages of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children
usually think their parents too old fashioned).Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?
Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them).Besides(due to having little in common to
talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face).The third reason is(with the
pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas).To sum
up ,the main cause of XX is due to(lake of communication and understanding each other).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing(children should respect their parents).On the other hand ,(parents also should show solicitue for
their children).All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.（I）说明原因型 模块（2）In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there comes a case that(4).Moreover ,(5).Especiallywhen(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remindpeople that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television
In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels.It has
caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much
exercise as they should).Then , there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their
ability to achieve in school).Moreover ,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV
viewing).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply.（I）说明原因型 模块（3）
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result , your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your
plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon
(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(7).注释：： XX的第一个优点 2： 支持XX的做法 3：不支持XX的做法 4：XX的第二个优点
5：举例证明优点二6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuablethan self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power
to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties), as a result , your dreams willcome true.On the contrary,if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。
It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light
when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect
that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and
self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound
influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(he that can have
self-confidence can have what he will).综合运用篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展，人们开始关注.....As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。
展现问题篇
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。
People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。
People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。
When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到___，有人认为____，而另一些人则认为___。
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of..There who criticize...argue that..., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前，___问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为___，他们认为____，不过，另一方面，赞同__的人则认为___。
1、常用与开头的短语、句式
（1）with the（rapidly）growing popularity of（computers/private cars）in China，the quality of our lives has been considerably changed。
（3）With the development of（science and technology/market economy），more and more/an increasing number of people come to realize that …
（4）Currently there is a widespread/serious concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/negative influence of western cultures).（5）Nowadays ,a heated debated/discussion about…is under way in China.some people believe that …,whereas others argue that…
（6）There are some reasons for owning(private cars/ personal computers).To begin with,…Next,…Last,…There are, on the other hand, many reasons against it, First,…Second,…Finally,…
（7）There are many advantages and disadvantages in(owning a car).（8）There are various /at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods to do something
（9）Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for toe reasons.The first reason is that …The second reason is that …/On the one hand ,… On the other hand,…
（10）The possible solutions of(the energy crisis/water shortages/these social problems)depend on three factors…
（11）The tow major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth /the widespread of fake products)are…
2．常用于结尾的短语、句式
（1）It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to。。
（2）To conclude，we can see that（the best way/the possible solution）is。。
（3）In short，（shortages of water，decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution）are the major problems to be solved to（increase rain production）。
（4）In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make great efforts to。。
（5）In a word，there are three suggestions we must follow，only in this way can we（achieve a great success）。
（6）It is time for us to take an active part in。。
（7）Let us work hand in hand in hand to（solve these social problems）
1．表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this are as follows． 3）The reason for this is obvious． 4）The reason for this is not far to seek． 5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
2．表示好处1）It has the following advantages．2）It does us a lot of good． 3）It benefits us quite a lot． 4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例： Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处1）It has more disadvantages than advantages． 2）It does us much harm． 3）It is harmfulto us．
例： However，everything dividesinto two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi-sion．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for sb．to do sth． 2）We think it necessary to do sth． 3）It plays an important role in our life．
例： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon，computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施1）We should take some effective measures． 2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties． 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth． 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．
例： The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it．
6．表示变化1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications． 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education．
例： Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins．
第五篇：大学英语写作
1.对立观点式
A．有人认为#是好事，赞成#，为什么？
B．有人认为# 是坏事，反对#，为什么？
C．我的看法。
模板:
With the development of our society, # has increasingly become a common concern of the public.(可再加一句情况说明)
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing #.They point out the fact that 支持# 的第一个原因.They also argue that 支持# 的另一个原因.However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do #.They firmly point out that 反对# 的第一个理由.What’s more, 反对# 的第二个理由.There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of#/doing # 的好处overweigh the disadvantages.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.(结尾一段也可选用这种方式:
Therefore, in my opinion, although there are advantages of #/doing # 的好处, its negative effects should not be ignored.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.)
Colleges Have Opened Their Doors Wider With the development of our society, the fact that colleges have opened their doors wider has increasingly become a common concern of the public.Some people are in favor of the idea of opening the colleges’ doors wider.They point out the fact that it allows more students to pursue higher education.They also argue that it will provide more talents for our society.However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to open the colleges’ doors wider.They firmly point out that it will be much harder for the graduates to find a job.What’s more, it will lead to a social problem.There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of
opening the colleges’ doors wider overweigh the disadvantages.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.(141 words)(结尾一段也可选用这种方式: Therefore, in my opinion, although there are advantages of opening the colleges’ doors wider, its negative effects should not be ignored.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.)(141 words)
2.社会问题(现象)式
A．一个社会问题或者现象
B．产生的原因
C．我的看法。
Work in the Countryside(positive)
1.许多大学毕业生自愿到农村工作
2.出现这种现象的原因
3.我的看法
Work in the Countryside With more and more university graduates in our society, how to find a good job has increasingly become a common concern of the public.It is reported that many university graduates would like to work in the countryside.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To start with, it is a fact that with more and more university students graduating each year, the job market competition becomes more and more fierce, and many graduates cannot find jobs in the cities.Secondly, most villages that are trying to employ university graduates have developed well.It makes mot much difference whether to work in the countryside or in the city.Last but not least, some university graduates who come from the
countryside are eager to go back home to contribute to the construction of their hometown.Based on the above reasons, I think university graduates should go to work where they are needed most and where they can make full use of their talents.Working in the countryside can be truly an advisable(明智的)choice.(170 words)Misleading News(negative)
1.当今社会虚假新闻越来越多
2.分析出现这种现象的原因
3.呼吁社会改变这种不智之举
With the development of our society, misleading news has increasingly become a common concern of the public.It is reported that there are more and more misleading news in our society.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To start with, it is a fact that there are more and more modern communication tools in the world, misleading news can easily spread.Secondly, some journalists would like to draw public attention and increase the sales by publishing misleading news.Last but not least, the public would like to share some interesting news which may be misleading.Based on the above discussions, I think we should take action to prevent misleading news.Think twice before we speak can be truly an advisable choice.(124 words)
3.应用文
写信:感谢信, 投诉信，道歉信,邀请信,申请(贷款、入学、求职)，请求别人帮忙（写推荐信，搜查资料)
Dear Sir or Madam,(不知是谁的情况下，如果有要求写给谁要写上具体的名称)
I am a student/customer who….I am writing to thank you for/complain about/apologize for/invite you to do/apply for/ask for your help to do sth.描述过程或原因.When I …, I was really thankful/upset/sorry /honored/interested/upset.I sincerely hope that ….If you can…, I will be really….I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Lily
A Letter to Apply for a Student Loan
1.介绍你的个人情况
2.申请助学贷款的原因、数额及用途
3.如何保证专款专用以及你的还款
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a sophomore in Peking University who majors in Engineering.I am writing to apply for a student loan of 2,000 yuan.It is hard for me to make the application, but I have to.Last year both my parents were laid off, and what’s worse, three weeks ago my mother was discovered to have caught a serious disease.Therefore, I could not get support for my study form my family any more.When I knew that I have the opportunity to apply for the student loan, I was really happy and excited.So I immediately write this letter to you to ask for your help.I sincerely hope that I can get the loan.I promise that all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the next year, and I will repay it within four years, that is, one year after my graduation.If you can grant my application, I will be really grateful.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Lily
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4.图表作文模板
图表作文提示部分包括图表和文字要点提示两部分。图表的类型主要有：圆形（饼型）图（pie chart）、柱形图(直型图)（graph）、曲线图（chart）和数据统计表(表格)（table）。① 描述图表 ②分三方面解释原因 ③下结论
1)As can be seen from the in______.During the period from _______to _______, ________rose from ________to _______, while _______ decreased from _______ to _______.2)We believe that there are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To begin with,____.Secondly, ____.Last but not least, _____.3)In conclusion, ______.We can imagine that _____.范文： Health Gains in Developing Countries
1．以下图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命(1ife expectancy)和婴儿死亡率(infant mortality)的变化情况
2．说明引起变化的各种原因
1960 1990
Health Gains in Developing Countries
life expectancy of developing 40 years nearly 60 years, infant
develops quickly in developing countries during this period, and living quality improves the development of national health care systems.When they become richer and richer, they care more about personal health conditions.medical sciences also develop at a fantastic speed, and it is much safer for mothers to give birth.the situations in developing countries are changing for the better.(169 words)
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