小作文举例

第一篇：小作文举例

“ 赢”的魅力

不忘初心，方可始终。成功飘渺难及，但一颗恒心足矣摧垮一切。莫嫌海角天涯远，但肯摇鞭有到时。成功不是偶然，不能信手掂来，是靠日积月累的付出和努力。不改初衷，记住自己的梦想，披荆斩棘，搏击长空，需要超乎常人的坚韧与毅力。梦若高山，而恒就若出生的太阳，慢慢磅礴，吞纳峻岭，尽洒阳光与万物。恒，永远通与成功！

成功难唾手得之，当凭日累月积。每人都有成功之梦，圆梦者凤毛麟角。所谓“成功”，无“功”怎有“成”？无“时”怎有功？只有于风沙中怀揣恒心，历经岁月的风化，闯过时间的消磨，才能成功。莫言功小难足挂齿，莫叹蹉跎望而却步。积累成功，重在坚持。相信熬过时间的淘洗，岁月的沉淀，奋斗必将成为苦索后梦想的茵茵绿洲！

千淘万漉虽辛苦，吹尽黄沙始到金。成功需要努力，命运才会还以精彩。如若不奋斗，何谈赢字，公平的命运不会偏袒任何一方，不刚则隳，不恒则退，唯有坚持才回到大成功的彼岸。不要忘了当初的雄心壮志，是否已被时光消耗殆尽，唯有青春，仍能为了梦想而拼搏，为何不倾尽全力？只为不负初心！人生在勤，不索何获？拼搏，拼搏！成功等待着我！

九年寒窗磨利剑，六月沙场试锋芒。学习是一个日积月累的过程，长期的努力才会获得最后的成功，学习的道路没有捷径，唯有时间才能战胜一切。不赢一次失误而气恼，一次成功而浮躁，做好打持久战的准备，吃苦正是为了做金字塔尖上的人，懂得坚持敢于拼搏，成功便近在眼前。永不言败，不畏挫折，不丢信心，赢得属于自己的人生。

成功之花，必是浇灌了奋斗的泪泉，洒遍了坚持的光亮，才会芬芳迷人，应在什么？赢在坚持，已在日复一日的努力积淀，赢在无人问津时对梦想的偏执。不积跬步，无以至千里，一次成功往往需要很长的积累，才能把朴实无华变成枝头上的精彩，只有坚持逐梦的恒心与毅力，才能够赢得胜利，你只负责精彩，命运自有安排。

以奋勇逐之，以宽心待之。胜败亦是平常，虽胜，却不宜骄满。外来因素的干扰是我们心灵动荡而不能自在的来源。放平心态，只要选择了成功，就要持久努力争取；荣誉过后，应该有一颗平常心，慢慢积累沉淀，重铸下一次的辉煌。沉静之心，敢于正视惨淡的人生，敢于直面成功的实质。且行且宽心，在成功中找寻自己内心的氤氲馨香。

中国式过马路小作文

抢出来的是时间，忽略的却是生命。中国式过马路，是不爱惜自己的人们拿性命换取的。珍爱生命，学会等待。片刻的驻足，有可能会变成生命的延续。生命之花，需要耐心呵护，你们应从内心去改变，换位思考，将心比心，这样行为，让那些司机师傅如何应对？高超的车技，赶不上横穿马路的脚步。所以，遵守交规吧！为了他人，也为了我们自己。

跬步之遥，人们却为了便利，用生命的筹码做赌注。给自己带来危险又给他人带来不便。中国式过马路，国民的素质体现的是国力的强大，然而泱泱中国，虽说金玉其外，那也不敢说“其中”是完美的。人们啊，你们能不能不被一己私利控制住了头脑，以至让中国人被外人鄙视？所有的中国人啊，让我们杜绝中国式过马路!把我们绚烂而宝贵的生命之线紧系于红绿灯之上！

趁雪打劫

求偿本无过，行善品更高。雪中的有偿服务无可非议,但却缺少了社会的温情与关怀。金钱的交易是市场行为；无私的付出更传善意关怀。风雪之中，无偿的帮助给予传递的不只是友爱，更是城市中人情善意的凝聚。群力推车本无害，何必只求许金财。少一些交易，多几次帮助，换来的就是人心向善，和谐幸福的城市，温暖人情的文明。

善本人间无偿物，何必乘危为财屈。朔雪纷飞的寒冷中，助人推车的行为固然作为温暖人心的力量，可曾琢磨，当这种善举蒙上利益的外表，不就成为了正常的交易了吗？不正磨灭了“善”本来温暖璀璨的色彩了吗？醒悟吧！当你付以热忱之心只为换取鸿毛之资，而摒弃善之初意时，正是违背了心灵善良灿烂的一面！人行善，固遵以道：不贪重财，为满本心。

金钱的传递，善行的廉价。大雪茫茫，有无数温暖在此升华，却有不和谐在贬低善行的价值。帮扶是表，贪婪是实。推车的好意若以金钱作为媒介，人们的内心便也仿佛禁锢在利欲的牢笼。趁雪打劫，泯灭温情，这是人与人的隔阂，心与心的阻碍。不要让金钱成为善行的动力，社会需要的是无私的奉献，而非当下的唯利是图。

君子有所为有所不为。这并不是所谓的“趁雪打劫”，冰天雪地里，谁也都不容易，他们去推车，只是为生计所迫，况且，他们用汗水付出的劳动，理应得到回报。这总比那些外表上仁义道德，而内心却充满贪婪意念的伪君子强得多吧。喜爱金钱，乃人之常情，人之常欲，而人们在合情合理之下才给予谋取，有何不可，理应得到认可。

沧海桑田，人心冷暖，一叶知秋，趁雪打劫的陋习彰显着人性的变化，迥异的态度也正为变向的批评。同为关爱，却与雪中送炭之一背道而驰。即便君子爱财，也应取之有道；劳动虽应得偿，也应适可而止。名为帮助，实则利益的行为也因此漫扬开来。纵然没有曾经的路不拾遗，也应以自身为准，否则曾经陌生人中的温暖，又应当何去何从？

雪中炭火三更暖，钱里讲情日下寒。寒风刺骨壮汉立，趁雪；五十元推一程，打劫。如今社会，陌生路人，拿钱讲情；昨日温馨不在。大雪路人烟稀少，车打滑冷眼相待，人人钱里把人瞧。怎一个“漠”字了得？敲响他人的车窗，不取不义之财，一扫曾经的淡漠与疏远，让我们共同努力，用情暖这寒冬腊月。

寒冬温炭心自暖，利益明鉴遂寒渊。行车困于冰天雪地中，热心的帮推本应是友善的，而和人通晓世态炎凉，善意的帮助却包裹着金钱的利益。严严冬日本应温暖，却用这违背道义的小举动寒了人们的心。“群盛无可畏独陋”，然而民众的立场多为赞同，纯粹而善良的社会也已名存实亡。文明礼仪的炎黄子孙受到考验，反省改变即必行。

君子爱财，取之有道；小人爱财，取之不易。金钱与道德的争端，一直追溯到人类的诞生，面对复杂的欲望漩涡，我们总是无能为力，但贪婪化作蛛网，禁锢翱翔的翅膀，又怎样能重回，换心灵一片蓝空？又怎样能重回，那人人真善的时代？也许明天，后天，甚至永远。在繁华的地平线，习惯给一切定上价码，殊知？那是人们良心

感恩父亲

父恩胜青天，更高天一筹；父德譬袤土，更广地一方。父亲曾将你我放在肩头，慈爱目光深邃的内含让人读不尽，品不穷。那种若三月暖阳般的父爱，随时光镀上了银白。白发不藏，父已年迈。而一路遮去风雪的背影没有变。日渐佝偻，父亲仍然用那颗炙热的心照耀着你我成长，父已老，爱若磐，荏苒春秋沧桑变，吾当尽孝报炽心。

走过成长，走过你的白发。初步蹒跚，你的宽厚于掌托起我走向人生起点；渐渐长大，你的谆谆教诲引领我一路且歌且行。你并非学识渊博的学者，却又是孩子的我眼中无所不能的老爸。你并不完美，却让我钦佩你的品格，你的一言一行春风化雨，一路滋润我健康成长，女儿永不会忘，女儿会是您的骄傲，一路有你，我很幸福！

父爱本默，深沉充盈大爱。十五年岁月，你的爱放晴了我心灵院落，我在你心中找到了归属天空。你的温暖，我都记得，当我在欢欢喜喜的盛开，你却慢慢的衰落。你早将满心丰溢的生机倾注于我怀中，成为我最纯真顽皮时光中最大的分享者，你如忠诚的卫道士，守护着我风雨飘摇的青春。父亲本默，可背后隐藏的爱的力量却让我缅怀！

父爱悠悠，昊天罔极。几十年如一日在成长路上前行，有你陪伴。你是无声细语，微小之处尽显大爱；是坚固磐石，执着守护诠释关怀。无论是夺得佳绩的喜悦，抑或名落孙山的沮丧，是你在暗处用仁慈隽永的性灵引我度过彷徨，迈向辉煌。倾一生汗水助子女鹰扬鸢飞；耗毕生心血换子女荣耀辉煌。晴空朗朗，父爱悠长。你是子女永远的榜样！

纵以青丝变白发，终当旧貌换新颜。父母用青春投注在光阴中，奉献给我们的生命，是我们成人成才。但是，他们却日渐老去。他们一直以不变的姿态，站在我们路途的起点，当我们赢得辉煌的时候，他们为我们鼓掌，微笑。纵使年华老去，时光不再，但是有我们，他们已知足。鸟鸦反哺羊跪乳，寸草春晖难报忘。父母之思，尽生而报。

十四年如花，争奇斗艳；十四年如梦，泪眼朦胧。你的笑，从不离我成功雀跃之刻；你的话，也永远伴我失败落寞之时。一切情感皆难以言表。每当我感受阳光的沐浴。便如同在你身边，你用宽阔的臂膀为我撑起翱翔的天空，多年来，你无微不至的呵护着我，而我在成长，你却在衰老，我多想把时光永远定格在那时，因我为你骄傲，父亲。

绿水本无忧，因风皱面；青山原不老，为雪白头。父女之情，可称得上是世界上最深沉，最含蓄的了，那就好像一杯浓浓的乌龙茶，越品越回味无穷。您几十年含辛茹苦育我成人，岁月无情在您脸上留下痕迹，青丝载不动白发情。您伟大，您正直，您如一潭清水，我似一叶扁舟，任意搅浑打乱潭水的平静，然而潭水清纯依旧。爸，我爱您！

欲报之恩，昊天罔极。父亲是一座伟岸的山，用他笔挺的身躯承载起一个家庭重担，载起三口人的笑语欢声。他用坚实的臂膀捍卫子女的荣耀，用深邃的眼神给予你无私的鼓励。快乐之时，他乐你所乐；难过之时，他坚守不移；危难来时，他可相依，交托一切。这就是父亲，愿为你坍塌，愿为你白发苍苍，愿付出一切守护你的荣光。

雷人文具

故作成熟的留言，是迷失而非深沉；假装潇洒的话语，是另类而非时尚。“雷人文具”的畅销，折射出学生们心里的缺失，是非的误判。好的箴言可春风化雨，影响一生；坏的俗语亦能潜移默化，侵蚀心灵。所以，我们要弥补我们眼前这个美丽却危险的错误。找回自我，飞扬活力。让此类文具不再引领我们走上歧路，在现实的精彩中远离伤害。

另类的背后，是心灵的扭曲。“时尚“，无非是一群学生似懂非懂，无病呻吟。过早成熟，追求个性，就是雷人文具给学生们的恶性循环。年少无知，我们正值青春，不应让我们的无邪成为黑心商家牟取利益的借口。心灵上的潜移默化，对未来的不负责，障蔽了童真。趁我们还年轻，做回自我，回归本真，让单纯的心灵熠熠生辉！

蓬生麻中，不扶自直；白沙在涅，与之俱黑。学生当今沉浸在雷人文具的热潮中，虽然表面无碍，但过多的“负能量”已经在潜移默化地改变着我们的心性。或许它们张扬着清楚的疯狂，但人总会在一瞬间猛然挺住叫嚣自由的脚步。在那时，我们剩下的，就只有真正的积淀，而非虚浮的繁华。放下“雷人文具”，我们用知识来迎接明天。

低俗情话跃然文具之上，雷人雷语到底为何种风尚？再优美的情话，再凄美的的故事，也不适合初三的我们。这种文具风的背后，是经营者高利润的巨大诱惑，可我们青少年，难道非要以此彰显自己的青春活力？个性可以体现，但需要的不是这种低俗，文具上这样的噱头只会引起人们的不齿。告别低俗文具文化，重显青春向上！

佳言鼓舞正气传，恶语挫势堕人心。文具当为书写阳光华章的媒介，可上面印的某些恶语却削弱了向上的势头。时尚之言非省人之句，勿以身心受损，必当远离。我们为积极的力量和向上的思想奋斗。不能为这些消极低迷的文字诱惑。省之警之，疏之拒之。为将来书写辉煌人生积淀正能量，抵制堕落思想，一定会有喷薄绽放的一日！

俗言浊语误学子，朴素无华方是真。文具上的不良语句，已成为误导学生的污浊之源。朝伴夕随，耳濡目染，带给学生的影响是极为恶劣的。入淤泥污水之中，日不冗其染，久而渐同化一体。可如此风尚的容忍与接纳，无形之中便学生们心灵蒙尘。一句俗语，降低的是高雅的修养；几条情话，误导的是远大的理想。摒弃恶风，重拾一个清静世界

第二篇：考研英语小作文经典举例及点评

考研英语投诉信经典范文举例及点评

范文之一

［Directions］: Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem.Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement, Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time.But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.After we used it for several days.we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly.When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperture range from 0℃ to 9℃.This problem has affected our normal life.Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.Yours faithfully，Li Ming ［文章点评］

这封投诉信可以说写得非常好，结构很清晰，第一段首先肯定对方按时送货上门的做法，随后简述冰箱出了问题。第二段说明具体问题，第三段提出要求。

范文之二

Dear Sir:

With reference to our order No.W98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged.The packages containing the computer sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question.We unpacked the computer sets with care and can only assume that damage must be due to careless handling at some stage prior to packing.We shall be glad if you will replace all 20 sets as soon as possible.Meanwhile, we have put the damaged computer sets aside in case you need them to support a claim on your suppliers for compensation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 范文之三

Dear Mr.Chang:

On September 10, our order for 280 women's cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers.We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

考研英语小作文四种英文道歉信范文讲解

因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉，这是一种礼貌。道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。

1、因未能践约赴宴致歉Unable to keep one's promise Dear Miss Nancy，Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day.Hoping to see you soon.Truly yours, Tom 亲爱的南希小姐：

小儿上周六突然生病，因此未能应约赴生日宴，殊觉抱歉，希原谅，再见。

2、因迟复来信致歉Because of answering one's letter late Dear David: I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated 7, December sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable.When your letter arrived, I was just in Hong Kong.As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up.Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret.I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip.I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.Sincerely yours, Tom 亲爱的戴维：

请原谅我收到您12月7日的来信后迟迟未复，现将原因告诉您，相信您一定会谅解的。您的来信到来时，我正巧在香港，家人无法及时转递。你的信一直放在我写字台上，直到我回到才看见，拖至今天才回信，深表歉意。

这次出去旅行饱览了许多美丽景色，下次见到您时，将告诉您一切。

3、因未能及时还书致歉Unable to return borrowed book on time Dear Kate:

Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest.I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me.Never having seen the book, she was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer.However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner.Thanking you again for the loan.Sincerely yours, Tom 亲爱的凯特：

我迟迟未能归还您的那本《鲁滨逊飘流记》，请原谅。该书我读得津津有味。读完后，正预备归还您时，我的表妹来访，见这本书也感兴趣，定要借去一读。为了让别人也能分享您那本书所给予的乐趣，我不能及时归还。我想再延迟些日子奉还，谅您不会介意的。

再次感谢您的慷慨。

4、因遗失借书致歉Because of losing a borrowed book Dear Frank:

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me last week.I read it everyday and intended to finish it next month.Last night when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame.I was so careless with my things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.Yours truly, Tom 亲爱的弗兰克：

很抱歉，上星期您借给我的那本书竟遗失了。我每天都在看，准备下个月看完。昨晚我回到我的卧室，到处也找不到那本书。我将尽力找到它。万一找不到，我只好买一本新的还您。

但是，新书恐怕不能代替那本旧书吧！旧书跟旧友一样，一旦失去就不能再得。旧书与往事相连，这种不可弥补的损失，皆由我起。我对待一切太大意了，这次给我一个警告，叫我以后要小心。

考研英语小作文10篇经典索赔信函范文

为应对2006年考研英语小作文要求，本网站将定期为各位网友推荐一些英语应用文的范文供大家参考。本文是关于抱怨信函方面的范文，大家可以借鉴一下也是很有帮助的！

抱怨和索赔信函（Complaints & Claims）的目的是为了获取更好的服务，对已出现的问题求得尽快的、妥善的解决。它通常是买方由于对收到的货物不满而书写，如：货物未按时到达；货物虽抵达，但与订单所载不同；货物有损毁现象；货物数量短缺或多余；货物质量与样品不符；服务不合理以及收费过高等，这些均是抱怨、索赔的正当理由。

书写抱怨、索赔信函时，不妨开门见山出原先双方同意的条件，然后列举事实以表示有何不满，以及为什么不满，最后提出解决的方法。内容应明确、清楚、有理，语气要简洁、坚决。避免使用愤怒和使对方过于难堪的措辞（除非你所抱怨的问题反复发生，且多次投诉而毫无结果）。

1）For Delay in Shipment(由于发货延迟而抱怨)Dear Sirs，The furniture we ordered from you should have reached us a week ago.Needless to say , the delay in delivery has put us to great inconvenience.It is therefore imperative that you dispatch them immediately.Otherwise we shall be obliged to cancel the order and obtain the goods elsewhere.Please look into the matter as one of urgency and let us have your reply as early as possible.Yours faithfully, John Thomas 亲爱的先生们：我方从贵方订购的家具应于一星期前收到。不用说，发货的延迟给我方带来了很大的不便。因此，贵方必须立即发货，否则我们将被迫取消订单，到另处订货。

请紧急处理此事，并尽快告知结果。

2）For Poor-Packing（由于包装不妥提出索赔）Dear Sirs , We are writing to inform you that the toys covered by our order No.519arrived in such an unsatisfactory condition that we have to lodge a claim against you.It was found upon examination that 10%of them are broken and some are badly scratched , obviously due to the improper packing.Therefore, we cannot offer it for sale at the normal price and suggest that you make us an allowance of 20% on the invoiced cost.This is the amount by which we propose to reduce our selling price.If you cannot accept , I‟m afraid we shall have to return them for replacement.Sincerely yours, John Thomas 亲爱的先生们：我们写信通知贵方，519号订单玩具已收到，但货物状况很不令人满意，故我们不得不提出索赔。经检查，我们发现有10％的货物破损，而且一些也有严重磨损现象。很明显，这是由于包装不妥造成的。因此，我们无法以原价售出货物。建议贵方依照发票金额给予20％的折扣，这是我们所建议降低的售价额度。如果贵方无法接受，我们将不得不退货，要求替换。

3）For Damage of Goods（由于货物损坏而抱怨）Dear Sirs, Our order No.JT-8 the glassware you supplied to our order of 3rd July was delivered by the shipping company this morning.The 160 cartons containing the goods appeared to be in perfect

condition.But when I unpacked them with great care, I regret to report that 10 cartons of glassware badly cracked.We trust you can understand that we expect the compensation for our dam aged goods.Yours faithfully, John Thomas 亲爱的先生们：订单JT－8号我方于7月3日从贵处订购的玻璃器皿已于今早货运公司送到。装有货物的160个纸箱完好无损。但当我们小心打开检查时，发现有10箱玻璃器皿严重破损。相信贵处能理解我方要求对损坏货物进行赔偿。

4）For Inconformity（由于货物不符而抱怨）Dear Sirs ，On March 12, we ordered 1,200 shirts size 42.But unfortunately, we received completely different articles-children clothes today.We can only presume that a mistake was made and the children clothes were for another order.As I have several customers waiting, please arrange for the replacements at once.Faithfully yours, John Thomas 亲爱的先生们：三月十二日我订购了一千二百件四十二号男式衬衣。但不幸的是，今天我们收到了完全不同的货物――儿童服装。我们想贵方一定搞错了，儿童服装是另一份订单。由于有几位客户在等货，故请贵方立即安排更换货物。

5）For Unacceptable Substitute（由于无法接受替代物而抱怨）Dear Mr.Cliff, During the past three months I have placed two sizable orders for The Handy Desk Companion by Roy.specifying the hard back binding.But both time you sent me paper-back binding because you were out of stock on the hard-back.Fortunately, I am still selling a few of the paper backs, but more and more customers ask for the hard-back ones.(At least two of our competitors have this reference book in hard-back in our cities).Enclosed is my order for 75 copies of The Handy Desk Companion in hard-back.Please do not, under any circumstances, send me anything else.I have plenty of the paper-back in stock.Very sincerely yours, Jorn Thomas 亲爱的克里夫先生：在过去的三个月中，我两次向贵方订购了相当数量的由罗伊所著的《便利的办公伙伴》一书，指定需要精装本。但贵方由于精装本缺货，两次寄给我的都是平装本。

值得庆幸的是，我仍卖出一些平装本，但越来越多的顾客索要精装本。（本对少有两家竞争者出售此书的精装本）。

随信寄上订单，购买75本《便利的办公伙伴》精装本。请无论如何，不要寄给我其它替代物。我现已大量平装本的库存。

6）For Shortweight(由于短重而要求索赔)Dear Sirs ，We have just received the Survey Report from Shanghai Commodity Inspection Bureau evidencing that all drums of apple juice weigh short by form 1 to 5 kilogram, totaling 300 kilogram.As the drums were intact , it is obvious that apple juice was short weight before shipment.Under such circumstances , we have to file a claim against you to the amount of RMB

850 plus inspection fee.We are enclosing the Survey Report No.TE(95)115 and looking for ward to your settlement at an early date.Yours faithfully.亲爱的先生们： John Thomas 我方刚刚收到上海商检局的栓验报告，证明所有苹果汁每桶少一至五公斤,总共减少三千公斤。由于果汁完好无损，显而易见，苹果汁估装运前就不够重量。在这种情况下，我方不得不向贵方提出八百五十元人民币的索赔，另加检验费用。现随信附上第TE（95）115号商检报告，希望早日解决这一问题。

7）For Over-Shipment（由于到货数量过多而抱怨）Dear Sirs, We thank you for promptness in delivering the Chinaware we ordered on 20th Dec.The number of cartons delivered by your carrier this morning was 360, whereas our order was for only 320.Unfortunately, our present needs are completely covered and we cannot make use of the extra goods.Please inform us by fax what we are to do with the extra goods.Yours faithfully, 亲爱的先生们：对于我方12月20日订购的瓷器，非常感谢贵方及时发货。然而，今早贵方承运人送来360箱货物，而我方只订购了320箱。很不幸，我方目前的需要已完全饱和，无法接受多余的货物。请传真通知我方如何处理。

8）For Inferior Quality(由于质量低劣而抱怨)Dear Sirs，With reference to our Order No.315, we are compelled to express our strong complaints for the inferior quality.Compared to the sample No.169, the arrived self-adhesive correction tape is very transparent and does not satisfactorily cover the error being corrected.We shall be glad to have your explanation of this inferiority in the quality, and also to know what you purpose to do in this matter.Sincerely yours.Jorn Thomas 亲爱的先生们：关于我方第315号订单，由于到货质量低劣，我主被迫表达强烈的不满。同169号样品经较，此次运到的修改带稀薄，无法满意覆盖被改正的错误。我方希望贵方对这一情况加以解释，并告知贵方对此事的处理方法。

9）For Errors in an Invoice(由于发票错误抱怨)Dear Sirs ，When your sales representative, Helen Xu, called on me in late December,she told me that you were offering a special price of $ 147 on the ,Wizard icemaker during the month of January.I ordered six on January 17, figuring the total amount of the order at $882.However ,the invoice that accompanied the shipment showed the amount due as $ 1098.It is apparent that I was charged the regular price of $ 183 instead of the lower price I was promised.I‟m enclosing a check for $ 882 in payment of the order.Unless I hear from , you to the contrary ,I will assume that this is the correct amount and that my account is clear.If this is not the case ,I would like your permission to return the six Wizard icemakers to you at your expense.Sincerely yours, 亲爱的先生们:当贵方销售代表海伦·徐去年十二月底拜访我时,告知今年一月份奇术制冰机将以每台147美元的价格销售。我于一月十七日订购了六台，应支付882美元。然而，贵方的销售价常规价每台183美元，而并非所许诺的低廉价格。随函附上一张882美元的支票。除非我听到异议，否则我将认为款额正确、帐务已清。如果情形相反，请允许我退回六台奇术 制冰机，所需费用全由贵方支付。

10)、For Poor Performance on a Service Contract(由于服务质量差而抱怨)Dear Mr..Weidner.Contract No.17854

You will recall that you and I have discussed at least three times during the past six months the low quality of service provided by your hotel.After each conversation, service is improved for a short time , and then reverts.back to the old standard that brought abort my original complaints.I will summarize in this letter my previous discussions about your performance.You may wish to refer to our contract as you read my comments.1.Windows :According to the contract ,all windows are to be cleaned once a month.This is not being done.Often from six to eight weeks elapse between cleanings.Even when the windows are cleaned ,the job is less than satisfactory.2.Carpets: The carpets should be vacuumed after each workday.Although your service people do show up each day , their efforts can only be described as careless.3.Miscellaneous : I could mention a dozen other cleaning responsibilities that are not being met satisfactorily--furniture , lavatories and ash trays , for example.I call your attention to paragraph 7c in the contract , Mr..Weidner , in which the provisions for revocation of the contract are described.I do not like to consider such a possibility , but I must have your written assurance that all provisions of the contract will be met.I will be pleased to meet with you once more to discuss the situation.I assure you that this a matter of some urgency to me.Yours faithfully, John Thomas 亲爱的韦德罗先生：您会记得，在过去六个月中，我们至少三次讨论过贵旅店服务质量低劣问题。每次讨论过后，服务质量在短时间内有所提高，但不久又退回到原先的水平。

在这封信中，我将就先前讨论问题做一概述。您在阅读此信时，也许需要参考我们的合同.1.窗户：遵照合同，每月清洗一次所有窗户。然而。此项工作并未得到落实。每次清洗相隔六至八周。即使窗户被清洗过，效果也不尽人意。2.地毯：每个工作日之后，对地毯应真空吸尘。尽管贵方服务人员每天露面，但工作很不仔细。3.各种事务：我可列举许多令人不满意的清洁工作，例如家具、卫生间、烟灰缸等等。韦德罗先生，请您注意我们合的每7c一段，有关终止合同的说明。我本人并不想考虑这种可能，但您是必须书面保证履行合同中的所有条款。我很愿意同您再次会晤，讨论目前情形。这事对于我至关重要，二盼急迫。考研作文留学申请信和奖学金申请信范文

留学申请信和奖学金申请信中须写明下列几点：(1)写明申请学校和所学专业。(2)提供申请人的个人资历。(3)索取申请学校相关的申请表等。

一、留学申请信(Application for Admittance)经典范文之一 Dear Sir，I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University in June next year.I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D.degree.I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission.Thank you for your kind assistance.Sincerely yours, Wang Feng 经典范文之二 Dear Sir，I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University.Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S.degree.I plan to continue my study and research in this field.I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics.I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school.And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours, Li Ming

二、奖学金申请信(Applications for Scholarships)经典范文之一 Dear Sir:

I should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering to students from other countries.Would you please send me the necessary application froms and any further details about the scholarships.I am a postgraduate student in Beijing Science and Engineering University.I major in microelectronics engineering, and do some research work during my study years.I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my score report card.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to your reply.Respectfully yours, Ma Minghao 经典范文之二 Dear Dr.Gomes:

I have read the announcement of the scholarship in chemistry that the University of Colorado is offering, and I would like to submit my application.The enclosed application form for admission to the graduate school of your university will give my educational history.However, I would like to point out that I have just received an M.S.Sincerely yours, Li Ming 经典范文之三 Dear Sir:

I am writing to you in the hope of obtaining the scholarship in history to support my study and some research work.I am a graduate student in the Department of History in the Northeast University for Nationalities.In addition to study and research work, I also write books.Recently I have finished a book on the history of the Origen nationality in China, which is to be published by the World Book Publishing House in the coming year.I would like to focus on that field for my advanced studies.Enclosed please find three letters of recommendation and my resume.Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply.Respectfully yours, Li Ming

考研英语摘要题型写作思路要点讲解

考研英语摘要题型写作是难度非常大的一种写作形式，随着考生英语水平的不断提高，这种题型应引起考生的重视。在2006年考研英语又出现该题型，尽管这种题型真正考到的概率不是很大，但是本人觉得各位网友还是要熟悉这种题型，以背急时之需。

1、摘要题型写作要点：

① 动笔之前，考生一定要认真仔细地阅读所给原文，弄懂原文大意，掌握原文要点。

② 摘要的长度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一，考试时应遵守规定的字数限制。

③ 在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文。

④ 摘要应与原文的观点保持一致，并且仍按原文的逻辑顺序排列。

⑤ 重点反映主要观点，删除细节。

⑥ 简化从句，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。

⑦ 检查与修改时，考生应重点检查是否遗漏了原文的要点或包含了细节。

2、摘要题型写作实例

① 试题题目

Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one‟s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.(246 words)

3.talk about death when millions of people die 4.become confused and anxious when each time the dead people are very few and the death rates are almost equal

5.people‟s fearfulness 6.seem to control nature 7.avoid death ② 原文要点：

1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors 2.avoid talking about death ③ 参考摘要：

People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)用实例讲解考研英语摘要的写作要点

本文谈谈怎样写英语概要(Precis)。要写好一篇文章的概要应考生应具备两种基本能力。首先应具备理解原文，掌握全文中心思想的能力；其次应具有用简练的语言将原文的中心思想表达出来的能力。一般说来，概要的篇幅为原文的1/3至1/4，因此在写概要时务必注意语言的概括和精练。概要写作一般按下列步骤进行：

1.认真仔细地阅读原文两遍，理解和掌握全文的内容。

2.仔细地阅读考题指令，明确了解考题要求，在原文上标出重点，如议论文中的论点、论据；记叙文中的发展、高潮、结局等。

3.再一次阅读原文，并将所需要采用的要点列出。要点的记录应尽可能简洁明了。

4.根据记录的要点写出概要的初稿，并尽可能不参照原文，除非当你需要核实某个要点。这将十分有益于用自己的语言组织内容，而不是照抄原文中的某些词句。完成初稿后应数一数字数，但千万不可在写完每一句句子即数字数。这样不仅浪费宝贵的时间，而且会搅乱写作的思路。

5.进行一些必要的修改和调整后，誊清完稿，并在最后注明具体字数。

应考生在重读誊清稿时，有两点还应牢记：首先，你写出的概要内容必须忠实于原文，或者说精确(accurate)。概要中所有的内容和信息必须来源于原文，既不可篡改原文内容也不能包括原文未涉及到的内容。其次，概要读起来应是一完整连贯的段落。要取得这一完整连贯，就应该使用一些连接词(link－words)，如„but‟,„and‟,„however‟,„also‟等连接要点；同样，也可使用诸如„since‟,„though‟,„even if ‟，„when‟,„after‟,„before‟等词。请看下面一例子：

The sentry watched a hawk that hovered overhead, looking for some unsuspecting prey to pounce upon.Then he heard the distant, muffled roar of planes, then silence.For the past week he had been told to take note of everything that happened on the hill within his range of vision, and to report anything suspicious.The hill led to an experimental factory, where new and secret weapons were tested.There was a threat of war and the factory would be invaluable to the enemy.So the approaches to it were watched day in, and day out.He shifted his position;he felt that he had been crouching in the heather since the beginning of the time, but only a couple of hours of the day‟s duty had passed.Suddenly he saw something falling from the sky like snow, only it was not snow.[He put out his hand and caught bits of that were drifting near him.They were thin strips of metal to confuse delicate instruments, so that it would not be possible to detect the landing of enemy craft.Next he heard a long, low, continuous roar from the east and saw bundles descending from the sky which looked like umbrellas opening, but which be knew to be parachutes with men hanging from them.He wanted to go at once to give the alarm, but he had to be sure that the parachutes were not his own men out on an exercise.The men were on ground now.One of them pointed in the direction of secret factory and they all began marching toward it.He had no more doubts and set off at once down the hill.He crawled slowly, sometimes on his stomach, sometimes on his side, weaving decided that he had ample cover and started to run.But he had erred, for bullets were soon whistling past him.He drooped flat on the ground.Nobody came to search for him, so he counted up to a hundred and then began crawling again.He moved tortuously and as silently as he could to his camp at the foot of the hill.]

Describe in not more than 80 words what the sentry saw and did from the moment when the strips of metal fell from the sky until he got back to his camp.Use your own words as far as possible.Do not include anything that is not in the passage.1.Points(Saw and Did)

1)Put out hands;caught strip metal.2)Saw bundles.3)Waited.4)Saw men on ground.5)One pointed;all marched.6)Went downhill.7)Crawled—stomach, side—to stream.8)Started running.9)Dropped flat(why?—bullets).10)Counted 100;crawled.11)Silently to camp.2.Rough Draft(Linking of Points)（写得不好的摘要）

When the sentry held out his hand to catch what was falling out of the sky, he found that it was strips of metal.The bundles began coming down.The sentry waited until men appeared on the ground.One of them pointed and the sentry saw them march towards the factory.Crawling on his stomach and on his side, the sentry moved downhill.He began running when he came to a stream, but dropped down when he was shot at.After counting up to a hundred to himself, he began crawling silently again downhill.(95 words)

3.Fair Copy(Corrected Draft)（写锝比较的摘要）

After catching hold of metal strips falling out of the sky, the sentry saw bundles descending and, after a time, some men appeared on the ground.One of them pointed and they all began marching towards the factory.The sentry crawled downhill on his stomach and on his side.When he came to a stream, he began running but dropped down when the men shot at him.He counted up to a hundred, then silently started crawling again towards his camp.(80 words)考研英语小作文摘要题型常见的写作句型

常见的摘要句型共有43个，竞学网把它收集在一起，如果考生能熟练背诵出来的话，那么对备考这类题型肯定非常有帮助。

1）This paper deals with...2）This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3）This essay presents knowledge that...4）This thesis discusses...5）This thesis analyzes...6）This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8）This article gives an overview of...9）This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10）This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents uptodate information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This essay represents the proceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...21)This paper offers the latest information regarding...22)This paper is devoted to examining the role of...23)This article explores...24)This paper expresses views on...25)This paper reflects the state of the art in...26)This paper explains the procedures for...27)This paper develops the theory of...28)This article reviews the techniques used in...29)This paper investigates the techniques and procedures to...30)This article is about...31)This essay is related to...32)This paper concerns...33)This paper gives an account of...34)This article tells of...35)This paper tries to describe...36)This paper provides an analysis of...37)This paper reports the latest information on...38)The author of this article reviews...39)The writer of this paper discusses...40)The writer of this essay tries to explore...41)The aim of this paper is to determine...42)The purpose of this article is to review...43)The objective of this paper is to explore...

第三篇：作文提纲举例

• 题目：难忘的一个人（也可自拟）

• 主题：写一个让自己印象深刻的人，表达对这个人的感受和感情。

提纲举例：

一、开关回忆曾经有一个人让自己难忘。

二、1.交代事情发生的时间、地点、人物、与起因。2.具体叙述难忘的经过。（详略得当，重点叙述令自己感动的方面。要有人物的语言、动作、心理、神态、细节描写）

三、结尾抒发真情实感

提纲举例：

一、开头总写人物特点

二、通过具体事例表现人物特点。（通过人物的语言、动作、神态、心理等细节描写。采用正面和侧面描写相结合的方法写。）

三、抒发赞美之情，与开头照应。

提纲举例：

开头：交代（拾荒者）的体貌、年龄及其留给自己的总体印象。（总写）中间：（1）拾荒者早起晚归，特别辛苦，历尽人间沧桑。

（2）了解家境。（贫寒、孤苦无依、一拾荒为主）

（3）默默资助失学儿童。结尾：抒发对（拾荒者）的崇敬心情。提纲举例：

开头：抓住特点，描写老爸外貌（外貌引入法）

中间：叙述事情，体现老爸乐观的特点（细节描写详略结合）结尾：表达感情，领悟道理（启发式结尾）

第四篇：英语作文举例

自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。

观点原因你的观点赞同可以放松，更健康，帮助学习更好

不赞同太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡觉

I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day.Here are the results.

第五篇：举例子类说明文作文

常见的说明方法有：举例子、分类别、下定义、摹状貌、作诠释、打比方、列数字、列图表、引用说明。

2、常见说明方法的作用：

①、举例子：通过举具体的实例对事物的特征/事理加以说明，从而使说明更具体，更有说服力。

②、分类别：对事物的特征/事理分门别类加以说明，使说明更有条理性。

③、作比较：把__________和__________加以比较，突出强调了事物的特征/事理。

④、作诠释：对事物的特征/事理加以具体的解释说明，使说明更通俗易懂。⑤、打比方：将__________比作__________，从而形象生动地说明了事物的特征/事理。

⑥、摹状貌：对事物的特征/事理加以形象化的描摹，使说明更具体形象。

⑦、下定义：用简明科学的语言对说明的对象/科学事理加以揭示，从而更科学、更本质、更概括地揭示事物的特征/事理。

⑧、列数字：用具体的数据对事物的特征/事理加以说明，使说明更准确更有说服力。

（引用说明在文章开头，还起到引出说明对象的作用。）

为什么不能调换段落顺序？

不能调换：原文采用由„„到„„的顺序介绍事物，调换后不合逻辑。

语言准确性：类型

1、加点字词有何作用？（1）不可以。（2）原词的意思或内容。

（3）所换词语的意思或内容。（4）换了后意思有何改变，与不符合实际。限制性词语能否删去？

对策：答：（1）表态（删还是不删）。（2）定性。如：“比较”“几乎”“相当”等词表程度修辞；“大约”“可能”“左 右” 等表估计，“多”“有余”等表数量。（3）若删去，原来什么样的意思就变成了什么样的意思了，不符合实际，太绝对了。（4）xx词体现了语言的准确 性、周密性、科学性。

类型

4、从文章中找出一个能体现说明文语言“准确”特点的词句，并体会。类型5：指代——“这些条件”、“这种现象”“同样道理”等在文中具体指代什么。对策：一般指的就是代词前面的那句话，找最近的一句话。有时要注意可能不是整句话，而是其中的一部分。篇二：说明文作文教案 1 2 板书： 学写说明文 说明对象的特征 说明的顺序 说明方法 3 篇三：说明文 1.举例子

使文章更加具体,更有说服力,更客观地说明了事物。使比较抽象，复杂的事情或事物变得通俗易懂，让人信服。举例子必须让人觉得有真实感。2.作比较

说明某些抽象的或者是人们比较陌生的事物，可以用具体的或者大家已经熟悉的事物和它比较，使读者通过比较得到具体而鲜明的印象。3.下定义

用简明的语言对某一概念的本质特征作规定性的说明叫下定义。下定义能准确揭示事物的本质，是科技说明文常用的方法。4.列图表

为了把复杂的事物说清楚，还可以采用图表法，来弥补单用文字表达的缺欠，对有些事物解说更直接、更具体。使读者直观，一目了然的了解事物的特征。5.作诠释 从一个侧面，就事物的某一个特点做些解释，这种方法叫诠释法。（引.....的例子，说明......的......的特点。）6.打比方

利用两种不同事物之间的相似之处作比较，以突出事物的形状特点，增强说明的形象性和生动性的说明方法叫做打比方说明文中的打比方的说明方法，同修辞格上的比喻是一致的。用这个方法，可以使抽象复杂说得浅显易懂，具体生动。不同的是，比喻修辞有明喻、暗喻、和借喻，而说明多用明喻和暗喻，借喻则不宜使用。（把......比作......，体现了.......的.......特点.......。）7.摹状貌

为了使被说明对象更形象、具体，可以进行状貌摹写，这种说明方法叫摹状貌。（和描写要区分开,两者虽一样,不过是在不同的文体中的。）8.引资料

为了使说明的内容更充实具体，可以引资料说明。引资料的范围很广，可以是经典著作，名家名言，公式定律，典故谚语等。9.分类别

将被说明的对象，按照一定的标准划分成不同的类别，一类一类地加以说明，这种说明方法，叫分类别。帮助读者掌握特征，头绪分明。10.列数字

为了使所要说明的事物具体化，还可以采用列数字的方法，以便读者理解。需要注意的是，引用的数字，一定要准确无误，不准确的数字绝对不能用，即使是估计的数字，也要有可靠的根据，并力求近似。

说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，对事物、事理进行介绍、解说的一种文体。说明文的阅读方法

一，读抓纲——整体把握说明点

说明文写作的目的就是要告诉读者某个事物或某个事物的某方面的知识。而作者传达的这个知识，就是说明，也就是说明文的中心思想。那么怎样把握它呢？方法主要有三点：

首先可抓住文章的标题明确说明点。俗说“标题是文章的眼睛”，说明文的标题往往揭示了说明的中心。先看总标题：《奇妙的克隆》，可知是有关神奇的克隆技术的知识介绍，以揭开“克隆”的秘密；再看内容，全文用了四个小标题：克隆是什么、克隆鲫鱼出世前后、克隆绵羊“多利”、克隆技术造福人类。你只要浏览一下课文的小标题，就会对课文内容有个大体的了解。

其次可抓住文章的结构归纳说明点。一般说明文往往都会围绕一个主要问题或内容进行说明，而有的说明文则需要我们把小说明点归纳起来，构成全文的说明点。例如《奇妙的克隆》采用的是并列式结构，从不同的侧面说明克隆，除了我们前面说的抓小标题外（或者假如像有的文章那样就没有小标题），我们也可以根据四部分的内容结构把它归纳出来。即克隆的含义、实验、发展与好处等。

另外可抓住说明的顺序弄清说明点。事物事理的本身是有其顺序的，人们认识事物事理也有一定的顺序，因此理清了文章的顺序，也就有助于弄清说明的中心。例如这篇课文主要是阐述事理的，无疑采用的是逻辑顺序：先写克隆的含义，接着写克隆实验，再写克隆的发展，最后写克隆对人类的造福和对克隆的思考。行文脉络十分清楚，说明事理步步推进，文章的中心也就一目了然。

二，读精析——细部研讨方法点

要想把事物事理说清说透，就肯定离不开说明方法。因此阅读说明文，就应当抓住主要的说明方法，并搞清楚各种说明方法的联系和作用，这样才能比较准确地把握说明的内容和文章的结构。我们不妨从以下两方面入手：

一是可以先从全文上提领各部分的说明方法。不妨列出表格，以一览无余。

二是可以抓住重点段落，精要分析具体的说明方法。例如：在“克隆是什么”一小节里，作者为了说明“克隆”，运用了三种说明方法：举例子、释义和引用。举例子：列举植物、动物界当中的人们比较熟悉的例子

来说明，把艰深的科学知识说得简明易懂；释义：对克隆一词进行溯源并作出解释；引用：引入《西游记》中孙悟空拔一把猴毛变出一大群猴子的故事，生动形象地说明了“克隆”是怎么一回事，把科学技术写得富有趣味。

三，读品味——捕捉咀嚼情感点

与其他文体一样，说明文中也同样“说”着作者的情感态度，而这也正是我们理解课文所不可或缺的。《奇妙的克隆》是生物学家谈家桢写的一篇科普文章。学习这篇课文，既要了解克隆这一科技成果，更要从中学习科学家在科学的道路上锲而不舍、不断攀登的精神，还要在此基础上，对科学这把“双刃剑”有一个初步的认识。

为了说明什么是“克隆”，作者精心组织材料，把“克降是什么”“克隆技术的发展脉络”“克隆羊多利的诞生”“克隆技术如何造福人类”介绍得清清楚楚。但是作者又不限于一般性的知识介绍，而是融入自己的赞赏之情和严肃思考。具体地说，本文既向我们介绍了克隆科学知识，又展现了包括我国科学家在内的“科学精神”，同时又引领读者全面地看待科学技术的发展。阅读时，我们就要从课文中找出能表现科学家严谨、求实、锲而不舍的态度与精神的句子，加以体味。

说明文写法分析

1、结合说明方法谈

规范性的答题模式如下：

这篇文章主要运用了„„的说明方法，说明了„„（内容：事物特征或事理），使说明„„（作用：参考前面说明方法，明确其作用）

2、结合修辞手法谈

规范性的答题模式如下：

这是一篇生动地说明文，大量地使用了各种修辞手法，说明了„„（内容），使文章的说明形象生动。

3、结合表达方式谈

记叙、描写使说明更具体形象；抒情、议论使说明更有感情。那么，从这个角度分析说明文的写法，答题的规范性格式如下：

这篇文章综合运用多种表达方式，除了说明外，还有„„（从“记叙、描写、说明、议论”根据内容选择），如„„（具体举例），就是„„（表达方式）的运用，使说明更具体形象/充满感情。