第一篇：英语六级高分作文闪光点
作文写完检查集中点
1.每个句子是否都有谓语动词；
2.动词的时态和语态；
3.主谓搭配是否恰当；
4.标点符号。高分作文标志
1：是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
具体例子下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „ 非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)
Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
应当承认:
Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 简而言之:
The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心谨慎地:
point out discreetly that„
4.conceivably 可以想象地:
Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:
This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地
7.increasingly 不断增长地
While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 诚实地:
the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心实意地关心它的人民的福利
9.certainly: 当然地
As individuals we are certainly weak, but if „作为个人,我们当然是弱小的,但是如果„
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。
2.现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是。。3.我们大学生应该怎么做
The Importance of Reading Classics
第二篇：英语六级写作高分经验总结
英语六级写作高分经验总结
来源: 文都教育
英语六级作文一直是考生头疼的考试内容，似乎除了死背单词和范文找不到更好的方法，其实好的作文在写作中却是存在一定的技巧的，为了方便大家复习，文都老师就在下面这篇文章里来跟大家分享一些六级写作的高分经验。
开端长短句相结合，画龙点睛
考生都知道六级作文的得分点其中之一便是复杂句，好的作文中无疑会有很多优秀的复杂句，但是整篇作文全部都是复杂句构成的话，也会给人晦涩穿凿的感觉，然而，在文章的开头写一个短小精辟的句子却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题。考生在文章开端时可以选择用一个长句一个短句，长句在前短句在后的形式，如果要对观点进行阐述的话，可以就每一个小点采用先短后长的句式，这样显得短小精悍并具有总结性。
主题句放在开头，清晰点题
作文老师在阅卷时时间紧迫，一般都会喜欢尽快找到文章的主题，所以考生在写作时可以在第一段开头就写明主题句，后面的文章就紧紧围绕这一主题展开，这样不仅可以让老师一目了然，也可以使自己的文章主题明确，条理清晰，如果把主题句放到文章中间，那么阅卷老师稍一仓促可能就找不到这样就会认定考生的作文偏题或跑题了，再想得高分就不容易了。
句式多变，灵活运用复合句和连接词
英语作文要想给人一种很精深有水平的感觉那就必然少不了运用复合句。所谓复合句就是那些主句里面套从句，句式较长的语句，考生高中时就学过定语从句、宾语从句、主从复合句等等基本的语法知识，在作文中可以加以运用。除此之外，英语作文的写作中，构成复杂句还有一个很重要的方式就是连接词的运用，在写作中通常会用到的就是转折、因果和并列关系的连接词，考生在复习时可以总结一下这些连接词，作文中用来写出漂亮的长句式。以上关于六级作文的写作经验看起来很简单，但是真正坚持做到却不那么容易，考试之前的时间不多了，考生要注意有效率地运用这段时间，加紧对作文进行复习。
第三篇：英语六级写作备考之创造闪光点
高分作文标志:
1：是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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Computer and I(By Simmy)
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of 沪江四六级 http://cet.hjenglish.com
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!
第四篇：英语六级写作写作技巧之创造闪光点
英语六级写作写作技巧之创造闪光点
高分作文标志： 1：是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I(By Simmy)
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part of Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语 Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)Facet 替换 aspect 各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!
第五篇：2013年6月英语六级作文高分版
2013年6月英语六级作文高分版
Keep Our Hearts Strong
As the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the stone.Good habits help pave our way to success.However, during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around us.Only when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to success.In our daily life, it is essential for us to be self-disciplined.A healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary society.Yet many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly robust.In addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good habits.We must restrain ourselves from endless entertainment.Otherwise, distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic excellence.In summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by temptations.With persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success.【点评】：
本次作文要求以“Good habits result from resisting temptation.”即“良好的习惯源自抵制诱惑”，这一谚语为话题发表议论，在写作时需要对谚语的寓意进行阐释，并且表达自己的观点和看法，相比更为常见的话题型和观点型作文题来说，有一定的难度。首先要求能够对谚语进行准确的理解，抓住谚语表达的中心意思，明确的提出观点，然后围绕这个意思进行阐述。所以在写作时需要强调抵制诱惑对于保持或者培养良好习惯的重要性，以这一论点进行展开阐述，注意行文的逻辑性和语言的准确、流畅。
Say No to Temptation
We are living in a world full of temptations.Due to lack of experience and determined will, many people cannot discriminate right from wrong and make bad decisions.For example, some students wallow in internet and lose themselves.Finally, they abandon their studies and ruin their future.Such things are horrible.As the saying goes, good habits result from resisting temptation.For us college students, it is particularly important to say no to temptation and form good habits.To achieve this, firstly, distinguish between right and wrong.Stay away from adverse temptations such as smoking and playing computer games.Secondly, it is necessary to have a long-term program, in other words, a dream.Once we have a dream, we will be conscious that our time is precious.Then we could have a strong will to say no to temptations and focus on meaningful issues.At last, in face of temptations, encourage yourself and refuse self-indulgence.Awards can be given yourself if you successfully resist a temptation.Meanwhile, good habits are formed in this process.Only by resisting adverse temptations and developing good habits can we achieve happiness and success.Otherwise, we would pay a heavy price.2013年6月六级作文范文
Good habits resultfromresistingtemptation
Good habits are a valuable thing and a bridge reaching desirable results.Evidently, good habits include teamwork, optimistic attitude, confidence and so on.It is well known that teamwork always leaves us less mean-spirited and more inclusive.Again, optimistic attitude and confidence can encourage us to never give up and find silver linings in desperate situations.Why should we actively cultivate good habits? For one thing, good habits can jump our trains of thought onto correct tracks, in turn, we can bypass the wrong path.For another thing, persisting what we are good at and doing even more of it creates excellence.This is where developing good habits comes in.As a result, we should take some effective steps to cultivate our good habits.For instance, we can frequently inform young people that opportunities for errors abound, so we must develop good habits to cope with them.To sum up, we cannot deny it that good habits do carry a positive connotation.A smile is the shortest distance between two people
Mark Twain once said, “The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter.”A smile will unconsciously pull short distance between hearts, which is the charm of a smile.So never stop smiling, even when you are sad, for someone might fall in love with your smile.Undoubtedly, it is smile that keeps us continually shortening the distance among people.When you fall down, a smile from others will bring you the power to stand up.Besides, smile is a name card which will make the people around you feel comfortable and pave the way for you to make good friends.When you feel disappointed with the life and get heartbroken with the love, just smile, it's a good medicine for your hurt soul.Were there no smile, never would we taste a happy and healthy life.Consequently, from what has been discussed above, it can be safely concluded that a smile is beneficial for us bridge gaps of social interaction and sweep disorders of human communication.On Maintaining Trust
Trust is the most frequently used word when we are talking about interpersonal relationships.However, it is hard to build trust but easy to destroy it.Therefore, how to build and maintain trust is very important for us.In my opinion, some factors play a primary role in it.First comes honesty.There’s an old saying in Chinese: once bitten, twice shy.Thus, never lie to your partners.If they find out you’re lying or cheating, the existing trust will be broken.Once broken, it’s always hard to rebuild it.Promise-keeping is the second one.If you always break your promise, you will not be trusted by others any more.Another important aspect is attitude.People with good attitude are always welcome.They show their good manners, patience, modesty, willingness to communicate and, most important of all, sincerity to others, which contributes greatly to eliminating apathy and coldness.There are, still, other influential factors.However, from my perspective, honesty, promise-keeping and good attitude stand out among them.1.more and more：越来越多
= is / are(increasing, getting increasingly, growing)
2.think：认为
=(acknowledge, hold the, consider)that
3.in my opinion：以我看来
= as for me, from my part, from my own perspective
4.popular：流行的= is / are(prevailing, prevalent)
5.but：但是
= however, although, on the contrary, nevertheless
6.because: 因为
= for, result from, due to, caused by, on account of
7.improve：提高
= enhance, promote, boost, soar
8.finish：完成= complete, fulfill, accomplish, achieve
9.fast：快地
=quickly, rapidly, in a fast speed
10.important：重要的=vital, significant, critical, crucial
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