第一篇：不背考研英语作文,作文照样拿高分!
不背考研英语作文范文，作文照样拿高分！
古语云“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”，日常学习中的大量阅读和积累可以为我们提供精美的素材，但想要在写作时信手拈来，还是需要大量的实践练习。因此我为自己制定了“三部曲”的写作方针，即每篇真题作文写三遍。这个思路是我从《考研真相》上借鉴来的，这本英语一真题上，对每年的真题作文都提供了三篇范文：模板范文、思路创新范文、语言创新范文。因为一篇好的作文需要严谨的结构和精妙的用词，虽然考场作文的用时很短，但也可以通过练习，在这两方面不断完善。
第一部：模拟考场
首先要保证自己在考场上有时间写出完整的作文，所以复习时，保证自己一篇小作文用时20分钟，大作文30分钟。基于从小写中文作文的经验，我准备看到题目后先用五分钟列一个汉语提纲，然后直接动手写。因为考场上肯定没有时间打草稿，所以复习时练习写大纲很重要，可以帮助自己明确作文主旨，做到有话可说。而且最开始很难在规定时间内写出完整的作文，有了提纲可以看出自己的思路有没有跑题。
第二部：突破思路
写完之后的作文大概会有点惨不忍睹，而且凭借自己的能力很难做到进一步优化，所以我准备写第一遍之后先参阅《考研真相》上的模板范文，主要对比写作思路（如果作文没有写完，就先对比提纲），看自己的作文可以在哪里进行优化，将需要修改的地方标注出来，写上修改原因和修改方向。
考场作文一般都采取“三段式”，第一段描述图画/图表/现象，第二段点明问题，讨论利弊/影响/原因，第三段总结全文，提出看法/观点/建议。但是在具体行文时肯定会出现各种问题，比如描述图片时没有条理性，或分析原因不够深刻，或提出建议详细等。这些就是在写第二遍时要重点规避的地方。写完第二遍之后，对照之前自己做的修改批注，看看有没有达到自己想要的效果。然后再参阅《考研真相》上的“思路创新范文”，尽量分析出文章中每句话的作用，理清范文的思路，以对比出自己在思路上的不足，并在作文上标注出来。
第三部：突破语言
写完两遍作文之后，先停下来，仔细研究《考研真相》上的“经典模板范文”和“思路创新范文”，摘录出好的短语表达和句型，并且分析句型的特殊之处和语用功能。好的句子不止是有语法亮点，也要符合作文的主题和上下文语境，才能为作文增光添彩。
然后开始写最后一遍作文，这次把重点放在提高自己的词汇表达和句式结构上，尽量用更高级的词汇替换普通的近义词，用有亮点的句型表达观点。这个任务比较困难，但是我相信自己经过之前对词汇和语法的恶补，以及通过之后写作的不断积累，一定可以不断自我提升。而且，《考研真相》上的每篇“语言创新范文”前面都有“语言突破要点”版块，从词形变化、近义词替换、句型转换等多个角度，逐段分析了“思路创新范文”中可以优化的句子，这也给我进行自我语言优化提供了方向。
词儿做是一个将词句扩展成篇章的过程，这个“三部曲”复习方法就是从词汇到句式到篇章的循序渐进的思路，我期待着自己从写作文“难以成句”到“行云流水”的那一天！
第二篇：考研英语作文怎么拿高分
考研英语作文怎么拿高分
众所周知，考研试卷满分100分，而在在考研英语的五大项目之中，阅读的分值最高，占到到满分的40分，其次是写作，占到30分。从比例上而言，阅读和写作这两大块就占据了整个考研英语的70%，其在备考过程中的重要性不言而喻。下面，【考研1号】就以《写作160篇》为例，给大家讲讲在备考过程中如何准备写作方面的备考，提高自己的写作水平？
首先，对于考研英语的写作备考，大家必须学习和掌握大量的不同话题的范文、句式、词汇及词组搭配，扩充自己知识面，只有在见多识广时才能有东西写，才能写出你想要的东西。《写作160篇》作为第一本全面涵盖当年可考话题的写作书，其精华正体现在一个“全”字上——每年都会精心筛选、分类当年全部可考话题，使得每年的考研作文话题完全不能跳出其话题圈子以外。所以，其连续7年命中考研英语作文北非偶然，而是一种必然。
很多考生在备考过程中，并没有注意到考研作文选材的一个特点：考研英语作文的选材均为当今社会的热门话题，并且十分贴近生活，从电视广告到网络，从父母与子女的关系到拥有健康的重要性，从环境保护到“乐观主义”，无不反映了当前公众最为关注的话题。所以，如何系统的了解当年的热点话题，并在平时的备考中加以练习，就显得十分重要。而《写作160篇》涵盖话题之广泛，选择范文之新颖，正好满足了广大考生扩充自己知识面，全面了解考研可考话题的需求。写作的分数高低取决于两个方面：
一、语言功底；
二、思想深度、文章结构。而第二点的提高则主要主要取决于的见多识广。因为我们谁也不知道，命题人会出哪方面的作文。我们只有全面撒网，重点培养，浏览《写作160篇》中的各种不同类型话题，多看多练，提高我们的写作能力，缩小写作的命题范围。平时对各种写作素材加以积累，准备和练习，在考试中遇到同类话题时，大家才不会惊慌，觉得话题陌生，久久没有思路，无法下笔。
其次，我们来讨论一下话题与模板到底哪个更为实用。《写作160篇》王林老师认为，对于模板的问题，应该分情况来看。如果准备考试的时间比较短，特别是对于在职考研的研友而言，准备一些80-100字的万用模版可以减轻很多的工作量，毕竟工作和考研两者都是个巨大的消耗。而对于应届或者时间比较充裕的研友来说，4-5个月的时间，完全可以突破作文，并没有必要刻意去准备模版。通过考试前的写作练习，总结出自己适用的模版，在考试时候发挥出来，既顺手又可以出彩，效果比准备现成的模版要好处许多。因为万能模范的适用范围毕竟有限，有些情况下硬套这些模版写出来的作文读起来会很不自然。总结起来，《写作160篇》的目标就是要让考生，在广泛阅读熟悉，甚至背诵记忆书中各类话题作文范文的基础上，总结出属于自己的模板，因为自己在平时的练习与积累中总结出来的模板，肯定比照搬别人的模板用起来顺手嘛。并且，也避免了往年考研英语作文中出现的几大问题。
问题
一、模板中的句型套用不正确，不完整。
比如，我们在书信结尾的时候会说I am looking forward to hearing from you.而有的学生却把这句话写成了I am looked forward to hear from you.这种现象非常普遍，可见，某些使用万能模板的学生，其写作态度并不是很端正，很认真。而《写作160篇》则强调的是在平时的备考中，通过对题材的了解，用自己的方式写出属于自己的句子，注意语法点，如此一来，考生在平时的写作中，不仅加强了对话题的了解，还会在写作中加强了自己的语法水平，绝对不会犯这种低级的语法错误。
问题
二、模板中的句型和实际写作内容不匹配。
比如：有的图画作文第二段要求根据图画所表达的含义进行深层次的论证，而学生套用的句型却是第二段写对比的句型，显然是没有正确理解模板句型使用的语言背景。再比如：小作文的摘要，是要根据汉语文章归纳出中心内容进行英语写作，这个一般都是客观的描述，而学生却用了一个写图画作文的模板，通篇都是“我”认为，这如何又能得高分呢？这也正是《写作160篇》屡次强调，大家要在平时的备考中拓展自己的话题写作素材量，争取了解每类话题的写作思路和行文方式，总结出属于自己的模板的原因。
问题
三、模板套用千篇一律，没有新意。
再好的模板，如果所有的学生都在用也，它也就变成了一张白纸，一杯白开水，读来没有任何亮点，寡然无味。而这个错误也正是很多急功近利的学生容易犯的。所以只背诵模板是不行的。我们需要的是正是对各类话题的综合把握，在范文的基础上写出属于自己的东西。《写作160篇》中的高分佳句所提倡的“举一反三”观点，正是缘于这一原因。写作时要“理论联系了实际”，首先要练习考研英语写作真题。只有练了真题才能对于出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。不要一味的模仿范文写作，自己要在书的经典里提取精华，学会自己创作。
再次、怎样使用很多写作书中的范文，是很多考生所面临的一个问题？很多考生会选择历年真题的范文和一些与写真题作文相近的文章狂背，但最终发现，在写作时并没有实际用到。对此，《写作160篇》提倡，应该多读，多记，多背。多读：多思考《写作160篇》中范文对于话题的剖析方法和行文思路，写作的常用词汇，记住其中一些比较好的用法。如果复习时只是一味埋头苦练的话，那只能提高写作速度而在写作水平上不一定会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章，才会知道应该往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看历年考生高分样文。看的时候不要只看懂就行，而要着眼于三个方面：高分范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的，运用了哪些论证手法；范文是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段；范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。能够举一反三，仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话，那么看一篇就会有一篇的受益。
多背，不能只是懵懂的瞎背，要有注重。应该多背《写作160篇》中总结的文章框架、精彩句构、点睛语言。对于范文的背诵也不能全面撒网，没有计划的乱背一气，《写作英语160篇》中篇和下篇范文部分的内容对于学习的要求也是不尽相同的。“经典必背”强调的一是注意此类话题的可靠性很大，其次就是要注意对于该部分话题的模板框架，行文思路和内容素材的背诵记忆，学会活用框模板，注重素材的积累，同时要适当加入自己的内容。“重点预测”部分内容，不要一字不差的照抄无误，而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词，长句，而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达，这样才能真正显示写作的水平。所以这部分的要求是要考生着重积累文中的常用短语或者词组，高分佳句，以备写作之用。“熟悉浏览”则要求考生扩充自己的知识面，对这部分话题加以熟悉了解，做到考试时知道怎么写，加入那些素材。
最后、我不得不提的是《写作160篇》除了话题较全之外的其他两大闪光点：书中的“考生习作点评”和增值服务的“在线作文修改点评”。众所周知，作文光靠背是不行的，毕竟作文是要自己写出来的。那么平时应该怎样写，写完之后又怎样确实地了解自己现阶段的写作水平呢？
《写作160篇》提醒大家模板只是给了考生一个写作的思路和框架，但是要想获得高分，就要充分了解各类话题，扩充自己的知识面和写作素材。在框架之上填加自己的内容，把模板变成自己的东西，只有文章中有自己的内容，才会吸引判卷老师的眼球！在每年的12月前应该每周写一篇作文并且要把每一篇写好。临近考试，可以按照规定时间写作，此时写作的题目要广泛，对于《写作160篇》中的各种话题都要写一些，以增强适应性。可是写完之后，考生该如何进行自测呢？《写作160篇》为大家提供了两个途径：
一、《写作160篇》书中包含的“考生习作点评”部分。
考研英语作文要求大家能“知己知彼”，只有深刻的了解了别人的写作水平之后，自己才会有压力，才能争取做到改正自己现存的其他人也常犯的错误，进而超越别人，在考研写作中超出大多数考生的写作水平，获取高分。《写作160篇》中“考生习作点评”的原文收集了2012版《写作160篇》读者的写作练习，从构思框架到遣词造句等多个角度对其进行系统性的点评，明确指出读者练习中的各类错误、出错原因以及修改意见，有助于2013考生有针对性地进行比较和提高。本部分包含写作原文、写作点评（各段点评、总体点评、修改意见、参考分数）和修改展示三方面。习作原文的作者是2012备考学生，其基础和大家都是处于一个水平线上，这样大家就不仅了解同一水平线上考生的写作水平，同时也能和自己的写作水平作比较，便于自己的作文水平自测，以获得不断的提高。
二、《写作160篇》增值服务为大家提供的“在线作文修改点评”。
虽然有部分同学意识到了作文训练的重要作用，在平时也进行了一些训练，但是面对自已“难产出来”的文章，怎么看怎么满意，却不知里面充满了很多基本的语法错误，以及和考研英语写作要求格格不入的内容。而《写作160篇》提供的“在线作文修改点评”栏目中，参与作文批改的老师这些年接触了大量的考研学生，深刻地了解了考研作文的要求、阅卷老师评分的批准、考生易犯的错误，据此会提出更为专业、有效的提升方案，能帮考生在短时间内快速提高成绩。《写作160篇》提醒大家：练习写作要有决心、信心和恒心。要日积月累、细水长流、坚持不断。要以滴水穿石的精神去背记、改写和套用。同时要讲究方法。
第三篇：万能的拿高分的考研英语作文黄金
万能的拿高分的考研英语作文黄金模板
列举了50条最常规但又最“给力”的考研英语作文模板，看看哪些你已经放入自己的模板体系了
一、用于开头的句式
1.With the rapidly growing popularity of …, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.例句：With the rapidly growing popularity of computers in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.2.Recently, sth./the problem of…has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.例句：Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.3.In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…
例句：In the past few years, there has been a decline in the number of species.4.It is a traditional practice to…in our society.例句：It is a traditional practice for young people to be financially dependent on their parents for anything like marriage and housing.5.No one would deny that/everyone would agree that/there is no doubt that…
例句：Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its leading role in all senses
6.The birth/invention of…has made an enormous/essential difference to… But is does not mean that…
例句：The birth of the computer has made an essential difference to the human progress.But it does not mean that this wonder dose no threat to our society.7.Sth.is just the same as…/is compared to…/is like…
例句：Life in the middle of marriage if often compared to wire walking, for in the early years spouses attract each other and in late years they need each other.8.One of the great men once said that…/There is an old saying that…
例句：A gifted American psychologist once said that it is an illusion to believe in the Sunday-school truth—more comfort, more happiness.9.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about…is under way in China.Some people believe that…, whereas others argue that…
例句：Nowadays, a heated debate about whether one should step forward bravely in the event of crime is under way in China.Some people believe that one should step
forward bravely no matter how dangerous it is, whereas others argue that one should put his or her own safety above anything else.10.When it comes to…, most people contend that…, but other people consider that…
例句：When it comes to fake commodities, most people contend that people should battle against the falsehood of the fakes, but other people consider that buying fake commodities means nothing but “unlucky” which is hard to avoid..二、用于结尾的句式
1.It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to… 例句：It is hoped that we should pay more attention to the problems of unemployment.2.Only in this way/only when/only through…, will/can we…
例句：It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.3.As long as…, we will be able to…/the problem is bound to…
例句：As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.4.In the course of time/In a long run/In the long term, sth.is more likely/bound/sure to…
例句：In a long run, the practice of birth control is believed to do a great benefit to the future of China.5.In a word, there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that…in time to come.例句：In a word, there is every chance that this wise move in economic construction will acquire a broader significance in time to come.6.Anything/anyone that/who…will have to…
例句：Anyone who has a strong bias against China will have to threat her with increased respect.7.It is high time that…
例句：It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the economic development.8.No surprising/ It is apparent that the task of…demands/requires/deserves immediate/serious/considerable attention/consideration.例句：It is, therefore, apparent that the task of fighting against corruption requires considerable consideration now.9.We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future…
例句：We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future, no child is forced out of school because of poverty.10.My suggestion is that…;otherwise…
例句：My suggestion is that effective measures should be taken to check population growth;otherwise, the potential consequences are unimaginable.三、用于过渡的句式
1.Although lots of people follow the fashion/trend, I still set my heart on…
例句：Although lots of people follow the fashion, I still set my heart on its negative effect on our society.2.For one thing… For another… As a third benefit/disadvantage…
例句：For one thing, some excellent students can take full advantage of the holiday to awaken their personal interests such as painting, sightseeing and so on.For another, it can provide more chances for some poor students to help make two ends meet and to get prepared for the future by taking part-time jobs.As a third benefit, for those who are far from good at a certain subject, there is a golden opportunity of catching up with other.3.It is no easy/simple task/job to furnish/identify/find every reason/cause for sth., but/while, on the whole, two/some factors shout louder/ weigh heavier than others/stand out from others.例句：It is no easy job to find every reason for the increase in the number of teenagers who run away from their homes, but, on the whole, two factors shout louder than others.First of all, ….Second, …
4.In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of sth., sth.else can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/toward the solution for the problem of…
例句：In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.5.It is true/obvious that sth can’t compete/be compared with sth else in…, but sth still enjoys/secures/possesses distinct/substantial advantage over sth else.例句：It is obvious that radio cannot compete with television in visuality, but it still possesses substantial advantages over television.(One of these is…Another…Still another…)
6．But if…, it is easy/not difficult/hard to see/find/discover that…
例句：But if they adjust their frame of mind a little in the other direction, it is not hard for them to find that life is just as promising as before.7．Superficially/On the surface/At first glance/In appearance, the issue in question seems….But in fact/in substance/on close examination, …
例句：At first glance, the western-type democracy seems superior to any other types.But on close examination, it does not entitle every citizen of the same nation to the equal freedom to act.8．Those in favor of the issue in question argue/contend/hold/maintain/claim that….But what they fail to consider/analyze/see/find out is that…
例句：Those in favor of euthanasia(安乐死)contend that its practice can benefit both the patient and his family.But what they fail to consider is that euthanasia may be taken advantage of for some evil or hidden purposes.9．My our look on/choice of/participation in/devotion to…stems from/derives from/results from some/several chief factors.例句：My choice of the career stems from several chief factors.First… Second…
10．A variety of/Quite a few factors have led me to do…
例句：Quite a few factors have led me to form the habit of reading
四、描述漫画的句式
1.The cartoon/picture briefs/depicts/shows…
例句：The cartoon briefs the history of commercial fishing in the 20th century.2.In the picture, …
例句：In the picture, an American girl looks so pleased in the richly decorated Chinese national costumes.3.Looking at the picture, …
例句：Looking at the picture, many people cannot help laughing.…
4.This is what the picture indicates。
例句：It is not unusual for Chinese children to get money from their parents, grandparents or relatives during the Spring Festival.… This is what the picture indicates.5.The two pictures here illustrate…
例句：The two pictures here illustrate how a flower in a greenhouse is destroyed when exposed to a storm.6.In the first picture, ….While in the second one, …
例句：In the first picture, a lonely small boat, in spite of the good catch, does not disturb the fishes that are swimming leisurely.While in the second one, the sea is over-crowded with fishing boats, and a lonely fish, desperately trying to escape, finds no place to hide.7.As depicted in the picture/As we can see in the picture/As can been seen from the picture/As is shown by the drawing, …
例句：As can be seen from the picture, the car breaks stops on the way and cannot move any further.8.It is most likely that by drawing the pictures, the artist intends…
例句：It is most likely that by drawing the pictures, the artist intends not only to tell us the story of fish but also to set us thinking more about nature.五、图表作文的句式
1.According to the figures shown in the table/graph we can see/conclude that… 例句：According to the figures shown in the table, we can see that great changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from 1988 to 1998.2.We can see/We have noted/It can be seen from the table/chart/graph that… 例句：We have noted from the graph that there is a wide gap between the top ten universities both of China and of the world.3.The graph/table/chart shows/indicates/reveals/points out that…
例句：The chart reveals that the number of road accidents is spiraling upward every year as more and more highways are constructed all over China.4.As is shown/can be seen in the chart/graph/diagram released by the government…
例句：As we can see in the diagram released by the government, the rapid growth of population has resulted in the extinction of many wildlife species.5.After considering the information in the graph/table/chart, we might conclude that…
例句：After considering the information in the graph, we might conclude that the energy structure in rural areas has been greatly improved over the past 15 years.
第四篇：考研英语作文万能--原创,容易高分,不千篇一律
总是从心里认为学历关系不大。后来我一个以前严重鄙视考研的学长，后来竟用了仅半年时间，考上厦门大学法硕，我给他发了条信息说想考研，他给我回的原话“个人认为，考研只能让你升值，而不会减少你的价值，再说三个月时间你也做不了什么大事，考后也一样找工作，多给自己条备胎”（我一直保存着）遂十月中旬开始准备考研。
接着就是买英语黄皮书、专业书，政治真题，在这里提醒下师弟师妹们，一定要买最好的、一针见血的资料哦，一些资料虽然也很出名，但浪费你宝贵时间同时，学不到什么东西。比如我当时买了一本很出名的政治真题，后来发现里面的选择题讲解很多很罗嗦，但看完后你依然学不到什么，其他3个选项为啥错还是云里雾里更别提举一反三了。后来改选了高教版的政治真题，这本书的讲解一针见血，做过一遍的选择题，基本不会再错，因为她已经把你讲得理解透彻了。
下面就具体说说吧。
3个月时间再去一点点背单词也不现实，于是我总体分析了英语试卷题型：完形10分、阅读60分（算新题型、翻译），作文30分，发现完形完全没必要花多少时间，它主要考查高级词汇、近义（形）词、语法，对我而言下在完形下功夫真是大海捞针，每个空才0.5分，再说提高了阅读理解这个也就不难了。
阅读理解可是大部头，从实质说，考研英语就两个题型：阅读和作文，完形、新题型、翻译都是变相的阅读理解。十月中下旬那会拿到阅读理解我也是很头疼，好多单词不认识，文章根本读不懂，即使勉强能看懂题目也对不了几个，索要我的模板作为自己模板方向的请加企鹅二四六九五七七一三八，仔细研读了前辈的经验后我是这么做的：怀着一颗特别特别特别虔诚的心，踏踏实实进行精读：
（1）第一遍先像考试一样，精力高度集中做第一遍（最好用铅笔做，在黄皮书薄的那本上）
（2）第二遍，再通读一遍文章，把不认识的单词用笔标出，再思考下你选择的答案
（3）对答案，自己找出和命题人思路不同之处，实在想不明白就看答案详解，去琢磨详解里的每句话，把错的原因注在旁边
（4）在黄皮书（厚的那本）划出不认识的单词，背诵时看不到的地方注明词义（5）第二天晨读时朗诵N遍这篇文章，顺便带着记生词
（6）如此循环往复，在近3个月时间里，反复做了4、5遍黄皮书阅读理解吧，每一遍的答案都用铅笔住在旁边了，最关键是要琢磨，琢磨命题人思路。
我发誓我对阅读理解绝对是很虔诚，很踏实，考完一对答案就傻眼了（我把阅读答案抄在准考证后面了），第一篇对了2个，第二篇对了1个，后两篇相当于没做，全军覆没，还不如都蒙一个选项呢，至少还能对一两个（因为答案ABCD几乎是均分的），完形全涂的C（对了4个，共得2分）当时感觉真是万念俱灰啊这3个月功夫白费了。。后来出了分数让我很惊讶，居然过了法学线了，算了一下，阅读理解得的6分加上排序题的6分（排序对了3个）完形2分，总共才14分，翻译肯定拿不到几分，汉语句子都写得不通顺，那剩下的30分从哪里来？!对，就是作文太给力了，作文是拿了27分以上。
后来我把英语作文模板拿给考研辅导班老师看，他说这样的作文肯定是高分。下面就来说说怎么下的功夫吧。从考研一开始，我就借了同学近20本不同的作文书，每天下午多于2个小时的时间，做一篇大作文模板。在这里说下，也许有许多人反对模板，但对于我这样英语不好人来说，很难在考场上写出一篇潇洒的作文来，只能东拼西凑。还不如有篇自己的模板，但这模板绝对不能是作文书、辅导班里千篇一律的那种哦。
第一段是描述图画，解释涵义，最后说明这幅图意义深远，惹人深思（出题的哪幅图不惹人深思呢）用的形容词、修饰词很多，总体说是词藻华丽、单词写起来就很复杂很长，不多见，但让人感觉水平很高（当然了，20多本作文书找出来的呢）。
第二段是有个承接上段的主题句，接着分析图画原因，索要我的模板作为自己
模板方向的请加企鹅二四六九五七七一三八，总体分为图画直接原因、国家社会原因、个人原因、法制原因、意识问题、客观主观原因、教育体制等等（在考场上，哪个符合题意抽出哪个用）这段每个句子都是复合句，有适量的形容词、副词修饰，连词用的是for one thing，for another，最后有句和下文衔接的比喻句“如果我们对类似现象睁只眼闭只眼话，噩梦将降临”这个比喻句用于图画是消极的，积极的图画就换成另一个比喻句“图画的积极寓意对于我们，就像鸟儿离不开翅膀，像鱼儿离不开水”因为列举的原因比较多，完全可以选出很贴题的，每个句子都是很长的复合句，连词衔接得当，又有适当的形容词、副词修饰，写在卷子上不会有套用模板的感觉。
第三段，是写措施。措施要对应第二段的原因。开头是承上启下，大意是如果不改正就会造成公共…的缺失造成不可挽回的…损失，建设和谐…就会成为空谈。措施就是图画直接措施、法制措施、政府措施、媒体监督、群众监督、提高人们意识等等，是对应着第二段原因来的。用的连词是on the hand，on the other hand，从连词看只有两条，因为句子比较长、复杂，最起码包含了四条措施。最后是个很美的结尾句。
四段，用于不适合写措施的作文，一般用于是好事的图画。索要我的模板作为自己模板方向的请加企鹅二四六九五七七一三八，开头也是和第二段衔接，这段的举了个与图画寓意一样但更深刻的例子，主要意思是这样的好事弘扬的多角度意义及怎么弘扬。结尾和第三段结尾一样。
模板总体结构就是是什么（第一段）、为什么（第二段）、怎么办（第三段）、意义（第四段）。
考场上根据图画内容，灵活选择段落，一般寓意是好事就用一二、四段，坏事需要写整改措施的把第四段换为第三段。
考试时我是在聊城二中，没暖气那个冷啊，真的是冻得手写不出字来，提醒师弟师妹买暖贴用真的很管用哦，打开试卷作文一看是乱扔垃圾的图画，环保问题，我就很轻松的我模板前三段写上去了，自己加了点关于环保的词。作文写完看了下表，吓了一跳，竟然只用了十分钟的样子，同学都说英语时间很紧，可我做完整个卷子居然还剩下40多分钟，可能由于我平时就用复印的标准答题卡每天默写一遍我的模板，所以考场上一切都是轻车熟路，甚至哪行写到哪个句子都心里有数，我就用剩余时间对排序题精读，结果幸运5个对了3个，错的2个是颠倒顺序了（在这提醒下师弟师妹，排序实在不确定2个的顺序，可以都选一样的，这样保证能对一个，总比我这样颠倒顺序不得分强）
我当时在作文上下这么大功夫是有意识的，因为本来时间就那么短，不可能去按部就班的背单词，能记住10年真题生词就不错了，阅读理解不是一下子就能提升上去的，是个积淀，那么最容易提分的就是作文了，不需要太多的积淀，大小作文各有篇万能模板（当然是要下了很大功夫的哦），我个人不赞成压中作文话题之类的，因为即使把话题告诉你，现场也未必写出低分高的符合改卷老师眼光的美文来。
再来用模板套下近十年大作文真题吧，2010年话题是各国文化融合，寓意是好事，用模板的第一段描述图画绝对是比较有深度的，第二段题目要求是阐述图画涵义，用模板的第四段的框架阐述中国文化对世界文化渗透的意义，世界文化吸收中国文化瑰宝意义，第三段题目要求发表自己看法，可以用模板的第二段分析原因也可以用第三段写措施，当然也可以合用，从原因里抽出国际原因、改革开放经济社会发展原因、人们的意识提高、网络的发展等等比较贴题的原因，也可以写怎样弘扬这种文化交融精神，政府文化部门、媒体、学校、网络管理等等要怎么做才能继续推进文化融合。
同理，2009年话题是网络的近与远，人与人疏远寓意是坏事，完全就可以用模板的前三段，第三段阐述自己观点里就写整改措施，如何拉近网络时代人与人关系。2008年话题是合作，寓意是好事，那就是用模板的一二段，模板第四段，举例就举国家间合作的例子，然后写合作的好处及怎么合作。
2007年话题自信与挑战，不能把自己想的渺小也不能把对手想的强大，寓意中
性了些，就用模板一二三段，第二段从几个原因中抽出个人的原因、教育的原因、意思问题等等原因，第三段针对这些原因选出相应措施。
2006年话题是偶像崇拜问题，2005年话题是个别子女不赡养老人，2003年话题是温室的花朵经不起风雨，这些都是寓意坏事一面，题目没有特殊要求的话就用模板一二三段。对于题目有特别要求的比如2001年话题是人类过度捕捞，题目要求第一段描述图画，第二段举例，第三段写措施，那就是模板的一、四、三段了。
2004年是终点又是新起点，寓意是积极的，题目有特殊要求，除了描述图画、理解画面含义外，要求用若干具体事例支撑自己观点，对于这类寓意积极的题目，一般不写措施了，就用模板的一、二、四段了，同样，2002年题目跨文化交流也一样。小作文模板简单些，记着要熟知各种格式哦，小作文格式最重要。
总之，英语作文题目要求一般就是描述图画、阐述涵义、分析原因、写出自己看法，模板就是要涵盖这几点，用不变应万变。
关于专业课，真题和你所导师的研究方向可以指明出题方向，我就在学校网站上搜到我们出题那导师是该校文化部部长，负责宣传，索要我的模板作为自己模板方向的请加企鹅二四六九五七七一三八，研究方向也是和宣传有关，我就从学校指定的专业书上找与他研究方向一致的内容，并搜到他的论文、出的书籍，结果150分的专业课，竟考了90分的他研究方向的内容。
关于作息时间我是这样的：早上6点开始在图书馆晨读，内容是英语、专业课，困了就做会题提神，下午是英语时间（因为下午考英语）做阅读，整理作文模板，晚上去外面背书，累了就做题，一般都是专业课、英语。22点回到宿舍后背一个小时政治（感激我的室友，容忍我在宿舍整天朗读枯燥的政治），23点到临睡前做政治选择题（做选择题不容易睡着嘛）困了就上网看考研论坛里的经验分享，跟前辈讨高效学习的经验。当然这也是个人对考研一点感悟，只是在做完考研报告后，应聊大考研师弟
师妹的要求写给他们的，不同见解者勿乱留言！
最后提醒下师弟师妹政治复习一定要抓好选择题，因为选择题分数占一半，也容易短时间内提分，大题分数拉不开多少，不要整天都把精力放在记大题上哦，选择题得分不高，政治肯定不会得高分。
第五篇：考研英语作文高分必备
考研英语作文高分必备
1． 开头超强公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：
As everyone knows, No one can deny that„ 2． 开头超强公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
Honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that „ 结尾超强公式
1． 结尾超强公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„ 2． 结尾超强公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recoMMend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作的“七项基本原则”
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
六、多变句式原则
1）加法（串联）
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友„可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。
举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go, Why he goes away„
5）附加（多此一举）
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！文章主体段落三大杀手锏
一、举实例
思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：
To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example
二、做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；
世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语：
相似的比较：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „
三、换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语：
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
领航名师墨东博：考研英语作文模板--国有企业
As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces.Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that the intact bowl, as a symbol of soly-invested companies , overwhelms the broken bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce companies, profoundly indicates that it is time that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO when facing soly-invested companies abroad.To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued,it is car industry that is meant.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out.For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly ?invested companies were sweeping into domestic market.For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above.Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture.It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned companies.On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process.On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform.Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.一、要求：考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题卡2上作答。满分10分。
注意事项：
1）格式：称呼，结尾，署名
2）简明扼要，清楚明确。
3）遵照要求，内容齐全。
4）言语得体，真心诚意。
二、备忘录
备忘录是一种录以备忘的公文。在公文函件中，它的等级是比较低的，主要用来提醒、督促对方，或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。在业务上，它一般用来补充正式文件的不足。它的内容可以分为以下几项：
书端（Heading）
收文人的姓名、头衔、地址（Addressee's Name, Title, Address）
称呼(Salutation)
事因(Subject)
正文（Body）
结束语（Complimentary Close）
署名（Signature）
写作注意事项
1、书端部分包括发文机关的名称、地址、发文日期，有的还包括电报挂号、电传号、电话号码等。许多机关有自己特制的信笺，在写书端时，其格式和标点符号的使用与一般信件的相同。
2、称呼从左边顶格写起，对一般机关、团体的负责人一般用 Dear Sir，对政府官员可用Sir。
3、正文、结束语和署名等项与一般信件的格式相同。“事因”一项目前采用得较少。
范文
Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory.MEMO
August 16, 2005
To: The leader of student service department
From: Li Ming
Subject: Telephone
Dear Sir，I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each dormitory.As a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus.We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication.I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.Regards.Yours,Li Ming
三、摘要
文章摘要是对所写文章主要内容的精炼概括。美国人称摘要为“Abstract”，而英国人则喜欢称其为“Summary”。
通常国际刊物要求所要刊登的文章字数，包括摘要部分不超过1万字。而对文章摘要部分的字数要求则更少。因此写摘要时，应用最为简练的语言来表达论文之精华。论文摘要的重点应放在所研究的成果和结论上。
国际会议要求的论文摘要的字数不等，一般为200字-500字。而国际刊物要求所刊登的论文摘要的字数通常是100字-200字。摘要的位置一般放在一篇文章的最前面，内容上涵盖全文，并直接点明全旨。语言上要求尽量简炼。摘要通常多采用第三人称撰写。
科学书籍、论文和学术报告一般都附有内容摘要，这样可以节省读者的时间，使他们不必读完整个文章就能够了解它的主要内容。书籍摘要，一般放在封二或封三；论文和学术报告的摘要，一般放在正文前面。摘要应做到简明扼要，切题，能独立成文，使读者能准确地了解书籍的要义。写摘要时，最好用第三人称的完整的陈述句，文长一般不超过200个词。
英文摘要分类
摘要分陈述性的（Descriptive）和资料性的（Informational）两类。陈述性摘要只陈述书籍或文章的主题，不介绍内容。资料性的摘要除了介绍主题外，还应介绍文章的要点和各个要点的主要内容。它可以包括三个组成部分：
①点明主题，解析文章或书籍的目的或意图；
②介绍主要内容，使读者迅速了解文章或书籍的概貌；
③提出结论或建议，以供读者参考。
英文摘要常见句型
1）This paper deals with...2）This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3）This eassy presents knowledge that...4）This thesis discusses...5）This thesis analyzes...6）This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8）This article gives an overview of...9）This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10）This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents up to date information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This eassy represents the preceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...摘要题型写作要点：
① 动笔之前，考生一定要认真仔细地阅读所给原文，弄懂原文大意，掌握原文要点。
② 摘要的长度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一，考试时应遵守规定的字数限制。
③ 在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文。
④ 摘要应与原文的观点保持一致，并且仍按原文的逻辑顺序排列。
⑤ 重点反映主要观点，删除细节。
⑥ 简化从句，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。
⑦ 检查与修改时，考生应重点检查是否遗漏了原文的要点或包含了细节。
摘要题型写作实例
① 试题题目
Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one’s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.② 原文要点：
1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors
2.avoid talking about death
③ 参考摘要：
People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)
开头与结尾用语
开头：Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear sir or Madam, Dear President, Dear Sales Manager, Dear Dean, Dear Professor, To whom it may concern, Dear Mr.Smith，结尾：Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours, Yours sincerely, Best regards, Best wishes, lovingly yours, sincerely yours，l 正文第一句
朋友：Hi!How are you?
Hello!I hope everything is fine.Hi!How is everything going?
如不认识：I was a guest at your hotel from June 25 to 28.I am a student at your college, enrolled in the computer course.致谢：Thank you for your invitation to the international medical conference on October 11.Thank you for your letter dated October 11.解释写信原因：I am writing to advise you for the loss of my credit card.I’d like to inquire about course details.I am writing to complain about/of the poor service at your restaurant.l 结尾段
发出请求：I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Please reply to us at your earliest convenience.表达歉意：once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies once again.提出投诉：I expect to hear from you very soon.Please give this matter your immediate attention.常用信件写作介绍
1． 投诉信
开头：自我介绍，交代投诉内容，表明本信的目的和要求
正文：说明情况，讲清利害，分析利弊。告诉对方你因此受到的伤害或不便，提出解决问题的建议，表明希望如何处理。
结尾：表达希望问题得到迅速恰当解决的强烈愿望。希望尽快得到满意的答复。
常用句型：
I am writing to you to complain about….I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at…
I beg to call your attention to the fact that…
I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred…, calling for some remedial action.I very much regret to have to inform you that…
I am totally/completely disappointed/upset to find…
I find it awful/quite distressing that…
My experience in…on…(date)shocked me.I can hardly put up with it.There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, there is….For another, …..I can hardly stand/bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.To improve the situation/solve the above problem, it is advisable for you to take the following measures:…
I look forward to a day when we could really enjoy a more efficient service.I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumer’s Association.I request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.应注意：
1）礼貌用词，不能过激。
2）提出希望/要求，句型要多样化。
3）反映问题集中，不要联想其他。
Ex.1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem.2． 咨询信、请求信、说明信
开头：简要告知身份，表明写信原因或请求
正文：详细阐明询问、请求的具体内容、希望获得的信息。说明信应写明原因、实情及希望对方做些什么。强调所需信息/帮助的重要性。（按要求）
结尾：表达谢意，希望得到对方回复、帮助或合作。
常用句型：
I would like to inquire about some information concerning/regarding….I am writing in the hope that you can…
I am writing because I would like to…
Needless to say, your approval of my request will be beneficial not only to myself but to the company.Could you tell me what I have to do to…
It is sincerely requested that you…
My first question is that …
Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.If additional information is required, please advise me at your early convenience.Should I send you copies of my qualification in advance?
I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive to my final decision.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.应注意：
1）请求内容/信息一定要详尽，具体。
2）语气要客气，委婉。
3）语言直接，具体，简明。
Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to
1)describe the book you want to borrow，2)specify by when the book will be returned, and
3)express your gratitude.3． 道歉信。
开头：简单交代对何事进行道歉。
正文：解释事情发生的原因，消除误会或矛盾。
结尾：再次表示遗憾何歉意，表明愿意补救的愿望，提出建议或安排。
常用句型：
I must apologize to you for…
I am very sorry that..I regret to inform you that I will not be able to…
I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.I sincerely hope you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.I believe you can understand that I have not intended to hurt you.I owe you an apology.It is my fault.I am to blame for this unpleasant thing.Please pardon/excuse/forgive me.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.I will try my utmost not to make such a stupid mistake again.I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.I hope you will kindly forgive my lapse of attention.I am so sorry to have put you to/into so much trouble.应注意：
1）事情原委要解释清楚。
2）说明情况与理由，实事求是，简明扼要。
3）态度诚恳。
4）用词委婉，语气温和，得体。
Ex.You have invited a friend over to have dinner with you one night, but just before the dinner you received an urgent phone call from your office and you had to leave immediately.Write a letter of apology to your friend.4． 感谢信
开头：表达谢意，提及受到的帮助。
正文：回忆该帮助，高度评价/赞扬对方，表达当时的心情感受。
结尾：再次表达谢意，提出回报希望。
常用句型：
I am grateful/thankful to you for…
I am much obliged to you for your help.I shall always appreciate the assistance you have given me.I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.It was most thoughtful and generous of you to send me such a beautiful and fancy gift.Thoughtful considerate considerable
It’s very kind of you to help us.I hope you can know how much I appreciate your hospitality and your many kindnesses to me.Hostility
But for your help, I would not..If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that..Thanks from the bottom of my heart for…
With thanks from every one of us and best wishes to you.Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.应注意：
1）开头要直截了当。
2）表明诚意，避免空洞。
3）态度热情
Ex.You got sick just a week before the final examinations and were sent to a hospital.One nurse treated you very well and you recovered soon.Write a letter of appreciation to the nurse(Miss Smith).Dear Miss Smith，I was just at your hospital when I got sick before the final examinations.First, I thanks for you could treat me very well and let me recovered soon.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I’m afraid that I couldn’t pass the exam.Thank you for the bottom of my heart for your help and service.Dear Miss Smith，I hope you can know how much I appreciate your kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.I got sick just a week before the final examination.I was so worried that I couldn’t take part in the examination.It was just you that encouraged me to face the illness bravely.So I recovered soon, and I got good results in my final examination.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid I can’t have recovered so soon and achieved such good results.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you.Sincerely yours，Dear Miss Smith，I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that I would be still in hospital now.I got sick just a week before the exam.You treated me well and I recovered soon.Now I pass the exam.But for your kindness help, I would not have passed the exam.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.Yours sincerely，Dear Miss Smith，I was a patient of yours one week ago, and I write the letter to you to show my appreciation for your help.It was near the final exam then, and without your hospitable and generous help, I couldn’t have recovered so soon, let alone to get a high mark on the exam.I shall always appreciate the help you’d offered me and I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when opportunity arises.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.Best wishes，Sincerely yours，邀请信
开头：开门见山，说明目的。
正文：邀请内容（活动性质，地点，时间，日期），有关要求与希望。
结尾：重申对方参加的重要性，希望尽快回复。
常用句型：
I should be much pleased if you would come to our party on Friday the 15th at 6.I am pleased to invite you to participate in …to be held from…to….in..I feel it a great honor if you could..It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…
We would be greatly honored if you could come…
I am writing to invite you to…
I am particularly anxious to have you join us.It’s a long time since I have had the pleasure of seeing you and I do hope you can come.We hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.I will cover all the expenses involved.应注意：
1）用词清晰，简明。
2）邀请内容清楚。
5． 求职信
开头：说明信息来源，表明写信目的 正文：提供个人资料，询问相关问题。
结尾：表达愿望，提供联系方式，表示感谢。
常用句型：
I have read your advertisement in…for a(position/post), and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position.I wish to apply for the post mentioned in your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper.I wish to apply for a position with your company.I myself like the job very much and I think my personality is well suited to working as a ….Honest, trust-worthy, reliable, enthusiastic, diligent, bright, smart, careful, patient, responsible, efficient, productive, versatile, open-minded, optimistic，I am confident that my experience and ability will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirement of your position.Born in…in.., I graduated from….University majoring in …..I have been working in…since my graduation, and I have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was ….And currently I am working for…
I intend to give up my present post in order to get a more challenging opportunity.With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than 4,000.I shall be very much obliged if you will offer me an opportunity for an interview.I am looking forward with great interest to hearing from you soon regarding my application.应注意：
1）适当展示自己（经历，才能）
2）不要言他
3）语言明确清楚，流露自信。
6． 推荐信
开头：开门见山，表明关系。
正文：称赞被推荐人（举例说明），客观介绍其相关能力，突出表现、性格与人品
结尾：作出保证，提出希望，表示感谢。
常用句型：
I am very glad to recommend you a former student of mine, Mr./Miss… to be a candidate for…
I am writing to recommend…
I have great pleasure to provide a letter for recommendation for Mr./Miss…
With reference to your advertised position, I have the pleasure to say that he is the just person you are looking for.He has proved to be industrious, responsible and skillful in carrying out his assignment.Besides being thoroughly honest and reliable he showed an unusual quickness and ability in…
I hope the above information will help you to know…
If you need any further information about his qualification, please do not hesitate to contact me.If further information about him/her is required, please do not hesitate to let me know/contact me
In view of his/her previous achievements in…, I am firmly convinced that Mr./Miss.., will make a successful graduate student/staff member.I would be most grateful if you would consider my recommendation and kindly offer him a…
应注意：
1）开门见山，简明扼要。
2）举例说明，客观叙述。
7． 表扬信
开头：身份简介，提及感谢的人，事。
正文：叙述经过，详细介绍值得表扬之处，表达感受
结尾：提出祝愿与希望
常用句型：
I am writing to tell you how highly I think of…
I am writing because I appreciate very much what Mr./Miss…from your company has done.I am greatly impressed by….What he has done shows that…
He deserves praise for what he has done.I am greatly inspired by…
It is your good service as well as excellent food that help you set up a world reputation.For this reason, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks and hope that your company will have a brighter future.应注意：
1）叙述经过，明确具体。
2）上升到一个高度。
3）语言诚恳。
8． 祝贺信
开头：开门见山，说明消息来源
正文：回忆过去，表明感受，展望未来，提出建议。
结尾：表达祝愿
常用句型：
What exciting/thrilling news!
It’s good/sensational news.I was delighted/thrilled to hear/to receive the news that ….It’s the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.I congratulate you on/upon your success.Congratulations and all good/best wishes.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on…
Permit me to congratulate you…
We want you to know how happy we were when…
It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…
Wish you all the happiness in the world.I hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life/career.All the luck in the world to you!
Best of luck to you!
范文：
Ex.1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem
Dear manager，I was a guest/customer at your restaurant last Saturday.I wish to refer you to the incident that happened that day, calling for your immediate attention to the matter.It shocked me when I found a fly in a dish in the middle of our meal.I could hardly bear it.I felt sick.If it happens again, I am convinced that no one will come to eat here any more.It is advisable for you to tidy up/ clean up your kitchen as soon as possible.Please give me your immediate attention to this matter.Sincerely yours，***
Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to
1）describe the book you want to borrow，2）specify by when the book will be returned, and
3）express your gratitude.Dear Jones，I am writing to ask for your help in lending me a book.Recently I’ve been busy preparing my graduate thesis, and therefore have been reading and researching numerous books and references.One of the books that my advisor believes to be particularly relevant to my thesis is called The Legal System in Society.Unfortunately I have been unable to find it at the library or in any bookstores.Do you happen to have this book? If so, may I borrow it? I promise to take good care of it and will return it to you within three days.Thank you very much.I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely yours，Li Ming
练习题：
Ex.1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has friends visiting.They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You should prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Ex.2
Your classmate and close friend, Jack, has just passed the graduate entrance examination and is going to study at a famous university in another city.Write a letter of congratulation to him.Ex.3
You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in UK.You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop in the family.Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality.Describe the computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you.Ex.4
You are a college student who applies for a part-time job in a shop during the summer vacation.Write a letter to the shop owner explaining why you are a suitable person for the job.Remember to ask him or her about the rate of payment.Ex.5
You are a college student who applies to a university for an MA degree program of the major “Life Science”.Introduce yourself and state out the reasons.Ask them to send the necessary information concerning the course.1.审题要认真
短文的标题是对全文的高度概括。通过认真审题来确定标题的核心词或者说关键词,依此来整理思路。因此,考生看到试题后绝对不能提笔就写,而是应该认真审题,看清题目的要求和提示,充分利用题目所提供的信息、关键词所圈定的范围,在确立主题后再动笔。
如 从标题 The Misery of Shyness 中得知,考生不但要解释说明 Shyness ,更重要的是要突出由 Shyness 带来的Misery。至此,短文要重点阐述带来了什么Misery。
2.文体要统一
正式文体的文章不宜用非正式的语句。有些考生在一篇很正式的议论文中用以下的句子做结语 OK, this is what I want to say.或是That’s my opinion.Do you agree with me？等等,使文章显得不伦不类。
3.主题要突出
标题如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution ,以下段落的阐述显得有些赘述 1 Part of this problem is the world’s exploding population.2 A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.3 Besides, land and water pollution has also increased.4 Pollution is, in fact, threatening our health, our happiness, and our civilization.尤其是第三句,还有点跑题。
4.文字要连贯
一篇好文章要注重连贯性。连贯性主要体现在句子与句子、段落与段落的衔接上,这种衔接要通过过渡词语来实现,以达到文章通顺,语言流畅。例如 It is clear that television news can vividly bring into us dramatic events of importance, such as wars, games and soon, but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation.On the contrary, print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit, though it can not compete with television visually.Besides, television is essentially a passive medium.Such as, but, because of, on the contrary, though, besides 这些过渡词把句子从语义上连接起来,形成一个有机的整体,读起来犹如行云流水,自然酣畅。
5.内容要一致
要删除多余的词语,否则, 一是破坏了文章的一致性, 二是有凑字数之嫌。如 Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroyus.2 They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease and deformity in later generation.3 Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power.4 And any failure from a nuclear plant may cause enormous damage to the affected area5 What’s more, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes.本段中的第三句与主题不符, 也与第二和第四句不连贯, 应删除。
6.表达方式要多样化
词、句型使用的多样化不仅给文章增加了色彩和可读性,与此同时也可反映考生的词汇量和语言掌握的程度等。为避免文章平淡、呆板, 可使用不同的句式 强调句、倒装句、否定句等等。长短句使用合理相间,用短句表达有力的结论,用长句体现严密的逻辑关系。考生在举例说明的段落中尤其要注意词语的多样性。
7.考点要覆盖全
无论是什么形式的写作都有写作内容上的要求,一般为三个方面。考生在动笔前一定要看清写作内容上的要求,以确保文章覆盖所有考点。
8.语言要流畅
评分标准已清楚地告诉考生 文章要语言流畅、字句通顺、表达准确, 这是得高分的基础。
Last year the public spent two hundred million pounds on pet food alone, to say nothing of animal care bills and furniture.1 It is difficult not to feel resentful about this when one considers what the same amount could do for victims of starvation and poverty,2 and it is not unusual for me to get hot under the collar when I read about another old person who has left all his ／her money to a dog or cat home.这两句在表达意义上用词十分到位,随着两个 when 引导的状语从句内容的递进,主句对表现气愤程度的加强通过用词的不同而表达得淋漓尽致；排比结构的运用使观点更加明确 在1 中 It is difficult not 和 to feel resentful about this 与2 中的 it is not unusual 和 to get hot under the collar 词语表达极其准确。这需要考生在平时大量阅读文章时多注意积累好的语言表达。
9.首尾要呼应
上述几项被阅卷者称为闪光点 ,即加分的因素。除此而外, 更重要的一点是要注意文章的完整性,即首尾要呼应。
10.检查要到位
这个重要环节往往被考生忽略不计,而因为少了这个环节所造成的后果真可谓是功亏一篑。在阅卷过程中,时不时会发现 ourself、thinked、the person who are… ,而这些会酿成不良后果的错误完全可在一两分钟的时间内检查、修改完成。所以, 在写完短文后, 要耐心地再读一遍。
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