第一篇:09考研英语作文解析
Part A Directions:
Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions.“White pollution” is still going on.Write a letter to the editor(s)of your local newspaper to
give your opinions briefly and make two or three suggestions you should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.You do not need to write the address.Part B Directions:
In your essay, you should describing the drawing briefly, explain its intended meaning, and then give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET
2.(20 points)
Part A
【题目类型】
2009年小作文再次考查了事务信函中的建议信,近似于2007年考过的建议信,在考查了几年信函后,信函的类型开始重复,这是一件好事,说明信函主要类型已经在试题中出现过一轮,考生今后的复习更容易把握住规律,无论今后考道歉信还是感谢信,咨询信还是投诉信,真题的示范指导性会很强。与2007年小作文不同之处在于两点,首先是建议信的内容:2007年是建议大学图书馆改进服务,2009年主题为建议如何进一步控制白色污染;其次是2009年的提纲更加丰富,还需要写出现状和观点看法,这就需要在本年度的试卷上有更多的议论。
【审题构思】
本题的命题紧扣时事,2008年中国政府发布了“限塑令”,对塑料袋的使用给予了限制,成为年度中国环保方面最大的一个事件。在12月四级考试的写作中刚刚考过,没想到又出现在考研的题目中。题目指示中给出的信息明显多于往年,尤其是开始的现状描述,描述了关于塑料袋禁止并不太成功的情况。由于限制好了文章的主要思路,自由发挥的空间仅限于观点和建议部分。文章的整个格局类似于一篇提纲式议论文,用现状描述/观点表述/三点建议的模式展开即可。第一段需要描述现状,把提示中的两句话展开成英文表达,同时需要提到中国实行的“限塑令”,特别要写出白色污染这个表达。第二段展开观点,无非是深入强调塑料袋污染环境的严重性。第三段提建议,可以把政府法制建设、环保意识教育以及报纸媒介发挥宣传作用写进去,由于是给报社编辑写信,自然引申出三条建议。
【推荐范文】
Dear Editor,I’m writing for the purpose of expressing my views on further prohibiting the use of plastic bags.China has officially enacted the law of plastic bag restriction, but
it is observed in vain in several places, thus resulting in the continuing of white pollution.Having the largest population in the world, China is exposed to the most serious plastic pollution.With the quickening pace of life, various disposable products are closely related to our regular life, including unrecyclable lunch boxes and plastic shopping bags.As it is difficult for them to decompose, people find themselves surrounded by an expanding ocean of white rubbish.As a result, it is advisable to solve the problems by three means.Above all, importance should be attached to reinforcing the implementation of the law.In addition, people in those places should gradually enhance their environmental
awareness.There is no denying that your newspaper should play an important role in preaching the necessity of limiting the plastic bags.Thank you for your patience and concern in reading this letter.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
(173 words)
【参考译文】
尊敬的编辑:
我写此信的目的是为了表达一下关于进一步禁止塑料袋使用的想法。中国已经正式颁布了限塑令,但是在某些地区该法令没有被严格遵守,导致白色污染仍然在延续。
中国拥有世界上最多的人口,目前正面临最严重的塑料袋污染。随着人们生活节奏的加快,越来越多的一次性产品贴近了我们的日常生活,包括无法再循环的午餐餐盒和塑料购物袋。由于这些物品很难自然降解,人们发现自己已经被日益扩大的白色垃圾海洋所包围。因此,需要通过三种方法来解决这些问题。首先,对于加强法规执行要高度重视;其次,这些地区的人需要逐步提高环保意识;不可否认你们的报纸在宣传限塑令的必要性发面应当发挥重要的作用。感谢您耐心并切认真地阅读了此信。
此致
敬礼
李明
【妙笔生花】
由于信件是写给报社编辑,同时话题又比较严肃,因此文章属于比较严谨的事务信函,需要大量书面语用词。在表达主题方面,以下用词具有明显的书面语特征。第一段中的“颁布enact”和 “遵守observe”。第二段中的“面临exposed to”、“一次性产品disposable products”、“unrecyclable不可循环利用的”、“降解 decompose”。第三段中的“重视importance should be attached to”、“加强reinforce”、“实施implementation”、“提高觉悟enhance the awareness”、“宣传preach”。
文章在语言使用方面追求了语言正式词多变的风格,尽量使用不同的词汇展现语言实力。如表示因果关系,首段使用了“result in”词组,中间段使用了“As it is…”,尾段则变成了“As a result”。表现污染则分别使用了如下表达“white pollution”、“plastic pollution”、“various disposable products”、“unrecyclable lunch boxes and plastic shopping bags”、.“it is difficult for them to decompose”、“an expanding ocean of white rubbish.”。提及限塑令时,文章也先后出现了不同的表达,如“prohibiting the use of plastic bags”、“the law of plastic bag restriction”、“limiting the plastic bags”。句式方面,以下几个句式比较突出:首段的“I’m writing for the purpose of…”;中段的“With the quickening pace of life”,尾段的“It is advisable to…”和“There is no denying that…”;篇章结束的委婉礼貌用语则为“Thank you for your patience and concern in reading this letter”。
Part B
【题目类型】
如果从2000年算起,到今年正好连续第十年考查图画作文。由于图画作文能够大幅度拉开考生的作文创作档次,每一年考题都会进行巧妙的设计,在考场上给考生一种次曾相识又无从说起的复杂感觉。2009的图画作文继续沿用了前两年的出题风格,不给题目,只有一幅图画,让考生有充足的想象空间。但考官心目中的图画立意是单一而明确的,只要想象力延伸太远,就会跑题。
【审题构思】
连续考查了多次道德品质话题后,考研命题一般会转向问题解决题,即揭示社会问题或自然环境问题,要求考生深入分析并给出建议。在2008年的社会热点中,团结、抗灾与爱心、奥运与爱国、食品安全、网络科技、大学生就业成为大家密切关注的对象,其中网络的话题层出不穷,包括网瘾、网恋、网络社区、博客、网上购物。由于中国已经有数亿网民,网络的普及已经渗透到了生活中的方方面面。网络已经在很大程度上取代了电视、广播、报纸、电话等很多媒体的作用,给人们的生活带来了便利,也带来了大量鲜活的话题。
2009年的考题在图画设计上下了很大功夫。试卷上呈现出一个大型的蜘蛛网,在网格中很多人在上网。很显然网络星罗棋布,把距离遥远的人们连结在一起,但蜘蛛网又把所有人分割在小隔断中,让他们近在咫尺却依然无法面对面的沟通。图画中人们都在愉快地上网,网络普及到了生活的每一个角落。如果从事物的正反角度来看,带来便利的同时又造成了沟通的不顺畅,这正是图画作者所表达的中心思想。当然最后是要让考生对这个现象给予点评了。主流的思想一定是告诫网民们在上网的过程中不要过度沉溺,形成网瘾,不要耽误时间或丧失沟通的技能。上网只是生活当中的一部分而已
在创作文章时,可以遵循提纲来进行三段式展开。第一段描述图画,对图画中的蜘蛛网和上网的人群进行客观描述。由于图画的风格非常奇怪,有冲突的信息在里面,可以稍加点评,指出其中人们通过网络去沟通却又被蜘蛛网隔开的现象。第二段是关键展开段,先要从蜘蛛网的象征意义入手,通过抽象图画面的象征意义引入主题:网络功能的二元性,或利弊。接着考生可以充分论述网络给人类生活带来的好处,包括获得新闻信息、聊天沟通、在线学习、发送资料、网络购物等等。同时,又要把网络已经带来的问题展示出来,和本图画相关的,就是影响了人们面对面的沟通。网民隐藏在网络的一端,戴上虚幻的面具,和另一个带上面具的人聊天。这样的沟通是以幻想和推测进行的,虽然激发了每个人的好奇心,但却浪费了时间,远离了现实生活,让不少人变得自闭,失去了沟通的技能。在第二段分析的基础上,最后一段得出主流结论,即劝导人们要适度上网,不要过度,利用好时间生活和工作,不要把时间全部浪费在上网中,不要沾染网瘾。网络是用来丰富我们的生活的,绝不是为了给你我设置沟通的障碍。
【推荐范文】
The past decade has witnessed an increasingly inseparable relationship
between man and Internet.As is vividly depicted in the picture, within a stretching spider web many people are surfing on line, either to entertain themselves or to meet the work’s needs.Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life.However, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate.The metaphoric and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.The spider web undoubtedly serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication.As a college student, I get on line everyday to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through e-mails with my friends.Being a veteran on-line shopper, I frequently bargain with sellers to purchase books at much lower prices.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues.Cyber-living resembles the experience of seeing disguised people behind a mask, maintaining distance between one another.Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life.That’s why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others.Therefore, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from addiction.After all, Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.【参考译文】
在过去的十年中,人类已经与网络形成了不可分割的关系。正如此图画生动描绘出,在一个向四面伸展开的蜘蛛网中,很多人使用电脑上网,有的获得娱乐,有的在满足工作的需要。实际
上网上浏览已经成为我们日常生活中的一个常见现象。但图画中呈现出了一个十分矛盾的现象,人们在试图沟通的同时却被蜘蛛网分隔开来。
这幅图画充满暗喻、表现力深刻,微妙地揭示出了人与网络的二元关系。毫无疑问,蜘蛛网象征着互联网,把人们连接在一起又让他们相互隔离。一方面,互联网作为一种媒介在人与人沟通方面的高效率已经无可争议。作为一个大学生,我每天上网在论坛中和其他网友讨论新闻,通过注册网络课程来学英语,和我的朋友们通过电子邮件自由交流,作为一个网购高手,我经常与卖家砍价并且以很低的价格买到图书。但另一方面,不少人承认他们已经上网上瘾,以致不习惯和朋友和同事进行当面交流。网络生存近似于戴着面具和其他伪装的人见面,互相保持着距离。一旦沉溺于虚幻世界,人们变得很不情愿走近对方或者专注于现实生活。因此有些人已经丧失了直接交流的技能,变得互相疏离。
因此,我们需要合理使用互联网并且克制自己不要上瘾。毕竟互联网发明出来是为了连接你我、给生活带来便利的,而不是设立障碍让互相之间变得遥不可及。
【妙笔生花】
本文从语言构造上充分使用了各类技巧,使得文章词句丰富多彩,闪光点层出不穷。综合看来,有以下几个方面值得关注:
1、精准的用词
描述蜘蛛网伸展-stretching;利弊二元-duality;资深的-veteran;上瘾的-addicted;伪装的-disguised;沉溺于-indulged in; 克制-restrain from;带来便利-bring conveniences to2、多变的表达
表示上网:surf on line;on-line visiting;get on line;cyber-living;use Internet沟通连接:communicate;connect; interpersonal communication;maintain face-to-face contact; approach others;direct contact
分开隔离:separate from;isolate from;maintain distance between one another;get alienated from;set a barrier;keep people beyond reach
强调肯定:undoubtedly;there is no denying that…;after all3、构架式语句
第一段使用了“As is vividly depicted in the picture”进行图画描述。第二段开始的“The metaphoric and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed…”是大量图画作文可以使用的标准议论文表达,适用于陈述图画象征寓意。第二段中分正反两个方面论述时,采用了“On the one hand”和 “However, on the other hand”这样的结构。第二段后面的反面论证采用了“Once indulged in…people feel reluctant to…”连续表达出沉溺于网络的不良后果。第三段开始则直接用“Therefore, it is necessary to…”得出文章的建议和结论。
4、句型变化
文章开始的倒装式表达令人印象深刻,“The past decade has witnessed an
increasingly inseparable relationship between man and Internet.” 中段的分词表达如“Being a veteran on-line shopper,”和“Once indulged in the fictitious world”同样呈现了语言的变化。
5、不定时并列结构
例一:As a college student, I get on line everyday to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through e-mails with my friends.例二:After all, Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.
第二篇:考研英语作文解析
英语强化写作 背诵句
1.Just as an old Chinese proverb says,...Aspire to inspire until I expire 就像一句中国谚语:生命不息 奋斗不止
2.simple as the picture is,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.尽管图画很简单,寓意却非常深刻
3.with current state of affarrs so sorry,it is high time that we took effective initiatives to put the situation on hold 情况是如此令人遗憾,是马上采取措施控制的时候了。
4.It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.我们必须制定并执行一些法律来解决这个问题 5.在中国,文化交流现象是最明显的In no country other than China,it has been said that,is the phenomenon of cultural integration more obvious 6.在报纸上有幅图画引起了人们广泛关注.There has been a heated discussion about this picture in the newspaper.7.教育在当下是最重要的.Never in any era of our nation have the stakes involving education been higher than now.关于内容
考研英语写作常考话题(98-15)
一、成功品质(16创新):03、04、07、08、12、13、二、社会道德:98、01、05、11、14、三、科技环境:99、00、09、15、四、文化交流:02、06、10、关于形式
分三段
1.二到三句 30—60字 2.四到九句100—200字 3.二到三句 40—60字 关于语言
一、句式正确 复杂多变
五种方法:1.加形容词 副词 2.加同位语3.加介词短语(作状语)4.加定语5.将两个句子写成一个句子 万能状语 1.时间状语:
...in the time of knowledge explosion when news,facts,opinions and even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.2.地点状语:,in China,a nation with huge population striving to assert itself after decades solid economic growth.3.be it A or B.无论A或B the road to the victory may not be so long as we expected,but we have no right to count upon this.Be it long or short,rough or smooth,we mean to reach our journey's end.4.状语结尾
traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems,both in cities and on motor ways 5.状语开头(增强句子间衔接)
to do this、to become successful、by doing so、obviously、in many ways、in some cases、Unfortunately、Surely、Specifically、Undeniably(不可否认的是)
二、用词多样(P121、P126)动词
(一)正能量动词:enhance.promote improve facilitate stimulate upgrade boost enrich generate(提升)reinforce strengthen consolidate hone sharpen intensify(加强)cultivate foster nurture(培养)perform conduct implement(执行)formulate introduce(制定)value treasure cherish(珍惜)harness combat address solve tackle curb(解决)optimise(优化)
(二)负能量动词
erode 侵蚀 exhaust 耗尽 undermine 破坏jeopardize危害 degrade下降 ruin毁灭 stifle使窒息、扼杀 violate 破坏 spoil 溺爱 breach 破坏友谊
corrupt 破坏 distort 歪曲 aggravate 恶化hinder impede obtruct阻碍 考研英语各段要求 第一段.描述图画 第二段.阐释寓意
第三段.给出评论或例子
第一段第一句的写法:图画描述句KK三部法 目的:1.展示语言能力(完全倒装、非谓语动词、独立主格、定语从句)2.为主题而描述(描述为主题服务)
例子:As is shown above,on the thick pile of papers,proudly stands an old professor,seeming satisfied with his success in academic research,neglectingthe demand of students.As is shown above,in the river dangerously floats a paper boat,symbolizing the moral training,containingsone bread and fruit,which is symbolic of food safety
As is shown above,in the middle of the picture.and on the computer screen stands a so-called famous and influential star,hawking a medicine,boasting its magic function and exaggerating that it can cure all disease,with a caption reading that celebrity endorsement.As is shown above,in the middle of the pucture walks a man,failing to detect water for several times due to lack of adequat effect to dig a deep enough well.As s shown above in the middle of the picture stands a college student,carrying a desk,holding a pen,which symbolizes that he is occupying a seat in the reading room of hisself 第二句的写法:图画影响句(引起人们关注)关注的写法
1.Reportedly,the great concern among the public has been aroused by this picture.2.The topic illustrated in the picture will make good copy in the newspaper.3.This picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the wechat,the most influential social network,these days.第三句的写法:图画的意义(深刻)P53页常用末句句式
This picture carries a profound message that demands our devoted attention and instant action.第二段的写法(展开):
段落展开的方法:1.科学论据法 2.举例法 3.虚拟语气法
科学论据法:
根据一项调查表明...according to a survey......according to one of the latest surveys conducted by a certain international organization.....according to the lastest survey,money spet on the pets in the city if Beijing is as much as 1.73 billion dollars,which can feed all the Japanese in the world for a whole year 钱花费数量
money spend on sth is as much as....money spend on sth has reached as much as...money earned/collected/raised is as much as....举例法:举例句型➕万能例子 1.(),for example,()
2.Our society has been filled with a variety of examples concerning(主题),with the following one being the foremost.3.Among all the touching facts relating to(主题)that I have heard,noticed and experienced,the most impressive one is(例子)
4.Sb(个人信息)tells with his life story that(观点)
5.Sb/Sth(个人信息)serves as a shining and fitting example
6.Having been brutally imprisoned for 27 years for his unwavering belief in human equailty,Nelson Mandela,a giant and a great hero,one of the most inspiring examples of strong will,who finally transforms his mother nation into an open society,tells with his life story that the fortitude in the face of adversity and the perseverance on your dream,however,whanever and wherever are the golden rules to the success.7.Google,the star Internet company attaining a string of prominent feats with some unrivalled products serves as a shining and fitting example.It is the adventure spirit that helps this firm create enormous value to both its shareholders and the general public.put it the other way around,it is impossible that a Google without the creative spirit can ever achieve these phenomenal deeds.虚拟语气法(表明观点)
Were there no sth,sb would not do sth.Were this trend to continue as it is,we would pay the high price,our future generations would not bother to think of excuses for us.希望工程(练习)
1.our society has been failed with a variety of examples.concerning love,with the hope project being the foremost 2.In the west of china exist some families,being so poor that hardly can they support their children's education 3.Pathetic as they are,people from all walks of life provide them with not only financial aids,material support but also mental comfort,which is well known as the Hope project.4.Money raised by the project ,according to the latest surgey,has reached as much as 16.8 billion,which can⋯⋯
5.Were there no such precious help,those children would never taste the knowledge or receive education and be vulnerable to control and exploitation due to lack of ability to understand other's ideas and to defend their own opinions.第三段的写法(给出评论)正面话题:
第一句:取其精华(absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks)
It is imperative that the essence be absorbed and drawbacks be neglected during this process especially in the times of globalization.第二句:提升意识
The general public are supposed to enhance and promote their awareness that ➕主题观点 第三句:多角度考虑
In view of the importance and complexity of such a phenomenon,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally.第四句:展望未来
only in a reasonable,prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost 负面话题
第一句:情况危急(背诵句3)第二句:建议(句群)1.制定法律(背诵句4)
2.专家想办法:researchers,scholars and experts in the relating areas are expected to work out or optimise up-to-date solutions to this problem 3.提升意识(正面第二句)4.多角度考虑(正面第三句)第三句:展望
with the proper law,prompt proposal,alert public and approriate perspective,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past.p63 第二段的全面展开
the past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out——the sunshine,bringing the shadow at the same time——the damage to the environment 第一句:论点提出句
万能论点:主题很重要/很有害 第二句:强调论点句
第三句:公众态度句(重视/不重视)第四句:强调公众态度句
第五句:展开(句群)1.科学论据法2.举例法3.平行展开法 P55 最后一句:结尾句1.虚拟语气法 2.利弊句型P62 第一句的写法:
the picture tells us that…… the picture demonstrates that⋯⋯ the picture does reveals that⋯⋯
1.this human quality is part and parcel to the social development of our nation and its absence will inevitably inflict great losses on us.2.the environment preservation is in the best interests of the whole society.3.the education plays a pivotal role in individual growth and success 4.they cultural integration has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting
profound influence on the way we live,work play and learn 5.this great character,doubtless,is the steel that forges the supporting structure of this society,which will not be able to grow steady if this invaluable asset is ever neglected in any possible manner.6.主题has become indispensable to the health of the economy,the stability of the polity and the pursuit of private happiness 7.the picture demonstrates us that,young students tend to find traditional schooling unmotivating or even frustrating 8.the picture reflects that curbin food safety problem with morality education is neither attractive nor productive.第二句的写法:
1.indeed 2.it is also universally acknowledgeed 3.that…4.just as sb once said 5.furthermore 6.put it mildly 7.put it strong 8.that is to say 9.in other words 第三句写法 the public the individuals,organizationsandgovernments+p55重视和不重视的表达P127背诵 P155背诵 P58 背诵
we have been fully informed that smoking may bring various hazards,but we are still lack of sufficient awareness of necessity of banning smoking in public area 语言的进一步提升
1.more than +名词 表示对肯定的强调 this is more than a challenge Internet is more than a form to get information,but an instructive mode of entertainment as well 2.far from being 对否定的强调
this is far from being a challenge 远不是一个挑战
china is far from being a leading nation of world economy 3.Contrary to a popular assumption contrary to a common belief,+观点
contrary to a common belief,environmental preservation should have priority over economic growth.4.双重否定的使用
it is not unrealistic that job satisfaction ,a crucial indicator of employees' sense of well-being,can be promoted in any kind of job these days,it is not uncommon that many graduates will elect being a civil servant as their top choice when hunting a job for many clear advantages(e.g.,secured position,stable income or better social welfare)
5.not surprisingly(肯定),+结论 6.anything but 否定 nothing but 肯定 7.be 动词 被替换成被动态
Internet is a form of entertainment.Internet is well received as a form of entertainment Internet has been well received as…… be well considered as be well seen as be well deemed as be well regarded as
Rinascimento(意)Renaissance(英)文艺复兴 Leonardo Da Vinci达芬奇 P170 背诵
8.not the least 最高级
Not the least of the factors that make for success in any field of endeavor is……在任何领域中取得成功最重要的因素是…… 9.并列动词的使用
physical exercise can shield us from damaging effects brought by sedentary life style,and stressful working conditions and prevent us from collapsing in front of a screen every night 10.连接三个以上动词
do A,doing B and thus doing C 11.not only ……but also……连接动词
not only will they accumulate their wealth,but they also will fit into the society.12.连接三个以上名词的方法
not only A,but also B,and such benefits(problems)as C and D 13.in terms of.就什么而言
主题 will give them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life 14.Admittedly(可承认的)…….Nevertheless(但是)……
Admittedly,as a source of entertainment,advertisements are very popular among children.Nevertheless, they may give young viewers some misleading impression 15.sth is not restricted to ……,but is also evident among.The benefits of being independent are not restricted to improving one's academic performance,but are also evident among promoting one's energy,enthusiasm and charm.16.加强句间的连接
indisputably.undeniable.it is true that.it is apparent that.it is obvious that.it is clear that.Clearly.there is no doubt that.more importantly.in addition.it may be tempting to argue that.admittedly.by that I mean.in fact.it seems that.more precisely.specifically.it is true that.第三段的补充
1.如果题干要求举例,则必须举例,可以在第二段也可以在第三段,但是最好在第三段。举例后可以再加评论,评论可以借用平行展开法语料。举例可以只举例不展开。2.没有要求举例时也可以举例,评论也可以借用第二段语料。
numerous cases exist to illustrate this point.take sb for example,for 主题,sb could not have done sth,let alone doing sth take sb for example,(without 主题)×3,how can sb do sth? 3.instances like Steven Jobs, Elon Musk,and Mark Elliot Zuckerberg could be easily multiplied,but these will suffice to show that(intense interest plus persistent effort is primarily essential to the highest success in any sphere of human activity.)(结论)范文:P79 图画作文练习网站newscartoon 中国新闻漫画网。图表作文的写作方法:
三段话,第一段 引入:描述图表
第二段 论述:阐释原因
第三段 呼应 第一段的写法:
第一句:描述图表句
pie chart饼状图.bar chart.柱状图 line chart.线状图 table chart 表格
(一)静态图:无时间变化的图
点出主题+具体描述
The pie chart shows that there four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today.A makes up 34%.51%stands for B.9% refers to C.6% is defined as D 关注单复数问题 抓住主要部分。
Globally,65%of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance,constituting 35% and 30% respectively.The total…is divided into four parts,with A and B making up _% totally
(二)动态图:有时间变化的图
点出主题(变化的)+具体描述变化
As is shown above,the past decade has witnessed a great change that the private cars are playing the increasingly important role in people's means of transportation.积累上升和下降的表达方式 p68 The graph shows that the percentage of state-owned houses in a big city decreased considerably,dropping from 75% in 1999 to 25% in 2015,while the corresponding figures for private houses increased dramatically,rising from 25% to 75% over the same period.第二句:图表影响句,完全等同图画作文 第三句:图表意义句,等同图画作文
Isolated as the figures seem to be,as a matter of fact,they are connected to one another closely.Why do so many years youngsters elect pursuing master degree as their choice after graduation from the university? 第二段的写法: 因果句型P61+列举原因:1.具体原因具体分析2.借用平行展开法 还可以使用举例法,科学论据法。第三段的写法完全等同图画作文 应用文(小作文)的写法
一、考察内容:书信、告示
二、评分的侧重点:
1.信息点的覆盖(仔细阅读题干要求)
2.语言正确即可,内容完整(100字写满,不要犯语法错误)3.格式
三、书信的格式
(一)称呼
Dear sir.Dear madam.Dear sir or madam.Dear friends 如果题干有要求,必须按要求写
(二)分段:开头空两格
(三)署名:按题干要求
告示的格式:P35题目首字母大写 一段两段皆可。
四、分类讲解 P4七字诀
(一)投诉信和建议信
投诉信:P7 必须背两三个 P4范文
建议信:可能和欢迎词一起考P13 注意去信回信区别
(二)道歉信和辞职信
道歉信 P17.辞职信 P19积累万能理由
(三)求职信和推荐信
推荐人、书、电影、歌(准备相关介绍)
如何夸奖一个人
聪明:Intelligent Ingenious Talent Gifted Have insightful opinions 勤奋:Diligent Industrious Hardworking
性格:Humorous.Amiable.Social Enthusiastic.Ready for help.Cooperative.Team spirit leadership
(四)祝贺信和邀请信
(五)咨询信和告示
P27最后一段 祝新年快乐凑字数 复习任务:
一、语料的积累
86个平行展开法➕笔记句子
每天背三个
二、结构的整理
九月开始写真题
第三篇:2010考研英语大纲解析
2010考研英语大纲解析
北京导航、北京领航 英语名师—李勇全
2010大纲终于揭开了她“神秘”而又“晚到“的面纱。本次大纲变化很小,其中阅读部分没有任何变化,只在词汇和写作上有些说法改变。下面我本次大纲变化部分以及学生最为关心的写作部分解析如下:
大纲词汇要求
北京导航、北京领航 英语名师—李勇全
2010大纲终于揭开了她“神秘”而又“晚到“的面纱。„根据《全国硕士研究生入学统一考试英语考试大纲解析》(2010年版)援引自考研英语大纲的内容,与2009年考研英语大纲相比,2010年考研英语大纲中对于词汇的要求变的更加具体,除了要求考生应能掌握5500左右的词汇及相关词组外,还要求“除掌握词汇的基本含义外,考生还应掌握词汇之间的词义关系,如同义词、近义词、反义词等;掌握词汇之间的搭配关系,如动词与介词,形容词与介词,形容词与名词等;掌握词汇生成的基本知识,如词源、词根、词缀等。”
其中掌握“词根、词源、词缀”以前大纲只是在词汇部分附录出了常见135组常见词根词缀,未加强点特殊说明。本次大纲特别在词汇总序部分加以强调,其目的和重要性显而易见:
1、阅读中会出现很多大纲未列的同根同源词;
2、完型填空要求学生通过词源词根了解次的本源意思,区分近义词。
词根词缀的扩展能力很强,例如Act,这个词我们都认识,考研词汇根据词根词以扩展为:actactingactionactivateactivacationactivitoractiveactivelyactivismactiviistactivityactor
actressactualactualityactuallyactualnessenact
enactableenactionactualnessenactenactableenaction enactiveenactmentenreactenreationreactionaryreactionism reactivatereactivereactivityreactorinteractinteraction。。。。。。。。
解决办法
具体化的词汇要求实际上并不应该打乱我们复习词汇的计划。虽然有少部分同学没有接触过词根词缀等相关知识,平时也没有可以收集词汇辨析,积累固定搭配等,但是由于常见词根词缀以及相关辨析与搭配都比较固定,所以复习起来也并非难事。下面对词根词缀的知识做一个简单的梳理:
1.词根词缀各司其职。词根往往是决定单词含义最重要的部分,前缀通常改变单词的词义,而后缀起着改变单词词性的作用。其中,前后缀是最固定的一类,变化较缓慢,所以也应当成为大家复习的切入点。词根也是相对封闭的一类。所以,通过单词词根确定单词大致含义,再加上从单词的后缀推断出的单词词性,以及前缀对词义的修改,我们对单词的理解就可以加深,记忆速度也会加快,效率也会提高。
2.同义词、近义词与反义词为做题带来的启示。首先,完形部分的词义辨析和词汇之间的搭配关系在考题中占有较大的比例,所以我们平时对于同义词、近义词及反义词的积累以及搭配关系就显得尤为重要。其次,在阅读理解中,正确答案的依据往往出现在文章内部,所以同义词替换就成为正确选项的特征,选择的根据。最后,同义表达的积累为我们写作时提供丰富的选择范围,可以避免表达单一,实现丰富多变的目的。总而言之,对于词汇关系的具体化规定也是让我们增强学习效果,使词汇学习和真题分析结合起来的制度化规定,为我们的设定更明确的词汇记忆目标。
因此,今年大纲解析中体现的词汇具体化变化一方面为我们提供了学习方法的指导,另一方面明确学习的目的,加强词汇学习的重要性,以方便我们更加深入的全面的掌握词汇。
2010年 考研大纲写作要求
北京导航、北京领航 英语名师—李勇全
A.考生应能写不同类型的应用文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等,以及一般描述性、叙述性、说明性或议论性的文章。写作时,考生应能:
1)做到语法、拼写、标点正确,用词恰当;
2)遵循文章的特定文体格式;
3)合理组织文章结构,使其内容统一、连贯;
4)根据写作目的和特定读者,恰当选用语域。
B.该部分由A、B两节组成,考查考生的书面表达能力。共30分。
A节:考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题2上作答。总分10分。
B节:考生根据提示信息写出一篇160-200词的短文(标点符号不计算在内)。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。考生在答题卡2上作答。总分20分。其中规定写作部分由A、B两节组成,考查考生的书面表达能力。共30分。
作文与四六级相比主要变化来自于增加一篇应用文,表面是为了适应经济发展的需要,实际上是因为写作题型容易拉开分数差异,把写作分数由15分提高到30分,更能考查同学们的语言输出和应用实际能力,更容易拉开分数档次,有利于选拔人才。
A节:
作文是一篇100字左右的应用性短文,文体包括有信件、便笺、备忘录等。满分10分。其实,2003和2004年的大纲都强调了要会写应用文,如书信、简历摘要和备忘录,但同学们在复习中一般不会将其作为重点来抓,老师讲课的时候也主要以议论和记叙描述类为主,且历年真题命题情况也是如此。但2010大纲对写作部分的新要求我们要正视应用文,所以同学们平时要注意应用文写作的特定的格式要求,有意识的掌握各类应用文的写作方法。按照大纲的要求,要注重写作内容信息点覆盖的全面性、篇章结构组织的条理性与逻辑性、语言使用的准确性、文体格式的正确性及语域把握的合理性。不要简单认为复习应用文就是复习相应的格式,格式只是应用文写作的最起码要求,要想在10分钟左右写好一篇应用短文,这既需要英语语言基本功,又需要根据题目所给outline迅速构思成篇的能力。另外,同学们还要了解应用文的常见模式,背诵经典的套话,注意词句的多样性的训练。就象图表作文中不能老用show一样,(应该用indicate, reveal等),对于新大纲应用文中的“参考书”一词,我们除了用reference books, 也可以用reading materials,还可以用reference materials。为了让同学们打好基础,我将在课堂上详细讲述:求职信和辞职信、订购或退货信、投诉信、感谢信、申请信、安排通知的写法。总的来说,应用文写作无疑比听力好得分,提前多下功夫做准备,得分一定会很理想。
B节:
B节占20分,要求的字数160-200个词汇。从历年短文写作命题来看,其历年题型有“命题作文、图表作文、图画作文”。命题作文(1991---1996),图表作文(1997,1999),图画作文(1998,2000---2009)。相比起来,图表图画作文要难一些,因为命题作文有统一标题,有一个规定好的outline,有的甚至还有段首句,考生只需按规定思路发展3至4句便可。而图表图画作文需要考生自己挖掘图中所表达的主要信息,通常要用对比分析、归纳、演绎等方法进行,要从数字、图像中总结出趋势来,抓往隐性的思
想内容,阐明自己的看法,主张,观点。至于2010年会怎样考?大家一般持两种看法。一种人认为2010年必定会考图表图画作文,因为按照历年考查的趋势,为了使写作能够尽量拉开分数档次,图画作文已经成为主流题型,连续考查了11次,分别是1998年的“如此承诺”,2000年的“世界商业捕鱼简史”,2001年的“爱心是一盏灯”,2002年的“民族文化与世界文化”,2003年的“温室中的花朵经不起风雨”,2004年的“终点又是新的起点”。。。到2009年“你一条腿,我一条腿,相互搀扶走天涯”;而图表作文也有1997年的“吸烟有害健康”,99年的“人口和动物灭绝”。并且,由于每年的大纲样题对考试都起到一种指导暗示作用,今年刚颁布的大纲样题又是图画作文,基本在预料之中,因此我们在复习中,依然要把图画作文作为重点。所以,2010年肯定考图画作文,并且还要继续2001年和2009年的考法,让考生举出自己的个人例子来说明自己的观点。
2010年的大纲英语知识应用
英语知识运用不仅考查考生对不同语境中规范的语言要素(包括词汇、表达方式和结构)的掌握程度,而且还考查考生对语段特征(如连贯性和一致性等)的辨识能力等。共20小题,每小题0.5分,共10分。
在一篇240~280词的文章中留出20个空白,要求考生从每题给出的4个选项中选出最佳答案,使补全后的文章意思通顺、前后连贯、结构完整。其文体多为说明文、议论文。在20
道小题中,通常12~15题考查词汇,包括词义辨析(形近异义词、形异义近词、形异义异词等)、习语(即一些固定的词组)等;5~8题考查语法结构和篇章结构(包括逻辑关系、前后照应、语篇衔接等)。
英语知识运用体现在考研试卷中即为完型填空题。主要考查三点:词汇、语法、篇章。以下是英语辅导老师帮助考生对完型题的考查点所作的具体分析:
首先是词汇的复习。
词汇是用语言表达思想时所需要的最基本的要素。英语中有些词汇的运用非常灵活,一个词可以用作不同的词性,搭配和词义也有所变化。比如一个简单的词abstract,它就可以用作三种词性,分别为动词、形容词、名词,搭配和用法都有所不同。有些动词可以组成若干个动词词组,比如动词make,get,bring,take等。考生在熟记词义的同时,必须要灵活掌握词汇在不同语境中的运用。“英语知识运用”不但要求考生掌握所规定词汇的意义,而且要求考生能在实践中运用恰当的词汇。从历年考试试卷来看,词汇是“英语知识运用”测试的重点,占总体谅的2/3左右。特别是实词:名词、动词、形容词、副词的理解和学习。
其次是语法的复习。
全面、扎实的语法知识在阅读理解英文篇章的中起着至关重要的作用。可以帮助考生更好地把握上下文的内容和逻辑关系。语法结构知识的内容比较多,考查的范围也比较广泛,对考生而言,对语法知识应该全面掌握。尤其重要的是,虚拟语气、非谓语动词、主从复合句及连接用语、形容词/副词比较结构和特殊结构等。
英语知识应用(完形填空)虽然在套题第一道题列出,但建议考生正式考试时最后再做,以免因为做题时间把握不好,或正确率低而导致情绪低落影响考试成绩。但完型绝对不能像四六级一样才去放弃态度,只要掌握完型出题方式,完型是可以的高分的一道题,可能比阅读A进步更大。暑期我教过的学生在一天时间内完型多数学生能从放弃到认真对待,再到掌握方法(“四步法”)正确12—16个。
第四篇:2012年考研英语作文题目及解析汇总
2012年考研英语作文题目及范文解析汇总
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考研英语二写作部分由A、B两节构成。A节部分有以下两种形式,每次考试选择其中的一种形式:第一,根据所给出的情景完成大约100词左右的应用性短文,比如私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等;第二,根据所给出的汉语文章,用英语写出一篇80—100词的摘要。B节题目要求考生根据规定的情景(提供情景以图画、图表或文字的形式出现)或所提供的提纲,写出150词以上的英语说明文或议论文。
关于大B节即大作文的写作,英语二明确规定:要求“考生应能根据所给的提纲、情景或要求完成相应的短文写作。短文应中心思想明确,切中提议,结构清晰,条例清楚,用词恰当,无明显语言错误”是初级的写作要求,甚至允许出现语言错误,只要不明显即可。
关于写作A部分应用文的写作,明确固定:首先,字数要达到题目给定的要求,一般是100字左右,不易过长或过短;其次,书写格式要合乎规定的要求,内容不同,选择不同的写作格式;然后,内容要力求覆盖所给出要求中的信息点,切忌泛泛而谈,但同时也要做到言简意赅,在写作的过程中,可以利用文中所给出的关键词,在此基础上进行合理地扩展;最后,要遵守必要的交际规则和礼仪,在语气的传达和相关词语的措施上,一定要合乎相应的要求。
关于写作A部分英文摘要的写作,考生们必须要做的是:首先要明白摘要一定要结构严谨,布局合理,语义明晰,与此同时,我们还需要阅读文章,掌握文章的走向和结构,把握主旨;其次,把每段的关键句子或词语摘抄下来,进行有效地整合和合理地安排,把关键的信息翻译成相应的英文,用表示连接关系的词语把它们串联起来;然后,英文摘要一般采用第三人称表达方式,谓语动词一般用一般现在时、现在完成时或者一般过去时;最后关于英文摘要的写作到底该选择什么样语态?既可以采用主动语态,也可以运用被动语态,两种语态各有千秋,视具体情况而定。
近两年英语二写作部分的题型统计,2010年和2011年作文A部分都是有关书信的写作,2010的素材是有关感谢信的,2011年的素材是有关祝贺信的,2010年和2011年作文B部分的写作是有关图表类型的,2010年是有关手机申请使用情况的,2011年是有关品牌轿车占有份额情况的。
从以上的情况我们得出的分析是:英语二作文A部分要求单一,近两年所考查的部分仅是英语书信的写作,形式没有那么复杂,这点和英语一的要求不同,英语一“考生应能写不同类型的应用文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要和报告等,所以我们可以预测明年的小作文部分很有可能还是会以单一书信的形式出现,其它类型的题不是不可能出现,但是出现的几率不大;英语二B部分近两年以图表的形式出现,图表形式单一,比较直观,结构和内容没有那么复杂,只要稍加分析就可以很好地分析图表,这是和英语一不同的地方,英语一的作文主要是以图画的形式出现,不仅要审图,而且要确定准确的暗含信息,相对来说比图表题难,根据最新的大纲规定,今年所规定的题型以及特点和去年几乎没有区别,在以上的基础上,我们的预测是,明年的英语二大作文部分70%将会出图表题,30%将会出图画题,而小作文(应用文)部分将会延续以往比较单一的书信传统。
漫画话题作文,所提供的材料是漫画,所以较文字做材料的话题作文增加了“读图”的难度,同时也增加了自由度。
由于漫画本身的形象性,使联想和想像有了生动的形象依据,也就降低了作文构思的难度。
以漫画作话题的写作训练,要注意以下四个步骤:
第一、读懂画意画旨。
只有读懂了画意,明确了画旨,才不至于偏离题意。
第二、抓住形象特征。
抓住特征,把握本质,就能找到写作材料,顺利地谋篇布局。
第三、展开联想和想像。
联想和想像不但可以获得大量写作材料,而且可以加深对画旨的理解。
第四、以漫画为话题的作文,有着广阔的写作空间,更能发挥作者的特长。
但由于自由度扩大了,也容易产生杂乱无章、中心不明、文体模糊的毛病,所以写作者必须确定适合自己阅历和写作能力的内容和文体,要扬长避短,做到内容集中,文体特点鲜明。
一、人与自然(实物)关系类
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly,2)possible reasons for the issue of Saving Land for Endangered Animals
3)conclusion.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
【参考范文】
There is no doubt that human activity has an effect on the planet.We see the evidence of mankind’s endeavors all around us.Overall, it seems that human activity harms the Earth more than benefits it makes.As is vividly betrayed in the photo above, due to over development, there is limited land being set aside for endangered animals.Absolutely, we should reserve some land for the world’s animals for the following reasons.First, mankind’s need for land is constantly growing.If the demand is not checked controlled in some way, humans will eventually develop all of the earth’s available land.At that time, mankind will have no more room to grow, and all the wild animals will have disappeared, as well as other valuable resources.Second, humans are able to innovate and can use the land that they already possess in more efficient ways.Animals are unable to do this.Once their land is taken away from them, they will die.Third and last, endangered animals are an important part of the biodiversity of our planet.If they disappear, we cannot predict what the effect will be.Therefore, we should treat such animals as a valuable resource to be protected.To sum up, the world’s endangered animals are an important resource and we should protect them by setting aside some land for them.Although mankind’s need for land continues to grow, people are intelligent and inventive enough to put the land into use properly.In this way, we can have enough land for farming, housing and industry, and preserve the biodiversity of the planet at the same time.来
二、人与人(社会)关系类
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly,2)possible reasons for the phenomenon, and then
3)state your point of view.You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
【参考范文】
The picture symbolically depicts that six lovely children from different countries with different ethnicities get together and play games happily in a world of harmony.It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to the most favorable social phenomenon that cultural exchanges are gaining worldwide popularity.There are, to my mind, several reasons accounting for this phenomenon of the picture.For one thing, cultural exchanges can enhance international friendship, and people can acquire better understanding of each other.Through cultural exchanges, they can learn of different peoples around the world, what they believe in, how they lead their daily life,and their traditions and customs.For another,cultural exchanges can also greatly benefit the countries involved.That is because countries can share their achievements with each other to stimulating their own social progress and cultural prosperity.Based on the above reasons, I hold that worldwide cultural exchange is beneficial to all countries involved.As for China, the opendoor policy has greatly promoted the Chinese civilization to the entire world and vice versa.Therefore, I can firmly conclude that in the long run, cultural exchanges will contribute to a flourishing Chinese and global economy, as well as diversified cultures.源
三、个人(个体)体验类
Directions:
Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)describe the cartoons,
2)stating its main idea, and
3)giving your comment.
You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
【参考范文】
In the cartoon we can see a tall and thin man, along with a short and stout man are using suitable hotpot for dinner.Apparently, the picture aims to emphasize that anything to be done must be measured in advance so that we are able to find a proper way to do it.This same principle applies to solving any other problem.Firstly, when we want to know the reality of something, we must describe it like it is, getting rid of our prejudices and exaggerations, so that we can have an unbiased view.Secondly, the object should be analyzed in a concrete way so that we can grasp the reasons and rules of it.Thirdly, we must adapt our approach to solving a problem, for each situation is different from the others.So we must view a problem from different perspectives.The cartoon implies different meanings to different people.A teacher should adopt different teaching methods according to the students in the class;a doctor should prescribe different treatments according to the patient’s symptoms;a farmer should seed different plants according to the various conditions of the earth.From a philosophical point of view, dissimilar problems should be approached differently.Good results come from attentive analysis of a problem.:考试大-考研
第五篇:2014年考研英语小作文八大解析
2013年考研英语小作文八大模板解析
1:投诉信
Dear_______,I am.(自我介绍)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍)。In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面)。In addition,____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面)。Under these circumstances,I find it ___(感觉)to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果)。
I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求),preferably __________(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限)。
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
2:询问信
Dear ______,I am _________________________(自我介绍)。I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)
First of all,what are _________________________________?(第一个问题)Secondly,when will________________________________?(第二个问题)Thirdly,is _________________?(第三个问题)
I would also like to inquire _________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段)。Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
3:请求信
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)
The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因)。I________,so I ___________________________________(给出细节)
I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求)。I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions,do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码)。I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
4:道歉信
Dear ___________,I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因)。
The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因)Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
5:感谢信
Dear______,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for __________________(感谢的原
因)。If it had not been for your assistance in __________________(对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been___________________(没有对方帮助时的后果)。
Every one agrees that it was you who___________________________(给出细节)。Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
6:建议信
Dear ___________,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:_________________(建议的内容)
I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
7:求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____________(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间)。
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名称)。In the one hand,_______________________________(第一个原因)。On the other hand,__________________________________(另一个原因)。
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at
_______________(电话号码)
Thank you for considering my application,and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
8:邀请信
Dear________,There will a ________________(内容)at/in________________(地点)on___________(时间)。We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间)。This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排)。At around______(时间),____________________________(另一个安排)
I really hope you can make it.RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming