2014.1 闵行区高三英语一模优秀作文

第一篇：2014.1 闵行区高三英语一模优秀作文

2014.1闵行区高三一模优秀作文

I am Li Ming from Ming Qi Middle School.Recently I have learned from your webpage that “Aigongxian” is a public organization whose major work involves programs relevant to helping children in poverty-stricken areas.Almost at the same time, word came were recruiting some volunteers during this summer vacation.I’d like to join you without the slightest hesitation, and my reasons are as follows:

To begin with, I prefer to apply for the post of a cameraman.Not only am I fond of taking photos, but I also have professional skills.I believe that people will have a clearer knowledge of the living conditions of the children there through my photos.Apart from what I have mentioned above, I believe that my photos will appeal to more people to realize the lack of education in remote areas as well as the increasingly large gap between urban cities and countries.Consequently, there will be more kind people to join you to improve the children’s living conditions.In a nutshell, I am eager to do my part as a volunteer of you.Poverty has become a social phenomenon and no easy way is at hand to tackle it.However, it’s high time that everyone volunteered to help poor children.Combined efforts will make a great difference.I hope that you will accept me as a cameraman in the organization.（232 words）

第二篇：2013闵行区初中一模

2013闵行区初中一模

作文题目：嘿!再往前一步

范文：

距离，并不遥远，只要你往前一步;机会，并不遥远，只要你勇敢往前……

记得刚开学的时候，每次看到的都是我一个人孤单的背影……

来到这个陌生的学校，陌生的班级，面对陌生的同学，本应高兴和激动，却不知怎的，心里平添了一份恐惧和担忧。因为通过这些天，我发现，我融入不到这些陌生的同学中去。我毕竟是转来的，在小学认识的同学一个都没有，所以我形成了下课就往外跑的习惯，我去找我的小学死党，听她说她班有好多在小学的同学，我很伤心，又很气愤——别的班就那么多小学同学，我班就我一个人!

爸爸给我说，要多与新同学交往，不要总是去找那些老同学，在初中还是和同班同学接触多!其实我，又何尝不想多与现在的同学交往，建立真挚的友谊，成为朋友呢?只是我感觉，我们之间的距离太遥远，我不知该如何与他们沟通，仿佛我们根本就是两个世界的人。后来，我干脆连原来的同学也不怎么来往了，我不能因为我交不到新朋友，而占用他们结交新友的时间……所以那段时间，我一个人看书，上体育课时，一个人静静地坐在那儿，看着他们有说有笑，放学回家，还是一个人，总感觉那路是那么漫长……那一段时间，是最难熬的时候……

终于，我熬不住了，一个人的学习生活实在太枯燥，连商量题，都没得人找。我决定主动跨越那距离，抛弃那自我主义，与同学沟通、交流。我首先想到的，就是月考。在小学的时候，我的成绩就还行，所以身边的朋友也不少，毕竟大多数人还是比较愿意和学习好的同学交往吧。我下定决心要好好考，每天不断地努力，终于，月考第一名，有的同学向我祝贺，我便与他们聊了几句，许多同学与我成为了朋友，可还是有一部分同学没有太多的交集，不过，我想印象应该不是很差吧，以后慢慢来……

一个月过去了，我结交了很多朋友，期中考试悄悄地靠近了我们，可在此之前，我们还要去一个地方，红沙沟。听到这个消息，我很高兴，因为我知道这是个结交朋友的好机会，当我听到我要和***她们一个宿舍时，我更是开心，我知道她们都学习很好，我很早就想和她们成为朋友了，只是没什么机会，现在好了，我拥有和她们交往的机会和时间了……在红沙沟的一周很快就过去了，在这一周里，我们一起吃零食，一起唱歌，一起聊天，一起讨论问题……我突然发现，她们离我并不那么遥远，她们很平易近人，之间也很平等，学习很好，也很团结，突然发现有朋友，真好!

回到学校，我们开始了我们的学习生活，我也融入到了这个班级，还拥有许多要好的朋友……发现，这个学校，这个班级，这些同学，不再那么陌生，和他们共同学习，真好!距离，并不遥远，只要你往前一步;机会，并不遥远，只要你勇敢往前……

我望着我的朋友们，笑了，那个孤单的背影，不见了……

第三篇：2011学年区一模高三英语作文学生

2011学年高三英语作文学生范文

（1）

Nowadays people have a wide selection when they go traveling.Some prefer a package tour, while others choose self-organized tours.As for me, I like package tours better.First of all, it is safe to be led by tour guides.Tourists can have an idea of the dangerous places such as cliffs and iceburgs according to the introduction given by their tour guides.Also, when we go to somewhere unfamiliar, we’d better avoid getting lost and avoid going to the spots that are not worth the ticket money!

Second, in a package tour, tourists never have to worry about the food, the vehicles and the accommodations.All they’ve got to do is just to put on their coats and press the “shoot” button on the camera!Furthermore, a group of tourists can often enjoy discounts in restaurants and hotels.Third, the group members can easily make friends with each other.Getting along well enough, they may even come to figure out the plan for their next trip together!

As you can see, what a wise choice it is to go on a package tour!I’m really looking forward to having my personal safety, daily necessities and social network guaranteed by a tourist agency.（2）

Gone are the days that we stay at home during vacation.Instead, we travel here and there.However, some people prefer package tour while some people tend to choose self-organized tour.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer package tour.It not only costs less but also

provides us with tour guides.So convenient is it that we don’t need to worry about get ting lost in a totally new city, and guides will show us around all the places of interest.Furthermore, package tour makes it easy for us to make friends with different people from various cities.In the tourist team, we may establish some precious friendships.However, every coin has its two sides.Package tour is not free enough, which may

result in much inconvenience.For example, we must follow the schedule of travel agency, thus limiting our free time.To sum up, each of the ways has its own advantages as well as disadvantages.What matters most is that we should choose the better way which is fit for ourselves.(3)

While recently more and more people are in favour of self-organized tour, I always hold the idea that package tour is still my favourite.Above all, package tour can bring much convenience.I still remember the time when I first went abroad.I didn’t know how to go through the customs and fortunately the tour guide helped me.Besides, I don’t have to think much about

spending too much money as package tour has a lot of discounts.I can stay in a 4-star hotel at a rather low cost.That must be nice.What’s more, package tour brings more than travelling.We are sure to meet

strangers from different parts of China and within several days of staying together, we share a lot of our experiences of traveling and thus we become friends.I believe that is much more fascinating than just traveling itself.Many people may criticize that package tour lacks freedom.However, it just depends on how you define it.When I’m traveling, I am free of worries and I’m in the realm of freedom.So, come on!Join our package tour!You’re sure to meet with more splendors.（4）

Nowadays，people have more ways to travel.Some people prefer package tour due to its low expenses and the guide available.But for me, I prefer self-organized tour.An obvious advantage is that the timetable is more flexible.You can arrange the schedule on the way at any time.You don’t have to visit the tourist attractions one by one as you do during package tours.Without the time limit, you can get closer to the local culture, especially in some unfamiliar area.Local inhabitants can tell you more than the guides do.You can enjoy to the greatest extent at your destination.However, self-organized tour may be exhausting that you need to manage the meals and accommodations by yourself.But to be optimistic, you can enjoy the local cuisine more.In my opinion, you can take a package tour or get enough information on the Internet before you decide to take a self-organized one.（5）

Nowadays there are a variety of traveling ways from which people may choose.Some people choose a self-organized tour while others choose a package one.From my perspective, I prefer the former one.Travel is one of the best ways to release oneself and relieve the pressure.In a self-organized tour, people around me are all my friends and family members, people who I enjoy being with.So I will feel more free and casual during the tour, which ensures that the tour will be more fun and reach the goal of relaxing ourselves.By organizing the tour by myself, the schedule is tailored for my needs.I can arrange the destinations as I like.This will help me learn more from the tour whether the history, the traditions or the culture of my destinations, making the whole tour more meaningful.I am certain to collect a lot of precious memory there.However, there is something inconvenient.I have to deal with my meals and hotels.But as every coin has two sides, my friends and I can pick what we prefer to taste and where to stay in the course.After all, food culture is also interesting and important.And we can choose a more satisfying hotel to stay in.The key of travel is to experience.I believe my friends and I will experience a lot of beautiful things during a self-organized tour.And that is enough.(6)

With the rapid development of China’s economy, people tend to go traveling to relieve their pressure.When it comes to how to travel, opinions vary from person to person.Some people are in favor of package tour.They argue that it costs less but has

good service.What’s more, they can make friends easily, although they may not be so free.In my humble opinion, I enjoy self-organized tour better.Listed below are some reasons that I hold.First and foremost, there is no denying that the self-organized tour provides us with much freedom.We can stop for a rest wherever we want.Second, without the tourist guide, we are able to choose the tourist attractions that interest us most.It’s a perfect way to develop our ability to organize and arrange.What should be taken into consideration is that since we are with parents or friends, we have the same taste, and there’s no need for us to argue over where to eat.No garden without weeds, so it may cost more, when we look for hotels by ourselves.All in all, as long as we enjoy ourselves and follow the way that suits us best, it’s totally a perfect way.

第四篇：2010高三英语一模分析会发言稿

2010高三英语一模分析会发言稿

温州市第二十二中学 张晓玲

一：试卷总评

大家好！我是张晓玲，来自温州市第二十二中学。今天有幸代表我们高三英语备课组发言，请大家多多关照，多提宝贵意见！我们组认为2010年温州市高三第一次适应性测试（英语试题）（简称一模）参照09新课标新高考的题型和总体结构，主观题部分保留短文改错和作文题材，要求学生写一篇新闻报道及学生的感受和评价。这是一份难度适中，较能考察学生英语实际水平的试卷，体现了高考“选拔性”考试的特点。

一模英语试卷单选部分较全面的考查了高中英语语法现象，除冠词，代词，介词，动词，名词，动词的时态和语态，连词，非谓语动词，定语从句外，还考查了考试词义辨析的能力，如7，10，18和20； 侧重考查了4道省略句和其他语法点的结合（第8，11，15，19题）。个别题目略有难度，如题12，15。我校学生单选平均得分5.03，主要失误的题目是6，7，12。学生普遍反映有点难，选题的时候有些犹豫，有些纠结。

完型填空难度适中，夹叙夹议，符合高考试题的特点。侧重考查学生对全文的理解，以及上下文之间的联系。我校学生失分最多的是在第23，29，34，37，其次是24，26 和38.平均得分在11分.阅读理解部分题材比较广泛，对于学生的认知词汇有比较高的要求，词汇基本定位在module5单元中出现的词汇，个别题目属于区分度很高的题目。部分阅读篇幅生词较多，但选项整体难度中等，猜测词义要求学生前后联系，注重考查学生对篇幅中已知信息的捕捉，也较好地考查了学生的逻辑推理能力。如A篇第43道题，学生的失误率就很高。阅读拿满分的学生有，拿10分的学生也有。主要原因是词汇量的大小。词汇量决定了阅读的速度，个别学生来不及就在最后俩篇阅读文章中乱蒙，所以57—65失分就特别明显。平均得分为31.39.任务型阅读有点偏难。

短文改错，我校平均得分为5.31.最大的失误点是最后一个改错，加入it.考查的是句型结构：feel it+n.to do.学生没有看出来。还有一个失误是help 改为helping，学生知道help有名词用法，但不知道本篇需要动词用法，而且还要做主语的。the改为a, serious改为seriously也存在失误。主要的原因是学生在平时的写作过程中自己也会犯同样的错误。所以很难改出文章的失误。今后短文改错在写作练习中提高。写作作为语言输出的重要部分，其重要的一项评分标准是：要运用较高级的词汇并注意句式变化。而学生的特点就是中文式思维，学生的文章就是机械性翻译，我们称之为“吐鲁番”式作文。学生时间来不及，匆匆下笔，想到什么就翻译下什么。尤其是第二段要求描写处理方式。词汇，优美句子的储存量远远不够输出。心理的因素也是导致失分的原因。平均得分为15.96.二：主要问题

1.个体差异大

我校学生文科平均分72，听力22，理科平均68，听力21。文科最高分137，最低分39（含听力）。理科最高分138.5，最低分40（含听力）。

2.单选得分低。动词的用法及词组辨析仍然是学生的弱点，很多学生词汇量达不到考试的词汇要求，英语语法知识簿弱。语言运用能力较差。尤其是省略部分。

3.阅读得分低。在阅读理解中，学生对那些需要逻辑推理、深层理解和综合分析的题目，解答有些困难。基础较簿弱的学生阅读速度达不到大纲提出的“每分钟70-80词的要求”。

最后是时间把握的问题。往往学生试题做不完，而导致学生心理考试不稳定。有些同学害怕时间不够，学生先从做阅读题开始，碰到阅读挫折了或是看了前4篇后花费时间太多，学生就慌，随意做单选和其他剩余题目。按他们的话说，就是蒙的。靠运气了。整个是在混乱紧张状况下考试。于是在书面表达中，学生存在着审题不清，遗漏内容，层次混乱，用词单调，语言组织能力不强，语句中常见错误太多，书写不认真等问题。

三：复习对策

1.因材施教

对于学生个体存在较大差异，一个班级里也有差异。我们的教学中心在于中等偏上的学生。对于在课堂上吃不饱的学生，我们采用“放养式”管理。你上课好好听，下课的作业对于懂的，可以挑着做，但是一定要做。再布置其他可以提高阅读能力的文章让他们做。让他们学会自己学习，培养自学和取舍材料的能力。对于学英语比较困难的学生，增加他们的词汇量，在模块课文复习教学过程中，让学生学会和掌握词汇。在他们身上舍得花时间，花力气狠抓词汇，运用听写、默写、翻译、造句、背诵优美词句等各种训练手段来掌握重点词汇的用法。考试说明上所提及的2500个字务必落实，每天一栏进行中文标注，听写，失误讲解。

2.单选适量

我们的突破口在于5年高考3年模拟这本练习书。每天必须布置的作业是5.3上的语法项目，规定一个语法一个专题分两天或三天完成，写出规定的页码。第二天必须检查，跟他们的平时成绩挂钩。对于学生的不重视，我们一定要督促学生写好做好5.3。

3.完型靠悟

在做完型填空的时候，先要让学生完义，整体理解最重要。学生在平时的学习中要求学生“回填法”。即把正确的答案填回到文章中，之后来朗读文章，整体理解文章。再出现问题，教师来解答。做到有的放矢。自己能解答的问题自己解答，留下时间多练习和他们自我总结。让他们多读多记，强化语言基本知识及加强基本技能的培养，特别要注重同义词，近义词的辨析，弄懂每个词的内涵与外延，确切的意义和适用的场合，同时还应具备提炼文章主题思想及依据相关信息的推断能力。

4.阅读突破

我们的突破口是每堂课前的限时训练，材料是Superstar高考阅读完型自练测，一周练3次，并及时讲解。材料的选择务必是教师做过的，最好配合模块复习的主题。其他三次，是用CCTV-9的新闻材料，也是配合主题，自编题目，基本涉及5个wh，或是自选模块题5中的一题，就划线句子讲讲你的理解。要求学生在规定的时间内读完，并回答问题。教师自己查找新闻材料，一让学生了解时事动态，也符合高考的阅读期中一篇文章可能是新闻报道类，让学生了解新闻报道类文体的特点。新闻报道的中心话题务必出现在首段。二也让选择自选的同学提供训练的机会。最后划出个别的单词让学生来记忆，增加词汇量。这样的新闻材料，学生是欢迎，是有兴趣的。这比什么都有效。

5.写作背默

每周一套试题（从天利38套中选出），试题中的作文要认真写过，上交批改，18分以上的同学给他们分数，低于18分的同学要求重新改过，改到18以上为止。这类学生至少该过两次。之后我们从中挑选好文章，再让学生修改，做短文改错一样来修改文章，最后老师定夺，把优秀的作文打印出来供全体同学背诵，第二天并默写。要求保持好文章，以便在临考前一定要复习作文，分类型背诵已经背默过的作文。这样学生在考试时一是稳定心理，二是心中有底，下笔有灵感。学生发挥就好。

我们组预计在三月底完成5.3语法复习和模块7的复习，四月份是专题训练，分单选，完型，阅读，改错，写作训练。材料由教师分任务完成，可以再次挑选5.3其中容易出错的试题，让学生温故已学的，并纠正学生错误的思维。最后就是练天利38套，精讲精练。教无定法。在离高考只有三个月的日子里，能激发学生兴趣，培养学生的听、说、读、写能力的教学方法都是有效的。

四：复习困惑

我校早晚听力各一次。一模听力成绩比9月份的考试没有明显的提升。我们听力材料用快捷英语和畅想英语。学生反映我们听的材料简单，考试的时候听力材料有些难度。我们是在困惑听力材料的选择和听力时间的安排。

第五篇：咸阳市2013—2014学高三(英语)一模答案

咸阳市2014年高考模拟考试

（一）英语试卷参考答案

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with the report already signed by his father.eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things first.Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances.However, five percent hold the view that the old shouldn’t be helped.Why not? First, they lack the knowledge of first aid, not knowing how to deal with the situation.Second, they are afraid of getting into trouble.In my opinion, we should help each other, especially the old people.Please remember “respect the old” is one of our best traditions.Everyone will become old, and if such a case occurs to us one day when we’re old, I will say I do need your help.Thank you!