第一篇:浙江专用2017届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题一应用文写
专题一 应用文写作
Writing 1
你校英语社团将要排演英语话剧TheSoundofMusic,需要一些演员。请你根据以下提示,向国际部的学生发出口头通知,内容包括:
报名时间:本周五之前 报名地点:教学楼221室 报名条件:1.英语口语流利; 2.喜爱话剧表演; 3.乐于与他人合作。注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone.May I have your attention,please? ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention.【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作是一篇口头通知。口头通知的时态要用一般现在时,人称需根据内容灵活运用。内容要点包括:1.社团的英语话剧需要一些演员;2.时间:本周五以前;3.地点:教学楼221室;4.报名条件:①英语口语流利;②喜爱话剧表演;③乐于与他人合作。可以适当增添细节,以使行文流畅。可以调整内容要点的顺序,但是不能逐字逐句翻译内容要点,还要注意不能遗漏内容要点。
推荐用语:an announcement from,be willing to,work with,look for,join in,sign up 【参考范文】
Good morning,everyone.May I have your attention,please?Here is an announcement
from English Club.We need some actors and actresses for the English play TheSoundofMusic.If you love acting and are willing to work with others,you are the right person we are looking for.Of course,fluency in spoken English is required.Can’t wait to join in it?Just come to Room 221 of the teaching building by this Friday and sign up!Thanks for your attention.Writing 2
假如你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,你校校园网需要招收英文网络编辑(Web editor),请你根据以下提示,用英语向外籍主编Chris申请这一职位。
1.关心时事,对新闻工作感兴趣; 2.有做校刊记者的工作经历;
3.擅长英语,曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Chris,_______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作是一篇申请函。写作前,考生要仔细审题,认真审读试题所提供的中文提示。写作要求中提示了写作要点,易于考生把握。考生写作时要注意紧扣这三方面的写作要点,即关心时事,对新闻工作感兴趣;有过校刊记者的经历;擅长英语等。确定写作要点后,考生便可开始写作,注意文章用第一人称,时态要用现在时。另外,考生要注意文章的层次,使其结构清晰;恰当地使用过渡词以使行文连贯。考生在写申请函时还需注意语气要委婉。
推荐用语:I’m writing to apply to be...,care a lot about,take great interest in,be good at,due to,get the first prize,in addition等。
【参考范文】 Dear Chris,I’m writing to apply to be a Web editor,which I saw advertised on our school website.I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism.I think I can do the job well due to my language skills.I’m good at English.Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school.In addition,I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year,which will surely help me do the job better.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
Writing 3
作为班长,请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr.Smith写一封信,向他表示欢迎并转达同学们对英语课的希望:
1.介绍西方文化; 2.组织多样活动; 3.关注学生发音。注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith,_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________
Yours,Chris 【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作是一封书信。写作时,要紧扣书信结构,结合内容要点,形成开篇、主体和结尾三部分。考生可适当增加细节,做到内容充实,结构完整。时态方面以现在时为主。人称方面以第一人称为主。遣词造句方面,考生应注意合理使用连接词,如first,besides,moreover,last but not(the)least等,以及情态动词和较高级词汇句式,如could,would like,we would appreciate it if you could...等体现诚恳、委婉语气的表达,以提高作文的逻辑性和档次。【参考范文】 Dear Mr.Smith,I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you.Here are some of our expectations for your English class.First,we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture.We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language.Besides,we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English.Last but not least,please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation,because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do.Thank you very much.Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,Chris
Writing 4
请你给外教Jeff写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.告诉他你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名; 2.感谢他在口语及演讲技巧上给予的帮助。注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jeff,________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
Yours,Li Hua 【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作是一封电子邮件。内容要点:1.告诉Jeff你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名;2.感谢他在口语技巧上给予的帮助。考生可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。内容比较简单,注意表达要顺畅,尽量使用一些高级结构,给文章添彩,比如:宾语从句、介词短语、现在分词、不定式短语等。
推荐用语:take the first place,thank you so much for,advice on how to do,with your great help等。【参考范文】 Dear Jeff,I can’t wait to tell you that I took the first place in the Speech Contest.I know that without your help,I could have gone nowhere.Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive.With your great help,I faced the challenge confidently.I really appreciate what you’ve done for me.Thank you very much!
Yours,Li Hua
Writing 5
假定你是李华,从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor)的广告,欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括中英文能力); 2.参加意图(帮助别人学习中文和介绍中国文化); 3.希望获准。注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,_________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作属于提纲类作文,其文体优势在于要点明确,内容贴近生活,这样能保证绝大多数考生有话可说。不过此类文章的写作难点在于考生要注意理顺要点,适当增加细节,使用恰当的过渡词句,以使文章语句逻辑连贯、条理清楚;同时还要注意仔细斟酌,认真选词,尽量使用一些较高级的短语、固定句式来确切地表达意思,避免汉语式的表达。【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua,a senior middle school student from the People’s Republic of China.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet,employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.I am interested in it and I’d like to take part in it.Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it.Besides,I have a good command of spoken and written English.I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese and introduce Chinese culture to them as well.I hope I will be accepted and I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
Writing 6
假如你是李华,有一个好朋友叫王刚,进入高三后,他的学习压力越来越大,常常熬夜,而白天却打不起精神听课,学习成绩每况愈下,为此他很痛苦,写信求助于你。请你写一封信给他,提出一些自我调整的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Wang Gang,_________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,Li Hua 【写作指导】
本篇书面表达是一篇书信体应用文。话题熟悉,贴近考生生活,容易下笔。书信的格
式已经给出,无需考虑。首先,在构思过程中,要仔细审题,明确立意和要求。其次,在写作过程中,要对所给信息进行分析,做到层次清晰,逻辑性强,有针对性和说服力。切忌大而空,摆花架子。时态要以现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主,第一人称穿插使用。最后,在语言上,要使用亮彩的语言和经典句型来提升文章档次。当然,通过使用一些恰当的过渡性副词或连词能够使行文连贯,给人印象深刻。【参考范文】 Dear Wang Gang,How are you getting along with your study recently?Here are some advice,hoping they are helpful for you.Firstly,you should follow your teacher’s advice,as it’s the first time for us to go through the College Entrance Examination while our teachers have so much experience.Secondly,you are advised to have a good sleep because a lack of sleep may make you have a hard time catching up in your studies.Thirdly,it’s necessary for you to make full use of daytime.In a word,relax yourself and believe in yourself,I do believe you can be successful!
Yours truly,Li Hua
Writing 7
假如你是星光中学的学生李华,将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛,请撰写一篇演讲稿,主要内容包括:
1.介绍自己的梦想:成为一名山村教师,帮助山村孩子; 2.解释拥有这个梦想的原因:山区偏僻,教育落后; 3.遇到的阻碍:父母和朋友都反对; 4.我会„„
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Good morning,everyone!_________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
Thank you!【写作指导】
本文是一篇提纲类应用作文,内容是要求考生以“My Chinese Dream”为主题写一篇演讲稿。写作内容主要包括:一是介绍自己的中国梦;二是解释拥有这个梦想的原因;三是要实现这个梦想的障碍;四是表明自己的愿望和决心。本文的话题符合时代需求,具有一定的现实意义。考生在审题时主要应考虑以下几个方面:动词的时态和语态、主谓一致和写作要点。这篇文章应以一般现在时和第一人称为主。在写作过程中,考生思路要清晰,语句通顺,可适当增添细节以使文章更流畅,可以运用一些复杂句型,如定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句等,还可以运用一些高级词汇和非谓语动词结构,这样有助于提高文章的得分档次。【参考范文】
Good morning,everyone!I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “My Chinese Dream”.
As we know,the education of rural areas falls behind other areas.And the children there are longing for knowledge.Therefore,the problem of lacking teachers is especially serious.However,my parents and friends object to my idea of being a rural teacher.They think I’m foolish.I understand their thoughts and feelings,but I think rural children need me greatly.I will study hard to realize my dream.I won’t regret my choice.I will struggle for my dream.Come on and join me!Thank you!
第二篇:2013高考英语二轮复习写作专题 第三部分 及针对训练 应用文 演讲稿精品教案
第三部分高考作文优秀范文及针对训练(配范文)
四、演讲稿1.假如你是一名导游,陪同某外国旅游团游览长城。车抵长城,下车前你准备对大家作必要的介绍和交代。请拟一份讲话稿。讲话稿必须包括以下内容:
1.简单介绍长城(世界上最长的城墙,有两千多年的历史,是世界奇观之一);
2.在长城逗留两个半小时,11点离开;
3.游览车在入口处等候,记住车号,准时返回;
4.贵重物品随身携带,下车前关上车窗;
5.游览时注意安全,祝大家玩得愉快。
注意:不要逐句翻译,字数100个单词左右。
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,Here we are at the foot of the Great Wall.It is the longest wall in the world and has a history of over 2 000 years.It is one of the wonders of the world.We'll stay here for two hours and a half, that is to say, we'll leave at 11 o'clock.The bus will be waiting for us at the entrance.Please remember our bus number and be back on time.Besides, please take your valuable things with you and shut all the windows before you get off.Be careful while you are on the Great Wall.Have a good time!
The Seaside Swimming Pool
针对训练假如你是业余气象员,你从电台天气预报节目得知了今晚和明天上午你处的天气情况,晚饭后6点钟在校广播室用英语向全体师生作天气预报,并提出忠告。要点如下:
①午夜至凌晨两点有强劲北风。②气温将下降5-8度。
③明天上午有阵雨。④要求同学们今晚离开教室时关好门窗。
⑤明天早上起床时多穿些衣服,以防感冒。
词数100在右。
Attention, please.It is six o'clock in the afternoon.I'm now giving the weather forecast as usual.From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8℃.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning.Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning.Please put on more clothes in order to protect yourself catching cold.That's all.Thank you.Wang Xiaoming
第三篇:2013高考英语二轮复习写作专题 第三部分 及针对训练 应用文 说明书精品教案
第三部分高考作文优秀范文及针对训练(配范文)
五、说明书武汉第三制药厂(Medical nant)研制了一种新药,药品已被外商订购。制药厂请你为该厂产品写一份说明书,请根据提示完成。
1.本药品为中药,对心脏病疗效显著。
2.用量:每日三次,一次两粒(pi11);发病时可加服1~2粒。可长期服用。
3.服药后如感身体不适请停服。小孩和孕妇(Pregnant)禁服。
4.本药品应放在阴凉干燥处。
5.使用本药品还应严格听从医生的指导。
注意:1.说明书必须包括以上所有要点,但不要逐条翻译。2.词数100左右。
A New Kind of Medicine
Wuhan No.3 Medical Plant has invented a new kind of medicine.It is very good for heart trouble(disease).It should be taken three times a clay and two pills once.It can also be taken one or two more pills if needed.This kind of medicine can be used for a long time.It's dangerous for children and the pregnant.They mustn't take this medicine.If you are not feeling well after taking the medicine, you should stop taking it.This medicine should be kept in a cool and dry place.It's better to follow the doctor's advice before taking it.
第四篇:2013高考英语二轮复习写作专题 第三部分 及针对训练 应用文 书信精品教案
第三部分
高考作文优秀范文及针对训练(配范文)应用文写作
一、书信
重点诠释 英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同,它包括五部分,即:信头,称呼,正文,结束语和签名,具体如下:
精典题例解读 下面是2003年NMET的书面表达试题。体裁为书信,内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少,但无法照译。
考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点: 1.认真审读所给文字和草图,确认全部信息要点。2.确定写的动机:向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。
3.确定写的基本路子:以回信的口气,介绍情况,询问态度。
4.确定语篇的结构:书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。5.起草语篇,考虑措辞。6.进行文字修改。假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右。2.参考词汇:房租—rent(n.)。
Dear
Bob, _______________________________________________
_______________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 内容要点: 1.开头;2.公寓(一室带浴室、厨房);3.面积、家具(25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子);4.公寓位置(芳草街,离学校一站远);5.月租500元;6.结尾。说明: 1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。Dear Bob, I'm so glad to learn that you're coming in September.I've found a place for you, It's a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 yuanper month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact.it's only one stop.Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you.Just let me know.Yours, Li Hua 针对训练 1.假如你是贫困地区的一名失学的儿童,名叫李萍。你很幸运地得到在北京工作的一位美国人Mr.Smith的帮助,得以重新回到校园继续学习。于是你于2002年2月1日给Mr.Smith写一封信,向他表示感谢,并介绍了学习情况。(字数:80~120)信中内容包括: 1.收到书和钱,并能重返校园,表示感谢;
2.在老师的帮助下学习上取得了很大进步; 3.老师表扬了你,家长鼓励你; 4.下决心更加努力学习,取得更大进步;
5.盼望见到Mr.Smith,但因没有机会去北京,希望Mr.Smith给你寄张照片。
【参考范文】 Dear Mr.Smith.I'm glad to have received your money and books.Now, I can go to school again.I'm very happy.Thank you very much!
I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts.I have made great progress in my study.Our teachers have praised me for it.And my parents have encouraged me
to work harder.I have made up my mind to do so and make even greater progress with the help of the teachers.I'm looking forward to seeing you, but I have no chance to go to Beijing.Could you send me one of your photos to me? Thank you!Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Ping
2.假定你是李华,有一位美国朋友Smith托你在北京找工作,你看到21世纪英文报(21st Century)上刊登了一则招聘启事,认为他很合适。请用英文写一封短信,用E-mail发给Smith,告知此事,并征求他的意见。广告原文如下: Foreign Teachers Wanted!The Education Department of the Ladder Company is running an English course for children and adults.Requirements:
Foreign Teachers Wanted!
The Education Department of the Ladder Company is running an English course for children and adults.Requirements: 1.Native English speaker 2.University degree in education or related field preferred 3.Foreign expert certification If you are interested, please call us: Tel:86-10-68019433 E-mail:liecbj@hotmail.com 注意:1.开头语已给你写好; 2.介绍必须包括所有内容,但不要逐词翻译说明部分;
3.词数:100个单词左右。
Dear Smith, I know you want to find a job in Beijing.【参考范文】 Dear Smith, I know you want to find a job in Beijing.I read an advertisement in today's “21st Century”,an English paper here.A Beijing Ladder Information Company is running a school for children and adults.So they need native speaker English teachers.What they prefer is a university degree in education or other related field, which you have.And a foreign expert certification is also required.I think you are the right person they want.If you are interested, please directly call or write to the company.The telephone number is 86-10-68019433,and their e-mail address is :liecbj@hotmail.com.Good luck.Yours, Li Hua 3.光明中学依山傍水,校园曾经安静美丽,一年前该校附近建了一家化工厂。学校受到了严重影响。假如你是该校的一名学生,名叫李东。请你根据下表内容用英文给中国日报写一封信,反映情况,呼吁有关部门采取相应措施。建厂前 建厂后
校园内鲜花盛开,树木常青;校园安静,学习佳地 工厂每天排出大量污水、废气,严重影响师生健康,花草树木受到危害,工厂噪音也干扰了教学活动。注意:1.词数:100左右; 2.开头已为你写好。Dear editor, I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School,Our school used to„ 【参考范文】 Dear editor, I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School.Our school used tobe very beautiful.There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school all the year round.It used to be a quiet place and it was a good place for study.Things have changed since a chemical works was built near our school a year ago.Every day it produces large quantities of waste water and harmful gases.The terrible pollution has done great harm to us as well as to the trees and flowers.And the great noise from the works has greatly affected our teaching and studying activities.Our school is no longer a quiet and good place for study.We suffer a lot from the pollution.We do hope you can help us to take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted.Yours truly, Li Dong
4.下面是某中外合资企业刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一则广告:
Office secretary, with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations, operating PC(personal computer).Address, age, health condition Write to A518,Charlie Office.假如你是张林,现年20岁,身体健康,学习英语6年,学过广告中所列项目。通信地址是滨海市745信箱(P.O.Box745)。请根据广告中提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况,写一封自荐信。字数:100词左右。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir,I have read your advertisement in yesterday's China Daily.I feel I am qualified for the job in your company.I'm 20 years old and in good health.After graduation from a middle school, I studied English for six years.I also learned bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations.I'm good at operating PC and have a good command of English.I'm interested in the position of a secretary.I want very much to be accepted by your company.I'll work hard if I can be a member in your company.Zhang Ling
5.假设你是王晓明,请根据你校美化校园的规划,用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封短信,介绍该规划。短信的主要内容如下: 规划目的 美化校园、净化空气
创造良好学习和生活环境 种植花草树木 建一个植物园,供参观、实践 规划内容 建一个小花园,供休息、读书 建几座名人雕塑,激励师生 注意:1.短信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。2.词数:100左右。3.参考词汇:雕塑—statue(n.)植物园—botanical garden(n.)Dear Peter, I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Welcome to our school if you have any chance.Yours,One possible version Dear Peter , I'd like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher ,and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.According to the program ,we will plant different kinds of trees ,flowers and grass in and around our school.A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in.Besides ,we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest.What's more ,some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder.Don't you think it a wonderful program? Welcome to our school if you have any chance.Yours , 6.假如你是李晓华,住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。自然情况 ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住 ②经济发展迅速 成就 ③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。④水、空气污染 存在问题 ⑤交通拥挤 对江城发展的看法 ⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)注意:1.回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。2.词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。
参考词汇:经济economy n. Dear Bob,It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. Yours,Xiaohua Dear Bob,It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River.It is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years.New factories, houses and roads have been built.More schools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically.I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.Yours, Xiaohua
7.请你仔细阅读所给英文信,然后给Worried写一封回信。要求包含以下内容: 1.安慰鼓励; 2.记一些惯用词组和句型结构,将它们组织在一起并用其造句; 3.多读英语,告诉他通过大量阅读才能正确使用语言; 4.多背诵一些好的短文。要求:不要逐字逐条翻译,词数100左右。Dear Helpful, I'm a Senior Three student and I'm in trouble.I used to like English,but now I have some difficulty in English,especially in English writing.Though I know English is a very important subject,I think now it is too difficult for me.You know I have got poor results in English many times because my writing is poor.I wonder why so many students like English and can get good results in English.I do want to be one of the best students and go to a famous university after graduation.But my English is not good enough.What should I do? Worried 【参考范文】 Dear Worried, I have received your letter and I'm glad to give you some suggestions.First of all,don't be disappointed.Many students find it difficult to write well.In my opinion,if you want to improve your writing,you can do several things.First,do some study with set phrases and sentence structures.Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them.Second,read as much as possible.There are many things that can't be learnt.You must see them in books many times.Then you'll be able to use them correctly yourself.So in order to write well,you must learn to read much.Finally,you'd better recite some good passages.Good luck to you in your writing.Helpful
7.假设你是李华,你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点,写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。内容要点:*表示歉意 *理由:去机场接人 *询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座 注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan, ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________
Yours sincerely Li Hua One possible version: Dear Miss Morgan, I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon.My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.I am very much interested in American society and history.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.Yours sincerely Li Hua 8.你是李华。当闻知某合资宾馆招收10名女服务员后,便写信与饭店外方经理联系求职。求职信应包括下表中所列全部内容。姓名 李华 性别 女 年龄 20 文化程度 高中毕业 住址 婚否 未婚 健康状况 良好 深圳市深南路48号 个 6~12岁 在第一小学学习人 12~18岁 在深圳中学上学 简 18~20岁 在建筑工地干活 历 20岁至今 在邮政局当邮递员 上学期间学习了六年英语,中学毕业后一直不间断学习英语,现在英爱好及 语口语和打字都很熟练。特长 喜欢唱歌和跳舞。2004年曾获深圳市业余歌手比赛一等奖。Dear Mr Margaret,I'm glad to know that ten waitresses are needed in your hotel.I'd like to be one of them.I'm a Chinese girl of twenty.I'm single and healthy.I started school when I was six.I studied in No.1 Primary School.At the age of eleven, I went Shenzhen Middle school for learning.After graduation in 2003 I began to work on a constructions site as an ordinary worker, I became a postwoman when I was twenty.I had learned English for 6 years at school, and have kept on learning it since I left school.Now I can speak good English and type well.I enjoy singing and dancing.Last year I won the first prize in the competition for the spare time singers in the city.Could you let me have a position in your hotel? Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully, Li Hua 9.假如你是王林,李明是你的好友,他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣,打算到该公司谋职(apply for a position。请根据下面李明的简历表,用英语为他写一封推荐信。词数110左右。姓名 李明 性别 男 国籍 中国 出生地 江苏,启东 婚否 已婚 出生日期 1980.8.21 通讯地址 电话 0513-83335550 启东市人民路148号 职业 律师 学历 大学毕业 外语水平擅长英语,懂一些日语、德语 其他 有三年工作经历,办事认真,待人诚恳,与人和睦相处 Dear Mr.Brown, I'd like to introduce my friend to you, Mr.Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position with your firm.He graduated from college three years ago and since then he has worked as a lawyer.He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German.He works hard and is careful in everything he does.He is honest, kind and easy to get on with.He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Qidong, Jiangsu Province, China.He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Qidong city.His telephone number is 0513-83335550.He shows great interest in your firm.If he is accepted, he will do his best.I'm sure he will be fit for the position.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Wang Lin
10.假定你是李明,去年时期曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访向,住在Peter家。今年寒假Peter要来北京,将住在你家。请根据下列信息给Peter发个电邮件。内容 到京 到机场接机,举办欢迎家宴 参观长城等名胜古迹 活动 到场欣赏中国民乐新年音乐会 游览繁华市区、购物 希望 如行程允许,在北京过春节 注意:1.词数不少于60;2.对紧扣主题的发挥不予扣分;3.开头与结尾已为你写好。January 26th , 2007 Hi!It's Li Ming here.Glad to learn you're coming
to
Beijing ,China
._________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________
I believe we will have much fun together.WELL , SEE YA SOON.BYE!LLi Ming 内容要点:1.接机、家宴;2.游览长城、市区及购物;3.欣赏新年音乐会;4.希望共渡春节 January 26th, 2007 Hi!It's Li Ming here again.Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing in a couple of days.My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we are so glad you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home.On the day you arrive, my father and I will meet you at the airport and in the evening we will have a nice dinner party at home, I'm sure you will like all the delicious Chinese food.During the following days, I will show you around many places of interest in Beijing, including the Great Wall, which is regarded as one of the Seven Wonders of the World.We will spend some time touring around downtown Beijing, such as Wangfujing, Xidan and Qianmen, where you can do some shopping if you like.Of course, as it is the largest one in the world, Tian' anmen Square is a scenic spot we can't miss.Another exciting moment we will share is going to the 2007 New Year Concert given by China National Traditional Orchestra, which is held at famous Vienna Golden Hall, Austria during the Chinese Spring Festival every year.The spring festival, like the carnivals in western countries, is a special joyous/joyful occasion of celebration for Chinese as well as other many Asians.If you can stay in Beijing long enough, you will be able to share the pleasure of it with us.I believe we will have much fun together.WELL, SEE YA SON, BYR!Li Ming 11.假设你是李华,明年即将进入大学学习,但是不知怎样适应大学的生活。请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信,寻求建议。(1)在生活中不会照料自己;(2)感到孤独、经常想家;(3)钱物容易丢失;(4)食物、气候不适应;(5)校外租房现象。
注意:1.短信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.词数120左右。
Dear President, _______________________________________________
Yours, Dear President, Next year I will go to study at university, but I don't know how to adapt myself to university life.I hear many freshmen are at a loss what to do when they are at university.They can't take care of themselves in their everyday life, feeling lonely and homesick.Clothes, money or mobile phones are sometimes gone.And because of different climates and food, they often feel sick.Some even rent rooms outside the campus.Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future? Yours, Li Hua
12.日前,针对学生的零用钱(pocket money)的消费方向,你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查.得出数据如下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信,反映这一情况,并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。注意:1.书信中不必一一列举具体数字,只要抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可。2.字数:120~150字。开头已给出.不计人总词数。Dear editor. Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money. ____________________________________________________ Dear editor, Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.In this survey, both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books, sacks and playing games, still some money goes to clothes, banks, sports, and so on.The survey shows that about 44%of seniors prefer books to sacks(37%)and playing games(31%).On the other hand, only 32%of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books, while over a half buy sacks and 44% spend on playing games.Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money in clothes or put it in banks.I think too much sacks will not only makes us put on weight but also does herm to our health.In addition.if we play games without limit, we'll lose much precious time, which results in low grades.Furthermore, the money is hard-earned.I hope we students value our money as well as our time.13.假如你叫李华,是长沙市某中学学生。最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征询住宿家庭,你有意申请。请根据下表提供的信息用英语给校长写封信,说明你的理由。申请理由: 住房条件 宽敞、整洁、环境优美 语言优势 擅长英语,父母是英语教授,不会有交流困难 接待经验 上个月刚刚接待过两名美国学生 参观游览 父亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜 其他 „„(内容由考生自己添加)
注意:
1.文章必须包括所有要点。
2.词数:100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear sir, I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of
the
British
students.__________________________________________________ Dear sir, I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students.We have a large and clean house, which lies in a beautiful area of the city.I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English, so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers.My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car.Last month we received two American students.We had a great time.Besides, my mother cooks well, so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food.I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them.Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua
第五篇:2013高考英语二轮复习写作专题 第三部分 及针对训练 记叙文精品教案
第三部分 高考作文优秀范文及针对训练(配范文)
记叙文写作
重点诠释:
1.记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。
2.在记叙文体的高考书面表达中,命题形式主要是提纲式或图表式。
3.通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作,第一人称主要是写自己的经历,第三人称主要是写他人的经历或事迹。
4.由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去,因而,其时态主要用一般过去时。
5.记叙文通常是按照事情发展的先后顺序来表达内容的。
写作典例:
请仔细看一下下面的图画,注意图画中的细节:
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。
注意:
1、目击者应该准确报告事实;
2、词数100左右;
3、结尾已为你写好
剖析:本题图文结合,审题时要重视细节。明确写作要求:
本题要求写一篇目击者的报告,用第一人称写; 2 认真审图,确认全部信息要点: ①图中的环境条件;
②人物位置(此点对完成本题十分重要); ③人物活动; ④人物表情;
Then the factory was forced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “Is there any evidence to show that we did harm to people's health? In fact, we haven't.” Just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer.It is very clear that the pollution has harmed not only the people around the factory but also the manager himself.The manager regretted having caused so much pollution.Now he has realized the importance of keeping the air clean.2.根据图画写一篇短文,叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。
One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over.He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don't do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be.And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
I disagree with what the mother did in the story.I think parents should set a good example to their minds.They should not only care for their children's health, but their minds.They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble.We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?
3.高考是全社会关注的大事,学校和家庭表现尤为突出。家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给予无微不至的“关怀”,结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发表自己的观点(夹叙夹议)。词数120左右。
As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near,________________________
As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse.From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is “studying hard”.There
are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do.How poor he is!At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters.They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university.It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children.However, they don't realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure.It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much.So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children.Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last!
本文是夹叙夹议类的文章,主要反映家庭对考生的特别“关注”给他们带来负面影响。在写作过程中,对主题要审准、审清,对发展过程和结果进行叙述
4.下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历,请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。
注意:
1.短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;
2.叙述必须用第一人称;
3.词数100左右。生词:违章者--offender n.十字路口--crossroads n.The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us.“We've found you at long last,” they said.But we didn't know them.Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.So come on, stand here.Hope you don't have to wait as long as we did.Good luck.”
Long ago, a group of boys were playing happily in the garden where there were many water vats.Suddenly a boy fell into a vat.All the boys ran away except a small one, whose name was Sima Guang , eight years old.He thought he should help the boy, so he hurried towards the large vat, and broke it with a big stone.Finally, the boy was saved.