第一篇:2016年公共英语二级写作赏析
2016年公共英语二级写作范文赏析
(一)[题目要求]
A foreign delegation is to visit your university.You are assigned to make a welcome speech on behalf of your class.Now write a welcome speech to
1)express your welcome, and
2)make a brief introduction to your university.You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)
外国代表团参观你们的大学。你被分配做了欢迎致辞中代表你的类。现在写了欢迎讲话
1)表达你的欢迎,2)做一个简单的介绍你的大学。
你应该写上ANSER SHEET2.大约100字的信的末尾不要签署自己的名字。用“Li Ming”这个名字。你并不需要写地址。(10分)
[参考范文]
A Welcome Speech一封欢迎词(107 words)
Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, please allow me to express the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our Class One in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University.We have been looking forward to seeing you for long.It is a wonderful day today.Now I would like to brief my university to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to discover.Tsinghua University is well-known both at home and abroad.If you want to meet distinguished scholars, please come to Tsinghua.If you want to meet the most industrious students, please come to Tsinghua.If you want to discover the most attractive campus, please come to Tsinghua.I do hope that you will enjoy your stay in Tsinghua.Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
致欢迎辞一封欢迎词(107字)女士们,先生们:
首先,请允许我表达最衷心的欢迎各位代表我们班之一,在清华大学计算机科学系。我们一直期待着看到你长。这是一个美好的日子。
现在我想向大家介绍我的大学给你,因为我想留下最精彩等待您去发掘。清华大学是驰名海内外。如果你想以满足杰出的学者,请到清华。如果你想满足最勤劳的同学,请到清华。如果你要发现最有吸引力的校园,请到清华。我希望您将享受您在清华的住宿。
您忠诚的
李明
(二)a worrying problem.Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement, Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.路线:假设您订购一台冰箱,但后来发现了一个令人担忧的问题。写信投诉来形容此事,并要求解决,在你的信的结尾不要签署自己的名字,用“李明”代替。
[参考范文]
就冰箱的问题写一封投诉信
Dear Sir,I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time.But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.After we used it for several days.we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly.When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperture range from 0℃ to 9℃.This problem has affected our normal life.Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.Yours faithfully,Li Ming 亲爱的先生,我很高兴,我们上周下令冰箱已经准时到达。但很可惜,我们发现有一些错误的冷藏设施。
之后,我们用了好几天。我们发现,保存在冷藏室的食物迅速变坏。当我们终于决定把温度在里面,我们惊奇地发现它是15℃左右,远远标准温辐射范围从0℃到9℃。
这个问题已经影响了我们的正常生活。请你让我知道你是否能尽快派修理工的可能吗?我希望我的问题会得到您的关照。
此致,李明
第二篇:公共英语四级写作(范文模版)
公共英语四级写作与翻译部分
一、写作要领
考生无论遇到哪一类试题,都要仔细审题,根据题目的要求确定文章的类型和中心内容,并对你自己熟悉的、可写的内容进行筛选、整理、规划、列出提纲,这是很重要的一步。提纲列好后,要围绕提纲内容展开说明自己的观点和结论,不要在写作时抛开提纲。一篇好的作文应该具备以下5个方面:
(1)内容切题,主题鲜明。
(2)表达清楚准确,条理清晰。
(3)结构完整,衔接流畅自然。
(4)句法正确多样。
(5)用词恰当丰富。
二、方法与步骤
1.提纲
提纲是写作一篇文章的详细计划、安排。提纲准备的目的是:
(1)计划要写什么。
(2)文章的思想的表达顺序。
(3)如何安排段落。
(4)使写作从头到尾围绕主题进行。内容一般用短语和词。主题、副题表达先后顺序,要用数字标明。提纲内容的安排是写作一篇好文章的关键。
2.依据提纲写作
(1)初稿
在完成提纲安排后,动笔写作的第一步是打初稿,在写初稿时要争取做到心中有数,胸有成竹,经过反复练习后,能够按照提纲安排落笔成文,一气呵成。如果突发奇想,也可修改提纲,顺理成章,但切忌偏离正题。在初稿写作时要有意识加大行距,为文章的修改留有余地。
(2)定稿及修改方法
在完成初稿后,修改是必不可少的过程。修改文章要注意以下几点:
①内容是否切题,论点是否鲜明,论证是否合理、严密。
②段落衔接时过渡使用是否合理,语句是否通顺、有没有语法错误,用词是否恰当。③拼写是否正确,标点符号、大小写是否有错误,有无其他笔误。
PETS-4写作部分考察考生的书面表达能力。全国英语等级考试第四级大纲对考试技能的要求是:PETS第四级考生应能写出多种类型的文章,包括私人和正式信函、备忘录、小结和报告。同时也能写一般描述性,叙述性和说明性的文章。
三:写作华龙点睛
考生根据提示信息(中/英文)写出一篇160-200词(标点符号不计算在内)的短文。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。
该部分的考试时间为35分钟。满分为20分,所占权重为25%。考生在答题卡2上做答。
(一)命题规律
规律一:
从命题体裁来看,PETS-4写作部分出题体裁大体可划分成两类:一种是给出提纲或者开头句的命题写作(writing based on the given outlines or opening sentences),一种是给出提纲的图画或图表写作(writings based on the visual information or pictures or graphics)。
规律二:
从命题范围来看,PETS-4写作大多为社会热点问题和人们最为关注的问题。这种各样家庭,环境,社会普遍现象为话题的写作成为考察重点。反映了命题人希望考生能够对当今社会热门话题有所关注和思考的愿望。
规律三:
从出题形式本身来看,命题本身不会给考生制造理解障碍。写作题目易于理解,无论以文字的形式还是以图表,图画的形式出现都浅显易懂。命题不会让考生因为题目中出现的生词或者难以理解的短语而影响正常发挥。
(二)高分对策
英语写作是语言应用的一个重要方面,也是语言能力测定的重要手段,衡量写作水平的标准便是看其是否能用学过的语言材料,语法知识等用文字的形式来表达描述。
书面语言表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达。先是思维,把要写的东西在脑中思考,这往往是个别的,孤立的一些素材,很凌乱琐碎;因此要对此进行组织,把这些思维作出整理,使其条理、系统化,但这还是较粗糙的,可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误;最后才是表达,把组织过的材料仔细推敲,确无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等,这就是写作。上述的三个过程,最难的就是第三个过程,这需要我们有较好的语法知识,掌握一定数量的句型,习惯用语,熟练的写作技巧,这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来。
总之,要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。
(三)建议总结
1.阅读优秀范文
首先要搞好阅读。阅读是写作的基础,在阅读方面下的功夫越深,驾驭语言的能力也就越强。所以要写好英语先要读好英语,在语言学习方面狠下苦功,教科书要读透,因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文,文笔流畅,语言规范,精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。再就是要进行大量课外阅读,并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。
2.加强练词造句训练
其次,要加强练词造句的训练。词句对作文相当于造房的材料,无好材料就造不出好房子。平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累,把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录,再对照正确句子,使地道的英语句子如同条件反射,落笔就对。
了解英语写作格式还有,要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式。可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书,对英语写作有一个初步的概念,如怎么写议论文,如何提出论据,如何展开,如何确定中心句;又如,英语信的格式,如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等,然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习。
3.用英语写日记 考试大论坛
要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯。经常用英语记日记,等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法。在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等,使文句更优美生动。还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔。写好后对照范文,找出差距,然后再练习,这对提高英语作文也很有帮助,在游泳中学会游泳,只有多练习才能练好。
总之,平时学习语言素材积累多了,体裁格式记住了又经常练习不断提高,到作文下笔时就会得心应手,水到渠成。
4.注意比较中英文表达的区别,使语言更加地道。
由于语言不通,中英文的思维方式也有很大不同,表现在被动语态,对时间空间概念的描述等各方面。因此,英文写作的一大技巧就是使用更加符合英美人思维方式的表达方式。在此,我们为考生精选了10个句子,考生注意仔细体会中英文表达法的区别。
第三篇:公共英语二级考试作文
公共英语二级考试作文范文:
1.欢迎词:
[题目要求]
一批外宾到你们学校参观,并决定参加你班的英语晚会,会上由你致词表示欢迎,并介绍班级情况。为此,请你写一篇简短的发言稿。内容要点如下:
1、表示欢迎;
2、介绍班级情况,如男女生人数,籍贯,年龄,兴趣等;
3、介绍你班学习科目及学习情况;
4、介绍晚会的主要节目;
5、祝愿的话。
注意:
1、致词必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条翻译;
2、词数100词左右;
3、请直接将书面表达写在答题卡背面。
[参考范文]
Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome toour class and welcome to our evening party.First of all,Let me say a few words about our class.There are 50 students in our
Class-26 of us are boys and 24 are girls.Most of us are from Beijing.We
are mostly at the same age-about 17.Some go in for sports, and some are
interested in reading,.We have 6 subjects in all, including English,Chinese and mathematics.All of us like to study English, and we usually
spend a lot of time on it.In our program tonight, there will be a short play, group singing and so
on.I hope you will enjoy them and have a good time.Thank you.2.广播通知:
题目]你们学校学生会(the student
union)将为来访的澳大利亚朋友举办一个晚会,请你根据下述内容要点拟一个100词左右的英语广播通知,欢迎同学参加:
目的:欢迎来访的澳大利亚朋友。
时间:10月12日(周五)晚七点。
地点:图书馆第二阅览室
内容:文娱节目,包括游戏、跳舞等
[参考范文]
May i have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.the
student union is going to hold a party on Friday evening, October 10, to
welcome our friends from Australia.the party will be held in the 2nd
reading room in the library.it’ll begin at 7:00pm.at the party we’ll have music, dancing, singing and games.Australian
friends will perform some nice programs in the party.Everyone is welcome.Please come in time.3.请假条:
题目要求]王军的外婆上星期从楼上摔下来,跌断了右腿,现在卧床。王军的母亲李一花为此向刘老师请假,说明家中的情况,王军的父亲现在北京开会,需要王军在家照顾外婆,大约3天。请根据上述提示用英文写一张请假条,约80-100词,不要根据中文翻译写作文。
Dear Mr.Liu,I’m Li Jun’s mother.I’m writing to ask for permission for Li Jun’s
absence.the fact is that he has to stay at home to take care of my mother
who had a serious fall from upstairs and got her right leg broken last
week.I’m sure he will be back in three days when my husband returns from
a meeting in Beijing.Thank you.sincerely,Li Yihua
4.英语导游:
题目要求]假如你是一名导游,陪同外宾游览长城,下车前用英语告诉外宾:
1、长城的长度、历史、世界奇观之一;
2、讲话时间是八点半,在长城停留两个小时,十点半离开。游览车在入口处等,请记住车牌号,准时上车;
3、随身带好贵重物品,下车前关好车窗;
4、最后祝大家玩得愉快。
注意:字数100词左右。
[参考范文]
Ladies and gentlemen: :
Here we are at the foot of the great wall.It’s the longest wall in the
world and has a history of over 2000 years.It’s one of the wonders of the
world.We will spend two hours on the wall.It’s 8:30 now.we’ll leave at
10:30.the bus will be waiting for us at the entrance.please remember our
bus number and be back on time.Besides, please take your valuable things
with you and shut all the windows before getting off.Have a good time!Thank you.5.英文简历:
[题目要求]某外资企业想要招聘几名英文秘书,外方经理想了解应聘者的情况,请你用英文写一篇自我介绍,词数在100左右。
姓名:李一加
出生:1978.8.28,广州
简历:1999年毕业北京师范大学英语系;在某中学里教了2年英语;后来在外文书店里当了2年店员。
特长:汉语交好,英语也不错,1996年曾获北京英语竞赛第二名,平时利用业
余时间自学英语,现在能与外宾交谈。自信能胜任此项工作,并决心把工作搞好。
[参考范文]
my name is Li Yijia.I was born on august 28, 1978, in Guangzhou.in
1999 i graduated from English department of Beijing normal university.First, I taught in a middle school for two years, then i worked as a
salesman in the foreign language bookstore for two years.I am not only good at Chinese but good English.I am greatly interested
in English.in 1996 i won the second place in the English competitions in
Beijing.I have continued learning English in my spare time.now i am glad
That I can talk with foreigners freely.I am sure I am fit for the work and determined to do my job well.6.留言本:
[题目]假定你是王林,你得加拿大朋友mark与你在同一个城市工作。你去邀请他和你一起参观一个中国画展。他不在,请你根据以下要点给他写个留言条,要点:
1、介绍画展:中国画、历代名画展
2、展会日期及地点:本月8日-18日,艺术博物馆
3、约定会面得地点和时间
注意:
1、词数100词左右,信的开头与结尾已为你写好;
2、请直接将书面表达写在答题卡背面。
[参考范文]
Mark,I have visited you just now but you were not in, so I had to leave the
message to you.I want to invite you to visit the Chinese art exhibition
in the art museum.the exhibition will display the most famous paintings
in the past dynasties and traditional Chinese paintings.The exhibition will
be open from the eighth to the eighteenth of this month.So can we meet
at the gate of the art museum at 9:30 am on Sunday?
7.英文通知:
题目要求]
假定你是学生会工作人员,最近学生会决定成立英语俱乐部,要写一个通知,通知必须包括下列内容:
1、英语俱乐部的宗旨;
2、活动;
3、如何如会;
4、成立大会举行的时间和地点。
注意:词数80-120词,开头已经写好;请直接将书面表达写在答题卡背面。notice
The student union has recently agreed to set up:
[参考范文]
The student union has recently agreed to set up an English club.it aimsto encourage students to learn English outside of class, to raise Englishabilities and to create a favourable English-learning atmosphere.Duringthis term foreign experts will give lectures on English and Americancultures once a week, and students can meet once a week at the Englishcorner.besides, we will also have lectures given on the study of English.anyone in the school is welcome to join the club by filling in the
related from and providing one photo by the end of this month.1,our first meeting will be held in the school gym at 5:00 p.m.friday, 21february, 2004.the student union14 februry, 2004
第四篇:PETS公共英语二级考试作文
PETS公共英语二级考试作文范文
(一)[题目要求]
假定你是学生会工作人员,最近学生会决定成立英语俱乐部,要写一个通知,通知必须包括下列内容:
1、英语俱乐部的宗旨;
2、活动;
3、如何如会;
4、成立大会举行的时间和地点。
注意:词数80-120词,开头已经写好;请直接将书面表达写在答题卡背面。Notice The student Union has recently agreed to set up:
[参考范文]
The student Union has recently agreed to set up an English Club.It aims to encourage students to learn English outside of class, to raise English ablities and to create a favourable English-learning atmosphere.During this term foreign experts will give lectures on English and American cultures once a week, and students can meet once a week at the English Corner.Besides, we will also have lectures given on the study of English.Anyone in the school is welcome to join the club by filling in the related from and providong one photo by the end of this month.Our first meeting will be held in the school gym at 5:00 p.m.Friday, 21 February, 2004.The Student Union 14 Februry, 2004
[题目要求]
假如你是一名导游,陪同外宾游览长城,下车前用英语告诉外宾:
1、长城的长度、历史、世界奇观之一;
2、讲话时间是八点半,在长城停留两个小时,十点半离开。游览车在入口处等,请记住车牌号,准时上车;
3、随身带好贵重物品,下车前br />
注意:字数100词左右。
[参考范文]
Ladies and gentlemen: Here we are at the foot of the Great Wall.It’s the longest wall in the world and has a history of over 2000 years.It’s one of the wonders of the world.we will spend two hours on the wall.It’s 8:30 now.We’ll leave at 10:30.The bus will be waiting for us at the entrance.Please remember our bus number and be back on time.Besides, please take your valuable things with you and shut all the windows before getting off.Have a good time!Thank you.[题目要求]
一批外宾到你们学校参观,并决定参加你班的英语晚会,会上由你致词表示欢迎,并介绍
班级情况。为此,请你写一篇简短的发言稿。内容要点如下: 表示欢迎;
介绍班级情况,如男女生人数,籍贯,年龄,兴趣等; 介绍你班学习科目及学习情况; 介绍晚会的主要节目; 祝愿的话。
注意:
1、致词必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条翻译;
2、词数100词左右
3、请直接将书面表达写在答题卡背面。[参考范文]
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our class and welcome to our evening party.First of all, let me say a few words about our class.There are 50 students in our class-26 of us are boys and 24 are girls.Most of us are from Beijing.We are mostly at the same age-about 17.Some go in for sports, and some are interested in reading,.We have 6 subjects in all, including English, Chinese and mathematics.All of us like to study English, and we usually spend a lot of time on it.In our program tonight, there will be a short play, group singing and so on.I hope you will enjoy them and haove a good time.Thank you.[题目要求] 某外资企业想要招聘几名英文秘书,外方经理想了解应聘者的情况,请你用英文写一篇自我介绍,词数在100左右。姓名:李一加
出生:1978.8.28,广州
简历:1999年毕业北京师范大学英语系;在某中学里教了2年英语;后来在外文书店里当了2年店员。
特长:汉语交好,英语也不错,1996年曾获北京英语竞赛第二名,平时利用业余时间自学英语,现在能与外宾交谈。自信能胜任此项工作,并决心把工作搞好。
[参考范文]
My name is Li Yijia.I was born on August 28, 1978, in Guangzhou.In 1999 I graduated from English Department of Beijing Normal University.First, I taughe in a middle school for two years, then I worked as a salesman in the Forgein Language Bookstore for two years.I am not only good at Chinese but good English.I am greatly interested in English.In 1996 I won the second place in the English competitions in Beijing.I have continued learning English in my spare time.Now I am glad that I can talk with foreigners freely.I am sure I am fit for the work and determined to do my job well.[题目要求]
你们学校学生会(the Student Union)将为来访的澳大利亚朋友举办一个晚会,请你根据下述内容要点拟一个100词左右的英语广播通知,欢迎同学参加: 目的:欢迎来访的澳大利亚朋友。时间:10月12日(周五)晚七点。地点:图书馆第二阅览室
内容:文娱节目,包括游戏、跳舞等
[参考范文]
May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.The Student Union is going to hold a party on Friday evening, October 10, to welcome our friends from Australia.The party will be held in the 2nd Reading
Room in the library.It’ll begin at 7:00pm.At the party we’ll have music, dancing, singing and games.Australian friends will perform some nice programs in the party.Everyone is welcome.Please come in time.[题目要求]
请根据下列图画编一个小故事,描述图中所发生的事情,字数在100词左右:
1、某天两个小学生在放学回家的路上; 2.其他情节根据图画所示自编;
3.要求:故事必须包括所有4幅图画的内容,人名必须用Xiao lan and Xiao Ming、其他细节如时间、地点等可以自己酌情增加,但文章前后应一致,符合逻辑,内容连贯,语言通顺。[参考范文]
One day, Xiao Lan and Xiao Ming went back home together.They were laughting and talking after a whole day in the school.Suddenly, xiao Ming saw a bird in a tree.No sooner had Xiao lan stopped him than Xiao Ming picked up a stone and threw it at the bird, The bird was badly hurt and fell off the tree.Xiao Lan flet so sorry that tears rolled down her cheeks and said, “I won’t be your good friend any more if you hurt a bird again.” Just then an old man came uo to them and told Xiao Ming not to kill birds again.The old man then went on saying,“Your young Pioneers should Protect animals and the enviroment.Birds are friends of mankind.” Xiao Ming felt ashamed and nodded his head.He said to the old man that he would never forget what he had told him.
第五篇:公共英语三级考试写作辅导
公共英语三级考试写作辅导_PETS3议论文和提纲式作文写作模板PETS考试借鉴了雅思的基本模式,PETS三级、四级考试中往往会考应用文写作和议论文大作文。应用文写作格式不正确是很多同学失分的最主要原因。应用文写作程式化强,考生可以提前背诵一些应用文写作的基本句型,积累有关句型句式,注意应用文写作中的套话。应用文写作常考信件写作,如辞职信、投诉信、感谢信、表扬信、会议 MEMO等都是考生应重点把握的。以下分别介绍:
PETS英语写作模板之一-辩论式议论文
模版1
Some people believe(argue,recognize,think)that 观点 1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点 2.As for me,I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.More importantly,论据2.Most important of all,论据3.In summary,总结观点。As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心。
或 From above,we can predict that 预测。
模版2
People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that观点1,while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1.For another,论据2.Last but not the least,论据3.To conclude,总结观点。As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心。
或 From above,we can predict that 预测。
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。
Some people are of the view that观点1,while others take an opposite side,firmly believing that 观点2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,论据1.Furthermore,论据2.Among all of the supporting evidences,one is the strongest.That is,论据3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心。
或 From above,we can predict that 预测。
PETS写作模板之二——提纲式作文
1.对立观点式
A.有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B.有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However,other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about,X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2.批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B.我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that,they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y,almost 80% of them赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth,we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3.社会问题(现象)式
A.一个社会问题或者现象。
B.产生的原因
C.对社会和我们生活的影响
D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E.前景的预测。
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public)。According to a survey,调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life,which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.参照辩论式议论文的写法。Based on the above discussions,I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……