第一篇：2011年6月英语四级作文(高分版)
2011年6月英语四级作文范文（高分版）
My views on Online Shopping
1.现在网购已经成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not.Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds.They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.点评：本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。
按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题；
第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣；
第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。
整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会是难题。
第二篇：四级英语作文高分句子
It pays to be honest
诚实是有回报的
The net is increasingly popular
网络越来越流行 Students of universities and colleges Pop music appeals to me
我对流行音乐很感兴趣 Everything cuts both ways
任何事情都有两面性 English is intensely important=English matters much 1.As the economy advances at a fast pace, English plays an increasingly important role in our lives Simply put
简而言之
He believes women cannot be too thin
他相信女人再瘦也不为过
2.It pays to cultivat the innovative spirit among students of colleges and universities.3.On college campuses across the nation,playing online game is intensely popular.E-books/digital books/paperless books
电子书 Online courses/web courses
网络课程
A green campus=an environment-friendly campus 4.It pays to maintain a positive mental attitude when facing adverse situations.put in another way, remaining optimistic in adversities pays off.5.A growing number of college students are hopelessly addicted to matters unrelated to their studies, a worrying trend that should spark public attention.6.We are supposed to be fully aware of the fact that if we continue to harm the environment we are bound to pay heavily/dearly for it.7.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.China currently falls behind advanced countries on many fronts.On many fronts
在很多方面
8.It pays to foster the cooperative spirit on many fronts.9.Thanks to advances in technology and economy, a variety of/diversity of digital products, from mobile phone to digital camera, are intensely popular on the Chinese mainland.10.Recent years have witnessed the growing popularity of the topic of a green campus.11.The past decades have seen the fast-paced development of the nation’s economy.On doubly
毫无疑问的是
12.I doubt that she married him for money There is no doubt that=it is beyond doubt that…
13.There is no doubt that this reform is aimed at sharpening the competitive edge of the students in the tough job market.14.It is beyond doubt that far too many college students fail to be aware that achieving/striking a balance between entertainment and studies matters much.15.Undoubtedly, what you do on campus will have profound impact on you in the days ahead.Individual colleges and universities
各个大学
16.He bought/purchased/acquired this public company 17.With the nation’s economy still in the red, a growing number of college graduates find it is increasingly hard to land a decent job.Loving our country means more than words 18.On my personal level, effective measures should be taken to crack down on piracy/reverse the trend 19.We , college students, are supposed to take the leading role in fighting against this evil trend 20.Only by taking concrete moves can we enjoy a pollution-free environment.Making painstaking efforts
付出艰苦努力
21.Only by making painstaking efforts can we climb the social ladder higher.22.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese fail to focus on details.place a high value on
重视
23.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese students fail to place a high value on learning Chinese, their mother tongue The bulk of=the majority of
24.The bulk of Chinese take pride in the country’s abundant natural resources Do all in one’s power to
尽某人最大努力去…
25.While my command of English is not outstanding, I am doing all in my power to improve it Favor A over B
支持A而不支持B 26.While Romney won the first debate, I favor Obama instead of/rather than over him You deserve it
1.你应该获得
2.你活该 Digging into
仔细阅读
Stress A over B
强调A 而不强调B 27.Traditionally, Chinese education stresses mechanical thinking over creativity A to B is what C to D In an effort to=in order to
28.In an effort to reverse the trend, the government has pumped a wealth of resources into this campaign.Launch a campaign
发起运动
29.Personally, the government should launch a campaign to crack down on illegal manufactures Be designed to do=be aimed at doing Awaken sb to the crucial importance of sth
唤醒某人，某事的重要性
30.The government should awaken people across the nation to the crucial importance of respecting intellectual property rights Senior citizens
老人（尤指退休者）be responsible for
…的原因
31.The shrinking population is responsible for this trend.Get actively involved in
积极参与
32.In their leisure hours, they consume a good portion of time getting actively involved in serving as volunteers.It is virtually impossible for sb to do sth
某人做某事几乎是不可能的
33.It is virtually impossible for you to land a decent job without superb professional knowledge and an outstanding command of English.Nothing new
绝非先见，很常见
34.Devoting a good portion of leisure time to learning English is nothing new among my fellow students 35.Setting a grand goal but not taking concrete moves is nothing new among my peers.Be capable of
能够的，有能力的
36.Fat too many Chinese are incapable of thinking independently and critically 37.Others, however, are supportive of this campaign.Others, however, see a different picture.Claiming it pays to devote much time to taking optional courses Generate impacts
产生影响
sth concerns sb
某事使某人担心
38.How to reverse the trend concerns folks from every walk of life Every walk of life
各行各业
As the pillar of our society
作为我们社会的栋梁支柱
39.As the pillar of our society, we ,college students, should shoulder more responsibility to respect intellectual proerty rights/should take the leading role in serving as volunteers in the earthquake-stricken area.40.I am striving to earn more money to relieve my parents’ financial load
41.Folks from all walks of life should strive to play a part in building a pollution-free society Sharpen one’s edge
增强竞争力
42.Our course focuses on teaching the students how to sharpen their edge when taking the interview Last but definitely not the least
最后，但绝不是最不重要的
43.People focusing on immediate benefits are bound to pay dearly for it
44.Last but definitely not the least, our lack of attention on this issue is mostly responsible for it.Move oneself beyond
摆脱
45.It’s my hope that in my college days I could gradually move myself beyond my dependence on parents.In the hope of
以希望
46.I am doing all in my power to earn credits in the hope of graduating earlier.Lend A B’s support
B支持A 47.I sincerely hope that you could lend me your support in the election for class president.48.I sincerely hope that you could do everything you can to promote the environmental awareness among your fellow students.49.He , with his superb performance, is gaining growing popularity on campus.Giant leaps
巨大进步
50.Thanks to giant leaps in technology, could computing is gaining growing popularity across the world.51.If You Are The One, a TV reality show, is gaining growing popularity on the Chinese mainland.52.Sina weibo , the Chinese clone of Twitter, is gaining enormous popularity among net citizens.Enable sb to do sth
使某人能够干某事
53.The nets enables us to communicate with each other in ways that were beyond our imagination.Far outweigh
远远超过，远远大于
54.The strengths of the net far outweigh it’s weakness.55.The virtual world has generated far more positive impacts on us than negative ones.As sb put it
正如某人所言
56.As Kobe Bryant,a legendary figure of NBA, put it ,”it is the teamwork spirit that helps Los Angeles Lakers weather hard times all these years” Taste success
取得成功
57.Mo Yan ultimately tasted success.Be equipped with
拥有
58.High achievers are equipped with a wealth of personal qualities that others lack.A series of=a string of
59.School authorities attribute a string of suicides to our lack of attention on the students’ psychological mental health.60.He stays far ahead of his fellow students on many fronts thanks to his painstaking efforts Attach growing importance to(doing)sth
越来越重视某事
61.After having suffered some major setbacks in his career, he attaches growing importance to execution.As a consequence
结果 I would argue
我认为 At current stage
现阶段
Matter much more
重要的多
62.I would argue that at current stage studies matter much more than entertainment.Be closely linked to
与…有紧密联系
63.Whether you could taste success is closely linked to whether you have a strong will.I couldn’t care less about it
我不关心 I couldn’t care more about it
我很关心
This movie couldn’t be worse
很糟糕的电影 not simply…but…
不仅…而且 push up=drive up
推动某物上升 to be more specific
更具体地说
excessive exploitation
过度开发，过度开采
64.To be more specific, our excessive exploitation of natural resources not only costs us dearly in the short run but may generate profound negative impacts on future generations
In the short run
从短期看来 the post-90s generation
90后 turn around
扭转…趋势 pay lip service
只说不做
65.All parties involved in this pressing issue are supposed to stop paying lip service.Curb the prevalent trend
遏制（不好的）趋势 Wage campaigns
发起运动
Governments at all levels
各级政府 Bring…under control
控制…
66.Governments at all levels are supposed to wage massive campaign to bring the soaring commodity prices under control.Bear fruits
结果实
Bear the costs
承担成本
Bear the consequence
承担成本
67.I harbor a sincere hope that our combined efforts would pay off.68.People from all walks of life should combine their efforts to build our society into a harmonious noe 5
第三篇：四级英语作文高分词汇总结
英语四六级高分作文技巧
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we / I（比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is，therefore，high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals，however，take the attitude that …
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good，bad，many，thing，think，people，opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper，approaches替换ways，implement替换carry out，sharpen one„s competitive edge替换enhance one‟s competitiveness（提高某物竞争力）
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I（By Simmy）
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present，which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless，feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，computers pouring into the curren
t society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them，in large measure！
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …Advancement 替换 development
Pour into（flood into / swarm into）替换 enter into
Current（currently）替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的For a start，we can，freely，search desired information at any moment。Little by little，our knowledge will be well enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally，we can get huge recreations online by chatting，playing games，or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can，freely，search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that，however，computers can function in the disservice of human beings，in a way，especially the growing violence，***，porn pictures，AV-films emerging on the screen，which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that，however，computers can function in the disservice of human beings，这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing（fading 替换 disappearing）
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people„ lives，despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should，therefore，take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should，therefore，take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits（而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues）替换 advantage（defects 替换 disadvantage）Facet 替换 aspect
第四篇：2011年6月英语四级作文高分版
2011年6月英语四级作文范文高分版
My views on Online Shopping
1.现在网购已经成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not.Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds.They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.点评：本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。
按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题；
第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣；
第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。
整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会是难题。
2011年12月英语四级作文习题及范文(1)
主题：水资源缺乏
1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given below:
1.Water shortage is becoming an urgent problem
2.Possible reasons
3.Possible solutions
参考范文：
On Water Shortage
No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted.Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones.First, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed.Secondly, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage.Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem.What’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse.First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources.Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water.With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.2011年12月英语四级作文习题及范文(2)
主题：农民工
Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?
1.近年来越来越多的民工涌入大城市
2.产生这一社会现象的原因
【范文】
For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities.Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers.Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.First and foremost, the limited land can no longer produce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population.In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work.Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good education.I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.【点评】
本题谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段首句引入某一现象，第二句举例说明，第三句是个过渡句，引起下面解释原因段落的第二段;第三段是简洁的结束语，其中的宾语从句嵌套一个状语从句。
范文首先指出大量农民工涌入大城市这一现象，并引出第二段所阐述的三个原因。首先，农村有限的土地不能满足日益增长的人口消费。其次，大城市有更多的工作机会。最后，农民工向往大城市的生活，想永远居住在大城市。末段总结指出，如果创造一个健康的社会环境，农民工就可以为国家做出更大的贡献。
第一段第二句中的construction site表示“建筑工地”，babysitter表示“帮人看孩子的人”。第二段第一点中的rural指“农村的”;第三点中的permanently和admire分别指“永久地”和“羡慕”，receive education指“接受教育”。
第五篇：英语四级作文高分
2012年12月英语四级作文高分范文
Source: 网友供稿2012-12-22我要投稿论坛FavoriteDoes a degree alone pay off?
Judging from the table, we can see that people’s income increases along with their education levels.Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders.But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don’t think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself.After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate.On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently.People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path.In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate’s ability and learning habit.2012年12月英语四级答案汇总
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