第一篇:2011年高考改错真题
改错真题
1.(2011•陕西卷)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but he signed his name on my shirt!2.(2011•全国II)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)Dear George, It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., where we stayed for three days.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.It was really a nice experience.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.Yours, Mike 3.(2011•四川卷)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)Tom was having much troubles getting up in the Morning and was always late with work..His boss wanted to fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for a help.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”
4.(2011•全国新课标卷)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.5.(2011•重庆卷)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1份,满分10分)Today is Sunday.I′ve been in Canada for two months.This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around.Katia,like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.We’re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been to China several times.I just can’t wait.【答案】
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第二篇:作文+改错高考英语真题专练2
作文+改错高考真题专练
(二)2012年高考英语作文真题:全国卷1
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准。
注意:1.字数约100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.Dear Sir or Madam,Li Hua
【2010·陕西】短文改错
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.She liked it at once.Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt!I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!
【2011·浙江卷】短文改错
I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;I would always know, I'd done something wrong.Late on, my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
第三篇:高考英语短文改错高考真题单句分类训练
高考英语短文改错高考真题单句分类训练
名词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数,即在该用复数的地方误用其单数,或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。
二、真题单句归纳
1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favourite actor.(2011·陕西卷)2.He was right there in the front of me!(2011·陕西卷)
3.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of day.(2011·全国II)
4.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three per weeks.(2011·辽宁卷)5.Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning and was always late for work.(2011·四川卷)6.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.(2011·全国新课标卷)
7.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.(2011·全国新课标卷)8.I was playing at my cousin house.(2011·浙江卷)
9.Although her English is a little hard to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.(2011·重庆卷)
三、改正方法:(1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份;(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系。
四、模拟单句演练
(1)Women live longer than men in most country.(2)The film is very interesting.I have seen it many time.(3)It's said that all the ticket have been sold out.(4)The children spend a lot of times watching TV.(5)I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday.(6)Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country.(7)He made his first time visit to China when he was 18.(8)There's a paper's factory near our school.(9)It's one of the most interesting book that I've ever read.(10)Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear.时态
一、考点规律分析
动词时态考点主要涉及一般现在时与一般过去的区别,其命题方式通常是在一个一般现在时的背景下误用某个一般过去时;或者反过来,在一个一般过去时的背景下误用某个一般现在时。从所涉及的动词来看,主要涉及be 和 have两个常用动词。有时也涉及其他时态,如一般将来时,现在完成时等,但很少见。
二、真题单句归纳
1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen anywhere.(2011·陕西卷)
2.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.(2011·全国新课标卷)
3.She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and never mentioned it again.(2011·浙江卷)4.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.(2011·重庆卷)
三、改正方法:现在时与过去时的误用,句中一般没有时间状语。每年都考。要注意联系上下文,着眼于整个语篇的时态。通常整篇都是过去,突然一个句子用现在时。其中又以一般现在时和过去时互改为多。
四、模拟单句演练
(1)Just now Jim tells me his mother was ill.(2)I phone my friend the other day.(3)We often played together when we are children.(4)What are you doing when I called you?
(5)In the last two weeks, we met people from different countries.(6)We'll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.(7)Work hard and you pass the final exam.(8)It's years since I come here in China for my further study.动词
一、动词考点规律分析
动词考点归纳的是除动词时态与非谓语动词之外的动词考点,它包括被动语态、情态动词、动词形式的变化、动词用法辨析、动词 be 的误加与漏用等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!(2011·陕西卷)
2.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.(2011·全国II)3.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;(2011·浙江卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)He lied down by the side of the path to rest.(2)Books may be keep for four weeks.(3)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.(4)„and let you know when the book you want has returned.(5)I'd like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about your country.(6)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.(7)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(8)What your favourite sport?
(9)I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(10)I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.主谓一致
一、考点规律分析
从广义来说,英语中的一致问题涉及多个方面,如主谓一致、人称的一致、并列结构的前后一致等。由于人称的一致已归入“代词”考点、并列结构的前后一致已分别归入非谓语动词、时态等,所以这里只归纳主谓一致问题。
二、真题单句归纳
1.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per week.(2011·辽宁卷)2.Luckily I had all my money in my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on.(2011·全国新课标卷)3.Katia,like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.(2011·重庆卷)
三、改正方法:分清主语
四、模拟单句演练
(1)Her parents were in Shanghai, and so was his.(2)As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.(3)The police was looking for the murderer everywhere in the city.(4)Writing English and speaking it is different things.(5)It is the parents and their son who wants to buy the bicycle.(6)What he said at the meeting were very important to us.多词
一、考点规律分析
多词错误主要涉及英语中一些“小”词,如冠词、介词、不定式符号、人称代词、动词 be、比较级more等。具体说来,多词错误可能涉及的问题有:及物动词后接宾语时误加介词,在该用动词原形的地方误加不定式符号to,在物质名词、抽象名词、复数名词等表示泛指时误加定冠词,在一些可直接用作状语的短语前误加介词in, on, for 等,误加一些导致语义重复的小词(如two 与both连用,all 与whole 连用等),在本身已是比较级的词前误加more,在不是从句的地方误加从句“引导词”,在一些习惯用语和固定表达中误加不该用的“小词”(如冠词、介词、副词等),等等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of days.(2011·全国II)
2.He wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.(2011·辽宁卷)
3.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,so he went to the doctor for a help.(2011·四川卷)
4.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent to me lots of clothes.(2011·全国新课标卷)
5.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or face my cousin again;(2011·浙江卷)
6.Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.(2011·重庆卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.(3)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill.(4)As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.(5)I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.(6)Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.(7)I'll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it.(8)Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.(9)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(10)Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.缺词
一、考点规律分析
与多词错误的情形相似,缺词也主要涉及英语中一些“小”词,如冠词、介词、不定式符号、人称代词、动词 be等。具体说来,漏词错误可能涉及的问题有:不及物动词后接宾语时漏加必要的介词,在该带不定式符号to的地方漏加 to,在单数可数名词表示泛指意义时漏加必要的限定词(尤其是漏加不定冠词),漏掉表特指的定冠词,漏掉被动语态中的助动词 be,漏加系表结构中的连系动词 be,漏加一些常用结构或表达中的介词(如漏掉 a lot of 中的 of,漏掉 because of 中的 of,漏掉 instead of 中的 of等),漏掉某些从句的“引导词”(通常会导致意义不通),等等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, so I rushed back home to get.(2011·陕西卷)2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.(2011·辽宁卷)
3.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
4.I was going to visit a friend there and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.(2011·全国新课标卷)
5.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.(2011·浙江卷)
6.This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time.(2011·重庆卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)When I have free time I go a long walk.(2)Good health is person's most valuable possession.(3)In some places you may borrow many books as you want.(4)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.(5)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.(6)There is public library in every town in Britain.(7)But then there is always more mysteries look into.(8)I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.介词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对介词的考查主要涉及在及物动词后接宾语时误加介词和在不及物动词后接宾语时漏加介词、可直接用作状语的副词短语前误加介词、介词与其他词的常用搭配、常用介词的基本用法、习语中的介词用法等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building.(2011·陕西卷)2.Thank you very much for showing us around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.(2011·全国II)
3.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was an immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.(2011·辽宁卷)
4.Tom was having much trouble getting up in the morning and was always late with work.(2011·四川卷)
5.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had were those I had on.(2011·全国新课标卷)
6.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.(2011·浙江卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)We must serve for the people heart and soul.(2)I followed the man for a while, and saw him enter into the bank.(3)Soon the nurse married with my friend Jim.(4)I took a great many of photographs in the mountains.(5)In English class,we often talk each other in English.(6)Don't talk.What the man says is well worth listening.(7)The chair looks hard, but it is comfortable to sit.(8)She was very kind and insisted lending her car to us.(9)I asked to her what she would be doing on Saturday.(10)On his way to home, he met one of his old friends Jack.从句及并列连词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对从句引导词的考查主要涉及根据句意正确选用引导词、引导词的误加与漏用、将不是从句的东西误认为是从句而误加引导词等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it.(2011·陕西卷)2.It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.(2011·全国II)
3.Following this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.(2011·辽宁卷)4.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for help.(2011·四川卷)
5.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.(2011·全国新课标卷)
6.We're both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.(2011·重庆卷)7.There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.I just can't wait.(2011·重庆卷)
三、改正方法:
1)根据句意确定错误;主要考查and、or、but、so等并列连词的误用。
2)根据句子的逻辑关系确定错误。
四、模拟单句演练
(1)He is the man his car was stolen.(2)That's the hotel which we were staying last summer.(3)That's the palace where we visited last summer.(4)I suddenly woke up in mid-night.And it was a long time I got to sleep again.(5)In the past few years when we've planted thousands of trees along the river.(6)At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.(7)He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.(8)She stayed in France for 10 years.That's she spoke French so well.(9)It's really a beautiful place, where everyone hopes to visit.(10)It cost nothing.Anyone can get it unless he likes it.非谓语动词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号 to 的有无,介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词),并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致,动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式,但不能用动词原形)等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actors.(2011·陕西卷)
2.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of days.(2011·全国II)
3.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to making his findings known.(2011·辽宁卷)
4.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,but the rate remained above the previous level.(2011·辽宁卷)
5.The man did as told and slept really well,wake up before the alam had even gone off.(2011·四川卷)
6.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
7.“Boss,” he said ,“that medicine really works!” I'm pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”
(2011·四川卷)
8.My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.(2011·全国新课标卷)
9.With the help of Katia, a roommate of mine, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around.三、改正方法:1)谓语动词和非谓语动词的错用;2)动词不定式和动名词的错用;3)现在分词和过去分词的错用等。
四、模拟单句演练(1)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.(2)I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays.(3)It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.(4)I went back to get David and helped him to stood up.(5)I look forward to hear from you soon.(6)I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.(7)I'll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it.(8)Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.(9)After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me.(10)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(11)But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(12)I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks.冠词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的误加和漏用,有时也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别(包括 a 与 an 的区别)。其中,涉及最多的是,当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时,其前漏用不定冠词;另外,冠词在一些习语中的用法也是一个重要考点。
二、真题单句归纳
1.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be more than happy to be your guide.(2011·全国II)
2.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.(2011·辽宁卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)Her sister, who is nurse, will marry one of the doctors in the hospital.(2)It was such wonderful dinner that we enjoyed it very much.(3)It was raining hard, so I had to borrow a umbrella.(4)My friend Mary comes from an European country.(5)Mr Smith used to be physics teacher till he turned writer.(6)In the word, he is a good student and all of us like him.(7)People made the fun of her because she wore such strange clothes.(8)You don't know what wonderful time we've had.代词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾语变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
二、真题单句归纳
1.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.(2011·全国II)
2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained quite naturally by aircraft movements.(2011·辽宁卷)
3.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.(2011·四川卷)
4.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to living without my parents around.5.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get.6.There was one on particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking
三、模拟单句演练
(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head.(3)I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works.(4)And I can't forget the good food you cooked for I.(5)But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son.(6)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(7)In any other words, I am an only child.形容词和副词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用(尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more)、形容词与副词的混用(如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名词时误用副词)等,另外,用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词(如 in, down 等)的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as„as 结构、how 与 what 的混用等也是常考的考点。
二、真题单句归纳
1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere.(2011·陕西卷)
2.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building.(2011·陕西卷)3.If you'd like to make a trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.(2011·全国II)
4.He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first to reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)5.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for a long holiday.(2011·全国新课标卷)6.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.(2011·浙江卷)Late on, my aunt drove me home.(2011·浙江卷)
7.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.(2011·浙江卷)
8.She knew what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.(2011·浙江卷)9.Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own families
三、改正方法:主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。1)根据adj.或adv.的基本用法确定错误;2)修饰连系动词或名词用形容词;3)修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
四、模拟单句演练
(1)I'll try to be more carefully next time.(2)China is much more bigger than the United States.(3)There are few boys than girls in our class.(4)He says that skiing is much exciting than skating.(5)Strange, they even know everything about me.(6)He found someone was following her, so she felt frightening.(7)It was real very dangerous.You might have injured yourself.(8)In fact, they finally came back home,safely and sound.(9)The fish tastes well; why not have a try? 动词形,名词数, 还要注意形和副; 非谓语,细辨别,习惯用法要记住;
句子成分多分析, 逻辑错误须关注; 冠词连词常光顾。
第四篇:公文写作改错及真题
公文写作改错及真题
一、发文字号:
1、序号不能有虚位,即数字前不得有0,不得有“第”字样
2、年号份号颠倒
3、年号使用的标点符号错误。
4.秘级错误。只有秘密机密,绝密字样 5.绝密机密要有右上要有序号
6.一些上行文要有签发人,签发人和文号左右平行
二、标题部分:标题是由发文机关、事由、文种组成。
1.有的标题不全
2.有的文种不对,特别常见乱用‘公告’,还有“批复”成了“指示”,通知成了通告 3,有的批转性公文不是法规条文仍用《》 4.公文种类共用,如“请示报告” 5.紧急的在标题中要体现出来
三、主送机关:
1.上行文多头主送
2.有的是请示平级,越级请示;
3.有的是直接送单位而不送人(除非是领导个人交办事项),但请示不可以直接给领导 4.有的主送机关未写全,特别是简要写法要写全,省市不分等,以及什么省,什么市。5.主送机关名称,即抬头要顶格写 6.必须要有的缺了收文机关
7.党政不分,党对政府部门下命令
四、正文:
1.有的是一文多事,见于请示;
2.有的正文引用发文不规范,如批复等,引用要先文件名,后文号; 3.有的正文数字该用阿拉伯数字,却用汉字; 4.有的是用词不当。“反映”成了“流言”,“发布”成了“散布” 5.标点符号。特别是序列,标准是
一、(一)1.(1)
6.量词。要有法定计量单位,如寸不适用 7.用英文无翻译 8.表彰性通报无名单 9.请示报告送下级
10.平行文,上行文不礼貌,要用“贵局”,不能用“你局” 11.错别字
12.用语或叙事违反公文要则如简练明确等要素 13.一些公文要有联系人,电话等
五、结尾:
1.有的结尾不合作者本意; 2.有的是不合公文格式要求。
3.有的是表现在上行文语气不尊。特别是上行文结尾催办,请即批复等六、一些人称的用法
1.推荐名单表上要先写人名,再写单位,职称等
2.主文中提到了某某人等,随附名单要先列出某某人
七、抄送
请示未获批准抄送下级。抄送两字不能顶格,相对的主题词顶格
八、附件
1.该标明附件却未标出。
2.标明附件要在印章前(尚未找到明确根据)3.附件的顺序和名称 4.附件名称后不用标点
九、发文机关(印章)与发文日期
1)标题上的发文机关与签署(盖章)的发文机关不对应。2)混用汉字与阿拉伯数字,或直接用阿拉伯数字.3)年月日不全
4)乱加字,如 年 月 日“发” 5)发文机关日期上下颠倒
6)印章没有盖或盖错地方或盖反 7)没有发文日期。
8)发文机关(印章)与发文日期位置左错 9)发文时间不能超过发文机关
十、主题词 1)没有主题词
2)太少或太多,3-5,不超7(尚未找到明确根据)
十一.版式问题
重要公文制发单位只能是办公室 历年公考公文改错真题
公文改错题(指出下列公文的8处错误)抬头 关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的批复
主送机关 某某《关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的请示》收悉,国务院大致同意关于办理商标变更、转让或者续展注册时不再附送原商标注册证的意见,但考虑到这一问题涉及《商标法实施细则》的修改,特批复如下,盼遵照执行。
本批发第一项、第四项由你局在1995年12月15日前发布。第二项、第三项由你局在一九九八年十一月一前发布。
国务院
1995年4月23日制发
①标题不完整
②缺主送机关
③“大致同意”用法不当
④实施细则应用全称
⑤语气不当“盼......” ⑥“一九九八......”表达错误
⑦作者位置不当
⑧“制发”二字多余。
中国人民银行××市分行 位置
关于转发总行《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》的通知 ×银发[2002]×号 现将总行的《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》转发给你们,请立即组织研究,展开讨论,并根据《纪要》精神,认真贯彻执行。当前,首先要抓好第一季度的工作,以便为全年工作打下基础。
中国人民银行××市分行 二〇〇二年七月二十四日
一般来说,转发性通知只能有一个目的,或为执行,或为讨论,或为参考,二者不能兼得,更不能三者兼得。上面这则通知一方面让人家“研究讨论”,一方面又让人家“贯彻执行”,这二者是不可兼得的。因为“研究讨论”意味着转发对象尚不成熟,还没有达到“执行”的程度;而“贯彻执行”却意味着转发对象已经成熟,已经没有“研究讨论”的必要了。作者在这里显然犯了自相矛盾的错误,违背了形式逻辑中的不矛盾律。这是转发性通知中的一种多发病和常见病。
××市人民政府 标题
××镇人民政府:biaoti 对你镇的数次请示,经研究作答复如下:
其一,原则同意批准你镇建立联合贸易公司,负责本镇的内、外贸易工作。你镇应尽快使联合贸易公司开始营业。其二,你镇提出试行“关于违反计划生育规定的处罚办法”最好不执行,因为这个办法违反上级有关文件精神。
其三,对你镇提出要建一俱乐部活跃居民文化生活一事,予以批准,但规模要适当控制,量力而行。
其四,同意你镇组团参加在上海举办的服装节和在服装节上进行引资促销活动。××市人民政府 2001年×月×日
一是违反一文一批的原则。市政府在积存了某乡四件请示之后,才合在一起给了这样一个批复,这样做有多种弊端:(1)延误时间,耽误下级工作;(2)多种事项集于一篇公文之中,内容杂乱;(3)一份公文涉及多方面工作,给下级落实带来困难。因为这些工作在下级机关是由不同单位和不同负责人分管的,由哪个负责人承担批复的落实工作,不好确定。正确的做法是,下级报来一份请示,就及时回复一份批复。对方的四份请求,应有四份相应的批复。
二是标题不合要求。本批复的标题只有文种品称,没有发文机关和主要内容,不够认真严肃,也影响工作效率。
三是用语含糊不清,观点不明确。如“原则同意”、“最好不执行”、“违反上级有关文件精神”,都没有明确指出自己的观点,使下级无法执行。四是时间要用汉字,不能用阿拉伯数字。
××市工业局文件 ××字(2002)××号
签发人:张平
××市工业局关于印发“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”的通知
我局同意××市财政局关于节减行政经费的几项规定”中提出的意见,认为切实可行,请结合本单位的情况参照执行。
附:××市财政局文件 2002.10.16 主题词:印发、规定、通知
抄送:××市人民政府、××市财政局
(1)发文字号不规范,应为××〔2002〕23号;(2)下行文不应标注签发人,应取消,发文字号居中排列;
(3)标题不规范,应将“印发”改为“转发”,引号应改为书名号《》;(4)缺主送机关,应写明收文单位名称;
(5)转发同级机关公文,不应用批示语气,如“我局同意”、“所提意见切实可行”等;(6)《规定》属规范性公文,应认真执行而不应写“参照”执行;(7)附件说明不规范,应具体写明附件的标题;
(8)成文日期不规范,应用汉字写全年月日,即二〇〇二年十月十六日;应加盖印章;(9)主题词不规范,应表明公文的主题项:行政经费;主题词之间空一个汉字位置,不用标点符号;
(10)转发公文不应再向其他机关抄送,应取消抄送机关。
各省、自治区、直辖市人民政府:
今年初,枝江县董镇信用社职工××同志为保卫国家财产,面对英勇歹徒,顽强搏斗,最后擒获歹徒。为此决定:授予××同志先进工作者称号。
国务院希望各条战线的群众、工人、农民、知识分子认真贯彻十三届四中、5中、6中全会精神,胸怀全局,艰苦奋斗,努力工作,为社会主义现代化建设做出更大贡献。
中共中央、国务院90年4月24日
1.标题结构不完整,应改为“中共中央、国务院关于授予××同志先进工作者称号的决定”。2.“今年初”这一时间概念表达不当,应改为“1990年初”。3.枝江县前应冠以省名。4.“英勇歹徒”的表达有误。
5.“群众、工人、„„”等搭配不当。6.数字表达不一致,不应用阿拉伯数字。7.作者排列有误,应分两行排列。8.日期书写有误,应用汉字。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由,本题10分。)
关于申请拨给灾区贷款专项指标的报告
省行:
江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水,灾情严重。经初步不完全统计,农田受灾总面积达38000多亩,各种农作物损失达100多万元,农民个人损失也很大。灾后,我们立即深入灾区了解灾情,并发动干部群众积极开展生产自救。同时,为帮助受灾农民及时恢复生产,我们采取了下列措施:
一、对恢复生产所需的资金,以自筹为主。确有困难的,先从现有农贷指标中贷款支持。
二、对受灾严重的困难户,优先适当贷款,先帮助他们解决生活问题。到×月×日止,此项贷款已达××万元。
由于这次灾情过于严重,集体和个人的损失都很大,短期内恢复生产有一定的困难,仅靠正常农贷指标难以解决问题。为此,请省行下达专项救灾贷款指标××万元,以便支持灾区迅速恢复生产。
以上报告当否,请批示。××银行××市支行 一九九八年×月×日
一、文种选择有误
从标题看,这篇公文是向省行提出灾区贷款专项指标的申请,目的是获得省行的批准。从正文的主体部分看,两条措施确属报告性质,但随后出现的专项贷款请求,就不是报告应有的内容了。从结语看,“以上报告妥否,请批示”,有着很强的期复性。因此,综合起来看,这篇公文应改为《关于拨给灾区贷款专项指标的请示》。
二、内容含糊
这是由于原文混淆了报告和请示的界限而造成的。写请示,只需写明请示缘由、请示事项,最后提出请示要求即可,与此无关的内容不应写入。而原文提出的两条措施:“对恢复生产所需的资金,以自筹为主”、“对受灾严重的困难户,优先适当贷款”,既不是请示缘由,也不是请示事项,不应该写入文中。
三、语言不准确
文中有多处语言不确切。如“×江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水”,×江两岸所有村庄都遭受洪灾似不可能,“同时发生”更不可能。“灾情较重”跟后面“这次灾情过于严重”的说法相龃龉;“据初步不完全统计”,“初步”和“不完全”语意重复。
第五篇:历年公考公文改错真题
历年公考公文改错真题
公文改错题(指出下列公文的8处错误)关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的批复
《关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的请示》收悉,国务院大致同意关于办理商标变更、转让或者续展注册时不再附送原商标注册证的意见,但考虑到这一问题涉及《商标法实施细则》的修改,特批复如下,盼遵照执行。
本批发第一项、第四项由你局在1995年12月15日前发布。第二项、第三项由你局在一九九八年十一月一前发布。
国务院
1995年4月23日制发
①标题不完整
②缺主送机关
③“大致同意”用法不当
④实施细则应用全称
⑤语气不当“盼......” ⑥“一九九八......”表达错误
⑦作者位置不当
⑧“制发”二字多余。
中国人民银行××市分行
关于转发总行《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》的通知 ×银发[2002]×号
现将总行的《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》转发给你们,请立即组织研究,展开讨论,并根据《纪要》精神,认真贯彻执行。当前,首先要抓好第一季度的工作,以便为全年工作打下基础。
中国人民银行××市分行
二〇〇二年七月二十四日
一般来说,转发性通知只能有一个目的,或为执行,或为讨论,或为参考,二者不能兼得,更不能三者兼得。上面这则通知一方面让人家“研究讨论”,一方面又让人家“贯彻执行”,这二者是不可兼得的。因为“研究讨论”意味着转发对象尚不成熟,还没有达到“执行”的程度;而“贯彻执行”却意味着转发对象已经成熟,已经没有“研究讨论”的必要了。作者在这里显然犯了自相矛盾的错误,违背了形式逻辑中的不矛盾律。这是转发性通知中的一种多发病和常见病。(公布性公文比如:公告、通告、通报、会议纪要等是不需要主送机关的的)
××镇人民政府:
对你镇的数次请示,经研究作答复如下:
其一,原则同意批准你镇建立联合贸易公司,负责本镇的内、外贸易工作。你镇应尽快使联合贸易公司开始营业。
其二,你镇提出试行“关于违反计划生育规定的处罚办法”最好不执行,因为这个办法违反上级有关文件精神。
其三,对你镇提出要建一俱乐部活跃居民文化生活一事,予以批准,但规模要适当控制,量力而行。
其四,同意你镇组团参加在上海举办的服装节和在服装节上进行引资促销活动。
××市人民政府
2001年×月×日
一是违反一文一批的原则。市政府在积存了某乡四件请示之后,才合在一起给了这样一个批复,这样做有多种弊端:(1)延误时间,耽误下级工作;(2)多种事项集于一篇公文之中,内容杂乱;(3)一份公文涉及多方面工作,给下级落实带来困难。因为这些工作在下级机关是由不同单位和不同负责人分管的,由哪个负责人承担批复的落实工作,不好确定。正确的做法是,下级报来一份请示,就及时回复一份批复。对方的四份请求,应有四份相应的批复。
二是标题不合要求。本批复的标题只有文种品称,没有发文机关和主要内容,不够认真严肃,也影响工作效率。
三是用语含糊不清,观点不明确。如“原则同意”、“最好不执行”、“违反上级有关文件精神”,都没有明确指出自己的观点,使下级无法执行。四是时间要用汉字,不能用阿拉伯数字。
××市工业局文件 ××字(2002)××号
签发人:张平
××市工业局关于印发“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”的通知 我局同意××市财政局关于节减行政经费的几项规定”中提出的意见,认为切实可行,请结合本单位的情况参照执行。
附:××市财政局文件
2002.10.16 主题词:印发、规定、通知
抄送:××市人民政府、××市财政局
(1)发文字号不规范,应为××〔2002〕23号;
(2)下行文不应标注签发人,应取消,发文字号居中排列;
(3)标题不规范,应将“印发”改为“转发”,引号应改为书名号《》;(4)缺主送机关,应写明收文单位名称;
(5)转发同级机关公文,不应用批示语气,如“我局同意”、“所提意见切实可行”等;(6)《规定》属规范性公文,应认真执行而不应写“参照”执行;(7)附件说明不规范,应具体写明附件的标题;
(8)成文日期不规范,应用汉字写全年月日,即二〇〇二年十月十六日;应加盖印章;(9)主题词不规范,应表明公文的主题项:行政经费;主题词之间空一个汉字位置,不用标点符号;
(10)转发公文不应再向其他机关抄送,应取消抄送机关。
各省、自治区、直辖市人民政府: 今年初,枝江县董镇信用社职工××同志为保卫国家财产,面对英勇歹徒,顽强搏斗,最后擒获歹徒。为此决定:授予××同志先进工作者称号。
国务院希望各条战线的群众、工人、农民、知识分子认真贯彻十三届四中、5中、6中全会精神,胸怀全局,艰苦奋斗,努力工作,为社会主义现代化建设做出更大贡献。
中共中央、国务院90年4月24日
1.标题结构不完整,应改为“中共中央、国务院关于授予××同志先进工作者称号的决定”。2.“今年初”这一时间概念表达不当,应改为“1990年初”。3.枝江县前应冠以省名。4.“英勇歹徒”的表达有误。
5.“群众、工人、……”等搭配不当。
6.数字表达不一致,不应用阿拉伯数字。7.作者排列有误,应分两行排列。8.日期书写有误,应用汉字。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由,本题10分。)
关于申请拨给灾区贷款专项指标的报告
省行:
江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水,灾情严重。经初步不完全统计,农田受灾总面积达38000多亩,各种农作物损失达100多万元,农民个人损失也很大。灾后,我们立即深入灾区了解灾情,并发动干部群众积极开展生产自救。同时,为帮助受灾农民及时恢复生产,我们采取了下列措施:
一、对恢复生产所需的资金,以自筹为主。确有困难的,先从现有农贷指标中贷款支持。
二、对受灾严重的困难户,优先适当贷款,先帮助他们解决生活问题。到×月×日止,此项贷款已达××万元。
由于这次灾情过于严重,集体和个人的损失都很大,短期内恢复生产有一定的困难,仅靠正常农贷指标难以解决问题。为此,请省行下达专项救灾贷款指标××万元,以便支持灾区迅速恢复生产。
以上报告当否,请批示。
××银行××市支行
一九九八年×月×日
一、文种选择有误
从标题看,这篇公文是向省行提出灾区贷款专项指标的申请,目的是获得省行的批准。从正文的主体部分看,两条措施确属报告性质,但随后出现的专项贷款请求,就不是报告应有的内容了。从结语看,“以上报告妥否,请批示”,有着很强的期复性。因此,综合起来看,这篇公文应改为《关于拨给灾区贷款专项指标的请示》。
二、内容含糊
这是由于原文混淆了报告和请示的界限而造成的。写请示,只需写明请示缘由、请示事项,最后提出请示要求即可,与此无关的内容不应写入。而原文提出的两条措施:“对恢复生产所需的资金,以自筹为主”、“对受灾严重的困难户,优先适当贷款”,既不是请示缘由,也不是请示事项,不应该写入文中。
三、语言不准确
文中有多处语言不确切。如“×江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水”,×江两岸所有村庄都遭受洪灾似不可能,“同时发生”更不可能。“灾情较重”跟后面“这次灾情过于严重”的说法相龃龉;“据初步不完全统计”,“初步”和“不完全”语意重复。