第一篇:从中考英语写作谈英语写作教学和备考训练模式 target=blank
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从中考英语写作谈英语写作教学和备考训练模式
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如何进行和提高中考前书面表达训练
--天河区第5周初中英语教研活动发言稿
广州市天秀中学 潘志宇 2006-3
一.问题提出:
中考英语中的书面表达往往是学生难以取得分数的部分。相当一部分学生的作文都只能取得5-6分的成绩。他们的作文通常都带有以下问题:拼写错误,影响理解;词语误用,表达不准确;某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”,学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清,Chinese English现象等。离中考还有3个月左右,合理安排这三个月的写作训练是非常必要。
二.解决方案设计:词汇-句型-语法-“临摹” 1. 首先解决词汇
词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素。由于大多数学生掌握的词汇量不够,因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。做法:在3月份,主要帮助学生梳理3-6A的单词、词组,根据近年来的中考信息挑选重要的词组让学生强化记忆。每个星期约一册书。2. 解决句型:(3-4月份)
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遵循以下原则: 1)先易后难 2)先短后长
3)先简单句、并列句,后复合句表达,4)先写正确句子逐步过渡到围绕一个人、一件事、一个观点去写有中心的文章
5)由不限定时间到限定时间,由限定时间长到限定时间短,由限定字数少到多 做法:
1)挑选重点句型进行练习::There be; not only...but also;neither...nor...;either...or;I'd like to do sth....;I don't think(believe)...;it's adj.+ to do sth.....2)发挥汉译英的作用(每日十句)。这项练习是训练学生连词成句的必要手段。通过对课文句子的练习,不但可以使学生了解英语与汉语在表达方式上的异同,也能使学生检查自己常犯的错误并分析改正,学生在各方面的长处和不足,都可以在笔头作业中反映出来。3.解决语法(3-4月)做法:
1)归纳8种时态的用法和结构。通过时态练习巩固学生对英语时的强化,为作文铺垫好。
2)在学生已初步具备写句的能力后,可安排一些语境小段描写。如以 “My family” 为例: There are three members in my family: my
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father ,my mother and I.My father is an engineer.My mother is a shop assistant.I am a student of Tianxiu Middle School.My parents are busy all day.I often help them with the housework.They love me deeply.I love them, too.3)往后逐步要求学生写出含有一般过去时、一般将来时、现在或过去进行时、现在完成时等形式的句子。例:Yesterday I went to call on my teacher.He was preparing his lesson.He told me that he began to teach English in 1990.He said he would help me with my English.Up till now he has taught English for ten years.4.“临摹”(4月-5月)
以范例引路。任何语言学习都需要模仿,语言是“约定俗成”的,要使用某种语言就得“入乡随俗”,服从这种语言习惯。模仿范例在英语写作教学中,是一种最基本而且十分有效的写作训练形式。模仿范例能直接提高学生谋篇布局和衔接上下文的能力。模仿写作最主要的就是模仿思路。英语写作和中文写作一样,记叙文要有贯穿全篇的线索, 以使事件或故事发生、发展的脉络清楚。做法:
1)开始训练时,规定时间写,写完后,学生停笔听教师读范文,然后由学生比较自己的作业,可初步衡量出自己的答题的准确度,找出差距,及时查出作业中的毛病。
2)有了一定的基础后,教师可不提供范例,而让学生自改互改作业,相互交流。若有争议的问题,可当场请教老师,对共同性错误,尤其
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是语言、文化性错误,通过老师的讲评,能给学生留下深刻印象;对拼写、结构等低级错误,可以采用学生互动原则修改;对于措辞表达不当问题,则应采取个别与集中相结合的方法指导学生修改。3)要求学生善于运用平时所学知识,如从句、非谓语动词和比较等句式,关键时刻用上一两个,就会起到鹤立鸡群的效果,使文章增色不少等。如关联词 not...but, the more...the more, not only...but also 等的使用,会使文章逻辑结构紧密,层次鲜明,条理清楚。5.考试指导:
a)仔细考虑要写作的题目、题材、格式和情景,要求表达的要点关键词,列出提纲,紧扣题目展开思路
b)考虑要使用的单词、词组及句型。还要定好人称、定时态、定关键词语。
c)在写作之中,书写要规范、整洁,最好用最熟悉、最有把握的词句,注意母语与英语表达方式上的差别,切忌根据母语随意翻译英语,有些词、词组或句型一时想不出来可尽量找同义词、近义词或同义句型来代替,能用简单句表达就用简单句表达,少用复合句,避免造成错误。还要准确运用语法知识,拼写单词要正确。
d)写作之后,要通读全文,并且从内容到文字,从语法到书写全方法进行反复审读,细心检查。检查是否切题、格式是否正确、情景条件是否包括在内,并做到语言简练、准确,还要检查各种语法错误,如单词拼写、大小写、动词的时态和语态,主谓一致,句型结构,词的配搭,冠词的用法,名词的单、复数形式,日期、地址的顺序,代
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词的使用以及标点符号等等。6.其它要求:
A.多阅读,尽量能够每天保持一篇的堂上阅读。阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材
B.对程度较好的学生应该要求其对课文的优美句子熟记,并运用在作文中,如5-6A 的课文有很多能够在文章中借鉴。
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第二篇:中考英语写作
中考英语作文万能模板:阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2. 分析并举例使其更充实. 中考英语作文万能模板:解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(步说明现状说明A的现状)).Second,---------------(举例进一Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another
-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).中考英语作文万能模板:说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Besides-------------------(A的优点之二)A的优点之一.).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the
positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测).)中考英语作文万能模板:议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, __________.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因一
原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in theiropinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand二_____.Therefore, there,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____ is no doubt that ___观点原因二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only
because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___advantages and disadvantages in __作文题目______.In fact, there are both 题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___secondly ___优点二_____.优点一______.AndJust As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.缺点To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that 讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the
case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.中考英语作文万能模板:图表作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the
figure/percentage in___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decreasethe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons
accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the factresponsible that ________.for _______.Inaddition, ________ isMaybe there are
some other reasons to show ________.But it is generallyreasonsarebelieved commonly convincing.that the above mentionedAs far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.Iboth sound and well-grounded.am sure my opinion is中考英语作文万能模板:现象说明文(新中国成立以来发生了翻天覆地的变化,)
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons
explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is
more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all
there,________________________.For one
thing_____________________,for another____________.In Conclusion____________________.中考英语作文万能模板:一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落,都有越来越多的关于A的议论。
给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事,因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言,我们可以这样描述A…
A能成为公众关注的焦点,主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。
认 真分析后我们可以看到,A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先,从最直观的角度来看,A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话,如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡)。(举例)。其次,从更深一层次上讲,它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是,由于A所产生微小利益,却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以,破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。
事实上,A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物,A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时,A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性,他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益,而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此,我奉劝他们,跳出狭小的角落,用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。
而如今,我们已深受其害,要想消除它的危害,我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生,我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视,用系统的和科学的方法去解决,唯有这样,避免它带来更多损失,我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳,更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。
中考英语作文万能模板:说明原因型模块(3)
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate
the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you2), as a result ,(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(look4very far to find out the truth , in respect that).You donn't have to
we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(附加
7).一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分:How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m China for a visit.pleased to hear that you’re coming to I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分:With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分:Ladies
attention, please? I have an announcement and gentlemen, May I have your to make.正文部分:All the teachers and students are required to
attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please discussion in groups.listen carefully and we’ll have a Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分:Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文模板1.导入:正反观点式议论文模板第whether we should...1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about Our opinions are divided on this topic.(导入话题)
(观点有分歧)
正文: 第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)Here are
the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第against it.3段:However, the others are strongly Their place...reasons(反方观点)2~3What’s are more...as
follows.In addition...(In the first 列
个反对的理由)出结论:
第overweigh 4段:Personally speaking, the advantages us more harm than good, so I support it.the disadvantages, for it will(个do 人观点)2.“A オ
或者B”
类议论文模板: 导入: 第superior to B in many ways.Others, however, 1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is argue would prefer A because I think A has more that B is much better.Personally, I advantages.正文:
第A.The main reason is that...Another reason 2段:There are many reasons why I prefer is that...(赞同A的原因)
第some extent...(3段: Of course,列出B 1~2also 个has B的优势advantages)to 结论:
第A is much better than B.From what has been 4段: But if all these factors are considered, discussed conclusion that...(above, we may finally draw the 3.观点论述类议论文模板:得出结论)オ 导入:
第As a student, I am strongly 1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
decision.The reasons for this may be listed as follows.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)in favour of the
(过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出
2~3个赞成或反对的理由)结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that...(照应第4.“How to”1段,构成“总—分—总”结构)
类议论文模板:导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文:
第serious 2段:Many ways can help to solve most effective.First of all...Another way to problem, but the following may this be solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)结论:
第two/ 3段:should be noted that we should take action three These measures are not the we best can but take.the only But it to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板The chart gives us
图表主题.The first thing we notice is that an overall picture of the 图表
最大特点
.This means that as(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 表细节一thefigures 动词.-ed+After 幅度动词+时-ing 图间(细节一中的第一个变化,紧 column, we can see that accounts for(also tell us that图表细节二跟着的变.化)In.The 进一步the 描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(far as I am concerned is that(结论).The reason for this, as high time that we(发出倡议).给出原因)./ It is
一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分:
With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies please? I have an announcement to make.and gentlemen, May I have your attention,正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...Our opinions are divided on this topic.(导入话题)
(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(2~3个赞成的理由)
列出第3段:However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)オ
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much because I think A has more advantages.better.Personally, I would prefer A
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出结论)オ
3.观点论述类议论文模板: 导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows.(过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that...(照应第1段,构成“总—分—总”结构)
4.“How to”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论: 第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点图表主题.This.means that as(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一.After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化,the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化).The figures also tell us that图表细节二.Inthe column, we can see that accounts for(进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(结论).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that(we(发出倡议).给出原因)./ It is high time that
第三篇:《中考英语写作》
中考英语写作的常见题型有以下四种:
1、是根据所给标题写作,2、是根据英语情景提示写作,3、是根据英汉提示写作,4、是看图写作。
应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出的特点是它的实际应用性,应用文包括很广,如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条(请假条)、启事、请柬、电报、合同等。应用文的语言应使用规范语言,重在实用,力求朴实、准确、简洁。
一、书信
书信我们分为两部分:信封和内容。
1、信封的写法。
英语信封正面的左上角,写发信人的姓名和地址。在信封的正面中央偏左一点,写收信人的地址和姓名。
英语信封上的地点名称由小到大,视其长短可占二至五行不等。
寄信人只写姓名,不写头衔。但是,收信人一般都在名字前加上头衔,以示礼貌和尊敬。对于没有官衔和学衔的人士,通常在姓名前写上Mr., Mrs.,或Ms.。
信封的写法,一般来说,很少出现在中考英语的作文中。
2、内容。
英文信一般可以分为下列几个部分。
1)信端(Heading)即写信人的地址和发信日期。
2)收信人姓名地址
3)称呼
4)信的正文
5)结束语
6)签名
有的时候,出题者会让考生写e-mail。e-mail的写法和书信的写法基本一致。只不过少了书信在信封上的繁琐。
(2005年北京)根据中文大意,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
Dear David,I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese.Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now.It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English.You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible.It's also important to do some reading and writing.You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening.Do your best to talk with people in Chinese.You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.If you have any questions, please ask me.I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Beijing.Yours,Wang Ming
二、发言稿
发言稿要注意以下三点:
1、发言的地点
2、发言的对象
3、发言的内容。
请看例文:
(2005年河北)在一次英语班会上,老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80~100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名。
提示:①What does your school look like?
②What fun do you have at school?
③Why do you like your school?
Proud of My School
My school is very big with several tall buildings.There are 2,000 students in my school.We have a big playground with lots of trees around it.There are a lot of flowers everywhere.We have lots of fun at school.After class we play games and do lots of sports, like a big family.The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.三、通知
通知的正文一般都是写在“Notice”以词之下,一般来说不必写称呼语和结束语。出同时的单位名称可以写在notice之上,也可以写在正文的右下角。
正文一般采用文章式,有时为了醒目,也可采用广告式。广告式要力求简明扼要,一个句子可分几行。每行第一个字母一般要大写。
看例文:
(2005年湖北)明天(星期五)全班同学将去参观科学博物馆(the Science Museum),由你(班长)通知全体同学。(通知的开头和结尾已给出)内容如下:
1.早上8点钟在校门口集合,步行前往。
2.下星期一交一份有关参观的报告。
3.参观时要认真听,仔细看并记下有趣的东西。
4.不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照。
5.带笔和笔记本。
要求:①不要逐句翻译。②字数60~80。
Fellow students,We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow.We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot.Take your pens and notebooks with you.We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when you visit the museum.Please don't make any noise in the museum and don't take any pictures.You'll have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday.Thank you.四、启事
启事是一种公告式的应用文。团体或个人如有什么事情要向大家公开说明或对公众有什么要求,可将要说的话写成启事,张贴在布告栏上或登在报刊上。启事一般无固定格式,要求简明扼要即可。
看例文:
假设你叫高迪,是高一(2)班的学生。你在10月16日晚上把一本《牛津高级英汉双解字典》丢在阅览室里,用英语写一则寻物启事,贴在餐厅前的留言板上,请捡到者交给你或你班班长。启事时间:10月17日
Lost
October 17th
On the evening of October 16th,I left my Oxford Advanced Learner’s English-Chinese
Dictienary in the reading-room.It is new.Will the finder please send it to me in Class Two,senior Grade One or to our monitor?Thank you very much.Gao Di
(Loser)
五、海报
海报是一种带有装饰性的宣传广告。有时配以绘画图案。内容以影讯、展览、演出信息、友谊赛等为主。为了尽可能使更多的人知道,海报往往贴在醒目之处。
看例文:
请以学生会文体部的名义为一场篮球友谊赛写一份海报,内容如下:
1.参加者:美国北地中学校队和我校校队
2.地点:水泥球场
3.时间:2005年11月20日(星期天)下午4点
4.组织者:我院学生会文体部
5.海报发出时间:2005年11月14日
POSTER
Friendly Basketball Match
Under the auspices of the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students' Union of our school,a friendly basketball watch will be held between the visiting U.S.Northfield Team and ours on the cement basketball count on Sunday, November20th 2005 at 4:00 p.m.the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students' Union
November14th 2005
写好书面表达的一般要求:
1确定文体格式
2分析信息,确定要点
3用好时态和语态,并注意人称
4要适当的主题句和结束语,5书写干净,整洁;字数符合6最后检查
第四篇:2014中考英语写作必备
2014中考英语写作必备“九字高分秘诀”
整洁
整洁、干净是英语作文的第一印象,能不能得高分,和老师的第一印象有特别高的关系。
阅卷老师一天要批阅几百份试卷,根本没有时间细看的。看到试卷的第一眼,就是判断写的是不是干净、字体够不够漂亮,字数够不到多,其实内心已经给了一个印象分数。无论如何都要保持卷面干净,即使写错了一个字,就让它错下去,也不要涂改、删减。涂改影响美观,删减符号等于告诉老师,你写错了,老师会特别关注你的错误。当然,错误大的话,必须要删掉。所以在稿纸上草拟好要点在抄到卷面上就特别重要。如果你写的作文整洁、干净,你的英语书法又很漂亮,即使有一些语法错误也会得到不错的分数。附上三种英语书法练习。
然后就是看是不是三段论?是不是有套话?要点有没有?错误多不多?再酌情加减。三段论
中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。
不管书信、记叙文、还是议论文,都可以以三段论的形式出现。因为这种结构十分清晰!
记叙文:背景——起因、经过、结果——启发、感悟
议论文:观点——分析——总结
说明文:提及事物——描述事物——总结
书信:提及话题——讨论话题——结语
看图作文:背景——起因、经过——结果
套话
英语作文一定要使用套话,既能帮助拓展思维,让逻辑清晰,又能增加写作字数,让英语写作变得很简单。
套话通常指逻辑词和习惯表达。比如通常表达逻辑关系“第一、第二、第三、第四”等的表述有两种“first,second,third,finally”,以及 “first of all, in the second place, what is more”。无论使用哪一种都能告诉阅卷老师,这篇写作逻辑清晰。
书信中常用的“glad to receive you letter”“I am looking forward to hearing from you”等等。
真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。所有,这些套话能赢得老师的好印象,感觉你的英语写作水平很高,分数自然也就低不下来。
使用套话的另外一个好处是大大增加了字数,让写作更容易。用“first,second,third,finally”有四个词,而用“first of all, in the second place, what is more”则有10个词。表达自己的看法时,即可以使用 “in my opinion”, 也可用“as far as I am concerned”前者用了 3个词,后者则翻了一倍,用了6个词。
善用套话,既能显示水平高,又能增加字数。写作何难之有?
翻译
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!
因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点写作一定不能绕过。
任何题型的英语作文都可以用翻译技巧整理出要表达的要点,然后填充到三段论和套话组成的模式中去。
虽然英语写作提示一再要求不要翻译,那只是暗示你不要翻译成毫无意义的短语,没有说不可以翻译成意义完整的句子!
理解要点——翻译要点——扩充句子——写作整理,就是内容不丢分的四大步骤
第五篇:中考英语写作训练 2
2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(一)假定你是李华,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;
2.垃圾分类;
3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;
4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇:低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue
注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it._______________________________________
Best wishes,Li Bing
参考范文:
Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life.First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water also matters much.Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal.In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(二)随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。_______________________________________________________
参考范文:
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days.Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet.The shops on Internet,for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy
something we want at any time if we like.What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them.We can't see the things while we are shopping.So we are not sure whether they are good or not..Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(三)许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
●我的压力是什么;
●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
词数80~100;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure._________________________________________
That’s all.Thank you!
参考范文:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!
2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(四)近年来,我国火灾频频发生。2010年11月15日,上海胶东路一座高楼起火,损失严重。这个事件提醒注意防火安全很重要。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文来分析引起火灾的原因并谈谈你对火灾中自救的建议。
要求:
1.词数不少于90,短文开头过渡已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
提示:
防火安全fire safety 电 electricity 燃放烟花爆竹 set off fireworks
爬行crawl on one’s knees 消防栓 the fire hydrant
Usually fire accidents are caused because of carelessness.For example, ______________________
What can we do to protect ourselves when there is a fire?____________________________
2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(五)】:
2011年初,我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨(freezing rain),特别是贵州、湖南和四川,灾情失分严重。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭,电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州40万人饮水难,四川两电厂停运。部分山区人民生活异常困难,在各级政府的带领下,人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生,你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?
_____________________________________________________________
参考范文
As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011.Everything was covered with freezing rain.Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most.It caused the buses, trains and planes stop service.The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas.As a result, huge economic loss was caused.Many people could not work and live normally.There was no food, water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(六)据报道,从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外,同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明,在韩国,电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论,请你写一篇80词左右的短文,表达你对这件事情的看法。
________________________________________________________
参考范文:
E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011.What good news this is!E-books have many advantages.Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees.Besides, they are very convenient.To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop.But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.2012年中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文
(七)】:
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由 反对的理由
1.广交朋友 1.浪费时间
2.可自由表达思想 2.影响学习
3.有利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗
你的看法是?
注:字数100—120之间。(书写不整齐者,酌情扣分。)
_________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.Internet helps people make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.