高考英语作文备考优秀

第一篇：高考英语作文备考优秀

英语作文备考优秀范文

第一篇：

金钱是一切吗？

In Money Everything? I don’t think money is everything, but we can’t do without it.Fox example, money can’t buy us happiness and a good education.And for another example, money can’t buy us good health and a long life.But we can not live without money.We need it for our daily necessities such as food, clothes and transportation.What’s more, we need it to live a better life.In short, we should learn the value of money and make the most of its advantages.第二篇：

1〃一些人喜欢住在城市，因为城市生活有许多便利。2〃但有些人喜欢住在农村。3〃我认为，……

Where to live —in the City or in the Country Some people like living in the city because city life has many advantages.They think there are more job opportunities in cities, life there is more colorful and meaningful than that in the country, and there are more modern conveniences in cities for people to enjoy.But some other people prefer to live in the countryside.They say life in the countryside is closer to nature and better for their health, life there is quieter and that country people are more honest than city people.I would like to live in a city when I am young to earn enough money and I live in the countryside when I am old for having a quite life.第三篇： 你叫李平，是英语系学生会主席。写一封信给王教授，请他做一个有关中国历史的报告。注意信中要包括目的、时间、日期和地点。

May 19,2002 Dear Professor Wang: On behalf of the Student Union of the English Department, I am writing to invite you to give a lecture on Chinese history.We have planned to have such a lecture at 2:30 p• m.in Lecture Hall 419, on May 25.Looking forward to your lecture.Inform us in advance if you can not come.Sincerely yours, Li Ping

第四篇：

男女应该平等吗？(Should Men and Women Be Equal?)

Should Men and Women Be Equal? People have different ideas about this issue, Some people say that men are superior to women in ability because men are physically stronger, do most of the hard labor in the world and hold most important positions.Other people believe that women have the ability to compete with men.There have been many famous women state leaders and great scientists in the world.We should fully carry out the principle “to each according to his work” so that the enthusiasm of both men and women for work can be fully aroused.第五篇：

1〃在中国，自行车是最为流行的交通工具。2〃骑自行车有许多好处。3〃自行车的未来……

The Bicycle in China The bicycle is the most popular means of transportation in China.China is a country “on bicycle wheels”.People ride them for various purposes such as going to and from school and work.Bicycles are very cheap and easy to buy in China.There are many advantages to riding a bicycle.First, using a bicycle can greatly help reduce the air pollution in many big cities.Second, people can improve their health by riding a bicycle.The future of bicycle will be bright.In some European countries, city governments have arranged pedestrians to use “public bicycles” to travel round the city center free of charge.第六篇：

1〃假冒伪劣商品是个严重问题。2〃一些原因导致了这种现象。3〃为了扫除假冒伪劣商品，……

Fake Commodities Fake and poor quality commodities are a serious problem.Many things can be faked such as soybean sauce, vinegar, bicycles, and many other things.The interests of consumers are affected, and many enterprises keep losing money because of cheap fake commodities.There are some reasons for such a phenomenon.The major one is the desire of some people to “make easy money”.These people think nothing of the law of the protection of intellectual property rights.To get rid of fake and poor quality commodities, the government should educate people to obey the law of the protection of individual intellectual property rights and not to sell any fake goods.The government should punish severely and close down all the factories producing fake goods

第七篇：

你是 Alice。你的朋友 Bonnie 很快就要到你的乡间小屋拜访，但你却要出去一会儿。留一张便条给她，告诉她 食品在哪儿，告诉她一个人在屋里时应注意些什么。

May 18, 2002 Dear Bonnie: I will be away for a while.The key to the cottage is under the doormat, and the food is in the refrigerator.After entering the house, lock the door from inside at once.The cottage is far away from the nearest town, and the area is not quite safe from burglars.So I think the saying is right “Where there is precaution, there is no danger”.Have a nice stay here.Yours, Alice

第二篇：高考英语作文备考

新高三备战高考：作文是拿高分的关键

1.字数不要太少 至少在150字左右，不要写出格子外就行。

2.开头结尾很重要。第一段必须点题。文章分成三段写，格式清晰。

3.不要用排比句。这会让人觉得句式单一。不要重复使用同一词语或词组。语言不要太文学化，高考作文是将语言功底体现出来，但是又符合高考的模式和习惯，这才能保证自己拿高分的胜算大一点。

4.一个句子的长度最少要有7到8个单词，而一个句子当中至少带入了两个点，如一个句子结构的，一个词语上的。但是句子不要写的太长，一层套一层也不好，最多两层就行。

5.字迹潦草很吃亏，印象不好也会降档。字不要写得太小，间距也不要太小，让人觉得读起来吃力的同学都应该注意。字也不要太大。

6.不要错得太多。写完作文之后检查一下自己的拼写错误，时态错误，单复数错误等，语法错误当时比较难检查出来，这些错加起来有4.5出分数又会有影响。

7.新概念的课文是很好的高考作文的模板，语言流畅自然，句型和词组也很丰富，完全可以学以致用。

8.写好作文的基础就是多背书，不管是从杂志，报纸，还是阅读的文章当中还是课文中，遇到好的句子，实用的，都可以背下来，然后自己加以改造，成为自己用来描述生活中的事情，物体或人的语言，或对事情进行评价的说法。

第三篇：高考备考：如何写好英语作文（范文模版）

高考备考：如何写好英语作文

高考写作的实质——变相的考察句型与词汇的灵活应用

英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定大家了，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是给这个不变的内容不要老去穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让判卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口

我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是很简单句子的一个堆砌，没有任何的亮点。而20多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉。

写作提分的三要素——句型，连词，高级词汇

句子是我们写作文最大的单位，有了漂亮的句子，用好的连词将其连句成段，在加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就有了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限，一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。

但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上一百句的，大家背的挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味，也不知道该把他们往哪里放。

在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。找见历年真题，一周只需要写两篇，但是要这么来写。

1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。

2.逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句，而是要刻意地去想。

(1)可以用什么样的复杂句。

(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。

例如：

这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。

1)This book was so interesting that I read it again and again。

2)This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again。

3)This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again。

4)So interesting was this book that I read it again and again。

这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。

再例如：

如果征收门票，需要建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象。这句话中肯定“收”那个动作很多同学不会表达，那能不能想一个转义的方式，既避开了“收”这个动作还能表达原句的含义。

A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn't help the image of the city。

这个译文中用一个大家很熟悉的经典句型there be句型化险为夷。

如何备考

其实这种思维大家都有，但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数，但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习，那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而是应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇，时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。

第四篇：2011高考英语作文备考教案

课前预习案

备战2014高考英语作文

Ⅰ.NMET书面表达第五项要求

1.覆盖所有的语言要点。内容要点可用不同方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2.应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

Ⅱ.常见的不足： 1.汉语式英语 2.无过渡语 3.句式单一,平铺直叙 Ⅲ.如何增强书面表达效果：

1.使用较高级的词汇和表达方式 2.使用恰当的连接词 3.使用较丰富的句式

一、怎样使用较高级的表达

1.The plan was not practical.As a result, we failed.2.We all think he is a successful man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4..You can find my house easily.5.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.二、怎样使用恰当的连接词

课前预习案

连接词、句型的选择

1、递进关系

（肯定）Besides / What’s more / Also /In addition/Furthermore（否定）What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse

2、时间

一…就…：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly 不久：It was not long before … / After a while / Soon 然后：After that / Then / So / Next 同时： At the same time / Meanwhile

3、转折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although

4、顺序：First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then

5、条件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless

6、强调：It was …that / who … / So she did./I do hope … / She did help me./It really worked./ besides/ furthermore/moreover/what’s more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact

7、其它：

不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事：There is no need(for sb.)to do sth./It is necessary(for sb.)to do … 最好做某 事：You’d better do sth./ It’s better to do sth.做某事没困难：have no difficulty in doing sth./ have no trouble in doing sth.课前预习案

感谢某 人：thank sb.for/ be thankful（grateful）to sb.for / express one’s thanks to sb.for to sb.for / Thanks to …for 求 助 某 人：turn to sb.for help / ask sb.for help / with the help of 惊 奇：To one’s surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外结果）结 果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So 总 结：In a word / In short / Above all / to sum up/ in all 表达观点：In my opinion / I think / I believe / I guess 原因如下（很多）：The reasons are as follows./Here are many reasons for it.浪费金钱（时间）：It’s a waste of money / time…

Task: 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。

1、Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help.2、He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the west.3、It was not long ______ the police came.4、___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends，___________ , I saved $80.三、怎样使用较丰富的句式： 尝试多样化表达方式

1、感叹句 e.g.1)How happy I was when I received your letter.2）What a kind boy he is!3）How disappointed he was!

2、强调句 e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.3、倒装句 e.g.1)Only in this way can you solve this problem.课前预习案

2)There comes the police car.3)Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、省略句 e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.5、with短语 e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定语从句 e.g.In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、各种名词性从句 e.g.That’s what I should do.8、各种状语从句 e.g.Use ifferent ways to describe the picture（连战的破冰之旅）一…就受到欢迎

a.As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed.b.On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife…

c.Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.d.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … e.Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were … ……

第五篇：2009高考英语作文备考教案

2009高考英语作文备考教案

Ⅰ.NMET书面表达第五项要求

1.覆盖所有的语言要点。内容要点可用不同方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2.应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。Ⅱ.常见的不足

1.汉语式英语 2.无过渡语 3.句式单一,平铺直叙 Ⅲ.如何增强书面表达效果 1.使用较高级的词汇 2.使用恰当的连接词 3.使用较丰富的句式

一、怎样使用较高级的词汇

1.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.5.As a result the plan was a failure.6.When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7.She went to Austria in order to study music.8.When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.You can find my house easily.二、怎样使用恰当的连接词

连接词使文章语意通顺，前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法：

提示1：恰当使用关联词，如when，so，if，because，so that等。

提示2：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语，如First, Second, Third, Soon, What’s more, As a result等。

提示3：适当使用过渡性语句，如The reasons are as follows./Every coin has two sides./On the other hand,/On the contrary, Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.(2007全国I)First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence.Second, she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace.Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills.(2007陕西)In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process.(2007浙江)连接词、句型的选择

1、递进关系

（肯定）Besides / What’s more / Also /In addition/Furthermore（否定）What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse

2、时间

一„就„：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly 不久：It was not long before „ / After a while / Soon 然后：After that / Then / So / Next 同时： At the same time / Meanwhile

3、转折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although

4、顺序：First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then

5、条件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless

6、强调：It was „that / who „ / So she did./I do hope „ / She did help me./It really worked./ besides/ furthermore/moreover/what’s more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact

7、其它：

不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事：There is no need(for sb.)to do sth./It is necessary(for sb.)to do „ 最好 做某 事：You’d better do sth./ It’s better to do sth.做某事没困难：have no difficulty in doing sth./ have no trouble in doing sth.感 谢 某 人：thank sb./ be thankful to sb./ express one’s thanks to sb./be grateful to sb./ Thanks to „

求 助 某 人：turn to sb.for help / ask sb.for help / with the help of / with one’s help 惊

奇：To one’s surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外结果）

结

果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So 总

结：In a word / In short / Above all / After all/ generally speaking/ to sum up/ in all/altogether / as is known to all 表 达 观 点：In my opinion / I think / I believe / I’m sure / I guess

原因如下（很多）：he reasons are as follows./here are many reasons for it.浪费金钱（时间）：It’s a waste of money / time „

Task: 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。

1、Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help.2、He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the west.3、It was not long___________the police came.4、___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5、Do you agree with my arrangement ? ___________,do write to me soon.6、We can go downtown and do some shopping.___________ , we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends.___________ , I saved $80.8、Eating sugar is bad for our teeth.___________ , it may make us fat.Task: Writing Practice

请你给《中国日报》写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因：

1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。

2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。

3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法：

1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。

2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。要求：

1、不要逐字逐句翻译。

2、语句要连贯通顺。

3、字数100个左右。

Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.Most families are poor and can’t afford their education.They have to stay at home and make money.Some parents think daughters needn’t go to school.They don’t let them go to school.Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldn’t like to go to school.All the children including girls should be educated.The whole society should pay attention to it.They’ll play an important part in the future of our country.诊断：

[优点]

1、词能达意；

2、语句表达基本正确。[缺点] 语句不够连贯 [药方]

1、使用常见句型；

2、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。

Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁。▁▁▁，most families are too poor to send their children to school.▁▁▁▁,they have no choice but to stay at home and make money.▁▁▁,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school.▁▁▁▁,they don’t let them go to school.▁▁▁,some children are not interested in their studies.▁▁▁▁▁▁,some wouldn’t like to go to school.▁▁▁▁▁▁,all the children including girls should be educated.▁▁▁▁▁▁,the whole society should pay attention to it ▁▁▁they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.三、怎样使用较丰富的句式

方法一.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Rewrite the sentences

1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English.He studies hard.When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.Complete the sentences with non-predicate(非谓语动词)5.听到这个消息, 他们变的很激动。_________the news, they got excited.6.尽管被告知许多遍, 他仍然重复这个错。

__________________many times, he still repeated the mistake.7.除非被邀请发言, 你应该在会议上保持沉默。

Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate(非谓语动词)8.面对困难时，他从不放弃。

9.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。

10.做完作业后，他回家了。

方法二.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 Complete the sentences

1.He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home.Not until____________________________________.2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.Only ____________________________________.3.He is clever but he does not work hard._________________as / though ____________________________________.4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.On the other side of the street ____________________________________.Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装句)5.他从不说关于他家庭的事。

6.只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好。

7.只有用这种方式, 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习。

8.Describe the character（济公）by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句)

9.他是个孩子，却知道很多。

10.墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”。

方法三.尝试多样化表达方式

1、感叹句 e.g.1)How happy I was when I received your letter.2）What a kind boy he is!3）How disappointed he was!

2、强调句 e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.3、倒装句 e.g.1)Only in this way can you solve this problem.2)There comes the police car.3)Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、省略句 e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.5、with短语 e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定语从句 e.g.In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、各种名词性从句 e.g.That’s what I should do.8、各种状语从句 e.g.Use ifferent ways to describe the picture（连战的破冰之旅）一„就受到欢迎

a.As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed.b.On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife„

c.Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.d.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were „ e.Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were „ „„

Task: 按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。

1.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(强调句型)

2.I hope I can pay a visit to you next year.（强调）

3.Tom was puzzled.（感叹）

4.It is great fun to climb the hill.（感叹）

5.Tom and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒装）

6.John likes to study and play.（否定倒装）

7.Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort.(使用倒装句)

8.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）

9.Soon the firefighters came.（表时间句型）

10.In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.a._____________________________________________which_____________________________________ b.With the development of ______________________ __________________________________________________ c.____________________________so ___ that________ ______________________________________________ Translate the sentences:

我校是一所市重点中学，位于乐陵西郊。校园很美,绿树成荫。

West of Leling lies our school, which is a key school of Dezhou city.It is beautiful, surrounded with many trees/with many trees.Task:书面表达：

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员，请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。

2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。

注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。

2）词数：100-120之间。Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school!① This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③.People here ④ are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small ⑤.⑥ Now it has been rebuilt.⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.⑨ They enjoy free education in it.⑩ Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school!① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast.④ People here live a much better life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school.⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.Ⅳ.习作分析

Task:书面表达(满分25分)

某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”

请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。

老年教师

·教学耐心．讲解细致．经验丰富

青年教师

·精力充沛．教学活泼．勇于创新

你的观点?

注意：1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；

2．短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯 学生作品1：

Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers.There are some reasons below.For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching.They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully.They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good

teachers!For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience.This is also the most important, especially for us senior students.This is only my opinion.I think young teachers are also good.点

评：

亮

点：

1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活

2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。不足之处：

1、个别地方的表达需要改进。1)Compared 2)more 3)try to make the classes lively and interesting

2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。学生作品2:

Opinions are divided on this question.Some students who like the elderly teachers more than the young ones think that the elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience.However, the others have a different opinion.They think the teachers who are young are full of energy.Besides, their teaching is lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas.Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones because from them we both can learn a lot.点

评： 亮

点：

1、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。

2、过渡词运用也比较熟练。需要改进的地方：

1)prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones 2)with explanations 3)the 去掉

4)The young teachers Some useful suggestions:

对于英语基础不好的学生，可以这样处理：把所给的材料分为几个点，每个点用1-2句简单句表达出来；而对于英语较好的学生，尽可能地运用一些高级词汇跟适当地运用一些复合句，关键是要表达准确到位。1.重点词汇的处理跟运用

1）Elderly teachers have more patience./They are more patient.2)Elderly teachers always explain things more carefully.They are more careful with explanations.3)Elderly teachers are rich in teaching experience.They are experienced in teaching./They have more/rich teaching experience.4)Young teachers are full of energy./They have more energy./They are more energetic.5)Young teachers’ teaching is more lively./They can make their classes lively and interesting.6)Young teachers like to think up/bring in new ideas.They are more ready to accept or create new ideas.2.句型的灵活运用

1)Some students may think old teachers’ teaching is better.In their opinion, old teachers have more teaching experience and they are very patient.Also, they can explain things more carefully.13

Some students may like elderly teachers’ teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.2)Many young teachers work very hard.So their teaching is becoming better and better.Most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively.One possible version:

Opinions are divided on this question.Some students may like elderly teachers’ teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly, we students have much in common with them.So they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly, they are more.energetic and enthusiastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching.Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively.In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.Ⅴ.课堂小结 1.使用较高级的词汇

词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。2.使用恰当的连接词

使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。3.使用较丰富的句式

运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。