第一篇：大学英语四级写作阅卷老师评判标准 Microsoft Word 文档
大学英语四级写作阅卷老师评判标准
阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判：
1、基本正确四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单，而是严重错误太多。基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型，只要使用得基本正确，也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。
2、丰富多变
基础较好的同学，要想取得四、六级写作高分，应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词替换（无法替换的关键词除外）。例如：think可以替换为reckon, assume, argue等词。如果想不到同、近义词，可以使用上义词进行替换。此外，句型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于主谓宾句型，可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。
四级作文如果量化成句数，只需写10句左右；六级只需12句左右。全文应以短句为主，长短句相结合。所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子，不能全篇 都是5、6个词的短句。同时，全文应有一定数量的长句，一般15~20词即可，太长则易冗赘。有的同学以为只写长句不写短句，就能取得高分，实际上老师看 长句会觉得很累，以为你不会写短句，通常不会给高分。如果一篇中文作文每句都30多个字，定然晦涩难懂，英文也不例外。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调； 复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。
二、高分真经
（一）背诵
背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，可分为以下5个层次：（1）精彩词汇，（2）精彩句型，（3）精彩句子，（4）万能框架，（5）经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样，精彩句子应作为单词来记忆。背诵前，确保自己已充分理解所有内容。
语言学习有两个关键词——输入（INPUT）和输出（OUTPUT）。听力和阅读属于输入，考生处于被动状态，只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西 弄懂。应对这种题目的技巧很多，容易在短期内提高。但口语和写作属于输出，考生必须变被动为主动，这很难在短期内突破。没有大量的输入，很难进行自由输 出。
四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文，共计120或150余字，很多同学叫苦不迭。但若将其改为中文作文，大家就会觉得易如反掌。原因何 在？俗话说：“熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也能吟。”同学们从小到大背诵了大量中文佳作，可以随意组合，自由输出。然而，在英语学习中，多数同学只沉溺于背单词、抠语法、做阅读，很少有人背诵英文文章。正因为没有大量输入，写作才始终处于“挤牙膏”状态，想一句说一句，说一句翻译一句。提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。多读、多背是首要任务，是积累输入的关键。考生应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文，平时勤于背诵。
有的同学问我，说自己背过很多英文文章，但上了考场还是大脑一片空白，什么都想不起来。这种情况很常见，主要有两个原因：一是没有进行造句的工 作，只是盲目背诵。二是背得不够熟练。学习任何东西都讲究先求质，再求量。大家英语学了很多年，文章看了很多，为什么写作还是学不好？关键是量铺开了，但 质没有上去。一篇文章应背到脱口而出的程度，如果还需要过脑子，就证明背得不够熟练。一知半解，背得再多也是徒劳。
（二）默写
背完经典范文后，进行默写。然后对照原文纠错，搞清楚错在什么地方。多数同学在写的时候都会犯小错误，如拼写、单复数、大小写等。这些就是你在 写作中的弱点，也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。培根说过：“Writing makes an exact man.”（写作使人精确。）只有默写下来你才会发现自己常犯哪些错误。
（三）中译英
中译英也是提高写作的好方法。根据范文的中文译文，将其按自己的理解译成英文。译完后，你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大差距，这些差距就是取 得写作高分的关键。这时，对照范文，看看原作者是怎么写的，思考为什么这么写。同样的一句中文，范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型？你使用了哪些词汇和句型？学习范文使用不同的词汇和句型。通过不断练习，你的写作水平不知不觉就提高了。
（四）写作
模仿范文写作新的文章，套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。最初套用时可能比较生硬，但随着不断的积累，组合起来会越来越顺手。
上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语, 以扩大词汇量, 拓展知识面。背单词时要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义, 并了解其使用环境。备考时，熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文，并进行仿写。考试时，使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型，没有把握的句子，尽量采取“回避 政策”，切忌自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型。
第二篇：1. 大学英语四级写作阅卷老师评判标准
大学英语四级写作阅卷老师评判标准
1.大学英语四级写作的要求 大学英语四级考试对写作的基本要求： 能就一定的话题和给定的 提纲写短文，能写短信或便条；表达意思清楚，屋重大语言错误；能 在半小时内写出 120---150 个词的短文。《大学英语四级考试大纲》对写作考试要求作了具体规定：短文 写作共 1 题，考试时间为 30 分钟。要求学生写出一篇 120---150 个词 的短文。试卷上可能给出题目或规定情景，或给出段首句要求续写，或要求看图作文，或给出题目谢短文等。要求切题，能正确表达思想，意义连贯，文理基本通顺，无重大语言错误。
2.大学英语四级写作的评分原则 大学英语四级写作的评分原则：(1)评分避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低 分的给低分，包括零分。(2)采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不 是按语言点的错误数目扣分。(3)从两个方面进行综合评判：内容和语言。作文应表达题目所 规定的内容，作文要切题。内容要通过语言来表达，因此语言要清楚 而贴切地表达思想。
3.阅卷的五档标准 五档：2 分，5 分，8 分，11 分，14 分 具体要求为： 2 分： 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均 有错误，且均为严重错误。5 分： 基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较严重 的错误。8 分： 基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言 错误较多。11 分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14 分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上 无语言错误。
4.字数不足扣分 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 扣1分 扣2分 扣3分 扣4分
5.在语言方面的评判：(1)基本正确 四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单，而是严重错误太多。
基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型，只要使用得基本正 确，也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼 写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单 复数等。(2)丰富多变 基础较好的同学，要想取得四、六级写作高分，应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃 至一篇文章中最好 不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词替换（无 法替换的关键词除外）例如：。think 可以替换为 reckon, assume, argue 等词。如果想不到同、近义词，可以使用上义词进行替换。此外，句 型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于主谓宾句型，可以使用主系表、过去分 词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句
3.阅卷的五档标准
五档：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分
具体要求为：
2分： 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均
有错误，且均为严重错误。
5分： 基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较严重的错误。
8分： 基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言
错误较多。
11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上
无语言错误。
4.字数不足扣分
110-119扣1分
100-109扣2分
90-99扣3分
80-89扣4分
5.在语言方面的评判：
(1)基本正确四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单，而是严重错误太多。
基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型，只要使用得基本正确，也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。
(2)丰富多变
基础较好的同学，要想取得四、六级写作高分，应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词替换（无法替换的关键词除外）。例如：think可以替换为reckon, assume, argue等词。如果想不到同、近义词，可以使用上义词进行替换。此外，句型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于主谓宾句型，可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。
四级作文如果量化成句数，只需写10句左右；六级只需12句左右。全文应以短句为主，长短句相结合。所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子，不能全篇 都是5、6个词的短句。同时，全文应有一定数量的长句，一般15~20词即可，太长则易冗赘。有的同学以为只写长句不写短句，就能取得高分，实际上老师看 长句会觉得很累，以为你不会写短句，通常不会给高分。如果一篇中文作文每句都30多个字，定然晦涩难懂，英文也不例外。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调； 复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。
6.高分真经
（1）背诵
背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，可分为以下5个层次：（1）精彩词汇，（2）精彩句型，（3）精彩句子，（4）万能框架，（5）经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样，精彩句子应作为单词来记忆。背诵前，确保自己已充分理解所有内容。
语言学习有两个关键词——输入（INPUT）和输出（OUTPUT）。听力和阅读属于输入，考生处于被动状态，只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西 弄懂。应对这种题目的技巧很多，容易在短期内提高。但口语和写作属于输出，考生必须变被动为主动，这很难在短期内突破。没有大量的输入，很难进行自由输 出。
四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文，共计120或150余字，很多同学叫苦不迭。但若将其改为中文作文，大家就会觉得易如反掌。原因何在？俗话说：“熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也能吟。”同学们从小到大背诵了大量中文佳作，可以随意组合，自由输出。然而，在英语学习中，多数同学只沉溺于背单词、抠语法、做阅读，很少有人背诵英文文章。正因为没有大量输入，写作才始终处于“挤牙膏”状态，想一句说一句，说一句翻译一句。
提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。多读、多背是首要任务，是积累输入的关键。考生应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文，平时勤于背诵。
有的同学问我，说自己背过很多英文文章，但上了考场还是大脑
一片空白，什么都想不起来。这种情况很常见，主要有两个原因：一是没有进行造句的工作，只是盲目背诵。二是背得不够熟练。学习任何东西都讲究先求质，再求量。大家英语学了很多年，文章看了很多，为什么写作还是学不好？关键是量铺开了，但质没有上去。一篇文章应背到脱口而出的程度，如果还需要过脑子，就证明背得不够熟练。一知半解，背得再多也是徒劳。
（2）默写
背完经典范文后，进行默写。然后对照原文纠错，搞清楚错在什么地方。多数同学在写的时候都会犯小错误，如拼写、单复数、大小写等。这些就是你在写作中的弱点，也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。培根说过：“Writing makes an exact man.”（写作使人精确。）只有默写下来你才会发现自己常犯哪些错误。
（3）中译英
中译英也是提高写作的好方法。根据范文的中文译文，将其按自己的理解译成英文。译完后，你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大差距，这些差距就是取 得写作高分的关键。这时，对照范文，看看原作者是怎么写的，思考为什么这么写。同样的一句中文，范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型？你使用了哪些词汇和句型？学习范文使用不同的词汇和句型。通过不断练习，你的写作水平不知不觉就提高了。
（4）写作
模仿范文写作新的文章，套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。最初套用时可能比较生硬，但随着不断的积累，组合起来会越来
越顺手。
上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语, 以扩大词汇量, 拓展知识面。背单词时要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义, 并了解其使用环境。备考时，熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文，并进行仿写。考试时，使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型，没有把握的句子，尽量采取“回避 政策”，切忌自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型。
第三篇：四级英语口试评判标准（范文）
四级英语口试评判标准描述
语言准确性和范围
语法和词汇基本正确 话语的长短和连贯性 语言灵活性和适切性 •在讨论有关话题时•能够自然、积极地参表达过程中词汇丰富、语法结构较能进行较长时间的、语与讨论
5为复杂 言连贯的发言，但允许•语言的使用总体上能分
发音较好，但允许有一些不影响理由于无法找到合适的词与语境、功能和目的相解的母语口音 语而造成的偶尔停顿 适应
语法和词汇有一些错误，但未严重•能进行较连贯的发•能够较积极地参与讨影响交际
表达过程中词汇较丰富
4发音尚可 分 言，但多数发言较简短 论，但有时内容不切题或•组织思想和搜寻词未能与小组成员直接交语时频繁出现停顿，有流
时会影响交际 •语言的使用基本上能
与语境、功能和目的相适
应
语法和词汇有错误，且有时会影响•发言简短
交际 •不能积极参与讨论，•组织思想和搜寻词有时无法适应新话题或3表达过程中词汇不丰富，语法结构语时频繁出现较长时间讨论内容的改变 分
较简单 的停顿，影响交际，但
发音有缺陷，有时会影响交际 能够基本完成交际任务
语法和词汇有较多错误，以致妨碍•发言简短且毫无连•不能参与小组讨论 理解 贯性，几乎无法进行交
2表达过程中因缺乏词汇和语法结际 分
构而影响交际
•发音较差，以致交际时常中断
第四篇：大学英语四级写作
Exercise
For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.You should write at least 120words following the outline given below:
1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2.出现这种现象的原因是……
3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……
Outline：
I.fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling
1.can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but be incapable of spelling it
II.There are some causes for it
1.fewer and fewer students need to write English essays
2.the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination
3.the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers
III.Measures should be taken to solve the problem.1.we need to attach great importance to word-spelling.2.should write English as much as they can
3.the dictations should be reinforced in the class.满分范文：
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
Nowadays, students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help student pay more attention to spelling.Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.大学生应该学选择什么书读？
Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life.And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively.The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part.That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other
types of books do.What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on
relevant fields are highly demanding.For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to
understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books.On the one hand,in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major.On the
other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons.In brief, college students should choose
books according to their interests and needs.2.对比选择型作文模板
1.Different people have different views on——
2.Some people prefer,——.3.Others tend to, ——.4.As to me, I agree with /to ——
5.Of course,——.6.For example,——
7.But,——
8.The following reasons can account for my preference——
9.The main reason is ——.10.A good example to illustrate is ——
11.Fur another,——
12.From the foregoing（综上所述）,——
1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(上述12点译文)
2．表明一部分人的看法。
3．另一部分的看法。
4．作者的看法。
5．承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。
6.举例说明支持第五句。转折指出这种观点的不足。启下句过度到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。
9.支持观点的理由一。
10.举例说明理由一。
11.理由二。
12.总结全文，从长远看来。
Is a test of spoken necessary?
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English
Test(CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others
tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long
enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate
draws a topic which he or she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken
English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.The following reasons can account for my preference.The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance
of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only
stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For
another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test
of spoken English is of necessity.3.问题解决型作文模板
1.Withthedevelopment/improvementof ——,——.2.It is necessary that——.3.On the one hand, ——.4.On the other hand, ——
5.Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention.6.Firstly——7.Secondly——
8.For example,——9.Thirdly, ——.10.In other words,——
11.In fact, ways to —— are countless.12.It’s time that ——
1．空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。
2．关注解决现象引出的问题很必要
3．解决问题很必要的理由一。
4．解决问题很必要的理由二。
5．承上启下，填要解决的问题。
6.解决办法一。解决办法二。
8.举例解释解决办法二。
9.解决办法三。
10.阐明解决办法三。
11.指出解决问题的办法多种多样。
12.强调解决问题时不可待。
Reduce Waste on Campus
With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious.It is
necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus.On the one hand, our waste
has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity.On the other
hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention.Firstly, we should
turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as
possible.Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes.For
example, we should use a basin when we clean faces.Thirdly, we should be economical.In other
words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need.In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless.It’s time that we cultivate the
habit of thrift in every possible way.4.观点论证型作文模板
1.It is true that——.2.However,——.3.I think——.4.—— can be listed as follow.5.First of all, ——
6.Secondly ——
7.For example——
8.Thirdly,——
9.A case in point is ——.10.It goes without saying that ——
11.There is no doubt that ——
12.In conclusion ——
1．提出普遍存在地观点。
2．谈不同地观点。
3．自己地观点，即文章地论点4．过度句，转折到观点地论证，由题目选择具体的词。5．论
证理由一
6．论证理由二。
7．举例具体说明理由二。
8.论证理由三。
9.举例说明理由三。
10.提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。
11.得出结论。
12.总结全文。
It Pays to Be Honest
It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront
confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.I think that we should be
honest.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends
over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being
overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers.Thirdly,honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of
trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the collective and the
individual.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying
stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.应用文作文模板
建议信模板
Dear——
1.I am delighted to learn that——.2.It——.3.In my opinion,——.4.On the one hand,——.5.On the other hand, ——
6.As to the——, I suggest——.7.If ——
8.It is unnecessary for you to——
9.In addition,——.10.I am sure——
11.Please inform me ——
12.I am looking forward to ——
1．写信的原因。
2．引出作者的建议。
3．表达建议内容。
4．提出建议的理由一。
5．建议的理由二。
6．具体到某一方面的建议内容。
7．供被建议人选择的条件。
8．建议内容的另一方面。
9．其它的建议。
10．对建议内容的评价。
11.对建议内容所做出的承诺。
12.表达个人的愿望。
Sincerel
Signature:(个人签名)
A Letter to a Schoolmate
June 7th, 2010
Dear Wang,I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national days.It has been
several years since we departed last time, and I am looking forward to your visit.In my opinion,Nanjing is your best choice for this holiday.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and
historical sites in Nanjing.On the other hand, Nanjing is a cultural center with various artistic and
musical performances.As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit the Confucius Temple and Dr.Sun
Yat-sen Mausoleum.If you are interested in parks, the XXX park will be your best choice.It is not
necessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little chill in the evening.In
addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings
unattended!I am sure you will enjoy your visit in Nanjing.Please inform me once you have made your decision.I am looking forward to seeing you
soon.，yours
Sincerely Yours,Zhang Ying
第五篇：大学英语四级写作——经典模块
大学英语四级考试写作模板——经典范文模块
一、不同观点列举型 There is a widespread concern over the issue that(作 文 题 目),but it is well know that the opinion concerning this hot topic various from person to person.A majority of people think that(观点一).In their views there are factors contributing to this attitude as
fellow.In the first place ,(原因一),Further more ,in the secend place ,(原因二).So it goes without saying that(观点一).People ,however differ in their opinions ,on this mather ,some people hold the idea that(观点二).In their point of view ,on the hand ,(原 因 一),on the other hand ,(原因二).There is no doubt that(观点二).As far as i am concerned ,i firmly support the view the(观点一或观点二).It is not only because(),but
also because().The more.the more().二、利弊型的议论文 Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over the issue that(作文题目).In fact,there are both advantages in().Generally speaking ,it is widely believed that
there are several positive aspects as follows.Fisrtly(优 点一).And secendly(优点二).Just as a popular saying goes “every coin has two sides”.()is no expection ,and in another word ,it still has negative aspects,to begin with(缺点一), in addition(缺 点二).To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of()into full play ,and reduce the disadvantages to the
minium at the same time.In that case ,we will definitly make a better use of the().三、说明原因型模块 Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon
(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注释：
1、XX 的第一个优点
2、支持 XX 的做法
3、不支持 XX 的做法
4、XX 的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
6、说明 XX 优点三的影响
相应作文： The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my
standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).四、说明原因型模块 In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for
(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相应作文：
The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.三、说明原因型模块 For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注释：
1、人们针对 XX 的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
相应作文： Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water
and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).五、说明原因型模块 These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注释：
1、提出论题
2、说明现状
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解决方法
相应作文： Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living
conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and
learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.六、图表式作文写作模板 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多 少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第 一个原因).More importantly,……(第二个原因).Most important of all,……(第三个原 因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken 括号里的使用于那些不 太好的变化趋势).七、提纲式作文写作模板
1、对立观点式 A.有人认为 X 是好事，赞成 X，为什么？ B.有人认为 X 是坏事，反对 X，为什么？ C.我的看法。Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持 X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对 X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2、批驳观点式 A．一个错误观点。B． 我不同意。Many people argue that 错误观
点。saying that, they mean 对 By 这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞 成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3、社会问题(现象)式 A．一个社会问题或者现象 B．产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响 D．如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)E．前景的预测。Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情 况。(或者是一个例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辩论式议论文模版
（一）Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决 心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
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（二）People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1.While others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not the least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
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（三）There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 论据1.Furthermore,论据2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 论据3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。
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