专四作文考纲要求及评分标准

第一篇：专四作文考纲要求及评分标准

专四作文考纲要求及评分标准

(1)能根据各种不同的听读材料笔头回答问题，复述内容写摘要、写提纲和记笔记。(2)能根据题目列出写作提纲，在一小时内写出 200～250 词的短文。以上均要求做到内容完整、条理清楚，语法基本正确，语言通顺恰当。(3)能写一般的书信、通知、便条、请帖，填写简单的表格，格式正确，语言得体。写作课培养学生初步写作能力，包括提纲、文章摘要、短文以及最简单的常用应用文。具体的写作的要求和规定如下：(1)测试目的： 检查学生在专业英语学习的基础阶段末期的英语写作能力。(2)题型： 主观试题，分为 Section A 和 Section B 两个部分。Section A: Composition 写作文 Section B: Note-writing 写便条(3)测试要求： a)作文。要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提 纲)写一篇 150 词的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为 35 分钟。 b)便条。要求根据提示写大约 50～60 词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间为 10 分钟。评分标准 评分标准共有以下七条：(1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。(2)行文流畅。(3)组织严密，逻辑性强。(4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。(5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。(6)语法正确。(7)拼写及标点正确，书写整洁。

第二篇：专四听写和作文评分标准

专四听写和作文评分标准

听写评分原则

1.1.听写共分15小节，每节1分，扣分一律写在试卷右边的空白处。大错误下面画线。小错误用圆圈表示，重复错误用三角记号表示。

2.2.每节最多扣1分。

3.3.重复错误，仅扣一次分。

4.4.错误共分两类：小错误（minor mistakes）和大错误（major mistakes），分别扣0.25分和0.5分。

A.A.小错误： 1）单词拼写错一到两个字母。例： steadily → staedily； harbor → habor 两个字母以下的词、次序颠倒算小错。

2）2）标点符号错误（含大小写）。例： World War I → world war one , and then adopted →.And then adopeted

3)3)冠词、单复数错误。例： until the beginning → until beginning;parent → parents

4）4）小错误扣分标准：小错误在一节中出现一次，留作总计；出现两次：扣0.5分；出现三次： 扣0.5分后留作总计；出现四次：扣1分。

5）5）未扣分小错误的扣分标准：累计2 ~ 4 个：扣0.5分累计5 ~ 8 个：扣1分。

B.大错误：漏写、加词、造词、换词（冠词作小错计）、大移位、时态错误，每个错误扣0.5分。例： loved → love；task — test； trip — trap； flee — flea；have finished — finsh（ed）5.一些特例的扣分标准：下列情况不扣分： World War I → World War One race car → racecar well-balanced → well balanced 90 percent → 90% 6.总分只有0.5分时，以1分计算；其余总分中如含小数点的，小数舍去，保留整数，如12.5 → 12；7.5 → 7 7.空白卷一律打0分一、四级作文的要求、评分标准及评卷实例

(一)四级考试对作文的要求

《大学英语考试大纲》明确规定：四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个的短文：写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定隋景，或给段首句续写；或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。

(二)四级考试作文评分原则。评分标准和评卷实例

1．评分原则．

四级考试作文采用总体评分(GLOBAL SCORING)的方法，即把内容和语言作为一个统一体进行综合评判。主要是看内容是否切题，表达是否充分，所用语言是否能清楚而明确地表达思想。评卷人员根据思想内容和语言表达的总体印象给出奖励分（REWARD SCORES），并不是按语言点错误的多少扣分。

2．评分标准

作文题满分为15分。

阅卷标准共分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。

2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分——基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。

8分——基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。

11分——切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。

0分——白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。

阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数档次(如8分)相似，即定为(8分)，若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分(9分)或减一分(7分)，但不得加减半分。字数不足应酌情扣分：

110--119词：扣1分； 100--109词：扣2分；90--99词：扣3分；80--89分：扣5分： 50以下词：扣9分

*作文最低分： 6分

题目： Bicycles: An Important Means of Transport in China

提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途 Score: 14

Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people--man and woman, old and young--ride theft bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles.”

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap,convenient and easy to ride.Second, riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They

consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country, and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.Score: 11

There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of

transport in people' s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider' s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a

developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the countary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China' s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it' s quality will be improved.Score: 8

Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn't ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn' t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn' t need any oil, and it can' t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modem bicycles.Score: 5

Perhaps the amount of bicycle in China is the largest in the world.Why was it so widely used in China? I thought the answer was: the population in China is too large and the price of bicycle is much cheaper.The third answer is that the bicycle is easier in using than other transportations.Comparing with the car, the bicycle is cheaper and it is easier in using than the car, but its speed is lower than that of the car.The bicycle will be remained for a long time in China but in the end it will be disappeared with the improval of people' s living level.Scoer: 2

As every body know, China a big developing country.So, the living standard of people not very high at present people' s income is not enough for they to buy cars motorcycles.And bike is easy to ride.Bicycle is cheaper be made.And I think bicycle the useful tool of tsansport in China now.So, it is quite porpular and wildly used in China's cities and country sides than the personal transportation-tool.Bike is a kind of clean tools of transport.It not use gas and other energers.For this reason it not creat polution.But in fact in any way Bicycle is not advanced than car.If it is raining, the rider will suffer from wet, on the other hand, bike can not carry much goods.According to the our country' s developing rate.I firmly believe that Bicycle will replaced by car or motorcycle in that nearly future.But undoubtfully it continue the important means of transport in China for a long time.Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Outline:1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的看法 Score: 14

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively? They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them.Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree.They emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who's right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we shouldread extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.Score: 11

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as

many as bad books.Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of

information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.Score: 8

Some people think reading shall be choosed.Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely.Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge.And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively.Because reading is important to man.Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime.It can be seen in the

newspapers and watched on TV.We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge.It can make our life more beautiful.We must give up those unhelpful books.They are not good to us.Reading them is wasting time and money.Soreading selectively is an important part in reading.Score:5

I think reading not only selectively but also extensively.Because the two sides are not

contradict．Our time is limited．So we can not read every book in the world．However, we will not be interested in every book．We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like．But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge，news and so on，it also make ours become a wise man．0n the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted．Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read．On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life．They are all useful to ours．

Score: 2

Most people thought that read books should have been selectived.But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?

Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for us.We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.on another hand, Someone' s intresting was wide.Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn' t reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us.Don' t treat these books with rackless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.

第三篇：专四作文

1.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

At present, people become more cautious when they meet strangers, let alone to help them.Trust between person is at stake.Offer your idea about such a phenomenon and your suggestions to make a change.On Aiding Strangers

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You are invited to attend a friend’s birthday party.Write a note to your friend, Mike, explaining briefly why you cannot take part in it and give him your best wishes.2.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Nowadays Internet is revolutinizing our globe and greatly facilitating our modern life.As a matter of fact, we can do almost everything on the Net, including shopping.However, people take different attitudes towards the new way of shopping.What do you think of it?

Shopping on the Net

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Emerson’s paper ranks on the top and earns fame for the English department.Write a note to him on behalf of the department, expressing the appreciation and good wishes to him.3.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

It is a popular phenomenon that nowadays some houses in China are labeled with foreign names and some traditional Chinese houses are demolished for the new foreign ones.Analyzing the possible reasons and the consequences of such a phenomenon.Foreign Names for Chinese Houses

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You just got recovered from illness.Write a note to your partner, Jason, expressing your appreciation to his care and great help.4.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Job-hunting is a tough challenge to the graduates.Someone says graduation means the coming of unemployment.Provide your opinion on such a phenomenon and give some advice for such a dilemma.Graduation, Synonym of Unemployment?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You have got in trouble in your computer installment.Write a note to your friend, Roger, describe briefly what it is and ask him to give you a hand.5.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Now many universities are asking their students to evaluate their teachers.Many students are excited at this, but some teachers seem to hold different opinions.What’s your opinion?

Should Teachers Be Evaluated by Students?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

A College English Speech Contest is to be held in the city.You want to take part in it.Write a note to Mr.Brown, inquiring the details about the contest and procedure.6.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Career planning is an important step for graduates, and it is of great importance.Offer your idea about it.Some of the tips and potential flaws must be included in your composition.Career Planning

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Your friend Steven has been enrolled by Yale University.Write a note to congratulate him, expressing your happiness and admiration for him.7.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Nowadays tourism is more and more indispensable to people’s life.But which way is a better choice: joining package tour or travelling on your own?

Which Do You Prefer: Joining Package Tours or Travelling on Your Own?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Your friend just failed in a contest and was very sad.Write a note to your friend, Allan, comforting and encouraging him not to lose heart and make further success.8.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

A scholar’s professional ethics is essential to his career and in a sense determines his contribution to the public.What does the professional ethics really mean, and what is its importance to a scholar?

My Idea of Professional Ethics for a Scholar

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You are informed that your friend Lily has failed her final examination and is very frustrated now.Write a note to Lily, offering some suggestions and try to cheer her up.9.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Some people argue that athletes, while playing games, should adhere to the principle “Friendship first, competition second”, but others are against this view.They think that “Playing a game is fun when you win.” What is your opinion?

Playing a game is fun when you win

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You have found a book in the dining hall;write a “Lost and Found” note.10.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

More and more adult students are renting flats to live away from campus, and some of them are students lovers.Some students think it unacceptable, but others think it OK.What’s your opinion?

On Cohabitation of Student Lovers

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Write a note to Tom to invite him to see a film with you.11.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Under the one-child policy carried out in China, the “one” generation born between 1978 and 1985 has grown up.Directly affected by the family planning policy of China, whether they feel any loneliness as the only child of the families is being discussed.Does the Only Child Feel Lonely?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Write a “Thank you” letter to Mr.Smith for his recommendation of your competence to the manager of the Medical Company.12.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Many universities oblige the students to attend the spoken English test.What is your opinion?

Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

The heating system in the hotel where you live didn’t work well last night.Write to the manager to complain about this.

第四篇：09年专四作文

Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? China’s economic growth has brought fast development to tourism since 1978.An increasing number of people start to go on traveling, which unavoidably bring harm to the environment.On the one hand, tourism leads to the destruction of ecological balance.Many so called green parks have been built to attract visitors.However, the constructions of those parks need lots of trees because they can be made into artificial chairs, tables or wood house, so tourism also causes the decline in areas of the green land, which adds the risk of floods.On the other hand, tourism causes water pollution.Some places of interest are famous for natural beauty, like some big waterfalls and lakes, but some rude behaviors, such as leaving plastic bags in the water indeed have a bad effect to water.To sum up, I think it is not worth sacrificing environment to develop economic.As citizens, everyone should do their own part to protect our environment.March 27, 2009 Dearly Lily, I have learned from an ad that a schoolboy is looking for a private English-language tutor.I think it is a good chance for you so you can get a part-time job at your free time.Most important of all, you want to be a teacher, your dream.I hope you will take the opportunity and may you succeed.Yours，Rose

第五篇：专四作文万能开头

四大开头模板式写法

第一大模板法：

1.①引题+②一方观点+另一方观点+③我方观点

①引题：九大引题方法

一、在谈到„时，人们对这个充满争议的话题所持的观点各不相同。

① When talking about(it comes to / it refers to)_______, people’s opinion are divergent on such a controversial issue.二、最近经常辩论的一个问题是：

① A much debated issue these day is whether…

① There is a pubic(general)debate(discussion / controversy)today(nowadays)on(about/over/as to)the problem(issue)of …

三、最近„的问题已经引起了人们广泛的关注。

① Recently the problem(issue)of ______ + has drawn(aroused)public(worldwide)attention.或 + has caused(aroused)wide(general / considerable / international)concern.四、近来„的问题已经广为天下人所知。

① Recently the issue(problem)of … has been in the limelight(brought into focus / brought to public attention / posed among the general public).五、在过去的„年里，很多城市面临了„的严重问题。

① In recent(past)years, many cities(nations / people)have been faced with(plagued with / troubled with / experienced / witnessed / undergone)the(a / an)serious problem of(acute shortage of / alarming increase in)…

六、如今我们国家面临的最为紧迫的任务之一是„

① One of the burning(pressing / urgent)problems facing(confronting / troubling)our nation(society / world / community)today is that…

七、现在很多人谈论的最热门的话题之一是„

① One of the biggest issues(hottest topics / most popular things / most serous problems)many people talk(complain)about now is …

八、随着

① With the rapid(marked / amazing)development(increase / improvement / expansion / growth / decline)of _____,① With the general(growing / common)recognition(realization / acknowledgement)of ______,① With he general(growing / common)interest in(concern over / enthusiasm for)________,① With ________ playing an increasingly big role in ______,① With _______ attaching much importance to ______,九： 如今有一种…趋势。

① Nowadays(Currently / Recently), there is a growing(unhealthy)tendency to(in / that)…

②一方观点 + 另一方观点：两大表述方法一、一些人认为„,另一些人认为„.② The vast(overwhelming)majority of people say(think / believe/ maintain/ hold)that …, while other people(others)claim(argue / insist)that …

② Most(Many / Quite a few /Some)people say(think / believe / maintain / hold)that, but other people(others)claim that …

② The vast(overwhelming)majority of people say(think / believe/ maintain/ hold)that …, but others view quite differently(but others think a bit differently / but others think that the opposite is true).They argue(claim)that …,② The overwhelming majority would support that …, others, however, take the negative attitude.二、反对者认为…, 拥护者认为…

② Those who criticize(oppose / object to)… argue that ….They believe that …, but people who advocate(favor)…, on the other hand, maintain(assert)that…

③ 我方观点

一、就我个人而言，我认为„

③ However, I firmly believe(hold/maintain)…

③ From the personal perspective, I prefer A than B as my inclination.③ Personally, I am in favor of(support)the view(idea / opinion / argument)that…

二、agree / disagree型加入：我同意/不同意前/后者观点，我认为…

③ I agree /disagree with the former / latter.I hold(maintain / believe)that …

③ I approve / disapprove of the former / latter idea.I hold(maintain / believe)that…

③ I am(not)in favor of the former / latter idea.I hold(maintain / believe)that…

变体一：②一方观点+另一方观点+③我方观点一

变体二：①引题+③我方观点

第二大模板法：

④流行观点 + ③我方观点(五大表述方法)

一、如今人们普遍认为„, 他们说„ + 我方观点

④ Now, it is commonly(generally / widely)believed(thought / held / accepted / felt / recognized / acknowledged)that … They claim(believe / argue)that …+ For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行观点)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

二、如今经常听到的一种批评声音是…他们说… + 我不同意这种观点，原因如下。

④ A criticism often heard these days is that … They say that … I disagree with this point of view for the following two / three reasons.三、对于公众来说… + 我方观点

④ To the general public, …For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行观点)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

四、关于这个问题，多数人说… + 我方观点

④ In response(reaction / answer)to the event(phenomenon / idea / question), the majority of people say(think)… + For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行观点)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

五、近来我们一直听到关于…的说法。+ 我方观点

④ These days we often hear that … + For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行观点)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

第三大模板法：①引题 + ④流行观点 + ⑤提出质疑（四大质疑法）

一、①引题 + ④流行观点 + ⑤但是他们没有意识到„

①引题句型 + ④流行观点句型+ ⑤ But do they realize…?

二、①引题 + ④流行观点 + ⑤但是这种做法明智么？越来越多的人，包括我对此表示质疑。

①引题句型 + ④流行观点句型 + ⑤ But is it a fair(wise/reasonable)one? This way is now being questioned(challenged)by more people, including me.三、①引题 + ④流行观点 + ⑤ 但是果真如此吗？仔细分析一下，就证明这种观点站不住脚。

①引题句型 + ④流行观点句型 + ⑤ But is it true? Close examination(analysis)doesn’t bear out(证实)the claim(view/argument).四、①引题 + ④流行观点 + ⑤ 但是情况果真如此吗？我不认为,因为以下原因。

①引题句型 + ④流行观点句型 + ⑤ But is this really the case? I disagree for the following reasons.第四大模板法： ①引题 + ⑥ 让步转折句（五大转折法）

一、①引题 + ⑥ 的确„，不过„

①引题句型 + ⑥ It is true that …, but …

二、①引题 + ⑥ 似乎 „, 不过„

①引题句型 + ⑥ It seems that …, but …

三、①引题 + ⑥ 不可否认的是„, 不过„

①引题句型 + ⑥ It is undeniable that …, but … / Undeniably, …, but …

四、①引题 + ⑥ 但是尽管„, 几乎没有证据证明„

①引题句型 + ⑥ But although(Admittedly,)…, there is no(little)evidence.it is questioned(doubted)that …

五、①引题 + ⑥ 但是尽管„, 我还是认为„

①引题 + ⑥ Although …, I believe one should …

注：开头段落提出观点可以出现各种格的“我”，但之后的段落不要使用 “I” “me” “my” “we” “us” “our”!