第一篇：创造闪光点,作文亮一点
创造闪光点，作文亮一点！
作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
高分作文标志
1：是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „ 非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing numbers of individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)
Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3readful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)
10or my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
希望各位朋友能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点，并与大家共享！
第二篇：考研创造闪光点
创造闪光点，作文亮一点！
作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
高分作文标志 1：是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „ 非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing numbers of individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)
Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3readful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)10or my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
希望各位朋友能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点，并与大家共享！
163分到340分
--------------致同等学历的师弟师妹
十一假期如期来临,我也终于有足够的时间坐下来写点东西．我构思了好长时间才最终写出了这些，如果我写的这些东西对同等学历的师弟师妹们考研复习有一点帮助的话，那对我将是莫大的荣幸.我于2005年毕业于河南洛阳某专科学校，毕业后在郑州某电子衡器公司从事机械设计,2007年一月参加研究生入学考试以163分的成绩败北.2007年6月1日正式辞职开始复习考研,并在2008年的入学考试中以340分的总成绩被江苏省某大学顺利录取.我知道340的成绩对于一般的本科应届生来说不算什么,可是它对于一个高等数学只学过一点皮毛;线形代数学了一半;概率论与数理统计根本没有接触过;英语没有过四级,甚至连一点语法都没有;专业课教材是在工作后自己买的人来
说是多么的可贵!
朋友,如果你的基础和我的差不多,我认为你可以一试,如果你的基
础远比我好,那你还犹豫什么?！
能够给予大家激励和动力的文章考研加油站(www.xiexiebang.com)里“同等学历”版块里有很多(注：此处决不是做广告，而是本人考研之初经常受到考研加油站里面热心研友的帮忙和鼓励，事实求是不由得不提及)。在此本人仅向那些奋斗在考研一线的同等学历的战友们致敬！你们工作了两年，并最终能决定考研，实在难能可贵！
下面我将会详细的介绍我复习的一些细节和经验，大家可以根据自
己的情况选择。
首先说英语。
选择题部分。最初我把大量的精力都放在了单词上，我用的是一款记单词软件，后来发现效果不甚理想，就干脆记大纲上的词汇表，我认为效果很好。我坚决反对“单词不重要”的说法，因为试想，拿到一篇文章，即便你没有一点英语语法的知识，但认识所有的单词，并以你20多年的人生阅历，搞定它还不是小菜一碟。但换过来，你的语法即使达到博士水平，可一个单词不认识，你能保证能搞定吗？答案是显而易见的。一句话，单词很重要！
接下来说主观题部分。我认为如果基础不好，又想在最短的时间内拿到最高的分数，那就只能靠主观题部分了,因为对于大纲要求的5400多单词不是一时半会能搞定的,而主观题部分则不然,只要你在最后两
个月突击一下,准能拿个高分.翻译题我认为一定要写,无论你写的对还是不对,记住:只有你写了
答案才有可能得分.小作文要求是一百单词,一般是要求写一封信,其实如果你很熟悉英文书写格式的话很容易搞定,下面给一个例子:
Dear xxx
First of all, thank for …./ am apologize to…
I’m writing this letter in order to …..It will be a favor to me to receive you letter lately.And thanks
for you attention.Your sincerely
Xxxx
这不就是二三十个单词吗?中间根据要求再填七十多个单词还不简
单? 大作文是200单词,其实也很简单,一般是根据一幅图片写议论文,记住第一段提出观点;第二段具体写出能支持或者论证你的观点的若干条理由,最好带点实例以证明你的观点;第三段总结.其实绝大多数考生的英语水平都是一般般的,尤其是写作,所以一定要让你的作文里面出现一两个让人的眼睛能为之一亮的,而且很多地方都可以用上的句子,当然最好是英文谚语,或者是极其经典的句子,譬如: what we are doing willingly is easy.It may become one tool that opens windows to the world, unlocks doors to opportunities, and expands our minds to new ideas.等等.这些句子如果在你的文章当中能用上三四个，当然会让你的文章光芒四射，高分也自然是顺理成章。顺便说下，千万被写跑了题，看准了图片和题意要求再写，去年有好战友就是失蹄于此,教
训非常沉痛。
记得考试下来我根据网上的答案60分的选择题我估了23分，当时很是郁闷，可成绩下来一看英语53分，我感到很是意外。细细想来是主观题做的好的原因。同时我建议做英语题先写作文，再做翻译，然后阅读理解，最后完形填空，原因自己想。最后，字一定要写好。记住，一手好字和一手烂字的可能差距在6分左右。我想至少也应给能做到书
写认真吧。
数学，数学基础很重要，课本一定要透彻。建议提前开始复习，并给最后的总复习留出三个月的时间。同时我不建议做很多的模拟题，因为模拟题和真题的水平相差甚远。做五套足矣，但要做三遍以上。要搞懂每一道真题，尤其近几年的。我建议真题做四遍以上。不要以为我是在故弄玄虚，做四遍不能得满分的大有人在。数学我不想多说，总结就
一个字：精。
我的数学只的了88分，原因很简单，我从6月分看教材，到11月才结束，根本没有时间做真题和模拟练习。最后买的复习资料全新转手
买给了别人。
政治。政治大纲的变化每年都会有很多，但是基本的东西是不会变的，所以大可不必担心大纲的变化。而且不用复习的太早，最后留出两三个月的时间就OK了。有人会问有没有必要报班，我的回答是没有必要，报班纯粹是给自己找个心理安慰。试想，一个班少则几十人，多则几百人，每个人的基础都不一样，老师怎么能照顾的过来？作为一名合格的准研究生，我们都已经不再是孩子，我们需要独立思考：我们需要什么。去年我们一起复习的我身边战友绝大多数都报了培训班,可是当我问及他们最终的感觉怎么样,他们的回答是:没用!我建议买套任汝芬的政治资料，切不说权威与否，至少他们搞这个很多年，经验还是有的。最好弄套MP3。在吃饭，上厕所的时候都能听听政治课，岂不美哉！MP3很容易搞到，网上也有。（我认为为了考研买一个MP3是很必
要的）
专业课 专业课拿不到120分以上就是没有考好。最好通过关系弄点真题，一般来说网上有下载，如果没有，就要自己想办法了。最好和你想报的学校的往届研究生取得联系。最后，提几点建议：
1，如果你有一台电脑，并且可以上网，可以打游戏，我建议你把网线去掉，把游戏删掉。因为你需要时间。2，如果你有女朋友并且正在一起为考研而奋斗，我建议最好两个人保持一定的距离，最好不要住在一起，因为你需要时间和精力去学习,男女搭配干活不累,在这里不适用。3，如果你在自己舒适的家里学习，我建议你去某大学的自习室，最好是研究生专用的那种。（郑州的同学可以去郑大核心教学区南三，那栋楼有水，有暖气，有电，而且全是考研的同胞。本人就曾在次学习，感谢郑大！）4，如果你是在孤军奋斗，我建议你找几个同专业，最好是报考同一个学校的同学共同学习，大家有个商量，信息共享，相互鼓励。俗话说听君一席话，胜读十年书。你会体会到的。5，如果你有很多亲朋好友，请暂时和他们断绝联系，等考研究生之后再和他们联系不迟。而且到时候你们的关系不会因为暂时的断绝而冷淡，反而会更亲近。6，如果你是同等学历，并且准备报考211院校或者34所，除非你很牛很牛，或者你很年轻很年轻，成功的把握很大很大，并且完全有时间承受N次的失败，否则就不要报。因为很有可能即使你的分数很高很高却会在复试的时候被莫名其妙的淘汰，原因是——门第观念！7,曾经参加过一个企业的培训,时间是一个礼拜,讲的内容当然很多很多,但只有一句话我记得最清楚:人生或许是一场游戏,但是,如果你以一种游戏的心态去对待你的人生,那么你得到的必将是一种游戏的结果.同理,考研也不是一场游戏,我们同样不能用一种游戏的心态对待,不是
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第三篇：英语六级写作备考之创造闪光点
高分作文标志:
1：是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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Computer and I(By Simmy)
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of 沪江四六级 http://cet.hjenglish.com
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!
第四篇：英语六级写作写作技巧之创造闪光点
英语六级写作写作技巧之创造闪光点
高分作文标志： 1：是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I(By Simmy)
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part of Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语 Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)Facet 替换 aspect 各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!
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新世纪刚刚掀开扉页，中国共产党就迎来90岁生日。回首中国共产党90年的风雨历程，回首中国社会90年的沧桑巨变。历史和现实总是反复证明这样一个道理，只有中国共产党才能救中国，只有中国共产党才能发展中国。回眸中国过去的一些历史，让人难忘的历史画面应有尽有，特别是1921年的7月1日，中国共产党在嘉兴南湖成立。掀开了中国近代史新的一幕，1937年7月7日发生了卢沟桥事件，日本帝国主义全面侵略中国，在中华民族危难时刻中国共产党联合全国各民族同胞，展开了英勇的抗日战争，经过八年的浴血奋战终于打败了日本帝国主义。1949年10月1日毛泽东主席在天安门城楼上向全世界庄严的宣告：“中华人民共和国成立”。中国人民从此站了起来当家做主，1979年的十一届三中全会上以邓小平为核心的党中央实行改革开放的政策，是中国人民迅速富裕起来，经过短短的三十年中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，国民经济高速、稳定、健康发展，国家综合国力大大增强，城乡面貌焕然一新，人民过上了前所未有的幸福生活。“一国两制”的伟大创举迎来了香港、澳门顺利回归，圆了几代人的统一梦，新中国迈入了腾飞的历史进程。2003的神舟五号飞船上天，2004雅典奥运会第二名，2008北京奥运会第一名，2010年上海世博会，广州亚运会„„这一切的一切都在向世界宣布,中华
人民共和国正在从发展中国家向发达国家迈进。
伟大领袖毛主席曾经说过：“世界是你们的，也是我们的，但是归根结底是你们的。你们好像早晨八九点钟的太阳，希望寄托在你们身上。”作为七八点钟的太阳我们应该跟紧党的步伐，不断用知识武装自己，提高自己的能力，把自己的所学所懂都奉献给祖**亲，都奉献给中国共产党，作为一名中共党员我应该时刻的走在群众的最前面，发扬吃苦耐劳勇于奉献的精神，不计较个人的得失，将自己的一切奉献给中国共产党。
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