第一篇:新托福tpo28独立写作
Topic: parents are more involved in their children’s education than the parents in the past.It is not uncommon to see that parents are have incredible zael to participate into their children’s education in many perspectives.At contemporary society, parents always take part in some semilars that are related to students’s study and force their children to join the extra-curricula classes which can help their chldren to improve acdemic performance.Therefore, as far as I am considerd, nowadays, parents’ involvement in kids’ study is much more emphasized than ever before.Compared with the parents in the past,parents at present, have a strong will to make their children more competent in the future career.With the development of the society, the compitition in the modern society is increasingly fierce than ever before.Every parents want their children not only can survive in the compitition but also want them to be successful in the future.Hence, those parents take pains to achieve this ambitions on their own way and consequently, because they think education is the gateway to seccess, they should be involved in their children’ s study and help their children as well.On the contrary, because of the low living standre, parents in the past only think how to bring chilren up and let them survive, so there is no time for them to have such ambitions.Therefore, it is reasonable for us to think that parents nowdays are more interseted in children’s education.Additionally, it is universally acknowledged that in the modern era, parents have a extremely high expectation than in the past.Parents want their children to be versatile and prominent, which lead most part of children can not achieve this goal at all, thus, under this circumstance, parents will help children in personally that of course include preants’ participation in children’s study.By contrast, in the past, parents just make their children free and let them do what they want.Parents will not discipline children unless they make blunder.So, we can draw a conclusion that the untouchable expectation make parents involve more in the children’s study.In conclusion, because the increasingly competitive society and high expectation make parents nowdays have more zeat in children’s study and take part in it actively.But, from my perspective, parents should give enough space for children to manage their own study.
第二篇:TPO独立写作题目
1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.2.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.3.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.4.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.5.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.6.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.7.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.8.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children(aged two to five)should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.9.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.10.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time.Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.11.Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.Others think access too much information creates problems.Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.12.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.13.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family(grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles)is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.14.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.15.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.16.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.17.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.18.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.19.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.20.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.21.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.22.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.23.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.24.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
第三篇:TPO 独立写作题目
1.At the universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes
and libraries and should receive equal financial support.2.Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between
people.3.It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.4.In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.5.People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things like to do—rather
than doing things they should do.6.Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were
children.7.It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to
learn facts.8.Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two to five)should not be
allowed.9.Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.10.Playing computer games is a waste of time.Children should not be allowed to play them.11.Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.Others
think access to so much information creates problems.Which view do you agree with?
12.It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one
specific subject.13.The extended family(grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles)is less important now than it
was in the past.14.People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign
countries.15.In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own
money at a young age.16.The best way to travel is in a group led by a your guide.17.Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.18.Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.19.In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news
sources.20.Successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they already know
how to do well.21.For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than
studying hard in school.22.Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.23.In today's world, it's more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work
slowly and make sure that everything is correct.24.One of the best way that parents can help their teenage children prepare for their adult life
to encourage them to take a part-time job.
第四篇:分享新托福独立写作话题范围
分享新托福独立写作话题范围
根据对去年50多场托福考试的分析,我们能总结出独立作文话题围绕的范围在:教育、领导、儿童、环境、生活、工作、成功、政府、道德等方面,话题还是比较贴近我们日常生活学习的,也有很多是讲人生哲理和道理的,而我们前人已经给我们总结出了许多富有哲理,语言优美,同时又通俗易懂的名言警句,我们在写作文时,可以适当引用,放句首作为背景或话题引入,亦或是放段落中间作为论证方法,都是不错的选择。上次给大家分享了教育、环境、领导三个方面的名言妙语,这次朗阁托福培训名师给大家分享工作和健康。
关于工作
考题回顾:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People work because they need money to live.题目翻译:你同意与否?人们工作往往由于他们需要钱生活。
解析:对很多同学来说,第一反应可能就是金钱是工作的第一驱动力(the primary motivation),这也很符合马斯洛的人类需求原理(theory of Maslow),马斯洛认为人们最基本的需求是钱、睡眠和住所(Maslow theorized that people have the basic needs such as money, sleep and shelter.),但是仔细去想人除了为钱工作或者满足了生活基本需求之后的工作都有其他含义在里面的,比如说,满足感(satisfaction),对工作的喜爱(passionate toward work)都能是人们工作的原因。这时候你就可以实时地用上几句非常优美地道的名言妙语:
1.The fact remains that the overwhelming majority of people who have become wealthy have become so thanks to work they found profoundly absorbing.The long term study of people who eventually became wealthy clearly reveals that their “luck” arose from accidental dedication they had to an arena they enjoyed.事实仍旧是,绝大多数已变得富有的人要归功于他们认为具有巨大吸引力的工作。对最终成为富人的人进行长期研究后清楚地发现,他们的“运气”来自于他们偶然投入自己所热衷的领域。
--史·布洛特,美国作家、记者Srully Blotnick(1941-2004)
2.Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work.工作中的快乐使工作完美。
--亚里士多德,古希腊哲学家Aristotle(384 BC-322 BC)
3.It has been my experience that one cannot, in any shape or form, depend on human relations for lasting reward.It is only work that truly satisfies.我的经验是,一个人不能,以任何形式或方式,依赖人际关系取得永久的回报。只有工作才能带来真正的满足。
--贝特 戴维斯,美国演员Bette Davis(1908-1989), The Lonely Life
4.Do not hire a man who does your work for money, but him who does it for love of it.不要雇佣因为钱而为你工作的人,应雇佣因为热爱你的工作而为你工作的人。
--亨利·戴维·梭罗Herry David Thoreau(1817-1862),美国作家、社会批评家
关于健康
考题回顾:
Which of the following would you change to improve your health: 1.the kind of food you eat 2.the amount of exercise 3.The amount of stress
题目翻译:你愿意做以下哪个来提高你的健康:1.你吃哪种食物;2.运动量;3.压力大小。
解析:同学们看到这个觉得好难抉择啊,好像通过改变这三项都可以达到提升自己的健康,比如说日常的锻炼防止了很多疾病的产生,例如高血压、心脏病、中风、心血管等危险疾病(Daily physical activity can help prevent heart disease and stroke by strengthening your heart muscle, lowering your blood pressure, raising your high-density, improving blood flow, decreasing the risk for peripheral vascular disease, and increasing your heart’s working capacity.还有很多类似的好处如:减肥,糖尿病等。It can also reduce body fat, which is associated with high blood pressure.By reducing body fat, physical activity can help to prevent and control this type of diabetes.)
再比如说改变饮食方式,如多吃素食,如坚果、全麦食品,也可以给人们的健康带来很多益处,例如降低心血管、肥胖等危险疾病发生几率,预防癌症等。(Maintaining a well-balanced vegetarian diet is healthy and can be beneficial by reducing the risk of diseases, particularly cardiovascular diseases and obesity.Eating variety of soy, nut, or wheat based products can substitute for certain meat dishes and dairy products by providing the needed nutrients those normally provide.)
就是减少压力相对来说对健康难写一点,但会给人们带来身体的放松,心情的愉悦,对心理健康是很有益处的。
而同学们也可以插入名言妙语:
1.Those who think they have not time for bodily exercise will sooner or later have to find time for illness.那些认为自己没有时间锻炼的人迟早会为疾病寻找治疗的时间。
--爱德华·利,英国诺维奇主教Edward Stanley(1779-18949)
2.Nothing will benefit human health and increase the chances for survival of life on Earth as much as the evolution to a vegetarian diet.没有什么能够比弘扬素食更有益于人类,更能增加我们在地球上的生存机会。
--艾伯特·爱因斯坦Albert Einstein(1879-1955),德裔美籍著名理论物理学家、20世纪最伟大的科学家之
一、相对论的发现者
即使你有很多可以选择并且可以写的句子,但是还是要摆正观点,选择自己擅长去写,并且对比说明为什么你选这个而不选那个,比如说这题你说选择运动,就要说明即使饮食会带来不健康,可是运动可以解决饮食不健康的问题,充足而适当的运动可以减少肥胖,糖尿病等,并且也是用减压的方式,因此你选择了运动。
此次就给大家分享到这,下次再给大家分享其他话题的解析和名言妙语。
第五篇:托福独立写作评分标准--英文版
托福独立写作评分标准
5分
Effectively addresses the topic and task Well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and or details Displays unity, progression, and coherence Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors 4分
Addresses the topic and task well, though some points may not be fully elaborated Generally well organized and well developed, using appropriate and sufficient explorations, exemplifications, and or details
Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression, or unclear connections
Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety and range of vocabulary, though it will probably have occasional noticeable minor errors in structure, word form, or use of idiomatic language that do not interfere with meaning
3分
Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and or details Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured
May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning
May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary
2分
Limited development in response to the topic and task Inadequate organization or connection of ideas Inappropriate or insufficient exemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the task
A noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms An accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage 1分
Serious disorganization or underdevelopment Little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics, or questionable responsiveness to the task Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage