第一篇：四、六级写作精华
关于四级写作
2009年9月13日
评分标准：
2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错，且多数为严重错误； 5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误； 8分-基本切题。有些地方表达不够清楚，文字勉强连贯。语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 11分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但是少量语言错误。 14分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
注：英语作文一般不少于三段，分开头部分，扩展部分，结尾部分。
开头部分
按作文题目的不同大约可以分为六种：一般性作文（或要性作文），正反作文，引经据典式作文（或名人名言作文）,题目为疑问句的作文，图表作文，应用文。
第一种：一般性作文（或要性作文）格式：引子（引出主题）+谦语+论点+启下
以Reading widely为例
引子：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the _______(especially on __________),which is ___________.例如：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.谦语;as far as I know, as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,from my viewpoint
论点：________have positive effects on___*__, 例如：reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, 启下：以上*号处,which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下：
Reading widely
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.from my viewpoint
reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, which results from the reansons as follows.注意:以后在各种问题中，引子，谦语，启下，都不变。
第二种：正反作文
格式：引子（引出主题）+谦语+观点+启下
以Private car为例
引子:As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.谦语: from my viewpoint 1 private car have both advantage and 观点:○shortcoming on our daily life, private car have both positive and ○negative effects on our daily life，启下: which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下：
Private car As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.from my viewpoint, private car have both positive and negative effects on our daily life, which results from the reansons as follows.第三种：引经据典式作文（或名人名言作文）格式：引子+It means+解释（转述）+启下
以No pains,no gains为例
引子：No pains,no gains(抄题)，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.解释：It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , 启下：which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下：
No pains,no gains No pains,no gains，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , which results from the reansons as follows.第四种：题目为疑问句的作文
可分为一般疑问句，选择疑问句，特殊疑问句 一
题目为一般疑问句 ○格式：引子+抄题+简短回答+谦词+转述（立论）+启下
简短回答：of course+主语+助动词 Of course not It all depends 以Should students be abroad studying at the
younger age ?为例
Nowadays,there exists an increasing heated discussion in matters of middle school students’ studying abroad.Then should they be abroad studying at the younger age ? It all depends.From my viewpoint,studying abroad for middle school students has both positive and negtaive effects on their future,which results from the reasons as follows.二 题目为选择疑问句 ○格式:引子+抄题(一定要补全)+简短回答+谦语+转述+启下
简短回答：I prefer to former to later
或It all denpends
以Reading selectively or widely ?为例 Nowadays,there existsan increasingly heated discussion in matters of the content of reading,especially for college students.Then should we read reading selectively or widely ? I prefer to latter.From my viewpiont,reading widely serves as an indispensable part to our study,which results from the reasons as follows.三 题目为特殊疑问句 ○格式：引子（传统）+抄题+回答（立论）+启下
以What could we do for the 2008 olympics?为例
Nowadays,2008 olympic games to be held in Beijing has become a hot topic among the Chinese home and abroad.Then as a college student,what could we do for her ? From my viewpoint,doing what we could from slight detail is of great importance, which results from the reasons as follows.第五种:图表作文
格式:引子+现象结论+描图+论点
引子：An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,*******************.现象结论：*号处。可用词changed dramatically.描图：对图表进行整体大致描述。例如：图表略。
{An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,}引子。{the number of computers owned by every 1000 people has changed dramatically in the past 20 years.}`现象结论。{In 1987,only 3%。of the people can work or play on computers ；While the number soared to 80% in 2007.}描图。{From my viewpoint,computers are being more and more widely used in our daily work and life.}论点。
第六种：应用文
应用文包括感谢信，投诉信，求职信 开头：I’m writing the letter to: 1 apply for position in your company.○2 1.complain ○about the bad quality of the goods I bought the other day.2.complain about the bad service I received.3 express my heart-felt gratitude to sb ○for sth.扩展部分
一般性作文都可用以下格式： first and foremost,………
○2 what is more,………
○3the last but not the least important,………
○对于两面作文：on the one hand ……… On the other hand………
结尾部分
结尾的写法大致可以分为四种：印证主题式，呼吁社 会式，正反对照式，名人名言式。可以根据自己的题 材选择适当的结尾方式。第一种：印证主题式
格式：After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that_______________.以part-time jobs为例
After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that part-time jobs for college students have both positive and negative effects on their study and future.Inconsequence,we should have a correct attitude to when confronted with it.第二种：呼吁社会式
格式: In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way ,we can _________in the future.以Private car为例
In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of private car.Only in this way ,we can enjoy life in the future.第三种：正反对照式
格式：In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we _______________,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.以Private car为例
In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we want to have a private car,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.第四种：名人名言式结尾
格式：Whatever you do,please remember the saying____________.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.以No pains no gains为例
Whatever you do,please remember the saying no pains no gains.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.
第二篇：六级写作素材
六级写作素材素材一：Technology
﹢Technology helps to
the increase/enhance/promote
efficiency in people’s study and work, making our/their activities more economical and less time-consuming.﹣The youngsters are more likely to/tend to/ incline to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.﹣Technology could make/render city-dwellers slaves to high
technology, alienating people from one another.﹣Technology deprives the citizens of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.素材二：Mind, soul
﹢enable the students to grasp their subjects better, helping them to broaden their horizons.﹢relax their bodies and ease the minds.﹣The citizens are more likely to be monotonous and un-motivating.﹣The youngsters might even suffer from mental diseases/illnesses, such as depression.素材三：Society
﹢promote the development of society
﹢keep the society safe and stable ﹣increase the already high crime rate
素材四：Environment
﹣The proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish（such as disposable plastic bags）poses a
threat to environment and humanity.how We should not develop economy at the expense of environment.素材五：Employment, competition ﹢create more job opportunities
﹢enable the students to find jobs more easily
﹣The competition in modern society is increasingly fierce, which alienates the city-dwellers from one another and makes them cold and cruel.素材六：Culture globalization ﹢It is manifest that globalization can bring numerous benefits to human.﹢promote/enhance the cultural communication and interaction between people from different countries/ethnic minority.﹣create tension and conflicts between…
素材七：Money（egoism←→altruism）
﹣Youngsters today tend to be
money-oriented and are likely to fall prey to materialism and egoism.﹣It is wrong to equate happiness with making more money and living in a spacious house.
第三篇：六级写作要点
六级写作要点
写作常见错误综述
１.缺少标题；相对于作文长短来说标题太大，应该根据文章的主要内容缩小标题；标题的大小写不规范.作文的标题中的首尾单词的第一个字母要大写,另外,中间出现的单词中,除冠词,连词(and, or, but, nor, for),短的介词和不定式的to要小写外,其它词要大写:
my first visit to the palace museum
the people without a country
rules to abide by
dickens and david copperfield
what can the artist do in the world of today?
what reform means to china
the myth of a “negro literature”
the English-speaking people in Quebec
My First Visit to the Palace Museum The People Without a Country
Rules to Abide By
Dickens and David Copperfield
What Can the Artist Do in the World of Today?
What Reform Means to China
The Myth of a “Negro Literature”
The English-Speaking People in Quebec
2.段落开头空格不规范，应该空四至五个字母的距离；
文章要分段，不能全文只有一或两段，一般要有至少三段，而且开头结尾段不宜太长，一般各部分不超过四句话。
3.除去开头结尾一般就应该是文章的中心部分，这部分的内容不能太少。这部分的内容从字数上应该至少超过开头结尾的总和。而且，从语言形式上看，要把这部分内容分成几部分且用关联词语进行连接，使这部分从形式上看条理清楚。
中心部分的内容也要意思上是相互联系的，如先写重要的，再写次要的；或先一方面再写另一方面。
4.不论议论文写什么内容，请记住只要写一个中心观点。可以开头段或结尾段亮明你的观点。
但文章中所有内容都应该为这个中心观点服务，不论是证明中心观点的次观点，还是举例，请紧紧围绕你的观点写作文。
5.因为是议论文，文章的目的是说服文章读者认同你的观点，所以文章要客观，有说服力。为此，要避免主观偏激的议论，举出有说服力的事例或数据，引用名言，做出合理的分析讨论。
5.因为是议论文，文章的目的是说服文章读者认同你的观点，所以文章要客观，有说服力。为此，要避免主观偏激的议论，举出有说服力的事例或数据，引用名言，做出合理的分析讨论。
6.书写潦草会影响你的得分。单词拼写错误也常常出现，建议多查字典，考试中对那些没把握的词尽量不用。句子的语法错误也不少，对此要学好语法，也可通过多练笔请别人改的方法提高。有些表达令人费解，建议写作完成后尝试以一个读者的身份给自己的作文挑刺。
7.文章的开头是非常重要的,这是文章的引子。作为读者, 会从开头段传递出来的信息来对下文的内容有一个合理期待, 如果与期待不符, 会让读者觉得文章写作很不紧凑。
8要提高写作不是一朝一夕能做到的，需要下工夫。可以通过多写作文，多看范文或多背范文，学习写作知识来提高写作。平时多背一些好的句型，并能在说的时候尽量用上，多做翻译练习（口头的可节省时间，笔头能进行细致分析）对提高写作也很有帮助。
写作如何开篇
以校园内或社会上的某种现象或趋势作为文章的引子来开篇 1)With the steady growth in the country’s economy as well as the people’s living standards, ….2)With the rapid improvement in …/ growing awareness of …, more and more …/ sth…
(e.g.With the considerable improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people’s minds at ease.)
3)Recently, sth./the problem of …has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern.(e.g.Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.)
4)One of the universal issues we are faced with/ that cause increasing concern is that …
(e.g.One of the universal issues that draw(cause)growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile.)
5)In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…
(e.g.In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.)
6)Nowadays, more/most important/dangerous for our society is …
(e.g.Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.)
(过渡句)
1)To prevent this phenomenon/trend from worsening/running wide/To guide the matter/situation to the best advantage, it is necessary/important to …
2)In the face of …some people take the position that …/some people come to believe that …, to which I can’t attach/add my consent.In the face of …people retain/take/show/assume different attitudes/positions/standpoints.3)But many people feel puzzled about/ perplexed at…
2 图表常用开篇语
1)As can be seen form the table above, some changes in …have taken place over the period from… to ….(e.g.As can be seen form the table above, some changes in people’s diet have taken place over the period from 1986 to 1990.)
2)According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that…
3)As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is a marked increase/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in …
4)As we can see from the table/graph/figure above, drastic/considerable/great changes have taken place in …over the period of time form … to…
(过渡句)
1）To get a sense of how …we must turn first to causes for it.2)This is a(n)favorable/unfavorable/unhealthy/
essential/marked/grateful change/tendency/
situation, but factors/causes/reasons for it are not hard to find.3)The progress/improvement/change(s)in …is(are)really tremendous/remarkable/marvelous, so it is necessary to understand what has caused it(them).
3)反衬法：从事物的对立面出发，引出思考。
e.g.As modern cities have been brought into rapid development, more and more of vegetation is going out of urban life.Trees are being pulled down to make room for high-rise office buildings, and industrial pollution makes it harder for the rest of greenery to survive among the forest of apartment structures.This is a situation worth improving, as vegetation is as essential to health as fresh air to life in big cities. 1)The current situation of …, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that…
(e.g.The current situation of our reforms in political structure, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that much of the achievement is far from satisfactory.For example, …)
(过渡句)
1)This situation/phenomenon/trend/tendency is rather distressing/ disturbing/depressing/heart-rending, for the opposite of it is just in line with our wishes/just what is to be expected.2)This is what we are unwilling to see, so some way must be found
out to …
3)Fortunately, however, more and more people come/begin to realize that…
4)Unfortunately, things have worsened/come/developed to the point where…
4．直入法
Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its leading role in all senses.But agreement ceases as soon as they attempt to determine how to read more profitably, upon which views vary from person to person.1)To sb.’s mind/In sb.’s eye(s), sth.seems/means…
2)No one would deny that…
Or: Everyone would agree that…
(过渡句)
1)If we take a further/closer look at this problem/matter, however, more secrets/grounds/chances/ways will be found out for … 2)If you push the analysis/study/
argument/comparison/exposure further, you will see that…
5.让步法：先承认其好的一面，再转而讨论其不好的一面。1)The birth/invention of …has made an enormous/essential difference to …But it does not mean that…
(e.g.The birth of the computer has made a radical difference to the human progress.But it does not mean that this wonder does no threat to our society.)
2)Sth.has changed the way of our society develops,….But its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.3)No/Little doubt that… But…
(e.g.Little doubt that the traditional schooling has contributed much to our social development.… But some grave defects in it begin to stand out against the modern times.)
6．设问法：如题就是一问题，可用此方法
Title: On Youth
What does “youth” mean?.....1)What is the best definition for …?
2)How/Why does sth.affect our life?
7.情景法：设计情景，再引出讨论。
1）Suppose/Imagine that …/Let’s suppose/assume/imagine(that)…
(e.g.Suppose, by any chance, you heartily disagree with anything that is going on about you, you are less likely to stay on the good side of people around you.)
2)We often find ourselves caught/involved in a dilemma whether…
(e.g.We often find ourselves caught in a dilemma whether we should reach for the bear’s paw or for the shark’s fin/whether to reach for…)
(过渡句)
1)In that case, however, I prefer to … rather than…
2)When exposed to/subject to the same conditions/challenge/choice, however, different people tend to behave in different ways.8)引言法：引用名言，不可用直接引语，可自己造名言，只要能说得通。
1)One of the great sociologists/psychologists once said that(e.g.One of the great sociologists once said that society affects human character as vitally as the clothes one wears, the food one eats and the friends one involves himself with.)
(过渡句)
1)If this is true/the case, what accounts for such an issue:
2)His voice arouses echoes among people of insight, who have come up with some practical measures.
第四篇：如何攻克四、六级
如何突破四、六级
有些大学四六级通关率特别低，下面我就自己通过四六级的一些复习策略与大家分享一下。
一、听力
听力占有很大的分值，因此我们需要好好攻克此部分。平时，我们可以看一些美国大片，学习他们的的发音。在看电影时我们需要反复看同一部电影，直到不用看字幕就能听懂为止。若要在短时间内攻克部分，我们需要采取以下措施:做历年真题，第一遍仅仅是做出选项；第二遍边听边写，需要反复听，直到把句子写出来为止；第三遍：将自己陌生的词汇、习语记录下来；第四遍：重新做一遍题。需要提醒的是，将自己记录下来的哪些词汇、习语要经常翻看，直到牢记在心。
二：阅读
平时我们可以扩大自己的阅读，刚开始可以看一些简单的英文杂志，到后面可以涉猎一些较难的英文书籍。若要短时间突破四六级，需要狠下功夫，采取以下措施：做历年真题，同样第一遍仅仅需要在限定时间内做完题目；第二遍查看自己出错的原因；第三遍阅读整篇文章，弄懂生词，且把出现频率高的词汇做一记录；第四遍掌握文章中的难一点的句子结构;第五遍：要是文章比较优美，可以花费一定时间背诵下来。
三：作文
平时一定要练习写作，最好养成每天写一篇英文作文的习惯。多背一些好的文章，好的句子，这样写起来会得心应手。遇到写作，先不急于下笔，构思一下文章的大体轮廓，再下笔。写作的时候需要条理清晰，字迹整齐，卷面干净。
四：新题型
谈谈做新题型的技巧：先看题目，找出每个题目中的关键词1-3个，一般是名词；然后快速浏览文章，若一段中有3个词与关键词相同，那么那句的对应段落就是该段。
五：翻译
翻译最重要的我感觉是整个段落的联络性和恰当的句子结构，要把握好这两点。
第五篇：六级作文训练(四)
Self-Protection Awareness
培养自我保护意识
Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多关于性侵的事件媒体揭露和报道。我认为人们应该从这些事件中得到一些启示，比如，提高和加强自我保护意识教育，特别是对于儿童和学生。
Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因这类事件伤害最大的是儿童和学生。因此，提高和加强自我保护意识是必须的。此外，加强防范危险的意识也是很重要的。如果他们能在事情发生前意识到某人或某事的潜在危险，他们就可以做一些准备来以避免和减少受伤率。
Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我认为父母应该帮助他们的孩子从出生开始就培养自我保护意识，比如，设计一些情况来让他们应付。父母还应该教导孩子认识危险，如何避免和减少来自外界的危险。此外，孩子也需要培养优秀的观察能力。
In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children
themselves.总之，保护儿童需要家长和孩子他们自己的努力。
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