六级写作中parallelism排比

第一篇：六级写作中parallelism排比

对小奥当选后的获胜讲演，更多人关注的是讲演内容，而我对其文章结构和语言的运用更感兴趣，特别是其中的排比句。排比结构(parallelism)是英语演讲中最常使用的一种重要修辞手段,它以语法结构对称(包括相同或相似的词、短语或分词)来突出意义的常见修辞手法。运用排比结构能突出演讲者的雄辩口才和强烈情感,使得演讲文稿极具说服力、震撼力和欣赏性。小奥显然是这方面的高手。

1.用在从句开头(这是讲演的第一段):

If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.（注意其中用了三个不一样的动词）

2.用在段首:

It's the answer told by lines that stretched around schools and churches in numbers this nation has never seen;by people who waited three hours and four hours, many for the first time in their lives, because they believed that this time must be different;that their voices could be that difference.It's the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabledour stories are singular, but our destiny is shared, and a new dawn of American leadership is at hand.To those who would tear this world downwe support you.And to all those who have wondered if America's beacon still burns as brightthe heartache and the hope;the struggle and the progress;the times we were told that we can't, and the people who pressed on with that American creed: Yes we can.At a time when women's voices were silenced and their hopes dismissed, she lived to see them stand up and speak out and reach for the ballot.Yes we can.When there was despair in the dust bowl and depression across the land, she saw a nation conquer fear itself with a New Deal, new jobs and a new sense of common purpose.Yes we can.When the bombs fell on our harbor and tyranny threatened the world, she was there to witness a generation rise to greatness and a democracy was saved.Yes we can.She was there for the buses in Montgomery, the hoses in Birmingham, a bridge in Selma, and a preacher from Atlanta who told a people that 'We Shall Overcome.' Yes we can.A man touched down on the moon, a wall came down in Berlin, a world was connected by our own science and imagination.And this year, in this election, she touched her finger to a screen, and cast her vote, because after 106 years in America, through the best of times and the darkest of hours, she knows how America can change.Yes we can.小奥的讲演的最后，用一系列的 Yes we can 煽动台下听众的热情，众人一起高喊：Yes we can!Yes we can!场面相当热烈。

第二篇：六级写作中的parallelism排比句

六级写作中的parallelism排比句our stories are singular, but our destiny is shared, and a new dawn of American leadership is at hand.To those who would tear this world downwe support you.And to all those who have wondered if America's beacon still burns as brightthe heartache and the hope;the struggle and the progress;the times we were told that we can't, and the people who pressed on with that American creed: Yes we can.At a time when women's voices were silenced and their hopes dismissed, she lived to see them stand up and speak out and reach for the ballot.Yes we can.When there was despair in the dust bowl and depression across the land, she saw a nation conquer fear itself with a New Deal, new jobs and a new sense of common purpose.Yes we can.When the bombs fell on our harbor and tyranny threatened the world, she was there to witness a generation rise to greatness and a democracy was saved.Yes we can.She was there for the buses in Montgomery, the hoses in Birmingham, a bridge in Selma, and a preacher from Atlanta who told a people that 'We Shall Overcome.' Yes we can.A man touched down on the moon, a wall came down in Berlin, a world was connected by our own science and imagination.And this year, in this election, she touched her finger to a screen, and cast her vote, because after 106 years in America, through the best of times and the darkest of hours, she knows how America can change.Yes we can.小奥的讲演的最后，用一系列的 Yes we can 煽动台下听众的热情，众人一起高喊：Yes we can!Yes we can!场面相当热烈。

第三篇：六级写作素材

六级写作素材素材一：Technology

﹢Technology helps to

the increase/enhance/promote

efficiency in people’s study and work, making our/their activities more economical and less time-consuming.﹣The youngsters are more likely to/tend to/ incline to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.﹣Technology could make/render city-dwellers slaves to high

technology, alienating people from one another.﹣Technology deprives the citizens of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.素材二：Mind, soul

﹢enable the students to grasp their subjects better, helping them to broaden their horizons.﹢relax their bodies and ease the minds.﹣The citizens are more likely to be monotonous and un-motivating.﹣The youngsters might even suffer from mental diseases/illnesses, such as depression.素材三：Society

﹢promote the development of society

﹢keep the society safe and stable ﹣increase the already high crime rate

素材四：Environment

﹣The proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish（such as disposable plastic bags）poses a

threat to environment and humanity.how We should not develop economy at the expense of environment.素材五：Employment, competition ﹢create more job opportunities

﹢enable the students to find jobs more easily

﹣The competition in modern society is increasingly fierce, which alienates the city-dwellers from one another and makes them cold and cruel.素材六：Culture globalization ﹢It is manifest that globalization can bring numerous benefits to human.﹢promote/enhance the cultural communication and interaction between people from different countries/ethnic minority.﹣create tension and conflicts between…

素材七：Money（egoism←→altruism）

﹣Youngsters today tend to be

money-oriented and are likely to fall prey to materialism and egoism.﹣It is wrong to equate happiness with making more money and living in a spacious house.

第四篇：六级写作要点

六级写作要点

写作常见错误综述

１.缺少标题；相对于作文长短来说标题太大，应该根据文章的主要内容缩小标题；标题的大小写不规范.作文的标题中的首尾单词的第一个字母要大写,另外,中间出现的单词中,除冠词,连词(and, or, but, nor, for),短的介词和不定式的to要小写外,其它词要大写:

my first visit to the palace museum

the people without a country

rules to abide by

dickens and david copperfield

what can the artist do in the world of today?

what reform means to china

the myth of a “negro literature”

the English-speaking people in Quebec

My First Visit to the Palace Museum The People Without a Country

Rules to Abide By

Dickens and David Copperfield

What Can the Artist Do in the World of Today?

What Reform Means to China

The Myth of a “Negro Literature”

The English-Speaking People in Quebec

2.段落开头空格不规范，应该空四至五个字母的距离；

文章要分段，不能全文只有一或两段，一般要有至少三段，而且开头结尾段不宜太长，一般各部分不超过四句话。

3.除去开头结尾一般就应该是文章的中心部分，这部分的内容不能太少。这部分的内容从字数上应该至少超过开头结尾的总和。而且，从语言形式上看，要把这部分内容分成几部分且用关联词语进行连接，使这部分从形式上看条理清楚。

中心部分的内容也要意思上是相互联系的，如先写重要的，再写次要的；或先一方面再写另一方面。

4.不论议论文写什么内容，请记住只要写一个中心观点。可以开头段或结尾段亮明你的观点。

但文章中所有内容都应该为这个中心观点服务，不论是证明中心观点的次观点，还是举例，请紧紧围绕你的观点写作文。

5.因为是议论文，文章的目的是说服文章读者认同你的观点，所以文章要客观，有说服力。为此，要避免主观偏激的议论，举出有说服力的事例或数据，引用名言，做出合理的分析讨论。

5.因为是议论文，文章的目的是说服文章读者认同你的观点，所以文章要客观，有说服力。为此，要避免主观偏激的议论，举出有说服力的事例或数据，引用名言，做出合理的分析讨论。

6.书写潦草会影响你的得分。单词拼写错误也常常出现，建议多查字典，考试中对那些没把握的词尽量不用。句子的语法错误也不少，对此要学好语法，也可通过多练笔请别人改的方法提高。有些表达令人费解，建议写作完成后尝试以一个读者的身份给自己的作文挑刺。

7.文章的开头是非常重要的,这是文章的引子。作为读者, 会从开头段传递出来的信息来对下文的内容有一个合理期待, 如果与期待不符, 会让读者觉得文章写作很不紧凑。

8要提高写作不是一朝一夕能做到的，需要下工夫。可以通过多写作文，多看范文或多背范文，学习写作知识来提高写作。平时多背一些好的句型，并能在说的时候尽量用上，多做翻译练习（口头的可节省时间，笔头能进行细致分析）对提高写作也很有帮助。

写作如何开篇

以校园内或社会上的某种现象或趋势作为文章的引子来开篇 1)With the steady growth in the country’s economy as well as the people’s living standards, ….2)With the rapid improvement in …/ growing awareness of …, more and more …/ sth…

(e.g.With the considerable improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people’s minds at ease.)

3)Recently, sth./the problem of …has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern.(e.g.Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.)

4)One of the universal issues we are faced with/ that cause increasing concern is that …

(e.g.One of the universal issues that draw(cause)growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile.)

5)In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…

(e.g.In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.)

6)Nowadays, more/most important/dangerous for our society is …

(e.g.Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.)

(过渡句)

1)To prevent this phenomenon/trend from worsening/running wide/To guide the matter/situation to the best advantage, it is necessary/important to …

2)In the face of …some people take the position that …/some people come to believe that …, to which I can’t attach/add my consent.In the face of …people retain/take/show/assume different attitudes/positions/standpoints.3)But many people feel puzzled about/ perplexed at…

2 图表常用开篇语

1)As can be seen form the table above, some changes in …have taken place over the period from… to ….(e.g.As can be seen form the table above, some changes in people’s diet have taken place over the period from 1986 to 1990.)

2)According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that…

3)As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is a marked increase/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in …

 4)As we can see from the table/graph/figure above, drastic/considerable/great changes have taken place in …over the period of time form … to…

(过渡句)

1）To get a sense of how …we must turn first to causes for it.2)This is a(n)favorable/unfavorable/unhealthy/

essential/marked/grateful change/tendency/

situation, but factors/causes/reasons for it are not hard to find.3)The progress/improvement/change(s)in …is(are)really tremendous/remarkable/marvelous, so it is necessary to understand what has caused it(them).

3)反衬法：从事物的对立面出发，引出思考。

e.g.As modern cities have been brought into rapid development, more and more of vegetation is going out of urban life.Trees are being pulled down to make room for high-rise office buildings, and industrial pollution makes it harder for the rest of greenery to survive among the forest of apartment structures.This is a situation worth improving, as vegetation is as essential to health as fresh air to life in big cities. 1)The current situation of …, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that…

(e.g.The current situation of our reforms in political structure, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that much of the achievement is far from satisfactory.For example, …)

(过渡句)

1)This situation/phenomenon/trend/tendency is rather distressing/ disturbing/depressing/heart-rending, for the opposite of it is just in line with our wishes/just what is to be expected.2)This is what we are unwilling to see, so some way must be found

out to …

3)Fortunately, however, more and more people come/begin to realize that…

4)Unfortunately, things have worsened/come/developed to the point where…

4．直入法

Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its leading role in all senses.But agreement ceases as soon as they attempt to determine how to read more profitably, upon which views vary from person to person.1)To sb.’s mind/In sb.’s eye(s), sth.seems/means…

2)No one would deny that…

Or: Everyone would agree that…

(过渡句)

1)If we take a further/closer look at this problem/matter, however, more secrets/grounds/chances/ways will be found out for … 2)If you push the analysis/study/

argument/comparison/exposure further, you will see that…

5.让步法：先承认其好的一面，再转而讨论其不好的一面。1)The birth/invention of …has made an enormous/essential difference to …But it does not mean that…

(e.g.The birth of the computer has made a radical difference to the human progress.But it does not mean that this wonder does no threat to our society.)

2)Sth.has changed the way of our society develops,….But its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.3)No/Little doubt that… But…

(e.g.Little doubt that the traditional schooling has contributed much to our social development.… But some grave defects in it begin to stand out against the modern times.)

 6．设问法：如题就是一问题，可用此方法

Title: On Youth

What does “youth” mean?.....1)What is the best definition for …?

2)How/Why does sth.affect our life?

7.情景法：设计情景，再引出讨论。

1）Suppose/Imagine that …/Let’s suppose/assume/imagine(that)…

(e.g.Suppose, by any chance, you heartily disagree with anything that is going on about you, you are less likely to stay on the good side of people around you.)

2)We often find ourselves caught/involved in a dilemma whether…

(e.g.We often find ourselves caught in a dilemma whether we should reach for the bear’s paw or for the shark’s fin/whether to reach for…)

(过渡句)

1)In that case, however, I prefer to … rather than…

2)When exposed to/subject to the same conditions/challenge/choice, however, different people tend to behave in different ways.8)引言法：引用名言，不可用直接引语，可自己造名言，只要能说得通。

1)One of the great sociologists/psychologists once said that(e.g.One of the great sociologists once said that society affects human character as vitally as the clothes one wears, the food one eats and the friends one involves himself with.)

(过渡句)

1)If this is true/the case, what accounts for such an issue:

2)His voice arouses echoes among people of insight, who have come up with some practical measures.

第五篇：公文写作常用排比句式

写材料排比句大全，得排比句者得天下！

编者按：最近看到有的同志推排比句花了半天时间，实在惋惜大好时光。为帮助提升工作效率，作者从本系统内征集来以下119个排比句，供参阅。有的拿来可用，有的可以借鉴模仿，还有的可以开阔思路。

1停住脚读原著、静下心学原文、稳住神悟原理。

2带着信念学出绝对忠诚，带着感情学出衷心拥戴，带着使命学出政治责任。

3自觉学党章，定期上党课，经常读党史，积极过党日，按时交党费，坚持讲党性，严格守党纪，始终跟党走。4扑下身子、放下架子、甩开膀子、脱掉鞋子。

5千忙万忙，没有精准落实就是瞎忙；千招万招，没有精准落实就是虚招；千条万条，没有精准落实就是“白条”。

6坚持教育先行，坚持统筹推进，坚持层层动员，坚持分类指导，坚持常态督查。

7距离再远决不忘忠诚，氧气再少决不缺精神，海拔再高决不辱使命，环境再苦决不破规矩。

8有位置坚决干好，换位置尽快适应，无位置坚决服从。

9骨头再难啃也不回避，敌人再强大也不畏惧，战争再难打也不退缩。10工作标准一点不降、训练内容一项不少、安全工作一件不松、事故安全一个不出。11指挥谋略胜敌一筹，战法运用强敌一招，临机决断先敌一步。12思考问题在同一基点上、贯彻执行在同一直线上、思想意志在同一声调上。

13三五分钟不嫌短，三五句话不嫌少，三五个人不嫌散。

14见任务就上，见第一就争，见红旗就扛，见先进就学，见问题就改。15铁一般的信仰刻在胸膛，铁一般的信念坚定方向，铁一般的纪律时刻不忘，铁一般的担当扛在肩上。

16不让老实肯干者吃亏，不让夸夸其谈者占先，不让投机钻营者得利。17职务高不等于觉悟高，党龄长不等于党性强，年龄大不等于格局大。18恋亲但不为亲徇私，念旧但不为旧谋利，济亲但不以公济私。19克服坐而论道的“讲话秀”、议而不决的“问题秀”、走马观花的“调研秀”。

20心思不分散，精力不游移，干劲不松懈。

21阵痛之中保持坚忍，震荡之中保持定力，得失纠结之中保持豁达。22抓一抓学一学，催一催动一动，考一考背一背。

23训练看情绪、工作看劲头、吃饭看胃口、睡觉看快慢、说话看态度。24教育跟上，公开跟上，帮促跟上，活动跟上，防范跟上。25不以位高而忘本，不以权重而忘形，不以名利而迷失自我。26把家国大义扛在肩上，把百姓冷暖装在心中，把责任担当举过头顶。27脑子里永远有任务，眼睛里永远有敌人，肩膀上永远有责任，胸膛里永远有激情。28带着信仰学、学出信仰来，带着忠诚学、学出忠诚来，带着感情学、学出感情来，带着使命学、学出使命来。

29思想上坚定追随、政治上绝对忠诚、情感上真挚热爱、行动上紧紧跟上。

30不在困难面前低头，不在挑战面前退缩，不拿原则做交易，不在任何压力下吞下损害中华民族根本利益的苦果。

适应新体制把准建设方向、履行新职能砥砺打赢本领、担当新使命时刻练兵备战。

32军人也有风花雪月，但那风是„铁马秋风‟、花是„战地黄花‟、雪是„楼船夜雪‟、月是„边关冷月‟。

33跑好“第一棒”、干好“第一任”、担好“第一责”，站好“第一哨”。34把培铸灵魂作为根本，把增强本事作为核心，把锤炼血性作为关键，把提纯品德作为基础。

35学习力就是创造力，创造力就是战斗力，战斗力就是生命力。36做长远打算，交长远朋友，赢长远利益，干长远事业。

37多思肩上责任之重，多谋兴军利兵之策，多干战斗力提升之事。38把思想工作做到一人一事、宣传鼓动做到训练前沿、排忧解难做到每名官兵、心理疏导做到每个点位。

39该站到位时站到位，该顶上去时顶上去，该抗住时要抗住。40法律面前人人平等，纪律约束没有例外，制度面前没有特权。41位不在高，廉洁则名。权不在大，为公则灵。斯是公仆，惟吾德馨。42人有所畏，其家必和；官有所畏，其政必兴；行有所畏，其业必成。43面对进退留转心存迷茫，面对压编调岗心存担忧，面对移防换型心存纠结。

44透过“进”的人看差距，透过“退”的人看担当，透过“留”的人看使命，透过“转”的人看境界。

45思想上有统一认识，行动上有积极响应，目标上有共同追求。46内容上衔接、安排上合拍、落实上合力。

47把认识向高处提领、学习向信仰扎根、工作向纵深推进。48“打虎”全覆盖、“拍蝇”无死角、“猎狐”不手软。

49推动反腐败斗争向深层挖根推进、向内省自觉转化、向治本抓常拓展。

50大是大非面前旗帜鲜明、风浪考验面前无所畏惧、各种诱惑面前立场坚定。

51只有带着感情学、带着责任学、带着问题学，才能常学常新、常用常新、受益无穷。

52重大决策问计于官兵，敏感事务公示于官兵，难题攻关借力于官兵。53敢于动“自己的奶酪”，冲破心理的“大山”，突破思维的“峡谷”，打破行动的“枷锁”。

坚持基础在“学”，抓牢关键在“做”，突出重点在“改”，立起根本在“固”。

55打牢“学”这个基础，突出“做”这个关键，把住“改”这个牵引，体现“促”这个目的。56在政治上更加坚定，在学习上更加深入，在实践上更加扎实，在结合上更加紧密，在落实上更加见效。

57夯实“学”的基础，严格“做”的标准，明确“改”的举措，做好“融”的功课，落实“建”的责任。

理想信念之基深植固立，备战打仗之风强劲回归，正风肃纪之剑持续发力，改革强军之势气贯长虹。

59个人利益要服从集体利益，局部利益要服从整体利益，暂时利益要服从长远利益。

60决不允许合意的就执行、不合意的就不执行，决不允许有令不行、有禁不止，决不允许搞上有政策、下有对策。

61没有一股子韧劲，没有一股子干劲，没有一股子狠劲，必然闯不出一条新路，等不到“春暖花开”，也到达不了“远方”。

62“练为战”是融入血脉永不能忘的训练指导，“打胜仗”是实战训练永不能丢的核心目标，“供给侧”是训练改革永不能偏的着力重点，“磨利刃”是锤炼拳头永不能虚的实在举措，“走出去”是引入活水永不能断的渠道源泉。

63走上新战位、履行新职责、干出新作为。

64思想上尊重群众、态度上学习群众、感情上贴近群众、行动上深入群众，才能真正赢得群众。

65常委挂钩帮建，机关一线督导，骨干全时观察。66有权必有责，有责要担当，失责必追究。67找出问题症结，查清人为原因，逐一核实落地，严肃追责问责。68内涵大难抓紧、工作杂难抓实、见效慢难抓成。69事关宗旨本色、事关军心士气、事关强军大局。

70以大战略全面治党治国治军，以大气魄运筹国际国内大局，以大智慧推进改革发展稳定，以大手笔擘画内政外交国防，以大担当破解难局危局险局。

71前所未有地靠近世界舞台的中心，前所未有地接近实现中华民族伟大复兴的目标，前所未有地具有实现这个目标的能力和信心。72把践行“三个维护”作为政治任务来落实，作为政治信仰来培塑，作为政治操守来历练。

73以个体之失换整体之得，以局部之失换全局之得，以一时之失换长远之得。

74信仰值满格、忠诚度满仓、正能量充盈。

75化无形为有形、变被动为主动、由软指标成为硬任务。76把责任区分搞精确、把工作任务搞精细、把标准要求搞精准。77一年比一年扎实、一年比一年深入、一年比一年更有成效。78有安排、月月有计划、项项有落实。

79把政治纪律政治规矩作为底线红线来严守，把深入肃清流毒影响作为长期政治任务来推进，把坚决完成改革任务作为历史重任来担当。80把每一项改革任务都精准落实到位，把每一件手中武器都练到极致，把每一件事都干精彩干漂亮。81提高精准理解、精准发力、精准落实能力，克服和防止“马大哈”的态度、“差不多”的标准、“过得去”的作风。

82让打主攻就勇往直前，让打后卫就拼死掩护，让配属谁就服从谁指挥。

83坚定信心不动摇，面对纷扰不走神，直面得失不纠结，落实责任不懈怠。

84分层调研、分组备课、分类施教、分岗转化。85有实践依据、有理论分析、有具体举措。

86多与官兵拉家常，多闻官兵的汗味，多听官兵牢骚话，多帮官兵解难题。

87多谋安全之策，多干安全之事，多求安全之效。88善于学习、敏于思考、勇于探索、勤于实践。

89强化军人意识、具备军人能力、树立军人形象、珍惜军人荣誉。90转观念、转职能、转方式、转作风。91跟不上去、做不到位、落不到底。

92一流的标准、科学的方法、严实的作风、恒久的韧劲、强烈的责任。93政治灵魂之所在、核心价值之所在、显著特质之所在、时代精神之所在、崇高品格之所在。

94学习教育专题化、研究阐释常态化、教材读本系列化。95讲忠诚、讲打赢、讲严实、讲创新、讲奉献。

96不是淘汰，而是奉献；不是失落，而是荣誉；不能忘记，而应铭记。97走的走得舒心、分的分得安心、留的留得尽心。98胜仗情怀以壮志、问题导向以励志、系统思维以明志、基于执行以达志。

99不忘初心、不改初衷、不失信仰、不丢理想。

00前瞻的意识、冷静的思考、科学的分析、精准的落实。01理清工作思路、把控工作节奏、破解矛盾困难。02高起点谋划、高标准推进、高质量落实。

03带着信仰学、带着忠诚学、带着感情学、带着使命学。

04融入新体制、应对新挑战、适应新要求。05思想观念上“更新换代”，能力素质上“升级换挡”，工作方式上“提质增效”。

06画好使命“同心圆”、形成强军“聚能环”、攥成体系“强拳头”。07平常之心、平淡之欲、平实之风。08心有所畏、言有所戒、行有所止。

09常思贪欲之害、常怀律己之心、常除非分之想。10拿主意、出点子、指路子、解扣子、传经验。

11诚心诚意办实事、尽心尽力解难事、坚持不懈做好事。12时时争上游、事事高标准、行行过得硬。13思想上的偏差、决策中的失误、工作中的缺点。

14练谋略、练指挥、练战法、练保障、练作风。15有些课目训了，不代表训精了；有些内容练了，不代表练实了；有的训练时间够了，不代表训强了。

16引领实践、指导实践、推动实践。

17以法为绳量长裁短，以法为规布政施策，以法为矩奖功惩过。18放眼全局不为细节所累，立足长远不为现实所扰，抓住本质不为表面所惑，顺应形势不为身份所限。

19“四个意识”不能淡，焦点方向不能偏，节奏力度不能变，工作落点不能空。