第一篇:英语作文十句法
英语作文在高考里占了25分,差不多和数学里的两个大题相当。
但是相较之下,你只需要付出很低的成本就能把这块分数拿下,实在是太赚了,太赚了。通常,我们把这叫送分题。不过显然,好多同学没法拿到作文的高分。这大多是因为没掌握高考英语作文的规律和技巧——也挺少有老师教这个的。呐,现在我们可以开始了。
(二)十句作文法
十句作文法,意思是写英语作文,十句话就够了。十句话就能拿二十多分,实在是太赚了,太赚了……
这十句,自有其排布的规律。本篇主讲议论文,别的文体有机会我们再聊。真正的英语高分选手,是能把英语议论文作文答成填空题的,怎么说呢? 文分三段。
第一段记叙,写对题目中对你要求的东西,写背景,写事件。需要2句话。第二段议论,是一句总起句,加三句论点,每一句论点后面加一句论据。第三段升华,大约是1-2句的篇幅。把文章提升至世界/社会/国家,或者个人成长的层面。如此,共十句。
阅卷老师阅卷时会看哪些东西呢?他们会看:你文章的开头与结尾,然后是第二段的第一句话,你文章中用到的一些逻辑连接词。最后大略地看看字数、拼写、语法等细节,打分。
你按照那样三段的格式写,对阅卷老师也是一种友好,他觉得你懂行,这样一个基础分就有了。
当你有了这么一个详细大纲,就可以继续往下写。怎么写?
答,套用万能句式+套用逻辑词+填空。我们举个例子……(2016天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);(2)谈谈收获或感情;(3)表达祝愿语期望。
这就是篇典型的记叙+议论+升华地文章,题目里都点明白了,甚至不需要我们自己思考每段要写什么。下一步,套万能句:
During the past two weeks, we had an unforgettable communication with friends from England, which would last long in our mind.…… 第一段记叙概括事件。这个句子,就非常地通用。但凡是回忆性文章,几乎都可以这么写。During the past ……, we had an unforgettable communication with ……, which would last long in our mind.…… 句式高端而优雅,属于能镇场子得分的那种。
This activity plays an important educational role in our daily life.For one thing…For another… Furthermore… In short, we have broadened our horizon and known more about the culture of different area.第二段,写议论。和上面一样,又是一些能通用的句子。而用到的“for another…furthermore…in short”也是你可以拿去用的东西。
除此,还可以用“besides”,”and also”也都很不错。比我们常见到的at first, then , finally之类要来得好。
It is universally acknowledged that… I wish…
第三段,升华。又是一个万能句。众所周知如何如何,我希望如何如何。至此,文章的框架就已经出来了。只剩下我们先前说的“填空”。把题目里要求的东西塞进去,这文章就成了。
篇幅有,逻辑有,语法有,升华有。这文章不拿20+,什么文章拿20+
(三)一个完整的应用示例
我们写篇关于电视机的稿子吧,议论下这个东西的好坏。怎么写呢?
第一段写记叙,写本文的背景。用两句话。
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.(1)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.(2)
第二段,写议论。一句总起句,加五个短句,一个总结句。注意其中的逻辑词。Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.(3)For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities.(4)For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World”, and “The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald”.(5)Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.(6)Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication.(7)And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.(8)In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious.(9)第三段,写升华。用一句话搞定。
Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program being produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant.(10)啊,又一个万能句式。
(四)你该努力做的正确方向 主要有三个。
第一,背单词积累词汇量。有用吗?有啊,比如那些逻辑词,不就是词汇量的一种体现吗。
第二,不要背作文了,没意义的,去背句子。找那种可以通用的句子背。比方说:
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not…… Some are for the idea……However, others don’t hold the same view…… In my perspective …… I will never forget one thing which happened on me when I was…… It is universally acknowledged that/I believe… If everyone of us can…, the society will become… 哪里找这种句子呢?
其实最好的是课本……你可以去试试。比如我现在都记得中学课本里的一句:
The country, covered with cherry tree flowers, looks as though it is covered with pink snow.真好看。
还有,可以去这里:高考英语作文中可以用哪些特别地道的句子句式或单词而得到格外加分?知乎 抄下来。
第三,注意字体,注意语法,注意时态,注意标点,注意所有可能会影响你得分的东西。以及,更多地尝试复杂句。
第二篇:中考英语三段式作文法
中考英语三段式作文法
重点诠释 :
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1.第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2.第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。
3.最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有:
递进型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only„but also等;
解释型:that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;
转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等;
列举型:firstly„secondly„finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take„ for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so„ that, so that等;
让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
顺序型:first„next„and then„finally, first„then„after that„finally 等;
并列型:and, both„and, or, either„or, as well as, 等
时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly„when, no sooner„than 等
总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等
条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等
写作典例 :
假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典。根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信。
英汉词典 新华字典
收词
(字)18000(英语)
20000(汉语)10000
价格 52元 11元
特点 大量例子,用法说明,适合初学者 中国最常用的汉语字典
注意:
1.词数:80左右;
2.参考词汇:推荐recommend;英汉词典The English-Chinese Dictionary(ECE);
新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)
Dear Steve,_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
Yours
Li Yue
分析:此篇书面表达属于实物说明文,其篇章结构可按三段式进行写作。本文的第一段,可用直接的叙述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作为第二段,其主要内容是对两本词典的一些介绍。结束语即可作为第三段。应将两本词典的特点表达准确,以便加拿大笔友 Steve作出合理选择。表达时,文章的基本时态可考虑用一般现在时。
范文:
Dear Steve,I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECD is more expensive.It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours,Li Yue
第三篇:大学英语写作十二句作文法
十二句作文法
大学英语四、六级考试写作的评分依据是:文章切题、条理清楚、语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是指每一段的议论的正反清楚,说明的几个方面清楚,描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确,符合英语表达习惯。
四、六级的作文的字数要求是四级不少于100字,六级不少于120字。针对四、六级考试的作文要求我们提出了十二句作文法,这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括我们在多年考试辅导和阅卷中所总结出来的一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。
一、审题
我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你的写作不跑题(如果跑题,条理和语言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分)那么审题要审什么呢?
1.体裁(议论文、说明文、描述文)
审题就是要审作文的体裁和题材。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括哪些呢?就四、六级考试而言,它包括议论文、说明文和描述文。从近些年来看,四、六级作文不是单一的体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如有一次四级作文题是这样出的:
Directions:
For this you’re your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at 1east 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
(1)做合格大学生的必要性
(2)做合格大学生的必备条件(可从德、智、体等方面谈)
(3)我打算这样做
很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。我们认为说:它是议论文是片面的。因为,第一段要求写“……必要性”,这说明本段体裁是议论文;第二段要求写“……必备条件”,这说明本段要求写说明文;而第三段要求写“……这样做”,说明本段要求写的是描述文。所以我们说在大多数情况下,四、六级作文是三种体裁的杂
合体。
2.根据不同体裁确定写作方法
我们审题的目的就在于根据不同的体裁来确定不同的写作方法。通过审题,我们可以看出四、六级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论文、第二段为说明文、第三段为描述文。议论文有议论文的写作方式、说明文有说明文的写作方式、描述文也有它自身的写作特点。
第一段为议论文:它的写作特点是要有论点和论据,而且往往从正反两面来论述。例如上面题目的第一段的写作思路是:做合格大学生,会怎么样(这是从正面论述);不能做到合格大学生,会怎么样(从反面论述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结论)。
第二段为说明文:它的写作特点是从几方面或几条来说明一个问题,就跟机器的说明书一样,通过1、2、3说明它的用途。就上面的作文而言,我们可从三个方面(德、智、体)来说明做合格大学生的必备条件。
第三段为描述文:以“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。跟上两段相比,本段的主语多为人称代词。该段的描述要与第二段相呼应。
二、确定主题句
通过审题,我们知道该如何确定写作的思路。下边我们就谈怎么样写。第一步就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提,只有不跑题才有可能得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述作文的三段主题句分别为:
1.It is very necessary to be a good university student.(议论文主题句)
2.There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.(说明文的主题句)
3.What I will do in the future is the following.(描述文的主题句)
如果要求句是英语就可以把它扩充成主题句,例如这样的一篇作文:Good Health
1.Importance of good health
2.Ways to keep fit
3.My own practice
这样的作文的要求句就可以扩展成主题句。扩展后三段的主题句分别为:
1.It is very important to have good health.(将名词importance变成形容词important)
2.There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)
3.My own practices are the following.(采用原词)
三、确保文章条理清楚
保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务,第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说,正反面要清楚。对于说明文来说,1、2、3条要清楚,对于描述文来说,谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health来说,第一段保证正反面要清楚就应这样写:主题句(It is very important to have good health.)正面句(With good health,we can...),反面句(Without good health
we can do nothing.We can’t do...).第二段应当这样写:主题句(There are four ways to keep fit.),从几方面说明:First,we should have our break fast in the morning.
Second, we should have a nap at noon.
Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon.
And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listeningto the music...)
为了使文章更具条理性,我们可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副词,他们可以使文章的条理性十分突出。作文是主观性题,要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。评卷老师的时间很短(每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完),所以我们在列条条时最好不用:
To begin with,……After that,……And then,……The next,……The following……At last……。因为用这样的词语不利于阅卷老师看出你作文的条理性。
第三段应当这样写:主题句(My own practices are the following.)具体情况(主语为第一人称代词I,与第二段呼应)
In the morning,I have my breakfast.
At noon,I have a nap.
And in the afternoon,I always play football.
In the evening,I usually listen to the classic music.
四、保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法
在四、六级考试中考生一定希望既让作文达到字数要求又不至于写得太多,因为写得太多,一方面会更多地暴露自己的语言上的弱点,另一方面又会占用过多的宝贵时间。写得太多还容易使写作跑题。解决这些问题的一个有效的办法就是采用十二句作文法。
我们知道,四、六级作文大都是三段式。我们算一下,如果我们在每一段中写上四句话,即主题句加两, 三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右。每一句十多个字,这样就是120-150宇。同时,我们也提醒大家,不能写得太多,写得多容易跑题。在写作时,我们要横向写作,即写某一问题的横段面。例如,上面讲到健康的重要性时,我们只写四句就可以了。第一句主题句,第二句从正面论述,第三句从反面论述,第四句为结论句。但有的同学在写的时候说“健康非常重要,”然后就写“吃波菜非常重要”,因为菠菜含有丰富的铁,铁对人是非常重要的,因为……。这样的作文的基本模式是A-BB-CC-DD-正以此类推。这就叫流水账,没有中心。我们写作时要根据横段面去写,而不要写成流水账。避免写成流水账的方法是不要就前一句中的一个非重点词再进行描述。而要对主题句从横段面去写,写完一个横段面就不要再对这一横段面进行阐述了,应当去写另一个横段面。
如果我们感觉字数不够,就在每一句或某些句子上添加些词语就行了。例如我们感觉上边第二段不够长,就可以这样来加词:
主题
句 There are four ways to keep fit.There are four or more ways to keep fit for everyone of us.从几方面说明:
First,we should have our breakfast in the morning.
Firstly,we should have our breakfast,such as milk,eggs,bread and so on,in the morning.
Second,we should have a nap at noon.
Second,we should have a short nap,even 30 minutes,at noon.Thirdly,sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon.
Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can
do some sports exercises in the afternoon.
And fourth,we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening tomusic.
And fourthly,we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popularand classic music.
这样一来,我们只要保持本句的主题不变,添加一些次要词就能达到字数的规定标准。综上所述,如果我们按以上几个步骤和方法去写作文,就可以保证及格以上的分数。
第四篇:三段式作文法
备考2010写作专题1 三段式作文法
重点诠释:
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1. 第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2. 第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。3. 最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有:
递进型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only …but also等;
解释型:that is(to say), in other words, or,namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等; 转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等; 列举型:firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等
举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so… that, so that等;
让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
顺序型:first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等; 并列型:and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等
时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等
总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等 条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等 对比观点题型
(1)
要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.
有一些人认为。。2.
另一些人认为。。3.
我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)
给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点(收集整理:
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一).For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法). 信件开头常用语:
• You letter came to me this morning.• I have received your letter of July the 20th.• I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.• I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.• How time flies!It’s three months since I saw you last.• Thank you for your letter.• In reply to your letter about(the exhibition this year)…;• Let me tell you that… 信件结尾常用语:
• Please remember me to your whole family.• Give my best regards(wishes)to your mother.• Best wishes.• With love.• Wish you a pleasant journey.• Wish you success.Wish you the best of health.(luck)• Looking forward to your next visit to China.• Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.• Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.阅路和应答: • Go down this street
• Turn night/left at the first crossing • It’s about…metres from here
• You can’t miss it
• In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)• Pass two blocks • wish you good luck!英语作文万能模版 模块(1)
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.模块(2)
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television 模块(3)
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that().If you(), as a result ,your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that().You donn’t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon().With reference to my standpoint ,I think().模块(4)
For most of us today ,().From above ,we can find that the reasons why()are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is().Second,().The third reason, actually ,is().The significance for()。Therefore ,().模块(5)
These days we often hear that().It is common that().Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social? For one thing ,().For another,().What is more, since(),it is natural that().To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as()to improve he present situation ,and I do believe everything will
be better in the future.
第五篇:故事作文法
作文教学法
主要以文学故事和讨论为主的教学内涵分为三个阶段:
第一阶段以发展想象力、解放书写能力为主轴,对象是7~9岁的学生,主题以奇幻故事为主,以生活小故事为辅,两者可互相交融,发展孩子的文学书写能力。
第二阶段则以9岁以上的学生,乃至成人的年纪,教师在故事中,有意识加入文学性词汇,并将口述故事文学化,发展书写者描述内在世界、外在经验世界的语言。在这个阶段,可视年龄缩减奇幻内容,尤其是童话式的主题不宜大量在10岁以上的学生眼前出现,以免学生觉得幼稚,参与度降低。
第三阶段是10岁以上,步入青少年乃至成年人的年龄层,将主题的多元讨论扩大化,允许他们从不同观点书写文章,不致局限书写思维。并大量以经典文学为主轴,让学生亲近文学,比如以苏童、莫言、李锐、余华、黄春明、林海音、瓦历斯、汪曾祺、鲁迅、马尔克斯、福克纳、琦君、莫泊桑、契诃夫、甘耀明、徐国能、川端康成、芥川龙之介、王安忆、铁凝的文本为主题,发展文学化的口语表达,也以故事协会推展的“故事海报法”为讨论方法,每隔带领孩子阅读理解难度大的文章。
小学阶段的儿童作文,大致依照上述的三个阶段发展。初中以上的学生,发展第二阶段与第三阶段的策略,但会融入贴近学生文化的“次文化”,比如电玩、流行音乐、漫画、轻小说的元素,提炼有意义的观点,或将之与经典文学融合,深化学习者的写作能力。