第一篇：高三英语写作课Travel journal教学案例
高三英语写作课Travel journal教学案例
一、教学内容
以人民教育出版社教材中“Travel journal”话题为背景，根据写作要求提示，组织材料写一篇自己亲身游记。
二、教学目标
1、写作技能目标：
在学习“Travel journal”之后，掌握用英文写游记体裁文章的基本技能。
2、学习策略目标：
（1）指导学生学会欣赏游记，并能模仿写出自己的旅游经历与体会。（2）培养学生选择使用工具书的技能，促进写作水平的提高。
3、情感目标：
提高学生的业余生活质量，欣赏美丽河山，热爱和保护自然，同时加强情感交流。
三、教学重点与难点
1、如何做好阅读与写作的衔接。
2、对学生模仿游记的评论与评价。
四、教学过程 Pre-writing
Activity 1.Show the students some sentences from the reading in this unit to remind them of the travel experience of Wang Wei and Wang Kun.1.I had dreamed about taking a great bike trip.2.She loves to go for long bike rides in the countryside.3.She gave a determined look---the kind that said she wouldn't change her mind.4.When are we leaving and when are we coming back? 5.At first the river is small, clear and cold.Then it begins to move quickly.It becomes a rapids as it passes though deep valleys„.At last, the river's delta enters the South China Sea.6.To climb the mountain road was hard work but going down the hills was great fun.7.We are reaching Dali in Yunnan Province where our cousins Dao Wei and Yu Hang will join us.We can hardly wait to see them.At the same time, the teacher asks the students to pay attention to the underlined words, from which they could learn ways to describe their trips and share their afterthoughts with us.(本教学环节可以起到承上启下的作用，学生脑海中可以复现本单元游记的场景；通过回忆下划线的词语或句型，即可复习巩固，又为新的写作训练架起“引桥”。)Activity 2.Travel around our country T: Do Wang Wei and Wang Kun enjoy their bike trip?(S: Yes.)And have you made a trip somewhere in our country/our town/our area? Or “Have you ever had such experiences as Wang Wei and Wang Kun?”(For students living in towns, most of them will say “Yes”, for others the teacher may choose the one the students are familiar with.)For me, traveling around is exciting and there are a lot of places of interest to see in our motherland.Look at the pictures and guess where it is.(Show some slides or pictures.)Hainan Island;Hongkong;Tian'anmen Square;The Great Wall;Mountain Tai;Qingdao;Huanghe, Temple of Heaven etc.（对于大多数学生而言，英语写作不轻松，也比较乏味。通过师生互动的课堂活动和欣赏图片，既能较好地激发学生的兴趣，引领学生欣赏名胜古迹，又在一定程度上使学生为之振奋，从而激发写作欲望。）
While-writing: Activity 3.Talk about the writing topic.(handout)假设你是李华，今年五一节，你们班组织了集体登泰山活动，请你根据当时的场景写一篇游记。记述你们班为什么选择登泰山？在登山前做了哪些准备工作？如何到达山顶？途中观察到什么？有什么感受？
1.Do you want to go traveling around these places?(Yes.)So do I.If we had enough time and enough money, we would go there some day.By the way, I was told that your class went to Mountain Tai during the Labour Day.Am I right? Would some of you share the ideas with me? 2.Brainstorming: Get the students to ask and answer the question: Why did you choose to go to Mountain? The students may give some answers as follows: A.Mountain Tai is quite beautiful/famous/close to nature.B.We want to have an interesting trip there.C.During the climb, we students can help each other, which will strengthen the friendship between us.D.We had dreamed about climbing Mountain Tai together for long.E.It's in our province, and we feel proud of it.F.We want to make a study of the wildlife there.G.We should try to overcome any difficulty, no matter how hard it is.H.Mountain climbing is really exciting.„„
(For the above questions, the teacher asks the students to give as much information as possible, and do the same with the following ones.)1.What did you do before your trip? 2.How did you get to the top of the mountain? „„
(本阶段属于本节课的核心内容。由景而入，激发了学生的兴趣；通过“大脑风暴”活动，既活跃了课堂气氛，拓展了学生的思维，又能够锻炼学生口头表述事实和交流信息的能力，这些可理解的输入为下一步的写作做好了语言上的准备。同时，本环节也体现了读写一体的原则，即每个句子的正确性为整篇文章的写作打下了良好的基础。)Activity 4.Put the ideas into sentences and then into passages 1.First, ask the students to write down some sentences about their climbing.Ask them to make out an outline, topic sentences of the paragraphs, and some key words and phrases.They can also combine the answers to the above questions and then revise them with the advice from others.2.Next, get the students to put their sentences in order.And share their writing with their partners.(Before getting the students to start, remind them of the differences between a diary and a journal.)3.Then, students write the travel journey, using linking words and relative pronouns.While carrying out this work, the teacher may walk around the students to give some help when necessary.(由问题的互动，学生积累了写作素材;同时，学生写作技能的培养在这里也得到了集中体现。从整理思路，组织素材，到列出提纲，遣词造句，写出文章，整个过程是连贯的，是一体的。在这个环节中，教师使用了“任务型”教学法，通过学生的班级活动，小组活动，促进了学生之间的交流、合作能力。在小组交流过程中，老师应尽量参与到讨论当中，并能适时地加以指导，也就是说教师的身份应该是活动的组织者，学生的指导者和启发者；学生才是课堂的主体，一切活动也围绕学生来展开。)Post-writing: Activity5.Get the students to evaluate their compositions in groups.1.Exchange their writing with other members in the groups(two or four students in a group), and ask the students to give some comments on the one he or she has read.2.The teacher should get the students to pay attention to the following points to make necessary corrections while reading their partners' writing.(1).Basic skills(spelling, capitalization, punctuation)(2).Key points(3).Suitable words and expressions(4).Grammar(tense, voice, sentence structures)(5).Logical problems(conjunctions, orders)3.Get each group to recommend one or two passages and share it with the rest of the class.And the teacher chooses one or two of them to mark them in class with the help of overhead projector and gives some comments.)4.Ask the students to make necessary changes in their writing and copy them in their exercise book for further correction.（同伴评价实际上是合作学习的一种形式，其重要理论基础就是考卡夫（Kafka, K）最早提出的“群体动力理论”（group dynamics）。通过组内讨论交流，小组评选，学生对自己所写作文的要求与要点以及注意事项都有了大体的印象。老师再利用实物投影仪选择不同层次代表性的文章当堂点评。对于学生作文中比较容易出现的问题，应讨论出合理化建议并加以纠正，比如时态错误。如果他们能在写作中出现比较深层次的认识，教师应该及时加以表扬，从而培养了学生的写作热情，提高评价和欣赏文章的水平。）
Homework: 找出自己一次外出游玩的系列照片，制成小册子，配以英语说明，说明中需增加自己的点评，然后向全班展示。
第二篇：高三英语写作课(书面表达)教学案例
高三英语写作课(书面表达)教学案例
课题：看图书面表达（Writing A Story）
教学目的：教会学生如何用英语描写一个过去的故事。
教学重点：引导学生先仔细观察所给图片，掌握故事的中心意思。然后 依次确定出描述每幅图所需的中心词，并由词成句，由句成
文。最后对文章的篇章结构进行修改，实现用词准确，行文流畅。教学辅助手段：电脑（或实物投影仪）教学方法：讨论法 教学步骤：
一、展示(Presentation)1.通过计算机展示上次作为作业的看图书面表达材料。（帮助回 顾、加深印象）
2.将含有学生在作业中所犯典型错误的文章展示出来，作为改错进 行练习。
二、讨论(Discussion)1.学生两人一组，讨论文章的优缺点，并对错误之处进行修改。
2.请找到错误的学生现场指出并改正错误之处，其他学生一起评判 对错：若改对了，教师可用鼠标单击文中的那处错误，原本隐含的修改部分便会显示出来；若没改对，可接着请其他学生帮忙。（在进行此步骤时，学生无须根据文章的先后逐行挑错，只要找到错误即可发言。）
3.教师总结。首先，针对文中学生未找出或改对的错误，帮助学生一起改正。其次，对文中的错误之处进行分类（如：名词复数、动词时态、介词等），引起学生的重视。
三、展示(Presentation)通过计算机展示给学生一篇新的看图书面表达材料。要求学生仔细观察所给图片，掌握故事的中心意思。
四、讨论(Discussion)1.学生两人一组（必要时可变为四人一组，增强协作性），针对每幅图进行讨论，并确定描述每幅图的中心词。
2.按图片的先后顺序，分别要求几组学生将他们的讨论结果告诉大家，由大家一起来讨论用词是否恰当及如何改正。同时，教师将这些词按图片顺序依次输入计算机，展示给大家（也可通过实物投影仪展示）。
五、练习(Practice)要求学生参考中心词，写出描述每幅图的一两个句子，输入计算机（若通过实物投影仪展示，可写在纸上）。
六、反馈(Feedback)1.通过计算机，选取两位学生所写的第一幅图的两组句子，展示给大家（也可通过实物投影仪展示）。和其他学生一起对句中的语法错误进行修改。2.重复此步骤，展示其它几幅图的句子。
3.从每幅图的两组句子中各挑选一组，将这些刚改正的无语法错误的句子，通过计算机组合成文，重新展示给学生。
七、讨论(Discussion)要求学生先朗读全文（由于此时的文章是由各自独立的句子罗列而成，句子之间必然缺乏连贯性。学生只有通读全文，才会发现）。然后分组讨论如何对篇章结构进行修改，使文章更连贯。
八、反馈(Feedback)1.通过计算机，请学生先对他们认为不连贯的地方进行修改，教师引导其他学生进行讨论并给予必要的补充和修改，实现用词准确、行文流畅。2.展示范文并指出范文中的精彩之处。
九、巩固(Consolidation)总结写此类看图书面表达的思路：掌握全文中心——确定每幅图的中心词——由词成句——由句成文——修改篇章结构。
十、作业(Homework)发给学生另一篇看图书面表达材料，要求学生根据本课所学思路独力完成。Teaching Plan I.Topic: Writing A story II.Teaching Aim: According to the pictures of a story, teach the students how to write a story using the effective sentences.III.Key Points: Teach the students how to get the key words of each picture and how to use effective sentences to complete a coherent composition.IV.Teaching Aids: Computer V.Teaching Method: Discussion VI.Teaching Procedure: Step 1.Presentation Present the composition with the typical mistakes made by the students to the class.Step 2.Discussion 1.Let the students work in pairs to discuss the composition and try to find out as many mistakes as they can.2.Ask some students to correct the mistakes in public.At the same time, present the right ones to the whole class.3.Classify the typical mistakes.Step 3.Presentation Present the pictures of a story to the class.Give the students two minutes to look through the pictures and try to get the main idea of the story.Step 4.Discussion 1.Let the students work in groups of four to get the key words of each picture orally.2.Ask several students to report their answers to the rest of the class.Present these key words to the whole class.Step 5.Writing According to the key words, ask the students to write down their own sentences about each picture.Step 6.Feedback 1.Present two students’ sentences about Picture 1 to the class as models, and then correct their grammar mistakes with the whole class.2.Present another two students’sentences about Picture 2 to the class and correct the grammar mistakes too.3.Repeat this step with the other pictures.4.Choose either of the models from each picture to make up a passage.Present it to the class.Step 7.Discussion Give the students a few minutes to discuss how to make these sentences more effective and how to make this passage more coherent.Step 8.Feedback 1.Correct this passage with the whole class.2.Present the model to the class.3.Emphasize the way of writing this kind of composition.Step 9.Assignment Write another story as homework.
第三篇：高三英语写作课favourite singerl教学案例
高三英语写作课Favorite Singer教学案例
课题组成员：张晓芳
一、教学内容
本次作文课写作主题是favorite singer，要求根据写作提示，组织材料写一篇介绍著名歌手王力宏的文章。
二、教学目标
1、复习电子邮件类作文的书写格式和注意事项。
2、指导学生根据材料要求写出一篇120字左右的文章。
3、情感目标：引导学生学会欣赏别人的优点，并且取别人之长补自己之短。
三、教学重点与难点
1、让学生掌握回复电子邮件的格式。
2、如何指导学生遣词造句。
四、教学过程 Pre-writing
Activity 1.Review the steps of writing an English email and important tips.(1)开头部分点明收到对方的邮件, 并点明已知对方遇到的问题;
(2)主体部分根据写作要求, 结合实际详细分析对方遇到的问题, 并提出解决问题的具体建议;
(3)结尾部分结束电子邮件, 给出自己的祝福或祝愿等。
3.语言特征: 回复类电子邮件的语言要简练得体, 表意准确;话语要有礼貌, 要尊重对方, 切忌迎合。
(本教学环节是复习之前学过的回复邮件的格式，提醒学生本节课的话题就是回复邮件，确保学生不犯格式上的低级错误。)Activity 2.Talking about popular singers.T: Do you have your favorite singers?(S: Yes.)Can you share with us? Then students may have different answers, for example, Zhang Liangying, Liu Dehua, Zhang Xueyou and so on.The teacher may choose the ones most students are familiar with to discuss the reasons.)Eg.My favorite singer is Chen Yixun.I like him because his songs are wonderful and always make me moved.…
（教师引导学生从各个方面引导学生描述为什么自己喜爱这个歌手，从而激发学生思维，让他们在后续的写作活动中有话可写，有词可用。这可以很好的缓解有些学生对英语写作的畏难情绪，让他们觉得西英语作文并不是一件空洞的事。）While-writing:
Activity 3.Talk about the writing topic.(Present on the screen)
假设你是李华, 你收到美国笔友Mary的邮件, 她谈到自己最喜欢的歌手是Taylor Swift, 认为她是乡村音乐的完美代表。她很想知道你最喜欢的歌手, 请根据以下内容, 给她回复一封邮件, 向她介绍你最喜欢的歌手王力宏。
主要内容如下:
1.1976年5月17日出生于美国纽约罗切斯特市(Rochester)。
2.三岁时, 看见哥哥上小提琴课, 对小提琴产生了浓厚兴趣, 之后学习过多种乐器。进入美国威廉姆斯学院学习音乐。
3.1999年, 成为第十届金曲奖“最佳男演唱人”最年轻的获奖者。除去音乐,近年来还尝试做演员和导演, 多方面发展。
注意: 词数100～120个。
Activity 4.Put the ideas into sentences and then into passages.1.First, ask the students to write down some sentences about their favourite singer.Ask them to make out an outline, topic sentences of the paragraphs, and some key words and phrases.2.Next, get the students to put their sentences in order.And share their writing with their partners.3.Then, students write the passage, using linking words and relative pronouns.(由问题的互动，学生积累了写作素材;同时，学生写作技能的培养在这里也得到了集中体现。从整理思路，组织素材，到列出提纲，遣词造句，写出文章，整个过程是连贯的，是一体的。在这个环节中，教师使用了“任务型”教学法，通过学生的班级活动，小组活动，促进了学生之间的交流、合作能力。在小组交流过程中，老师应尽量参与到讨论当中，并能适时地加以指导，也就是说教师的身份应该是活动的组织者，学生的指导者和启发者；学生才是课堂的主体，一切活动也围绕学生来展开。)Post-writing:
Activity5.Get the students to evaluate their compositions in groups.1.Exchange their writing with other members in the groups(two or four students in a group), and ask the students to give some comments on the one he or she has read.2.The teacher should get the students to pay attention to the following points to make necessary corrections while reading their partners' writing.(1).Basic skills(spelling, capitalization, punctuation)(2).Key points
(3).Suitable words and expressions(4).Grammar(tense, voice, sentence structures)
(5).Logical problems(conjunctions, orders)3.Get each group to recommend one or two passages and share it with the rest of the class.And the teacher chooses one or two of them to mark them in class with the help of overhead projector and gives some comments.)4.Ask the students to make necessary changes in their writing and copy them in their exercise book for further correction.（同伴评价实际上是合作学习的一种形式，通过组内讨论交流，小组评选，学生对自己所写作文的要求与要点以及注意事项都有了大体的印象。老师再利用实物投影仪选择不同层次代表性的文章当堂点评。对于学生作文中比较容易出现的问题，应讨论出合理化建议并加以纠正，比如时态错误。如果他们能在写作中出现比较深层次的认识，教师应该及时加以表扬，从而培养了学生的写作热情，提高评价和欣赏文章的水平。）Homework: 给自己喜欢的歌手制作一份海报，包括照片和简介，并用英文加以描述。
第四篇：2005年高三英语写作教学案例
2005年高三英语写作教学案例
（一）教学内容
以人民教育出版社教材中“Travel journal”话题为背景，根据写作要求提示，组织材料写一篇自己亲身游记。
（二）教学目标 1.写作技能目标：
在学习模块“Travel journal”之后，学生通过理解与把握“Journal down the Mekong”这篇游记，掌握用英文写游记体裁文章的基本技能。2.学习策略目标：
（1）指导学生学会欣赏游记，并能模仿写出自己的旅游经历与体会。（2）培养学生选择使用工具书的技能，促进写作水平的提高。3.情感目标：
提高学生的业余生活质量，欣赏美丽河山，热爱和保护自然，同时加强情感交流。
（三）教学重点与难点 1.2.如何做好阅读与写作的衔接。对学生模仿游记的评论与评价。
（五）教学过程 Pre-writing Activity 1.Show the students some sentences from the reading in this module to remind them of the travel experience of Wang Wei and Wang Kun.1.I had dreamed about taking a great bike trip.2.She loves to go for long bike rides in the countryside.3.She gave a determined look---the kind that said she wouldn't change her mind.4.When are we leaving and when are we coming back? 5.At first the river is small, clear and cold.Then it begins to move quickly.It becomes a rapids as it passes though deep valleys….At last, the river's delta enters the South China Sea.6.To climb the mountain road was hard work but going down the hills was great fun.7.We are reaching Dali in Yunnan Province where our cousins Dao Wei and Yu Hang will join us.We can hardly wait to see them.At the same time, the teacher asks the students to pay attention to the underlined words, from which they could learn ways to describe their trips and share their afterthoughts with us.(简评：本教学环节可以起到承上启下的作用，学生脑海中可以复现本模块游记的场景；通过回忆下划线的词语或句型，即可复习巩固，又为新的写作训练架起“引桥”。)Activity 2.Travel around our country T: Do Wang Wei and Wang Kun enjoy their bike trip?(S: Yes.)And have you made a trip somewhere in our country/our city/our area? Or “Have you ever had such experiences as Wang Wei and Wang Kun?”(For students living in big cities, most of them will say “Yes”, for others the teacher may choose the one the students are familiar with.)For me, traveling around is exciting and there are a lot of places of interest to see in our motherland.Look at the pictures and guess where it is.(Show some slides or pictures.)Hainan Island;Hongkong;Tian'anmen Square;The Great Wall;Mountain Tai;Qingdao;Huanghe, Temple of Heaven etc.(Or local places of interest.)（简评：对于大多数学生而言，英语写作不轻松，也比较乏味。通过师生互动的课堂活动和欣赏图片，既能较好地激发学生的兴趣，引领学生欣赏名胜古迹，又在一定程度上使学生为之振奋，从而激发写作欲望。）While-writing: Activity 3.Talk about the writing topic.(handout)假设你是李华，今年五一节，你们班组织了集体登泰山活动，请你根据当时的场景写一篇游记。记述你们班为什么选择登泰山？在登山前做了哪些准备工作？如何到达山顶？途中观察到什么？有什么感受？ 1.Do you want to go traveling around these places?(Yes.)So do I.If we had enough time and enough money, we would go there some day.By the way, I was told that your class went to Mountain Tai during the Labour Day.Am I right? Would some of you share the ideas with me? 2.Brainstorming: Get the students to ask and answer the question: Why did you choose to go to Mountain? The students may give some answers as follows: A.Mountain Tai is quite beautiful/famous/close to nature.B.We want to have an interesting trip there.C.During the climb, we students can help each other, which will strengthen the friendship between us.D.We had dreamed about climbing Mountain Tai together for long.E.It's in our province, and we feel proud of it.F.We want to make a study of the wildlife there.G.We should try to overcome any difficulty, no matter how hard it is.H.Mountain climbing is really exciting.……
(For the above questions, the teacher asks the students to give as much information as possible, and do the same with the following ones.)1.What did you do before your trip? 2.How did you get to the top of the mountain? …
(简评：本阶段属于本节课的核心内容。由景而入，激发了学生的兴趣；通过“大脑风暴”活动，既活跃了课堂气氛，拓展了学生的思维，又能够锻炼学生口头表述事实和交流信息的能力，这些可理解的输入为下一步的写作做好了语言上的准备。同时，本环节也体现了读写一体的原则，即每个句子的正确性为整篇文章的写作打下了良好的基础。)Activity 4.Put the ideas into sentences and then into passages 1.First, ask the students to write down some sentences about their climbing.Ask them to make out an outline, topic sentences of the paragraphs, and some key words and phrases.They can also combine the answers to the above questions and then revise them with the advice from others.2.Next, get the students to put their sentences in order.And share their writing with their partners.(Before getting the students to start, remind them of the differences between a diary and a journal.)3.Then, students write the travel journey, using linking words and relative pronouns.While carrying out this work, the teacher may walk around the students to give some help when necessary.(简评：由问题的互动，学生积累了写作素材;同时，学生写作技能的培养在这里也得到了集中体现。从整理思路，组织素材，到列出提纲，遣词造句，写出文章，整个过程是连贯的，是一体的。在这个环节中，教师使用了“任务型”教学法，通过学生的班级活动，小组活动，促进了学生之间的交流、合作能力。在小组交流过程中，老师应尽量参与到讨论当中，并能适时地加以指导，也就
是说教师的身份应该是活动的组织者，学生的指导者和启发者；学生才是课堂的主体，一切活动也围绕学生来展开。)Post-writing: Activity5：Get the students to evaluate their compositions in groups.1.Exchange their writing with other members in the groups(two or four students in a group), and ask the students to give some comments on the one he or she has read.2.The teacher should get the students to pay attention to the following points to make necessary corrections while reading their partners' writing.(1).Basic skills(spelling, capitalization, punctuation)(2).Key points(3).Suitable words and expressions(4).Grammar(tense, voice, sentence structures)(5).Logical problems(conjunctions, orders)3.Get each group to recommend one or two passages and share it with the rest of the class.And the teacher chooses one or two of them to mark them in class with the help of overhead projector and gives some comments.)4.Ask the students to make necessary changes in their writing and copy them in their exercise book for further
correction.（点评：同伴评价实际上是合作学习的一种形式，其重要理论基础就是考卡夫（Kafka, K）最早提出的“群体动力理论”（group dynamics）。通过组内讨论交流，小组评选，学生对自己所写作文的要求与要点以及注意事项都有了大体的印象。老师再利用实物投影仪选择不同层次代表性的文章当堂点评。对于学生作文中比较容易出现的问题，应讨论出合理化建议并加以纠正，比如时态错误。如果他们能在写作中出现比较深层次的认识，教师应该及时加以表扬，从而培养了学生的写作热情，提高评价和欣赏文章的水平。）Homework: 找出自己一次外出游玩的系列照片，制成小册子，配以英语说明，说明中需增加自己的点评，然后向全班展示。
第五篇：[初三英语]写作课教学案例
写作课教学案例
It’s important to have a healthy lifestyle.一、教材分析：本单元的目标语言是“Talk about what is important to you”。本课时是一节写作课，主要是利用前两节课学习的目标语言进行写作训练，通过一系列教学活动的开展，让学生将所学的新的语言结构运用到实际英文写作中，真正做到活学活用，培养写作技能。
二、学情分析： 九年级的学生已经有了三年多的英语写作训练，他们已掌握了大量的词汇及语言知识结构。能够运用所学知识进行简单的书面练习，并能够联系实际生活表达自己的观点。本节课的写作训练是在学习完Section A 3a的阅读材料之后，将语言知识进行书面技能的培养，由于写作内容贴近学生的实际生活，学生对于这一话题非常感兴趣，容易下笔，语言材料丰富多彩。完成这一写作任务对于学生来说难度不是很大。
三、教学目标
知识目标：进一步学习巩固目标语言结构“It’s important to have a healthy lifestyle”及too…to…，try to(not)do sth及should的用法。
能力目标； 培养运用已积累的词汇及所学的目标语言结构进行书面训练，指导写作方法，提高写作技能，全面提高学生听说读综合运用语言的能力。
情感目标：通过学生间的交流，让学生意识到良好的生活方式的重要性，养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯。
四、教学重难点
教学重点：正确运用目标语言进行写作训练。
教学难点：在规定时间内写出一篇符合写作要求的英文作品。
五、教学过程 Step 1 Warming up Using “It’s important to …”to make sentences.First ask the students to work in pairs ,then ask some pairs to act in class.思路点拨：在进入写作活动之前，让学生对已学的目标语言进行造句练习，达到熟练运用的程度，为下面的活动做铺垫。Groupwork: Read the articles of 3a quickly and work in groups to talk about Du Fei’s and Wang Le’s good and bad habits.Then ask them to write down on a piece of paper.思路点拨：为了丰富学生写作所需的语言材料，让他们通过小组讨论并做笔记的形式复习3a的内容，并将Du Fei 和Wang Le 的好习惯和坏习惯记录下来，为下面的写作做准备。Groupwork: Talk about “What suggestions do you have for Du Fei and Wang Le to have healthier lifestyles?” Please write down the suggestions.思路点拨：将给出的建议在班级展示，让学生进一步了解健康生活方式和学习习惯的重要性。
Step 2 To talk about your habits with your partner,and give some advice about the bad habits.Using “You should ….or try not to do…”.思路点拨：在活动开始之前，教师将活动任务所需的目标语板书在黑板上，有利于学生活动的顺利开展，继续为下面的写作训练做语言知识积累。并要求学生将交流的情况整理成文，在班级展示。
Step 3 有了以上活动所得到的知识积累，学生对于这方面写作所要求的语言知识已经很丰富了，下面 给出本节课的写作任务：结合自己在生活中的具体情况，谈一谈你自己的生活习惯和学习习惯，并对自己一些不良的行为习惯加以改正。字数要求60—80字之间,书写要规范，清晰。1 First the teacher read the details to the students.目的是让学生理解写作要求，做到心中有数 为了让学生写好这篇文章，教师可以将文章开始的第一句话加以指导，让学生小组讨论这篇文章应该怎样写好开头，并找学生在班级展示。Give them 15 or 20 minutes to prepair for the writing.Ask two students to write on the blackboard.思路点拨：让学生在规定时间内完成写作任务，让学生有紧迫感，效率高。4 When time is up,ask the students to exchange their writings with their partner.要求学生互换作品，大声朗读文章，欣赏对方的优点，用红色笔互相改正错误，这时教师要在学生中做适当指导，为学生解答疑难问题。
思路点拨：让学生之间互相批改作品，既能让学生再次感受目标语言，发现自己的不足之处，又能增加学生间互相交流，沟通的机会，增进了彼此间的感情。5 To look at the blackboard and check the articles on the blackboard.思路点拨：在学生互批完后，教师和学生一起共同批改黑板上的作文，注意要叫两个代表不同层面的学生，有利于发现存在的问题。Read your own article loudly, ask different kinds of students to read the article in class.思路点拨：学生之间互相批改之后，让学生大声朗读自己的作品，找不同层面的学生在班级朗读自己的文章，给了学生在班级展示自己的机会，增强了他们学习的自信心。
Step 4 将学生作品统一上交给老师，老师将全面进行了解学生在本节课的学习情况，发现问题可以在下一课时再进行强化要求。
Step 5 将修改好的文章写在统一要求的纸上，张贴在教室英语角展览，评选出优秀作品并给予表扬。
六、教学反思：写作能全面反映学生的英语水平，它既能再现学生的英语基础知识，又能表现学生灵活运用英语的能力。就初中英语教学而言，教师要在重视对学生进行听、说、读的训练基础上，重视写的训练。初中的写作教学应贯彻整个初中阶段，内容要切合学生实际，让学生有话可写。材料应由易到难，训练形式要多种多样，听说结合，把听到的说出来，把说的写出来。要求教师能自己组织教学材料，这就需要教师在课前必须花大量时间和精力，设计好每一堂写作。总之，教师应根据新课标的要求，适应现代现实生活的实际需要，对学生进行写作教学引导，在教学过程中应从实际情况出发，对学生进行低起点、小步子、容量适中、快速反馈训练，充分体现学生的主体地位，帮助学生获得成功，并增加其自信心和意志力，培养学生的优良学习品质。
七、专家点评：本节课是一节成功的写作课，教师遵循“准备—写作—修改—展示”的英语写作教学模式，任务链设计较成功，其中设计的每个活动任务能够紧紧围绕本节课的写作主题，活动任务贴近实际生活，学生能够积极的参与到活动中去。学生通过体验、实践、讨论、合作等方式发展了听说读写的综合语言技能。在写作训练中，教师按照循序渐进的原则，注意学生之间的层次差异。写作教学从实际情况出发，顾及到各层次的学生，佳作点评和错例纠正都是写作教学过程中不可缺少的环节。教师点评恰当，可以使学生意识到在学习书面表达过程中的成功之处，并得到激励，建立自信，从而形成继续进步的动力，也可以让学生自省和反思自己的不足，调整学习策略和心态。
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