书面表达常用句式结构错例分析教案

第一篇：书面表达常用句式结构错例分析教案

书面表达常用句式结构错例分析

英语句子结构（1）

一、“There be”结构

考生病句：

1.There are many people like to go to the movies.2.There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people.正确表达：

1.There are many people who like to go to the movies.2.There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market.评议与分析：

这两个例句的错误比较有普遍性，因为在历次考试中有不少考生不能正确运用there be这一最常用的句式。在这种结构中，there是引导词，没有实际意义。be在句中作谓语，有时态和数的变化。例如：

There are many people rushing into the cities every year.There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents.There is no use holding back the wheel of history.从以上例句还可看出，句中的主语后面可接多种修饰语，如介词短语、不定式短语、定语从句、分词短语等等。这无疑使该结构增加了表现力，使句子表达内容更加丰富。在运用这一结构时，考生最容易犯的错误是在there be之后又用了一个动词作谓语，使句子结构出现严重错误。这里列举的考生的典型错误均属这种情况，对此我们在写作中要格外注意.英语句子结构（2）

二、比较结构

考生病句

1.Comparing with the bike, the car runs much faster.2.The climate in Walton is colder than other cities.正确表达：

1.Compared with the bike, the car runs much faster.2.The climate in Walton is colder than that of other cities.评议与分析：许多考生在作文中用compare或than表示比较，但相当多的表达有误。

在例1中，对两个事物进行比较的句式为Compared with A, B...,只能用compare的过去分词，不能用现在分词，因为B是分词的逻辑主语，只能被比较。在例2中，考生误将“天气”与“城市”进行比较，而二者没有可比性，只有将后者改为“其他城市的天气”才符合逻辑，很显然，考生的错误是受了汉语表达习惯的影响。下面是比较结构的一些常用的表达方法。

1．同级比较

In 1998 we produced as many cars as we did in the previous five years.2．比较级

Children now enjoy better medical treatment than before.3．最高级

This is the most interesting book I've ever read.1 4． the more…the more…结构

1)The harder you work, the greater progress you will make.2)The more a man knows, the more he discovers his ignorance.英语句子结构（3）

三、表达原因的结构考生病句：

1.The real reason to our failure is not far to seek.2.The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.正确表达：

1.The real reason for our failure is not far to seek.2.The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.评议与分析：

但令人遗憾的是，第一位考生不知道reason不与to搭配而应接介词for，第二位考生犯了一个中国学生常犯的错误，就是用because引起表语从句，because这个词不能引起表语从句，在本句中只能改用that才正确。

掌握好表达原因的结构是十分重要的，几乎所有的写作试题都要求写原因或可以写原因。尤其在大学英语四、六级考试、研究生入学英语考试以及TOEFL考试中，写作的文体基本上是议论文，而议论文的基本模式是摆事实、讲道理，讲道理就是说明原因。写作测试的文体决定了表达原因结构的重要性。

英语中用来表达原因这一概念的结构有多种。我们可用as , because, since, seeing that, considering that, now that, not that...等词组引出表示原因的从句。例如：

1.Now that we have seen these great achievements with our own eyes, we feel more proud than ever of our country.2.Professor Liu is strict with us because he wants us to make rapid progress.我们在进行写作训练的时候，不能满足于一知半解，要讲究书面语言的正确性和准确性。比如，because是最常用的引导原因从句的连词，语气最强，表示直接的原因，若because置于句首，后面的主句不能再用so。用as引导的原因从句语气较弱，所说明的原因是附带的，而since表示的原因暗示着是稍加分析之后才能推断出来的原因。

英语句子结构（4）

四、否定结构

考生病句

1.Some people think we needn't to worry about fresh water.2.Nowadays many people don't like to go to the movies, too.正确表达：

1.Some people think we needn't worry(或don't need to worry)about fresh water.2.Nowadays many people don't like to go to the movies, either.2

评议与分析：例句1 的错误在于该考生混淆了need作为情态动词和作为普通动词的用法。need作为情态动词时，主要用于否定句，后面的动词不带to, needn't worry，作we的谓语。need作为实意动词时，可用于肯定句、否定句和疑问句，don't need to worry 中的to worry作don't need的宾语。例句2的错误在于该考生混淆了too和either的区别，这两个词都表示“也”的意思，但是在英语中too, also只能用于肯定句，而either只能用于否定句。

在写作中，主谓不一致，名词单复数不分，动词时态语态滥用，常用词拼写错误比比皆是。这些严重地影响了思想的表达。考试实践表明，多数考生在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而是最基本的单句写作能力。英语句子结构（5）

五、含有it的结构

考生病句：

1.As is known to all of us that science and technology play an important role in the development of society.2.It is known to us, practice makes perfect.正确表达：

1.It is known to all of us that science and technology play an important role in the development of society.(或:As is known to all of us, science...)

2.It is known to us that practice makes perfect.(或:As is known to us, practice...)

评议与分析：很显然，两个考生混淆了it和as的用法。如果用it作形式主语，后面的主语从句必须由that引起；如果用as，则后面不能用that，因为as是关系代词，代表practice makes perfect。

It 在英语中是个相当活跃的代词，在写作中我们常要使用它。以下几种用法应熟练掌握，并能灵活运用。

作形式主语It is necessary for us to master a foreign language skillfully.作形式宾语

We find it rather difficult to prevent people from doing that.引导强调句It is only by this way that we can achieve success.It was then that people began to realize the importance of controlling population.从语法结构来看，上述的句子都不难，或者可以说是考生相当熟悉的。然而在写作考试中，多数考生缺乏运用自己已掌握的句式的意识，而以自己头脑中拼凑的中式英语取而代之。其实，只要能恰当地运用上述的任何一个句式，考生的作文就会出现闪光点，就会取得比较好的成绩。

英语句子结构（6）

六

不完全否定句 经典错句：

1.All the students don’t smoke.(所有的学生都不吸烟。)2.I don’t agree with everything you said.（我不同意你所说的话。）正确

1.None of the students smokes.2.I don’t agree with anything you said.继续欣赏

I don't want both the books.我不是两本书都要。

Both(the)windows are not open.两扇窗子并不都开着。

Not every book is educative.(或：Every book is not educative.)

不是每本书都有教育意义的。

This flower is not seen everywhere.这花并不是随处可见的。

特别注意

not…and…的否定式，被否定的往往是and后面的那一部分。例如：

He did not speak clearly and correctly.他讲得清楚但不正确。

This film is not interesting and instructive.这部电影有趣但无教育意义。

She cannot sing and dance.她会唱歌但不会跳舞。

如果将and 换成or，not 对其后面的两部分就全盘否定了。

He did not speak clearly or correctly.他讲的既不清楚也不正确。

第二篇：英语考试书面表达常用句式总结

英语考试书面表达常用句式总结

跟汉语作文的“起承转合”类似，高考英语作文其实也有固定模式。

这个模板的中文大意是：

在某种场合，发生某种现象，并提供一些相关数据，然后列出这种现象的三个原因，再将这三个原因总结为一个最主要的原因，最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法。

总的来说，利用这个模板写英语作文，是相当容易的，您只要将适当的内容，填写到对应的方括号中，一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。

Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合].It is estimated that [相关数据].Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of

[某种现象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解决办法一].On the other hand, [解决办法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].为便于理解，借用这个模板，写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文，请您观摩一下。

Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China's examinations / 中国的考场].It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是枪手].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 雇主无知].Besides, [hirers' indolence / 雇主懒惰].The third one is

[hirers' obtusity / 雇主迟钝].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to

[hirers' low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,[flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].1． 对立观点式

A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？

B．有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？

C．我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

2． 批驳观点式

A．一个错误观点。B． 我不同意。

Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a

group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。

There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。

3． 社会问题（现象）式

A．一个社会问题或者现象。B． 产生的原因

C．对社会和我们生活的影响D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话）E． 前景的预测。

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。

There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。

A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.参照辩论式议论文的写法。

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..DIY写作模板！

第一部分作文：记叙文题型作文DIY写作步骤

要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进

行简单分析，对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：

第一段、总结描述。交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句

第二段、具体描述。具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果： 起因＋经过＋结果

第三段、对事件的分析：分析1+分析2+分析3

第二部分、记叙文题型作文DIY写作范文练习

［实战演练］

1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；

2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的；

3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....［DIY写作模板：架构阶段］

第一段：

开篇句：About _____ o’clock one evening in _______, _____.扩展句：________.(展开描述一下事件)

第二段：

主题句：Without hesitation, _____.It wasn’t long before _____.扩展句：

1、One ______.2、Another _______.3、Our teacher _______.第三段：

结尾句：Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.扩展句：

1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a

beautiful world.［DIY写作模板：填充阶段］

第一段：

开篇句：About nine o’clock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.扩展句：His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning.His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature.It was38.5℃.(展开描述一下事件)

第二段：

主题句：Without hesitation, I dialed 120.It wasn’t long before an ambulance arrived.扩展句：

1、One roommate brought a blanket for him.2、Another supported him in the ambulance.3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.第三段：

结尾句：Is he a suspected SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didn’t retreat.扩展句：

1、When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.第三部分、范文

About nine O’clock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning.His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature.It was 38.5℃.Without hesitation, I dialed 120.It wasn’t long before an ambulance arrived.One roommate brought a blanket for him.Another supported him in the ambulance.Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.Is he a suspected SARS patient? Who can tell? But we didn’t retreat.When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.书面表达常用句式精选

开 头

Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.Nowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that… 人们一般认为…

Many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为…

With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…

A lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为…

引出不同观点:

People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that….However, others believe that….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．

People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.Attitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to… 关于….人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.结 尾

Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…

Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…

Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…

There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:

It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously,….If we want to do something… , it is essential that…

显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…

It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…

预示后果:

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…

毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论 证

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…

In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…

给出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, …

这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …

Why did… ? For one thing… For another….Perhaps the primary reason is…

为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:

列出解决办法:

Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,…

It was obvious that… 很显然,….It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…

It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…

认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…

如何连接

强 调

still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.比 较

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对 比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, unlike, yet, in contrast.列 举

for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.,except(for), to illustrate.时 间

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time

being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺 序

first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least,first and most important.可 能

presumably, probably, perhaps.解 释

in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递 进

What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, as well as, additionally, again.让 步

although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转 折

however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, whereas

原 因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结 果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, in consequence.总 结

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其 他

Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,图表作文常用句型

As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…

The graph shows that… 图表显示…

As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…

From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…

All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…

The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在这个城市的增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.

第三篇：高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达,变换句式范例

高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达，变换句式范例。

高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达，变换句式范例。假如你是某中学高三（1）班班长李华。你们的英语老师Nancy已完成教学任务，准备回美国。请你根据以下内容要点给Nancy写一封email，并代表全班同学对她表示感谢。1.参加Nancy授课的日子非常轻松快乐，大家都被她精彩的教学和优美的声音所吸引；2.Nancy总是组织很多课堂活动，让大家积极参与；3.她经常说的“never say you can not.”给大家留下了深刻的印象；4.她用”team spirit”来鼓励大家交流和分享；5.希望她再来到中国。注意：1.词数为100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。句子提取及翻译:1.时间飞逝，因为你要回国，所以我们不得不说再见。2.我很高兴能代表全班同学因为你精彩的教学而表示感谢。3 我们真的很感激你给我们上的课，在你的课上，我们感到很快乐，放松。4 我们深深地被你的有趣的教学和迷人的声音所吸引。5 你为我们组织许多活动让大家积极参与。6 我相信每个人在你的课堂上收获很多。7 我们印象最深刻的是 never say you can not.8 你要求我们有团队精神并鼓励我们互相交流并且分享我们的观点。9 多亏你的帮助，我们在英语学习上取得了很大的进步10我们期待着你下次参观中国。一句多译：时间飞逝.因为你要回国，所以我们不得不说再见。Time flies like an arrow./ How time flies!/ As time goes on/ goes by /With time going on/ going by, We have to say goodbye because you are going back / return to your country soon.我很高兴能代表全班同学因为你精彩的教学而表示感谢。I am glad to express thanks / gratitude to you / I am glad to thank you for your excellent teaching on behalf of the whole class.我们真的很感激你给我们上的课，在你的课上，我们感到很快乐，放松。We really appreciate the classes you gave to us, in which we felt happy and relaxed.我们深深的被你的有趣的教学和迷人的声音所吸引。We are deeply attracted by your interesting teaching and charming voice.你为我们组织许多活动让大家积极参与。You organized many activities for us in order that we could take an active part in them.我相信每个人在你的课堂上收获很多。I believe that everyone has gained a lot in your lessons / benefited a lot from your lessons.我们印象最深刻的是 never say you can not.What impressed us most was “never say you can not”.你总是要求我们有团队精神并鼓励我们互相交流并且分享我们的观点。You always required us to have a spirit of teamwork and often encouraged us to communicate with each other and share our ideas.多亏你的帮助，我们在英语学习上取得了很大的进步Thanks to your help, / With your help, we have made great progress in our English study.我们期待着你再到中国。We are looking forward to your second visit to china./ We are looking forward to your coming toChinaagain.范文欣赏Dear Julie,How time flies!By the time you are going b阿ack to Britain, I’d like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well.We always felt the days when you taught our oral class were pleasant and relaxing.In your lively class, you organized many interesting activities, in which every one of us took an active part.You often said “Never say you can’t”,which left us a deep impression.What’s more, you told us how effectively team spirit works and encouraged us to communicate and share each other’s opinions bravely.Now it’s hard for us to say goodbye to you, though we have to.Wish you a good trip and we sincerely hope you will come back some day.By the way, I am attaching your picture with the whole class.Please do check it out.Yours,Li Hua

第四篇：高二月考英语书面表达,及分析

书面表达：

目前，快餐在中国很流行，但快餐对人的身体却没什么好处。请你根据下面要点以“FAST FOOD” 为题写一篇英语短文。

1．快餐在中国十分流行，人们，尤其是儿童和青少年喜欢吃快餐。

2．快餐受欢迎至少有四个方面的原因；

⑴ 方便、节约时间；⑵ 既可在快餐店里吃又可带回家吃；⑶ 店里的环境干净、舒服；

3．从营养角度讲，快餐食品却不尽人意；

4．建议：如时间来不及可考虑吃快餐，但以偶尔品尝为宜；孩子要尽量少吃快餐。

注意：词数100-120。生词：营养（nutrition）

Fast foodThere are several reasons for its popularity.First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time.Second, you can either eat it there or take it away.Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable.However, fast food is It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value..It’s good for people,句子改错：

1.Why it is so popular? We may eat fast food both in the restaurant and at home.2.Second, not only you can eat it in restaurants, but also you can bring it to home.3.More importantly, fast food can eat everywhere.4.Fast food has few nutrition.If eat it for a long time, people may become unhealthy.So we’d better don’t eat

fast food.5.What’s worth mentioning is that it isn’t good for people, because it have low nutrition.6.Although fast food is popular, but if you eat it everyday, your body is harmful.7.Only in this way can we have a good body.Good sentences:

1.You know, many people are too busy to do cooking, so they have no choice but to eat fast food.2.Although it satisfies people’s taste, it can’t build up people’s strength.3.It can save much time, which will absolutely benefit us a great deal.4.More importantly, the restaurants offer a clean and comfortable environment for us to eat fast food.5.In our high-tech, fast-paced society, many people are too busy to cook.By coincidence, fast food has

become popular among people, children and teenagers in particular.Why is it so popular? The reasons can be listed as follows.6.However, we eat it at the cost of our health, because it has little nutrition.7.In their eyes, the restaurant is clean and comfortable, which increased their desire to eat.However, fast food is

bad for people’s health due to its lack of nutrition.So I’d like you to take my suggestion into consideration that you should eat less fast food unless you are in a hurry.8.It is due to the busy life style that people have a preference for fast food.Last but not the least, the fast food restaurants can provide a clean and comfortable environment.

第五篇：中考英语书面表达训练教案

一． 教学课题：

中考英语书面表达训练教案

二． 教案背景：

外研版、九年级、中考专项复习-书面表达训练。

英语书面表达题是学生比较头疼的题型。学生表达思想时往往写成了汉语式。错误多，不连贯。近几年的中考作文失分很大，有的学生还养成了抄前面阅读理解的习惯。三． 教材分析：

外研版教材每个模块后都设计了针对模块内容writing。这对于学生习作有一定的帮助，但由于题型设计与中考作文要求有差别，加之英语课时较少，有时仅用几分钟时间说说而已，甚至是放弃。缺少系统的练习，学生对作文有畏惧心理，写作方面的障碍自然就多了。

四．教学方法：

本节课针对学生作文练习少，对作文有恐惧心理的特点，设计了低层次，小梯度练习。从句子结构、动词的时态、常用作文的开头、结尾，到作文实战练习，中考作文评析、作文修改。采用自主练习、小组互评、范文共赏的形式调动学生写作的积极性。五． 教学过程： 导入：

Step1：同学们，今天我们针对书面表达题进行专项复习。书面表达题就是要求同学们针对题目的要求用英语写作文，我们在日常作文

中主要出现的错误有： 1.句子结构错误。

eg.I very like music.→I like music very much.I am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a doctor.2.动词时态、语态使用不当。

eg.He goes to the hospital last Sunday.→

He went to the hospital last Sunday.She chose to give a speech at the party.→ She was chosen to give a speech at the party.3.词汇运用错误。名词、动词、形容词、副词/连词等，也包含短语、不定式使用不当。

eg.They had to work very hardly when they were young.→

They had to work very hardly when they were young.Discuss:小组讨论一下，平时自己在作文过程中常出现的错误。Step2:师：怎样减少出错呢？首先让我们看一下常用的句子结构。句子成分可分为主语,谓语,宾语,表语,定语,状语,同位语。但我们常用的简单句的结构有： 主语 + 谓语(及物动词)+ 宾语 People enjoy music.主语 + 谓语(不及物动词)He often swims in a river.主语 + 系动词 + 表语 You look lovely.I’m impressed.所以我们下笔时要分清句中的主语、谓语、宾语、表语，注意他们的位置。

小组活动：请同学们翻译下列句子。

1.她母亲是一位教师。（Her mother is a teacher.）

2.昨天汤姆去了网球俱乐部。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：师：接下来让我们讨论一下怎样减少动词时态或语态错误。

生：关键是确定文章的要求，是记叙过去的事还是描写现在或将来的事。

师：很对，2009年潍坊市初中学业水平考试考试书面表达题的要求是：丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束，有哪件事情让你至今印象深刻，甚至难以忘怀？请以An unforgettable experience为题，写一篇英语短文。你们觉得应该用什么时态来写呢？

生：多用动词的一般过去时态。

师：很好。

Step4: 当然文章写作自然有一些常用的开头、结尾可以借鉴。那么常用的开头有： 1.时间开头法：

eg.Today is Thursday,----------

It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading newspaper.2.天气开头法： eg.It was rainy today.It happened on a wet day of July.3.开门见山：

eg.Last weekends we went out for a walk.4.名言引人：

eg.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.------------------常用的结尾有： 1.总结法

eg.Tough we were tired, we felt very tired.2.发出号召或倡议

eg.I’m proud of what I’ve learned.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will become much more beautiful.3.表达祝愿

eg.I hope you will have a wonderful time.师：当然常用的开头结尾还有不少，希望同学们多总结学习。Step5最后，作文的关键还在于审题：一定要读懂要求。如要求写得体裁、字数、必须包含的内容、书写等等。我们就以2010年潍坊市中考英语试题为例：大家热热身：

某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他们发起了题为How Io Keep Fit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。（文中不要出现作者

本人的真实信息）

小组活动：把写好的作文在小组之内交流，选出写得较好的在班内展示。

（小组优秀者到讲台读自己文章）Step6.Sum-up

这节课我们学习了书面表达题的一些解题技巧，当然在实际学习中还需要不断的总结练习，如养成记笔记的习惯。学生个人总结自己学习体会。Step7.Homework:

我们以2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试作文题为作业：

假设你是某文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。要求：1.80词左右；2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。

Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park.I wanted to take some photos.My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him.Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill.It didn’t work at all.I put it back quietly after I returned home.And I haven’t told him till now.when I face to my father, I feel terrible.What should I do?

Yours, David

Dear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes，Helen

六．教学反思：

本节课我从学生习作易出现的错误入手，分析出错的原因，进行及时的练习。开头结尾进行了适当的总结，小组之内交流合作。以潍坊市近三年中考作文为题例，让学生感受中考作文的要求、难度。不足之处是学生练习时间相对少一些。

七．教学资源

2010年山东省潍坊市初中学业水平考试写作答案（满分15分）One possible version: How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food.Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks.Secondly, it's good for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on.At last, we should learn to relax ourselves.We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.评分标准：词数在70—100之间；如果少于70词，应酌情扣分。1．内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）：

2．较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3．基本要点写出，有稍多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，错误较多，语句小通顺（3—5分）； 5．双写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。

2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试英 语 试 题 写作答案及评分标准： One possible version: Dear David, First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately.It you tell him the truth, he'll be angry with you.But at least you'll prove how honest you are.Then I think you should offer to pay.But you shouldn't use your pocket money.Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it.If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Best wishes, Helen 评分标准：词数在60—100之间；如果少于60词，应酌情扣分。

1.内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）；

2.较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3.基本要点写出，有较多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4.篇幅不足，错误较多，语句吧通顺（3—5分）； 5.只写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。