第一篇:北京朗阁如何锤炼雅思写作中句子
如何锤炼雅思写作中句子
朗阁海外考试研究中心
一篇好的雅思文章除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理也起着决定性作用。句子可长可短,一个句子,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了复杂句,读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。那么如何润色句子,锤炼句子从而在雅思写作考试中取得高分呢?朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家经过研究发现,有以下几种写好句子的方法供大家参考:
一、合并简单句:
长句都是由短句合并而来,所以我们首先需要对简单的短句进行分析,然后再选择合适的语法手段将之合并。
例如:原句Verrazano was an Italian.Little is known about him.He sailed into NewYork Harbor in 1524 and named it Angouleme.改动后:Verrazano, an Italian about whom little is known, sailed into New York Harbor in 1524 and named it Angouleme.通过分析不难发现,这三个短句所讨论的都是同一主体。这时候就可以使用各种可以做后置修饰或补充说明的语法手段将三个短句有机的结合起来。这些语法手段中包括了:分词作后置定语,不定式做后置定语,同位语等等。所以根据上面的例句进行简单总结,并将之抽象化,我们可以找到以人作主语的一种不错的长句句型模板:
主语 + 【同位语 + 定语从句】 + 谓语 +(其他:宾语/表语/状语等)其中:
① 主语:人物名字
② 同位语:名词或名词性的短语,表示人物的国籍、性别、职业、特长等信息 ③ 定语从句:详细阐述一个人每一方面的特征 ④ 剩余主句部分:该人物跟本文主题最相关的一个特征
用上面的方法可以把下面这个句子整合为一个不错的长句。例如:原句The heronie was a dear old lady.She had always been so kind to everybody.She had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her five husbands.改动后:The heronie, a dear old lady, who had always been so kind to everybody, had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her five husbands.该用法最终甚至还可以从介绍人物这样一个范围推广到介绍任何一个具体的事物,比如如果要写得是recreational activities, 不管具体内容如何,最开始我们都需要介绍主题:recreational activities.这时也可以使用和介绍人物同样的模板:
原句:Recreational activities are things that we do to occupy our spare time.Recreational activities include various different forms.Recreational activities are considered to be both beneficial and vain.改动后:Recreational activities, things that we do to occupy our spare time, which include various different forms are considered to be both beneficial and vain.跟前面几组例子一样,短句的堆砌显得冗长,而经过改动后的例句会更加的紧凑,丰满,句子内部成分长短结合,错落有致。
二、添加后置定语或定语从句:
在名词后添加后置定语或定语从句也能将句子变成长句,而定语从句也可以用不同的写作方式,其中非限定性定语从句更是写作中扩句的好方法,它可以将两个简单句轻松转成逻辑清晰的从句形式。当前一句意思不够明确时,可以选择解释说明法来深入阐述,用非限制性定语从句进行扩展。
例如:雅思作文中的题目男女分校的优点和缺点:The advantage of single-sex institutions is that they tend to create a competitive atmosphere for students.男女分校的一个好处是,它们往往可以为学生创造一种竞争的氛围。如果将这个句子用非限制性定语从句扩充The advantage of single-sex institutions is that they tend to create a competitive atmosphere for students, who are of the same sex and who can concentrate on their studies instead of indulging in none academic matters, such as calf love.男女分校的另一个好处是,它们往往可以为学生创造一种竞争的氛围:同性别的学生能够全神贯注地从事学业,而不是沉溺于与学习无关的事情,比如早恋。这样一经深入阐述,表达就更加全面,逻辑也更加清晰。
三、添加形式主语从句:
形式主语从句是写长句方法中非常常用的一种句型。如果主语过长,我们用it来代替原来的主语,而把原来的主语放在句子的后面。在写雅思作文大学生是否应该找一份兼职工作时,很多同学想写这句话:大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。看到这样的汉语句子,一般我们的反应是要用It is impossible for sb.to do sth..这样的句型,然后想着往里填词:在sb.的位置填上“刚刚毕业的大学生”,在不定式的位置填上“找到高薪的工作”,如:It is impossible for刚刚毕业的大学生to找到高薪的工作。那么“刚刚毕业的大学生”怎么写?英语里面好像找不到一个表示“刚刚毕业的”形容词放在大学生前面,所以就要用定语从句,写成college students who have just graduated, 如果graduated不会写,先写成left;然后怎么写“高薪的”,英语里面也没有这样一个形容词放在jobs的前面,所以用定语从句,写成to find jobs which can give them a lot of money。这样这个句子将写成:It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money.这样将两个定语从句放在这个句型里面,实在是太容易犯错了。实际上,刚刚毕业的大学生可以写成:newly-graduated students, 而高薪的工作可以写成well-paying jobs, 将这两个短语放进去,成为:It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs, 与上面的定语从句相比会获得更高的分数。这个就要多加练习,熟能生巧了,相信这样的简单句子组合起来会是一个完美的复杂句。
我们再换一种思路,想得简单点,把上面一句话拆分成为四句: ①每年,都有很多大学生毕业。②他们都想找到工作。③这些工作可以给他们很多钱。④这是不可能的。
我相信这样的句子大部分考生很快就可以写出来: ①Every year, many college students graduate.②They all want to find jobs.③These jobs can give them a lot of money.④This is impossible.第一句话属于五种简单句中的主谓句,第二句是主谓宾,第三句是主谓间宾直宾,第四句是主系表。
下面我们看看能不能润色一下:第一句话我们将熟悉的many改为heaps and heaps of(一批一批的),这是换词;然后from universities;又想到还有独立的学院,再加上and institutes。第一句话变成:Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes.第二句和第三句可以用定语从句连接起来,因为第三句的主语是第二句最后jobs的重复,所以②+③成为:They all want to find jobs, which can give them a lot of money.再润色,我们发现give可以改为offer, a lot of money可以改为handsome salaries。利用学过的语法知识我们可以让这个句子更加复杂,给定语从句中加一个插入语:they hope, 放在which后面,这样这句话就成为:They all want to find jobs, which they hope can offer them handsome salaries.第四句话也可以和前两句连在一起,这次不采用主从复合句,而采用并列句,因为意思发生转折,故用but连接,而impossible太绝对了,改为hardly possible, 于是成为:They all want to find jobs, which they hope can offer them handsome salaries, but this is hardly possible.所以最初的那句话,经过拆解、加工(换词和连句)形成了下面的一组句子:Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes.They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries, but this is hardly possible.再例如:It is difficult for high school students to adopt a completely objective attitude towards their teachers when they are required to perform an evaluation task.用it作形式主语的结构主要用于下列句型:
1.It is+名词+从句:这样的名词有a fact, a surprise, an honor, a pity, common knowledge等。例如:
It is common knowledge that the full moon brings fair weather.皓月兆天晴,这是常识。
2.It is+形容词+从句:这样的形容词有natural, true, strange, necessary, important, obvious, certain, wonderful, funny, possible, likely, probable等。例如: It is certain that free medical care will be given to most people in our city.我们城市的多数人将享受免费医疗,这是一定的。
3.It+动词+从句:这样的动词有seem, happen, appear, look, matter, make, strike, occur等。
It appeared that he had a taste for music.看来他对音乐有一定的鉴赏力。4.It + be + 分词+从句:这样的分词有said, reported, believed, known, decided, proved, thought, expected, announced, arranged, amusing, puzzling, striking等。
It was amusing that a rabbit ran out of the empty box on the desk.桌上的空盒子里竟然跑出来一只兔子,太有趣了。
需要说明的是,大部分连接词引导的主语从句都可以用it充当形式主语。
以上,朗阁海外考试研究中心介绍了写复杂句和长句的方法。当然句子结构要多变,考生们还要学会对非谓语,倒装,强调等更复杂的表达方法的运用。另外长句并非就是好句子,如果刻意写长句凑字数反而会影响主题的表达。句子简洁有力,用词贴切才是好的雅思作文的最终目标。
第二篇:朗阁雅思基础班写作句子
1.The number of TV viewers soarsbetween 8pm and 10pm.电视观众的人数在晚上8点到10点之间急剧上升。
2.The environment has been deteriorating along with the rapid development of economy.随着经济的迅猛发展,环境也在不断的恶化。
3.Overweight people suffer greatly psychologically and physically.肥胖的人身心都受到伤害。
4.The high unemployment rate destroys social stability.居高不下的失业率破坏社会稳定。
5.The uniform dress policy helps to reinforce school discipline and maintainschool security.穿校服的制度有利于加强学校纪律和维护学校安全
6.The overuse of fertilizers and pesticides may lead to the deterioration of the environment.过量使用肥料和杀虫剂可能导致环境的恶化.7.I can hardly subscribe to the latter opinion for the following several sound reasons.我很难认同后一种观点,理由有以下几方面。
8.Few people side with the proposal suggested by animal right activists.很少人赞成动物权益保护者提出的建议。
9.More people have attached greater importance to animal rights over the past few years.在过去的几年里,更多人重视动物权益了。
10.We should make good use of all the wastes.我们应当充分利用所有的废物。
11.We shall never lose sight of the risks brought about by the development of the cloning technology.我们不能无视发展克隆技术带来的风险。
12.Our government lays emphasis on the conservation of the endangered species.我们的政府更加重视稀有物种的保护了。
13.A growing number of parents pay heed to the education of their children.越来越多的家长更加重视小孩的教育了。
14.The table shows us the results of a survey on the relationship between income and age.该表格向我们展示了关于收入和年龄之间关系的调查结果。
15.Part-time jobs give students a sense of achievement and accomplishment through contributing to the society.通过为社会作贡献,学生从兼职工作中获得了一种成就感。
16.Robots can make humans replaceable, redundant and even extinct.机器人使人变得可替代,多余甚至使处于灭绝的境地。
17.One merit of the Internet is the easy access to the latest information.互联网的好处是能迅速方便的获取最新的资讯。
18.Some information on the Internet is misleading and cheating.网上一些信息是误导人和带有欺骗性的。
19.The advertisement is misleading and exaggerative.该广告误导人且夸大其词。
20.The direct cause of drug-taking is ignorance and curiosity.吸毒的直接原因是无知和好奇。
21.The opponents attribute the deterioration of environment to the rapidly expanding population and economic development.反对方把环境的恶化归咎于人口的迅速增长和经济的快速发展。
22.The number of TV audience reaches the peak of 20,000 at 9pm.电视观众的人数在9点到达最高点2万人。Traveling abroad broadens one’s vision, enriches one’s mind and cultivates one’s independence.出国旅游开阔视野、丰富知识,也培养独立性。
24.P-books will not be replaced by e-books, nor will fast food replace traditional food.传统印刷的书不会被电子书籍所取代,正如快餐不会取代传统食物一样。
25.The government has made great efforts to conserve cultural heritage, yet there are still many being severely damaged.政府已经尽力去保护文化遗产,然而还有许多正遭受严重的破坏。
26.Distance-education has been playing an increasingly significant role in modern education, so some optimistic people claim that our children no longer need to go to the traditional school to receive formal education.远程教育在现代教育中起到日益重要的作用,于是有些乐观的人声称我们的孩子不必去传统的学校去接受正规教育。
27.The zoos protect many wild animals;additionally, they keep city people in closer contact with the more natural world.动物园保护许多野生动物,此外,它们还使城市居民有机会接触到自然状态下的动物世界。
28.The intelligent machines such as robots can replace humans to do some dangerous tasks;in addition, they release housewives from daily household chores.智能机器如机器人能代替人从事许多危险的工作,此外,它们也使家庭主妇从日常家务活中解脱出来。
29.Without commercials, the public’s favorite programs would not be shown;therefore, viewers must accept them as necessary.如果没有广告,公众喜爱的节目将不再播放,因此,电视观众必须接受它们,认为广告是必不可少的。Many ads and commercials do give important information about products;nevertheless, some of them are merely misleading and cheating.许多广告确实提供了有关产品的重要信息,然而,其中一些却是误导人的和带有欺骗性的广告。
31.Chemical wastes in the environment can seriously damage people’s health;for instance, the chemicals dumped in the rivers lead to illnesses, the destruction of genes and even death.环境中的化工垃圾严重威胁人们的健康。例如,倾倒到河流里的化工肥料导致人患病,基因遭破坏甚至死亡。
细心的消费者依赖好的广告,否则,他们将难以明智地购买各种产品。
32.The development of modern science and technology brings mankind numerous benefits;at the same time, it poses potential risks to human society.现代科学技术给人类带来众多的好处,同时也对人类社会构成潜在威胁。
33.It is commonly believed that environment has a profound influence on one’s personality.普遍认为环境对人的性格有深远的影响。
34.The fact that young people nowadays are self-centered, indifferent and inconsiderate is largely
the outcome of their parents’ indulgence in their childhood.当今的年轻人以自我为中心,对人冷漠和不顾及他人,这很大程度上是孩童时期他们父母对他们过于纵容的结果。
35.The assumption that robots will make humans redundant and replaceable is untenable.认为机器人将令人类变得多余和可替代的假设是站不住脚的。
36.Whether or not cameras should be installed in public areas has aroused wide public concern..该不该在公共场所安装摄像机引发了公众的广泛关心。
37.We can’t imagine what effects garbage will exert on our lives.我们很难想象垃圾将对我们的生活造成什么影响。
38.Who should be responsible for our senior citizens has been widely discussed in our community.谁对我们的老人负责这个问题在社区里被广泛讨论。
39.How we can improve the present traffic situation has been widely discussed in our community these days.近来在我们社区人们广泛讨论如何改善交通现状。
40.Where we can dispose of the increasing rubbish is a great headache to many governments.在哪儿处置日益增多的垃圾对于许多政府而言是个头痛的事情。
41.This diagram demonstrates how a microwave oven works.该图表描述了微波炉是怎样工作的。
42.It is one's practical capabilitythat enterprises truly value.一个人的实际能力才是企业所真正看重的。
43.I don't think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English.我认为我们发明一种新的语言来取代英语是没有必要的.44.People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issuewhether it is a blessing or a curse.然而,关于它是一件好事还是坏事,人们有不同的态度。
45.The fact that the unemployment rates in quite a number of countries keep rising can not be denied.很多国家的失业率在不断攀升这一事实是我们无法否认的。
46.I hold it essential to examine the both sides of the issue before presenting my viewpoint.在给出我的观点之前,我认为看一看问题的两面是很重要的。
Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether globalization is beneficialto the economic development.不同的人们对于全球化是否有利于经济的发展这个问题持有不同的看法.48.It is a pity that all the majority of people care about is how they could be paid more.令人感到遗憾的是大多数人所在乎的仅仅就只是他们怎么样才能更多地赚到钱。
49.With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.随着越来越多的妇女参与全职工作,由谁来照顾孩子已经成为了社会上的一个问题。
第三篇:朗阁雅思培训-雅思写作中的词汇润色
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雅思写作中的词汇润色 从雅思写作的评分标准中我们可以看出,雅思写作对考生的词汇要求是比较高的,如果全篇使用平淡无奇的词汇是无法取得雅思写作高分的,需要有一些能够让考官眼前一亮的词汇。本文中,朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家将对雅思写作中的词汇润色进行深入解析。
一:词汇表达的专业性
话题词汇在雅思作文的用词中扮演了一个专业性的角色。很多考生在备考雅思写作的过程中往往会乱背词汇,缺乏针对性,更多烤鸭会出现背了用不上的问题。我们鼓励考生按照话题来熟悉词汇,然后通过范文来巩固模仿。话题词汇的使用会让表达更加专业,比如说教育类的词汇,“应试教育”一词,很多人会说是education which focus examination, 其实它的准确表达应该是exam-oriented education;还有“同龄人”很多学生会表达成people of same age, 背过话题词汇的考生应该都知道一个很简单的词peer;还有媒体类的词汇“大众媒体”,“不良信息”不应该是字面理解的public media和bad information, 更好的应该说mass media和negative information;还有让人过目不忘的“青少年犯罪”一词,我们也会用juvenile delinquency来替换普通的teenager crime。通过上述的例子,我们可以很清楚地发现话题词汇的应用可以让作文表达更准确,更专业,考生可以充分利用这一部分词汇来为自己的作文润色加分。
二:用词的多样性
研读了大量的考官范文以及评分要求,我们不难发现考官非常注重repetition of words,所以准备一些替换词还是十分有必要的。词汇的多样性是一个人词汇量以及用词精准性的很好的体现。例如同样表达“解决问题”这个短语,我们可以说solve/cope with/deal with/tackle/address/combat the problems/issues。“注意,重视”可以表达成pay attention to /lay emphasis on /attach importance to。再举个例子,有个题目要讨论computer games的优缺点,那整篇文章我们会一直提到这个词,所以我们可以换种方式表达为indulgence in computer games或者being addicted to computer games.使用替换词的时候要注意用词的精准性,考官并不一定想看见一篇文章有多少生僻和高难度的词,但是一些词的妙用以及替换确实会带来意想不到的润色功能。
三:让考官眼前一亮的词汇
雅思培训 http://ielts.longre.com托福培训http://toefl.longre.com 经常看见有考生走入一个严重的误区,为了让自己的词汇“高级一点”,去网络或字典中找一个从未见过的生僻词,结果却适得其反。想让考官眼前一亮并不需要用高难词汇,很多小词也会有意想不到的效果。例如fuel这个词,表面是燃料的意思,我们拿来做动词作为“推动,助燃”就是个不错的表达。“全球化极大地推动了经济的发展”我们就可以表达成the development of economy is largely fueled by globalization.比如同样要表达A对B很重要,除了最基本的结构A is very important之外,我们还可以用be of +n或者词组来表示为:A is of considerable importance to B或者A plays a vital role in B.所以,考生们平时可以通过一些小词的高级用法和适当积累些词组来丰富自身的词汇量。
总之,词汇是一篇作文的基础,就好比造房子,词汇就是一幢房子的基石。我们通过研究剑桥系列文章后面的考官满分范文可以发现,文章的用词都是简单而贴切的,并没有所谓的“高分”词汇。很多学生在上课过程中会向老师要所谓的8分词汇,9分词汇,其实写作中并没有确切范围规定哪些词汇所对应的分值,只要用词用的准确,用的妙,任何小词都可以成为高分词汇。只要考生投考官所好,严格按照评分标准对词汇的要求,做到准确性以及多样性,就可以在词汇这栏交上满意的答卷。
第四篇:朗阁雅思培训-雅思写作常用逻辑连接词
雅思培训 http://ielts.longre.com托福培训http://toefl.longre.com
雅思写作常用逻辑连接词 在雅思写作中,不同逻辑关系的表达就意味着要使用不同的句式结构,不同的连接词。因此,连接词在写作中是否能正确的使用就决定着文章逻辑关系是否合理。笔者在多年的教学中发现,有的考生不明白在写作中该使用怎样的连接词,有的考生不知道连接词的使用是否正确。本文中,朗阁雅思培训中心的专家将总结一些写作中常用的连接词。
一、常见列举用转折词语
1.for one thing, for another, above all things;
2.to begin/start with, next/besides/moreover, last/finally;
3.in the first place, in the second, in the third,(and)best of/worst of all;
4.one of these, another,(there is)still another(reason/factor);
上述词组的意思是:
1.首先;其次;最重要的是;
2.首先;然后/此外/而且;最后;
3.第一,首先;第二;第三;最好的是/最糟糕的是;
4.其中一个;另一个;还有一个(原因/因素);
二、常见对比转折词语
1.but, but on the contrary, but on the other hand, but then;
2.by contrast, in contrast, in contrast with/to, as a contrast to, as opposed to;
3.by contraries, on the contrary, to the contrary, contrary to(A), opposite to, in opposition to;
4.whereas, while, while on the other hand, while on the whole, yet, however;
5.(as)compared with/to, by comparison, in comparison with, by comparison to
6.First..., Next..., Last...;
7.In the first / early / initial / infant period / stage / phase(或In its infancy)..., In the second / middle / adult / ripe period / stage / phase..., In the third / last / closing / later / concluding period...;
8.One step(way/course/approach/secret/trick)..., Another step..., Still another step...;
9.The first measure/step/move..., Next to it comes..., And the last/final/the most important measure...;
10.The direct experience/lesson/factor/way(或One lesson)...The indirect experience/lesson/factor/way(或The other lesson)...上述词组的意思是:
1.但是;但相反地;但另一方面;但是接下去;
2.通过对比;经过对比;经与…对比;作为与…的对比;作为…的对照;
3.相反;相反;相反;与A相反;与…相反;与…相反;
4.然而;然而;然而另一方面;然而整体而言;然而;然而;
5.跟…相比
6.首先…;其次…;最后…;
7.在第一个/早期/开始/婴儿时期/阶段;在第二个/中间/成人/成熟时期/阶段;在第三个/最后/结束/后面的阶段;
8.一个措施/方法/做法/秘密/计策是…;另一个措施是…;还有一个措施是…;
9.第一个措施是…;接着是…;最后一个/最重要的措施是…;
10.直接经验/教训/因素/途径是(一个教训是)…;间接经验/教训/因素/途径是(另一个教训是)…
三、常见对比转折句型
1.But the obvious(fatal/serious)flaw(defect/drawback)in their argument
(attitude/idea/view/action/behavior)is that.../But the basic(main/great/key/ big)problem with their argument(...)is that...e.g....that they are ignorant of(blind to)a bare fact: Social changes have attached new meanings and values to the division between good and bad.2.But if...it is(not)easy(difficult/hard)to see(find/discover)that...e.g.But if they adjust their frame of mind a little in the other direction , it is not hard for them to find that life is just as promising as before.3.Too much emphasis(attention/stress/concern/significance)placed on(given to/focused on/attached to/paid to)the negative(sunny/gloomy/bright)side of the issue, however, may...(如mislead/confuse/cloud/bias/disturb our judgment of it.)A
e.g...., however, may mislead us to form a pessimistic estimate of current
situations.或..., however, may stop us from rendering(passing/forming/having)a fair(correct/clear/infallible/wise)judgment on it.4.But in most cases/from the point of view of justice(objectivity)/as a matter of fact/in a very true sense, their(public/general)satisfaction
(dissatisfaction/disillusionment/concern)with...(或their criticism of.../their argument for/against.../their objection to.../their approval for...)can not.../is..., for...e.g.But in an impartial sense, the public dissatisfaction can not hold every water, for our society is still abundant in goodness and beauty.5.As a result of..., however, things would/are bound to...e.g.As a result of such an utter indifference to vicious behavior, however , things would be past saving/mending/all the hope.上述句型的意思是:
1.但他们辩论/态度/观点/看法/行为中的明显/致命的/严重的缺点/缺陷是…;他们辩论的基本/最大/主要问题在于…
例:…他们忽视了一个赤裸裸的事实:社会变革给善恶的区分赋予了新的意义和价值。
2.但如果…很(不)容易/难发现…
例:但如果他们稍微调整一下思路,就不难发现生活还是跟以前一样前途光明。
3.然而,对问题负面/正面/阴暗面给予/集中/附加了太多的强调/注意/关注会…(如误导/混淆/掩盖/歪曲/干扰我们对它的判断)
例:然而,…会误导我们对目前的形势形成悲观的估计。或:然而,…会阻碍我们对其形成/有一个正确的/清楚的/无误的/明智的判断。
4.但大多数情况下/从公正(客观)的角度来看/实际上/真正意义上,他们/公众/对…的满意/不满/幻灭/关注(或:他们对…的批评/他们对…辩解(辩驳)/他们对…的反对/他们对…的支持)不能…/是…,因为…
例:但从公正的角度来看,公众的不满并不都有道理,因为我们的社会仍然充满着善与美。
5.然而,作为…的结果,事情会注定…
例:然而,作为对不良行为全然漠视的结果,事情将成为过去,希望还在。
四、常见情景/参照物设定的词语或结构
1.when, if, the other day in a certain place, suppose/imagine/assume(that...), in(the)course/time of...for instance, in the event of等;
2.in the case of, as for/to, as far as...is/are concerned, The same is true of..., when compared with, in comparison with, by comparison等;
3.If there is anything that comes close to/is comparable to/with...,...there is hardly, a thing that compares favorable with/can rival...上述句型的意思是:
1.当…的时候;如果;几天前在某地;假设/想象/倘使…;在…期间;例如;万一…;
2.关于;关于;关于;关于…也是一样;当与…相比;当与…相比;通过比较;
3.如果说有什么能与…相比,那么几乎没有什么能与…(另一事物)相比/匹敌。
第五篇:朗阁雅思培训-雅思写作高分句型
雅思写作高分句型
朗阁海外考试研究中心尧亿丛
在雅思写作中,考生如果想得到高分,除了需要依靠较出彩的思想、高分单词以及常见关联词外,还需要运用高分句型。在这些句型中,除了常见的从句(定语从句、状语从句以及名词性从句)之外,强调形式和倒装形式更是拿分的关键点。以下,朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家将对此类句型进行总结。
一、强调形式
强调形式总共分成五大类:
1.对动词进行强调(dodoesdid + V)
Sitting in front of the screen the eye and physical posture of children.Some people that the overuse of chemicals(e.g.Fertilizers and
2.双重否定可表强调
We cannot deny that receiving the distance education is drawbacks.3.比较状语可表强调 to develop the children’s ability of learning on their own.to deal with their academic life those who do not have the gap year spent in working or travelling.4.what引导的主从可表强调
is the failure of the government’s policies.5.强调句型可表强调, 所强调的可以是单词、短语,也可以是从句,但必须保证其结构完整。被强调的成分可以是主语、表语、宾语、同位语、状语等,但不能是定语或谓语。
should shoulder the responsibility to protect the endangered species.(对主语强调)member.(对主语强调)
the young unemployed would have the opportunity to get jobs again.(对状语强调)(对宾语进行强调)
注:强调句中的时态要根据原句的时态而定。即原句为过去某种时态,则强调句中的be就用过去时;原句为现在的某种时态,强调句中就用be的现在时态。有时还可以用It might be/must have been/can’t be…that等句式。
例句:
they spend longer time in travelling.young people.强调句的判断:强调句型可以通过“还原法”来进行判断,若删除强调句型结构后,句子能还原为一个完整的句子,就是强调句。强调句可以看作是用固定的表达-It is/was…that(which, who, whom, where, when)…, 将句子的某个成分(除了谓语)进行重点强调。但是,去掉这个固定的句型部分,句子本身并无任何变化。
二、倒装形式
倒装共分两类:全部倒装和部分倒装。全部倒装是指将全部谓语动词都放在主语之前。部分倒装是指将谓语的一部分如助动词,系动词或情态动词放在主语之前。如果句中的谓语没有助动词或情态动词,则需添加助动词do, does或did, 并将其放在主语之前。
A.全部倒装:把全部谓语放在主语前。
1.there be句型(特殊的全部倒装句型)
There be…是一种较为常见的句子结构,通常用于表达“某地有某人或某物”,在使用此句型结构时,应注意下列问题:
1)主谓一致
例句:
There is little opportunity for children to stay at home until the age of 7 because their parents are both working.There are many reasons why we should not slaughter animals for their fur or leather.2)be动词可以是任何时间状态
例句:
There have been many government which invest a large sum of money in researching the space.There has been a discussion over whether children should be sent to school at a young age.3)在There be结构中除了运用动词be之外,还可以用seem, appear, happen, exist等。在这种句型中,谓语的单复数形式根据靠近谓语的主语而定。
例句:
There seemed to be no permanent solution to the disappearance of minority languages and cultures.2.there here now then放在句首时,句子进行全部倒装。
to realize the seriousness of this problem and take actions immediately.3.方位状语开头时,句子进行全部倒装。
On the internet are provided all kinds of entertainment activities.In books are embalmed the greatest thoughts of all ages.4.主语与表语互换位置(当主语过长而表语过短时,可以把主语与表语互换位置从而构成全部倒装)Important is that the government raises people’s awareness of the environmental protection.5.伴随状语开头(With或Along with放在句首时,句子应该全部倒装)With globalization have come many problems.B.部分倒装:只将情态动词、助动词或系动词放在主语前
1.only +单词、词组、状语从句位于句首,句子进行部分倒装。
2.以否定意义状语开头,句子进行部分倒装。
3.neither nor开头,句子进行部分倒装。
The financial incentive is not the only factor in encouraging employees, neither Economic success is not the only factor in achieving happiness, neither is social status.4.so开头,句子进行部分倒装。
5.让步状语从句由though或as引导时可用倒装,将表语放在句子最前面。as the mainstream form of education.6.so that引导的结果状语从句可用倒装。it.总之,如果考生能将这些原则运用到位,那么在雅思考试中写作成绩出高分是指日可待的。但是句型的熟悉还是在于勤奋的练习,所以朗阁海外考试研究中心还是建议众多的考生们勤加练习,在考试的时候才可以信手拈来。