第一篇:【专项突破】2017高考英语二轮复习短文改错集训(二)(范文模版)
2017高考英语-短文改错集训
(二)【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Passage 1 Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students‟ Union organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn‟t show some interest and wasn‟t very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher‟s smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.But my teacher‟s encouragement, I couldn‟t have won the first prize.I‟m proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2 As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited.Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night.A car hit a motorbike.The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital.After a while, the traffic police came.Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth.The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control.At last he was taken to the police station.All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously.It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu.It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3
Dear Sir/Madam,I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service.A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency.I found a little differences between your advertisement and action.As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner.Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand.We didn‟t enjoy any kind of shower.In fact, we only bathe in cold water.As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time.As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen.We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4
As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games.One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily.In other words, they help to keep people strong and health.If people are playing games, they move a lot of.Having fun with their friends make them happy.Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.So that is why sports are good activities for people‟s health.Passage 5
Last Sunday I went shopping with my father.We have a lot of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop.An hour late, we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn‟t open the door.So we asked the policeman for help.It was glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.„How are you doing with my car?‟ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6
Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season.Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据).When she got there,she refused.The salesman said that he wouldn‟t take it back if she showed him the receipt.Thinking it was no way out,Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her.They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful.Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing.Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7 Changes create happiness.Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village.Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste.As the result, the lake was serious polluted.To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust.Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil.Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings.The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees.On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.
2016高考英语-短文改错集训
(二)答案与解析
Passage 1 本文是一篇励志小故事。讲述了作者(一位中学生)参加了本校一年一度的英语口语演讲比赛。当初,作者由于缺乏兴趣和自信而不敢参加,因受自己的英语老师的开导和激励,便报了名,但经过自己的一番努力后,最终以第一名的好成绩赢得了这场比赛。
1.organize→organized。考查动词时态的用法。句子Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students‟ Union organize an English Speech Competition中的谓语动词organize,其动作时间应与作者参赛的时间取得一致,故用一般过去时。
2.some→any。考查同义词辨析。句子At first I didn‟t show some interest and wasn‟t very …中的形容词some,通常用于肯定句或表示请求的疑问句之中。但在否定句,疑问句或条件状语从句中常用any来替换。
3.去掉much。考查副词固定习语的用法。句中…and wasn‟t very much confident中的much与very连用,通常修饰动词。但其后紧跟形容词confident,故much多余。4.Inspiring→Inspired。考查过去分词短语作状语的用法。句中Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition…中的Inspiring,与句子主语I是逻辑上的动宾关系,应用过去分词,且有by短语提示,二者合起来作状语,表示原因,相当于原因状语从句。
5.fully→full。考查副词的误用。句中…and made fully preparations for it中的fully是副词,作状语,通常修饰动词。但其后紧跟名词preparations,应为形容词作定语。
6.coming→came。考查句子结构的甄别。根据句子结构分析:本句是由并列连词and连接的并列句,前一分句Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was…中的the time是主语,I had been looking forward to是省略了引导词that的限制性定语从句,修饰先行词the time,该分句中缺少谓语动词。但是,又受and的制约,证明又由其连接了一个使用一般过去时的后一分句,此时句中coming不能单独作谓语,只能改为came时,句子结构才能成立。
7.his→my。考查逻辑关系。文章是以第一人称叙述了作者的所有境况。所以,此处应用my来表示所
属关系。
8.winner→winners。考查名词数别的判断。句子I was one of the winner表述中可以看出,one of后跟名词,须用其复数形式。
9.But→Without。考查逻辑关系。文章最后表明了作者对老师的感激之情,便使用了Without…, … couldn‟t have done ….句式结构。所以,此处的without介词短语表示条件。
10.or→and。考查逻辑关系。最后作者以拥有这样的老师和本次难得的比赛经历而表示自豪。所以,此处的Mr.Smith 和 the wonderful experience without是并列关系。
Passage 2
本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。讲述了作者昨天晚上回家时所看到的一起醉驾行驶的小轿车撞上了一辆电动自行车的交通事故。伤情严重,在好心人的帮助下,伤者很快被送到了医院进行抢救。于是,现场的目击证人强烈谴责醉驾司机,要求其对本次事故负全责。作者又通过发生在杭州和成都的两地多起交通事故来强烈呼吁:抵制醉驾,珍惜生命。1.去掉last前面on。考查名词短语的习惯用法。句子…way home on last night中 的介词on 应该用在表示具体的某一日或某一天的早晨、下午或者晚上,但在last night名词习语中,介词on是多余的。
2.bad→badly。考查形容词的误用。句子…driver was bad hurt中 的形容词bad 应该用在名词前作定语,但是,此处是在动词hurt前,须用副词,作状语,即表示:伤者的被伤害的程度。
3.Under→With。考查固定习语的用法。句子Under the help of the people who…中的固定搭配with one‟s help或with the help of somebody,表示 “在某人帮助下”,其介词为with。
4.a→the。考查冠词的基本用法。句子…police found out a truth中的冠词,应表示 “这次交通事故的真实情况”,表示特指,须用定冠词the。
5.drinking→drunk。考查被动语态的用法。句子The driver of the car was drinking中的was drinking 是主动语态,由从句中得知,小轿车司机是喝醉了酒,应用be+v-ed构成的系表结构来表示:The driver of the car的精神状态。
6.think→thought。考查动词时态的辨别。句子All the people there think the car driver was to blame…主句中的谓语动词think应与从句中的谓语动词保持时间上的一致,须用一般过去时。
7.Which→As。考查定语从句引导词的辨析。句子Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving causes many people…中的Which is reported in the news reports是定语从句中的从句,drunk driving causes many people…是主句,本定语从句中能够代替一个句子内容的引导词,只有as。
8.lose前加to。考查固定搭配的用法。句子… driving causes many people lose their lives…中的固定搭配cause somebody to do something,表示 “导致/引发/引起……”意义时,其后跟带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语。
9.accident→accidents。考查名词数别的判断。句子… such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu表述中的accident须用复数形式,应与that引导的定语从句中出现的in Hangzhou and Chengdu语意相吻合。
10.prevent→prevented或加should。考查虚拟语气的用法。句子It is high time that we prevent drunk driving表述中的that从句里的谓语动词须用“动词过去式或should+动词原形”来构成虚拟语气。句式结构为It is high time that… 刚好(恰好)到了…时候了。
Passage 3 本篇是一封游客对旅行社失信服务的投诉信。信中讲到:作者参报了一个为期三天去峨眉山旅游的旅行社,当游客到了目的地后,竟然发现,旅行社的广告宣传与游览景点和游区服务质量相差悬殊,所有承诺均未兑现,胡乱顶用,最后造成重点景点遗漏,憾事连连。作者强烈要求有关部门采取相应措施,制止类似事件的再次发生。
1.three-days→three-day。考查复合形容词的用法。文中… joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain…里的three-days是复合形容词,其由“基数词+连字符+名词单数”来构成,作定语,修饰名词trip。
2.little→few。考查同义词的辨析。文中…found a little differences between…里的differences是可数名词的复数形式,故其前few作定语,起限定作用。而little则与不可数名词的单数形式连用。
3.with→without/any→no。考查逻辑关系。文中已经讲明了游客坐的是没有装空调的车子,并且车况很差。所以,此处应用否定意义的词来表述。
4.and→but。考查逻辑关系。作者反映尽管旅行社在午饭时提供了饭菜,但是质量很差,而且还有沙粒。所以,此处语义应为转折关系。
5.terribly→terrible。考查副词的误用。句子…the food tasted terribly中的terribly是副词,作状语。而此处应用其形容词terrible,置于系动词tasted后作表语,才符合词法要求。
6.bathe→bathed。考查动词时态的辨别。句子In fact, we only bathe in cold water中的谓语动词bathe应与全文背景时间保持一致,须用一般过去时。
7.what→which。考查非限制性定语从句的用法。从句子结构来看,句子…the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time句中的souvenir shops,其后跟了一个非限制性定语从句来起补充或说明作用,因先行词指物,应用关系代词which来引导。而what则与定语从句无关。8.the→a。考查固定习语的用法。句子As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen中的固定搭配as a result用作插入语,表示 结果,其中冠词为a。
9.can后加be。考查情态动词被动语态的用法。句子We do hope something can done to prevent…中的something是动词do的承受对象,应用被动语态。同时,其谓语中有情态动词can,故正确表达式应为:can be done。
10.happen→happening。考查特殊句式的用法。句子…to prevent such things happen again中的prevent句型搭配应为prevent…from doing something或prevent… doing something,故应用happening。
Passage 4 本文是一篇有关运动有益于健康的议论文。文章主题鲜明,论点突出,论据充分。文章全面揭示了生命在于运动的这一永恒主题的内涵。
1.and→but。考查逻辑关系。根据文中… playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play两个分句间的逻辑关系来分析,中间的关联词y应视为转折关系。2.woman→women。考查名词数别的判断。根据语境推断men and woman是并列的两个名词作主语,按照语法要求,它们在数别上应当保持一致。
3.call→called。考查动词时态的用法。句子Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together… 中的谓语动词have call受since短语的影响,应用现在完成时。
4.play→playing。考查特殊句式的用法。句子…their friends together to spend hours, even days play games里的句型搭配应为spend…doing something或spend…in doing something,故playing符合句式要求。5.of 后加the。考查冠词的用法。句子One of reasons why people like o play is that sports help them to move happily中,关系副词why 引导了限制性定语从句,作定语,修饰先行词reasons,表示特指,故其前面冠词应为the。
6.health→healthy。考查动词习惯搭配的用法。句子…help to keep people strong and health句型搭配应为keep + 名词/代词+形容词,由此判断,此处应用healthy。
7.If→When。考查逻辑关系。句子If people are playing games, they move a lot…根据语境推断:每天我们在运动的时候,对什么都充满了精神。所以,该从句的引导词自然为when了。
8.去掉of。考查固定习语的用法。句子…they move a lot of中的a lot相当于副词,作状语,修饰move。而a lot of相当于形容词,作定语,用来修饰名词。所以,此处of多余。
9.make→makes。考查动名词作主语的用法。句子Having fun with their friends make them happy中的Having fun with their friends是动名词短语作主语,谓语动词应用单数形式。
10.watch→watching。考查动名词作宾语的用法。句子Many people enjoy sports by watch others play中的by是介词,其后跟动词时,应用动词-ing形式,作介词宾语。
Passage 5
本文是一篇记叙文,记述了作者与父亲上周日去购物时所制造的一件令人极其尴尬的事。
1.have→had。考查动词时态的辨别。句子We have a lot of things to buy中的谓语动词have应与全文背景时间保持一致,须用一般过去时。
2.去掉front前the。考查冠词的用法。句子… stopped our car in the front of the shop中的名词前有无冠词,其意义甚远。根据语境看来,此处表示车子停在商店门口的前面,即某一范围外部的前面区域,front前须去掉定冠词the。否则,front前须与定冠词the连用。
3.late→later。考查形近词的辨析。句子An hour late, we came back to the car里的late,表示未按照规定时间到达某一地点,即“迟到”。later表示某一时间点以后若干时间,即某一点时间开始后。可是,此处表示“一个小时后,我们才……”,由此判断,later符合语境要求。
4.policeman前加a。考查冠词表示类别的用法。句中So we asked for help中的policeman是可数名词,其与不定冠词连用表示类别,即“一类人,一种人”。由此判断,作者和父亲立刻请了一位警察来帮忙打开车门。
5.it→he。考查指代关系。句中It was glad to help us里的it是指那位帮忙的警察,应用人称代词he来表示指代才符合逻辑。
6.minute→minutes。考查名词数别的判断。句子A few minute later, he got…表述中的minute须用复数形式,因其前面有a few来修饰。7.How→what。考查疑问词的用法。句子How are you doing with my car表述中的疑问词因受动词do with的制约,须用疑问词what,若动词为deal with,其疑问词则用how。
8.surprising→surprised。考查-ing和-ed词尾形容词的用法。句子We were surprising and went to see表述中的surprising,只能与表示物的名词或代词连用,说明“令……的”而surprised只能与表示人的名词或代词连用,说明“使……的”。由此判断,此处应为-ed词尾的形容词了。
9.you前加do。考查特殊疑问句的结构。句子What you think we did then表述中的Do you think是一般疑问句,其后跟了What we did then组成的宾语从句,按照句式要求,须构成特殊疑问句,便将疑问词前移了。10.speak→say。考查同义词的辨析。句子We had to speak sorry to the man again and again表述中的speak强调开口发声或讲什么语言,其后通常跟表示语言的名词。但是,say则侧重说话者的讲话内容。由此推断,此处say吻合与语境意义。
Passage 6 本文是一篇以第三人称记述的顾客返回商场退货时所发生的一件蹊跷小事。
1.goes→went。考查动词时态的用法。句子Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt中的谓语动词goes应与全文背景时间保持一致,须用一般过去时。
2.refused前加was/got。考查被动语态的用法。根据语境分析,句子she got there,she refused里的she是动词refuse的承受对象,应用被动语态。
3.if→unless。考查逻辑关系。句子The salesman said that he wouldn‟t take it back if she showed him the receipt…根据语境推断:若she不能提供购物发票的话,售货员是不会接受退货的。所以,该状语从句的引导词应当是unless。4.it→there。考查特殊句式的用法。句子Thinking it was no way out,Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left中的it was no way out句型搭配应为there is no way…,意为“毫无办法”。
5.guard→guards。考查名词数别的判断。句子Suddenly two shop guard stopped her…表述中的two已经表明了名词数别状况。6.去掉for。考查动词近义词的辨析。句子…and began to search for her表述中,search for,意为“寻找”,后面跟人或物作宾语,表示未看见或不见了的东西或人;search,意为“搜查,搜身”,后面跟人或地点作宾语,表示:搜某人的身或在…中寻找。由此判断,介词for多余。
7.careful→carefully。考查形容词的误用。句子…and looked at it careful中的careful为形容词,常用作定语和表语。但是,此处被置于动词looked at之后,应用副词carefully,作状语,表示注意的程度。8.what→which。考查非限制性定语从句的用法。从句子结构来看,句子Many eyes were staring at her其后跟了what made Li Mei very,一个非限制性定语从句来起补充或说明作用,指代整个主句的内容,应用关系代词which来引导。而what不能用来引导非限制性定语从句。
9.embarrassing→embarrassed。考查-ing和-ed词尾形容词的辨析。从全篇看来,此处是说明或描述she的特性时,应用-ed 的形容词才吻合语境意义。
10.a→the。考查定冠词的用法。从末段来,此处是指前面在商城拒绝收货的那个售货员。英语中,当人或物再次被提到时,应与定冠词the来连用。
Passage 7 本文是一篇说明文,介绍了作者所处的村子里发生了巨变后的所呈现出的村容村貌。
1.去掉been。考查被动语态的误用。句中Great changes have been taken place in my village来看,谓语动词take place当作不及物动词来用,可以用happen来替换,其本身就没有被动语态。英语中,只有及物动词才有被动语态,由此看来,助动词been多余。2.lie→lay。考查动词时态的用法。句子… which lie on the north of…中的谓语动词lie应与Ten years ago时间保持一致,须用一般过去时。
3.the →a。考查不定冠词的用法。句中…which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste…中的lake是本文第一次出现,表示类别,即有一个湖,应与不定冠词a来连用。
4.serious→seriously。考查形容词的误用。句子…the lake was serious polluted中的serious是形容词,常用作定语和表语。但是,此处的serious放在was polluted中,应用其副词seriously,修饰was polluted,作状语,表示受污染的程度。
5.that→which。考查非限制性定语从句的用法。从句子结构来看,句子To the west was a sandy field其后跟了that was the source of dust一个非限制性定语从句来起补充或说明作用,引导词指代整个主句的
内容,应用关系代词which来引导。而that不能用来引导非限制性定语从句。
6.Better→Worse。考查逻辑关系。句子Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great…根据语境推断:这个湖泊的西南面的一个制砖厂竟然用完了大量的肥沃土壤来生产砖块。因此,句中的插入语应当是Worse,表示不利因素的语义关系。7.Deal后加of。考查固定习语的用法。句子…a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil中的a great deal相当于副词,作状语。但是,其后却跟了good soil,这时,该词应相当于一个形容词,作定语,用来修饰名词good soil。即a great deal of。
8.house→houses。考查名词数别的辨别。句子Now poor house have been replaced by…表述中的have已经表明了名词house数别状况。
9.ploughing→plough。考查特定句式的用法。句子The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered…中的that the villagers used to ploughing作定语,修饰先行词The sandy field。可是,在从句中,其谓语动词的句式应为used to do something,表示过去常常做……,此处自然是plough了。
10.his→their。考查逻辑关系。句子On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing中的his须得与the villagers取得对应。
第二篇:山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练:短文改错+写作(22)
山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练:短文改错+写作(22)短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Wise men don’t always act as wise
1.__________ 2.__________ 3.__________ 4.__________
5.__________
6.__________ as we think.At times they maybe do something silly, and then the stories about their foolish acts are stillwidely talked throughout the world in modern times.For example, Beethoven was said to having insisted onpaying a waiter in a restaurant for a dinner he has not
eaten or ever ordered;the British physicist Newton, while lives7._____ in London, cut two holes in the door, one big, other small,8.__________ so as for his two cats to pass by.He only thought the9.__________
10.__________ bigger cat couldn’t get through the smaller holes easily.书面表达
为了创造学校的英语学习氛围,激发同学们学习英语的兴趣,我校将举行英语演讲比赛。请你根据下面内容以学生会名义向全校学生做口头通知,介绍相关情况。
活动:英语演讲比赛
比赛时间:5月22日下午;地点:报告厅
比赛要求:
(1)话题从备选的8个话题中自选(2)选手每人先进行一段20秒以内的自我介绍,演讲时间不超过3分钟 奖励办法:各年级设一、二、三等奖
报名时间:5月15日前
报名地点:学生会办公室
注意: 1.词数不少于60.2.通知的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3.选手:contestant
Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.Thank you.1.wise→wisely2.√3.去掉then 4.talked后加about
5.having→have 6.has→had7.lives→living
10.holes→hole 8.other前加the9.by→through
One possible version:
Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.In order to provide an atmosphere of learning English and arouse the students’ interest in English, we will have an English speech competition.The competition will be held at our lecture hall on the afternoon of May 22nd.There will be eight topics for all the contestants to choose from.Before the speech, every contestant will have to give a self-introduction in twenty seconds and the speech can’t last more than three minutes.We’ll award the first, second and third prizes for each grade.Hurry up to the office of the Students’ Union before May 15th to enter your names for the right opportunity offered to you!
That’s all.Thank you.
第三篇:英语短文改错专项训练
英语短文改错专项训练(第一周)
Passage 1 Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day.After supper, my father went to see the film.But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later.I asked him what was the matter.He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema.He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers.Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different.So they looked at the tickets carefully.After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake.Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12.In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car.There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck.Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions.Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3 One week ago, we finished our mid-exams.Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over.Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.As result, the hurt in my foot became bad.Now I know I’m wrong.We can tell others our need for help and accept his help.Some day we can not help others in return.In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.Passage 4 Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.Passage 5 How harmful cigarettes are getting now!My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer.She knows smoking was harmful, so she just couldn’t quit.She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking.My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much.Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live, so that I don’t have to go through which she did.Passage 6 Today it was a sunny day.In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand.On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog.We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell.As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it.Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.Passage 7 An most interesting thing happened to me last winter.During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma.One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for seniors.I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend.Upon receive the phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it.I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed.Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away.Under my help, she successfully called her good friend.That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her.They all praised what thoughtful I was.英语短文改错专项训练(第二周)
Passage 1 Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize.I’m proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2 As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited.Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night.A car hit a motorbike.The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital.After a while, the traffic police came.Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth.The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control.At last he was taken to the police station.All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously.It often causes many thpeople lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu.It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3 Dear Sir/Madam, I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service.A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency.I found a little differences between your advertisement and action.As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner.Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand.We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower.In fact, we only bathe in cold water.As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time.As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen.We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4 As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games.One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily.In other words, they help to keep people strong and health.If people are playing games, they move a lot of.Having fun with their friends make them happy.Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5 Last Sunday I went shopping with my father.We have a lot of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop.An hour late, we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door.So we asked the policeman for help.It was glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6 Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season.Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据).When she got there,she refused.The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt.Thinking it was no way out,Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her.They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful.Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing.Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7 Changes create happiness.Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village.Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste.As the result, the lake was serious polluted.To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust.Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil.Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings.The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees.On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.
英语短文改错专项训练(第三周)
Passage 1 It was for Alice to attend a chemistry class on Monday.Unluckily, she was not on time for school in this morning.She looked little tired when she met her chemistry’s teacher, Miss Green.She apologized for her being lately.Miss Green asked her if there was something wrong with her.The girl said that he was all right, so she didn’t have much sleep last night.She went to a football game and took some pictures.After she came home, she was busy developed them.She stayed up till midnight.Miss Green told her to get more sleep at night.Alice promises not to do that again.Then Alice showed Miss Green her beautiful picture.Passage 2 Nowadays, mobile phones are more and more popular in our society.Even many students of high schools have got their own mobile phone.The mobile phone does offer a lot convenience to us.With a mobile phone, we can call the others not matter where we are.We can also send short messages.But, the mobile phone brings trouble as well.The signals of the phone disturbed our living space too much.Sometimes it will be unsafe or impolite to use a mobile phone.What’s more, it can be bad for the students who pay too more attention to it.It seems it’s not necessary for our middle school students to have a phone.In a word, if they use the mobile phone in a proper way, it can help us a lot without bring us troubles.Passage 3 An advertisement is really playing an important role in our daily life or not? We can see advertisement here and there.TV, radios, lifts, buses, newspapers, magazines, and even the cars carrying the information of the products and services to a wide audience.Advertisements are delivered your hands, your shopping bags, your mailboxes, your house, etc.They are there you are.The advertisements have brought greatly convenience to people.If someone wants the information of a product, he doesn’t have to go in personal to the shop.What he needs to do is to look at the ads which he can find them everywhere.Sometimes, however, some ads misleads the consumers, for they exaggerate the benefits of their products.So far as the consumers are concerning, they had better have their own judgment and not were puzzled by ads.Passage 4 More and more families are now rich enough to have their own cars.Cars do benefit the families as well the society in many ways.With a car, it is convenient for the family members to travel to or from work.They can also drive to the countryside on the weekends.At the same time, the development of motor industry will sure give a push to many other related industries, it is obviously beneficial to the social economy.In the other hand, the boom of private cars is also causing traffic and environmental problem.Waste gases from cars are causing serious pollution to the air, which do great harm to people’s health.With an increased number of cars on the roads, the traffic has become very heavily.Passage 5 Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life.With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth.But, man’s changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results.Today, pollution of the air or water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet.As we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.Therefore, effective measure should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment.Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools in abroad.First, students study abroad can make friend with people of different cultures.Second, they can learn many more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, they can learn foreign language more quickly.But mostly of the students are so young to live by themselves without any living experience.However, it is the first time for the most of them to leave the main land.Be far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesick.英语短文改错专项训练(第四周)
Passage 1 Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques.Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players of my class.I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
Passage 2 How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films.And a recent study proves this to be wrong.The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job.Emotionalexperiences is important to people’s well-being.People are less likely to share their feelingswith these who have had similar experiences.Similar, people prefer movies that reflect theirmood.That’s the reason ^a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.Passage 3 I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed.I have started to think about other people after I think about myself.I am happy that I am becoming the different person.I think my change started when I was at Palomar College.At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone.I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes.By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely.That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun.So I tried an experiment.I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help.That was real a big step for me.By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.Passage 4 My friend Davis kept birds.He asked me to feed them for him in one day because he would be away for a week.He said that he have left the key in his mailbox.Unfortunately, I forgot all about birds until the night before Davis were to return.What was worse, it was already dark when I arrived at his house.I soon found the key left by Davis can’t unlock either the front door nor the back door.I was getting worrying.I was just about to give up while I noticed that one bedroom window was slightly open.I climbed up and opened the window.Just then a policeman and one of Davis’ neighbor arrived.I felt like a completely fool at that time.Passage 5 I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of our time.In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school..We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many Ladies and gentlemen, It is special pleasure to welcome our new staff member, Mr Tony White, who has come here to America.Mr White has recently graduated from the University of Chicago where he has majored in English Literature and minored in Teaching English as the Second Language.He will working with us here for at least two years.One of the goals of our school are to promote understanding and cooperation between the young people of our two countries.By have Mr White, who is willing to sacrifice the comfort of his friends and family to come to a strange country, we feel we are very lucky and our goals will be easily realized.On behalf of the whole school, I’d like to extend to you, Mr White, your sincerest welcome.We are indeed happy to have you here, and we wish you all the better during your stay in China.Thank you.Passage 7 Dear Sir,Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school.As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends.Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best.I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly.So I really hope to take this chance improve it.If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in.I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.Yours truly,Li Hua
第四篇:高二英语短文改错专题复习高二英语短文改错专题复习
高二英语短文改错专题复习高二英语短文改错专题复习知识总结归纳:
短文改错的题是一篇意思连贯,但有九行文字中各有一个语法或用词错误的英语短文。它所涉及的知识面很广,能力要求较高。而且题中所设的错误常常是考生自己在写作中经常出的语法错误,是专门针对考生的弱点而设的。但它又从另一个角度考查了语法知识的运用。因此,做题时,应从以下几个方面着手解题:动词使用错误;名词使用错误;形容词,副词使用错误;连词使用错误;代词使用错误;冠词使用错误;介词使用错误,上下文逻辑错误等。
在研究每一行的句子时,首先把握句子的意思,然后划分句子的成分:主语;谓语部分;宾语;状语:地点,时间,方式等。如果句子是并列句或复合句,先分开各部分小的分句,根据各个分句之间的关系判断使用的连词是否正确。然后再研究各个分句的成分。
(一)名词使用错误:名词一般在句中做主语或宾语,名词的错误主要在于名词单,复数的错误使用。
1.They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.: question是可数名词根据本句的意思,前面有lots of修饰,应当改为复数形式。2.We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.:subject是可数名词根据本句的意思,前面有quite a few修饰,应当改为复数形式。
3.We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.:根据本句的意思match在此应当改为复数形式。
4.Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day.:return在此是名词,应当改为复数形式:many returns of the day是祝贺人们生日的固定用语:祝你健康长寿。
5.He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.:all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate应当是复数形式。
6.On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.:picture应当改成复数形式,因为作者一路上忙于照相,不止仅照一张像。另外还要注意名词所有格形式上的错误使用。
That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….:根据句子意思:有时一个小小的谎言(善意的)可以使你的朋友的感情免遭伤害friend应当改为friend’s
(二)动词使用的错误:
<一> 作为谓语动词,注意谓语动词在时态,语态,与主语是否一致以及用词方面的问题。1.My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school team.:全句的基本时态应当是现在时,was应改为am 2.Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.:主谓一致的错误。Give的主语是Playing football,动名词作主语是单数形式,应改为:gives 3.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.:前半句是说过去的事情used to do :过去常常做某事。use改为:used 4.…the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came down.:时态错误。全句是过去时态,passes 改为passed 5.As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.:动词形式的错误。句中有三个连续的动作做谓语。因此visit不是伴随状语,是第二个谓语动词,应该为visited.6.The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.:句中定语从句中的谓语动词use 的主语是先行词a computer network,是单数形式,所以按主谓一致的原则use改为:uses.<二> 作为非谓语动词,现在分词,过去分词,动名词,不定式形式的使用错误,同时注意非谓语动词在平行结构中出现的错误。
1.Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.:hang up在此做定语修饰先行词clothes,应改为现在分词形式表示挂着各种衣服。
2.He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.:定语从句是说:他把业余时间花在学习上,按句型结构:spend some time doing something.所以studied应改为:studying.<三> 形容词,副词使用错误:
注意:① 形容词和副词的比较级,原级,最高级使用方面的问题。② 修饰比较级的副词的错误使用。③ 以ing和以ed结尾的形容词的混用。④ 形容词和副词的混用。
1.I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting:much修饰比较级形式,在此没有比较级的意义,所以去掉much.2.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.:形容词与副词混用。Have a wonderful time:过得非常愉快。wonderfully 改为:wonderful 3.…his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.:本句含有so…that 句型。very改为:so 4.People will work few hours than they do now.:这是一个含比较级的句子。(句中有than),few 改为比较级形式fewer 5.Computers will be more smaller and useful….:比较级smaller前面的修饰词应该是副词much。More与多音节形容词或副词原形构成比较级。more改为much 6.Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved.形容词moved指人受到感动。本句的定语从句的主语是movie。应当是moving.<四> 连词使用错误:并列句连词and与but的误用是历年高考题中常考的内容。复合句如宾语从句,状语从句,定语从句中主,从句的连接词的误用根据主从句的关系可以发现。1.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.:前后两句的关系是并列关系or应改为:and 2.My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.前后两句是并列关系不具有转折意义。but改为:and 3.It deosn’t matter that I would win or not.Matter后面的从句是whether…or not结构。That改为:whether 4.An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.:根据句子意思:在Eskimo男孩杀死他的第一只北极熊之后,才真正成为一名男子汉。Since改为:after 5.The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.:I work是定语从句修饰先行词The fine-furniture store,The fine-furniture store在从句中做地点状语,应加关系副词where.解题思路:
首先要理解整个短文的含义,逻辑关系,篇章结构。再仔细研究每一句的意义。借助划分句子成分的方法判断每一部分是否有错误。读句子时一定以整句为单位。【典型例题】
A(2004全国卷I)Dear Ralph I’m a newcomer here of a small town.I would 1.from describe myself as shy and quietly.Before my classmates, 2.quiet it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3.as them.I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4.at a fool.So I feel unhappy every day.5.√
Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6.why
don’t like to talk with me.Sometimes, we talked to each other 7.talk very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8.strangers once.I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9.but seem to work.Can you tell me about what I should do? 10.about去掉 分析:
1.来自一个小镇的新生。强调“来自于”用介词:from 2.describe oneself as +形容词,所以quietly改为quiet 3.缺少连词,这是同级比较结构as…as,加上as 4.介词错误:词组laugh at somebody:嘲笑某人。
6.宾语从句连词的错误,that 本身没有意义可以省略,本句是说:我不知道他们为什么不喜欢我。
7.时态错误,全篇用的是现在时。
8.名词单复数的错误,主语是we,宾语与主语呼应,应该是复数形式。9.这是一个并列句,前后为转折关系。10.根据句子意思,about多余。
B全国卷III2004 You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1.of a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3.having your books.Recently even though, many people 4.去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.5.√ They have been reports in America about people 6.There trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7.personal Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.easy information are good to society.For example, you 9.is can find such information like how to kill people.10.as The problem will become more serious in the future.分析:
1.all kinds of是固定词组,of 不能缺少.2.a few 后面的名词是复数形式。minute是可数名词 3.without是介词,后面跟动词ing形式。
4.even though:即使,此处表示“虽然”。应去掉even 6.此处表示:在美国有报道说…..应当用表示“有…”的句型:there be… 7.此处表示“个人的信息”,需要用形容词做定语。personal:个人的。8.is后面是形容词形式。
9.information是不可数名词。后面的谓语动词用单数形式。10.such…as是固定句型。【模拟试题】(答题时间:45分钟)A You can find all kinds information in just 1._____ a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books.Recently even though, many people 4._____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5._____ They have been reports in America about people 6._______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.________ information are good to society.For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people.10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future.B This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________
The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________ Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________ but could make the most delicious dishes.One time, I just 4._________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner.As I was 5._________ about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6._________ the kitchen looking at me.Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7._________ isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8._________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.You 9._________ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10.________
参考答案 A 1.在kinds后面加of :all kinds of 是固定短语。这里缺少了介词of 2.名词“数”的错误, minute是可数名词,有a few修饰,应改为:minutes 3.have改为:having:without是介词,后面的动词应该是动名词形式。4.去掉even:even though:即使。此处表示:虽然。5.此行正确。
6.They改为:There:本句表示:有一份报告。用there be 句型。7.person改为:personal:此处指个人的信息,应该用形容词形式。8.easily改为easy:be后面接形容词。
9.are改为is:主语information是不可数名词。
10.like改为as:such…as为固定句型,表示:象……这样的……。B 分析:
1.boy是可数名词,第一次提到,前面必须加a 2.本句是说:欢渡春节。When在此多余.3.用词不当,cooker:炊具。Cook:厨师。4.前后两个分句是并列关系。
6.be about to do something 是固定句型。7.Shake her hand在本句中做伴随状语。应该用ing形式。8.全句都在叙述过去的事,用过去时。
9.本句是说:控制自己。宾语应改为反身代词。10.several后的名词应是复数形式。
第五篇:2017年高考英语短文改错[定稿]
2017年高考英语短文改错最全套路
一、短文改错万能公式
1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点,常见动词错误类型有:
①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;
②and前后动词时态不一致;
③主谓不一致;
④缺少动词,特别是be动词;
⑤第三人称单数形式错用;
⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。
2.名词的常见错误:
单复数名词错用,可数名词与不可数名词错用。
3.连词错误:
连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/or/but等。
关于连词,一般考查从句关系:who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。
4.冠词错误:
误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);
误用a/an和the(固定搭配,或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词)
5.形容词和副词错误:
系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel);
词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。
6.代词错误:
代词的主格和宾格(I/me;he/him;she/her;we/us they/them)错误;
反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;
代词的单数和复数使用错误;
代词指代错误;
多代词或少代词。
7.非谓语动词的常见错误:
不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;
and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);
介词后用动名词形式作宾语;
某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。
8.介词错误:
词组中的介词误用;
介词意思理解偏差;
介词的多用或少用
二、短文改错解答口诀
动词形,名词数;
注意形和副;
非谓动词细辨别;
习惯用法要记住;
句子成分多分析;
逻辑错误须关注。
1、动词形
主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。
例如:My favourite sport is football.I was member of our school football team.Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library.(are)
上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念,注意短文内容发生或存在的时间,保持时间概念的一致性。
2、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。
例如:„so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subjects)
3、区分形和副
即区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。例如:I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(wonderful)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.(Unfortunately)
需要注意的是,形容词多用来做定、表、补语等,而副词只能在句子中作状语,修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time,第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。
4、非谓动词细辨别
这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有分词和动名词类错误,也包括不定式类错误。
例如:
„in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.(interested)
Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also „(playing)
My parents love me„ and will do all they can ∧ make sure„(to)
上述二、三例分别是动名词作主语,和不定式作目的状语。一般的,现在分词有主动态和进行时的含义,而过去分词具有被动态和完成时的含义,不定式有将来时态的含义。
5、习惯用法要记住
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考的常考点,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。
例如:It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and„(of)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves.(of)
6、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语景要选择不同的词语。这些都有待我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。
例如:They∧eager to know everything about China and„(were)I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.(which)
第一例漏掉了谓语动词were,这是受寒于习惯的影响而导致的错误;第二例则是词类与它在句子中的成分不相符,where是副词,不能作主语。
7、逻辑错误须关注
与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴,人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误,常是这类错误的考查对象。
例如:The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(their)First, let me tell you something more about myself.(去掉more)
„no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.(everyone)上述第一例中的主语是Smiths(史密斯夫妇俩),因此后面的his不合逻辑。第二例中的more在这儿表“再”的意思,才开始告诉别人,怎么能说“再告诉你一些事”?第三例讲的是为了解决看电视时的争端,“我们”把电视机卖了;晚上没电视看了,所以与从前一样,大家又都读书了,所以该用everyone。
除了上述错误类型外,常考的错误形式还有:连词but, and, or和so的用法错误(可以归类为逻辑错误),以及冠词的用法错误等。
例如:
She was smiling but nodding at me.(and)
It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.(or)
We may be one family and live under a same roof.(the)
三、短文改错参考原则 1.改动以最少为原则;2.虚词以添加或删除为原则;3.实词以改变词形为原则;4.以保持句子原意为原则;
5.核对错项时,若的确有一时难以改出的地方,可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1:1:8”的比例:即多一词1个,缺词1个,错词8个;
6.核对改正的语法项目是否有重复,因为短文改错往往覆盖面广,一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象;
7.核对答题符号是否规范,位置是否准确,看看有无遗漏符号,忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。